forgive me if u can-savni ff ch 6pg 17 - Page 5

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It was really fascinating yaar Marie....very very good
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Hey Awesome yaar...Nice starting to fantastic end...do continue
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forgive me if u can-savni ff
part 3

recap:the sharma's come to gujrals to see avni.......they all have a gala time......n now everyone is waiting for avni's yes/no for marriage


[karan returns for avni's answer]
karan:kya socha avni
avni:karan tum bahut acche ho par main.......main.....
karan:par kya,kya baat avni......jo bhi hai mujhe sab sach batado...ek ache dost ki tarah
avni:kuch nahi.....rehne do......
karan:tumhe pata hai avni......
avni:kya?
karan:tum bahut sunder ho.....really bilkul bachpan ki tarah vahi masoom chehra...vahi bholapan.....frankly speaking...tumhari yahi baat mujhe pasand hai....
avni :par.......
karan:patani kis ne tumhe dhokha diya
avni:kyun ,kya koi mujhe dhokha nahi de sakta
karan:koi pagal hi tumhe pyaar nahi karega
avni:karan tum bahut acche ho par main tumhe ek cheez clear karna chati hu 
karan:kya?
avni:main tumse kabhi pyaar nahi kar paungi
karan:avni koi zabardasti nhi hai mae samaj sakta hoon....par hum ache dost ki tarah rahenge.......dekho agar tum ye shadi karna nahi chahti den its ok...hmm donn worry i ll not force u...k byeee
[avni thought tht if karan goes ....den her family will be really upset......]
avni:karan rukooo........mai ye shaadi karna chahti hoon
karan was really happy
karan:thank u very much avni....chalo ye good news sabko bata dete hai....
avni:haan chalo.......

[they reach the hall]
illa:arey bacche aa gaye.....
everyone look at them
karan: maa avni mangayi.....
illa: sach....[she goes to avni n hugs]avni me bohot khush ho......
[avni trying to control her tears......]
illa:prithvi damini jau jaldi kuch meetha lau..
both: jii i
they all congratz each other......
mrs n mr sharma: hum engagement agle week hi rakhenge aapo koi problem to nahi hai na
illa :arey nahi nahi hume koi problem nahi......
mr n mrs sharma: acha illa hum chaltey hai.......
illa: thank u for coming.....
[the sharma family leaves gujral mansion]


at saxena house

varun:bhaiya aa jaiye khana lag gaya hai
bhaiya ...............
   bhaiya.........................
he didn't got any answer so he went to his room
he saw that sameer is sleeping ,varun was leaving when saw something like photograph in sameer's hand 
sameer was sleeping but still he was holding that photograph so tightly
varun tried to take that but couldn't as he didn't wanted to wake him up 
but at last he took that photograph 
when he turned the photo ,he realised that how much sameer loves avni


varun:bhaiya ,main janta hu ki aap avni bhabhi se bahut pyaar karte hai kaash.......
kaash main kuch kar pata

when prithvi enters
prithvi:varun darwaza kyun khula hua tha
varun:bhaiya woh
prithvi:sameer so gaya
varun:hmmmmmmmmmmm
aap ko kuch kaam tha bhaiya 
prithvi:ha woh avni ki sagai taie hui hai,ussi ki arrangements karni hai......
varun[tensely]:kyaaaaa sagai....kab
prithvi:agle hafte
varun:whatttttttttt bhaiya aap yeh kaise kar sakte hai
prithvi:main kya karu varun,maine koshish ki ,par avni se baat karne ka waqt hi nahi milla 

scene shifts to gm
n avni's room
avni is crying ,she can't even imagine anyone else except jai in her life
first time in her life she loved someone so much ,she trusted someone 
avni:jai..........bas ek baar akar tum mumma se aake bolte ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho,shaadi karna chahte apni galti sudharna chahte ho 
toh sab chod chadke tuhare paas aa jati......magar shayad main hi galat umeed me rehti hoon.....shayab tum mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte

when roshni enters 
roshni:avni diiiii.
avni wipe her tears n bring a fake smile on her face
avni:ha roshni......kya hua
roshni:di aap ro rahi thi....
avni:nahi,nahi toh tumhe aisa kyun laga....main bhala kyu roungi meri shaadi hai...aur ye bohot khushi ki baat hai
roshni:di aap khush hai na .........
avni:ha, princess me bohot khush hu
roshni:main apko yeh batane aai thi ki kal aap ko karan  ke saath shopping ke liye jana hai shaam ko ok
avni:roshni main nahi ja paungi..mujhe mujhe bohot saare kaam hai
roshni:di maine use haan  keh diya hai aapko jana hi hoga......
avni:par roshni.....
roshni:par war kuch nahi app jaa rahi ho ok......
and roshni leaves  

next day
sameer's flat
varun:arey bhaiya aap uth gaye ,good morning
sameer:good morning
varun:accha bhaiya aap breakfast kar lena mujhe nikal na hai 
o.k byeeeeeeeeee
sameer:byeeeeeeee
but varun left his mobile there
sameer was thinking about avni,when he heard the phone ringing
sameer:varun apna phone yahi bhool gaya
avni:hello.......
hello varun main avni
[sameer was so happy to hear her voice 
he was going to answer when he remembered that now everything is finished]
avni:hello varun tum sun rahe ho na
[sameer kept quite ...avni couldn't understand,but there there was something strange she could feel ]
avni:hello kaun hai
[sameer still kept quite]
then 
avni[crying]:jai tum ho..................
[sameer was shocked
they didnt utter a single word ,but understood that they still love each other
avni kept silent ,she could feel that he loves her a lot
but it was too late ...finally sameer started the convo]
 sameer:avni plzzz mujhe tumse milna hai
avni:nahi jai ab bahut dair ho chuki hai...
sameer:aakhri baar
avni: Nahi jai....main kisi ko dokhe me nahi rak sakti....plzzz mujhe akela chod do plzzz
sameer:avni plzz aise mat kaho plzz ek bar mujhse millo 
avni: tum,....tum kyu nahi samajhte jai....ab mujhe  vahi karna hai jo mama chahti hai....aur vo chahti hai ki me tumhe hamesha k liye bhool jau aur ek nai zindagi ki shurvat karu........aur aisa hii hoga... meri vajah se bohot saha hai unhone ab aur nahi mee unhe taklif nahi doongi.......plzz jai tumne mujhe bohot taklif di ...ab aur nahi......
sameer:avni ek baar meri baat to sunlo plzzzz plzzz avni....
avni: aur haan jai mujhpe ek akhri ehsan karo.......plzz meri zindagi me vapis mat aana...aur mujhe kabhi phone mat karna.......

peeeeeeeep
[avni cutted the phone........sameer still sitting on the bed holding the mobile in his hand.very depressed]

varun:arey bhaiyya mera phone toh main yahin bhool gaya......bhaiya ...bhaiya mera phone...
sameer:ah m umm haan vo tera ph phone.........
varun:bhaiya sab thik hai na......aap worried lag rahe hai....
sameer:arey aaisi baat nahi hai.......vo bass yuhi...
varun:ohhk bhaiya me chalta hoon.... i m already late.....take care byeeee
sameer:byeeee....

[scene shifts to GM]

damini:rosh.....tum bhi jaarahi ho avni ke saath shopping ke liye
rosh:nahi diiii kyu ......me jauuu 
damini:nahi rehne do....un dono ko akele chodna chahiye.......kyu avni
avni:diiii plzz plzz aisi baate matt karo.....me vahan islliye jaarahi hu kyuki mamma chahti hai....rosh tum bhi chalo na hamare saath....plz
rosh:haaan kyu nahi.......[.she looks at damini]..........ummmm nahi mujhe ghar pe taiyari karni hai aap jao...
avni:magar diii roshni plzzzz koi to chalo........
karan:me chalta hoon na
avni damini n rosh look backwards/..........
damini:arey karan tum........avni ab jao jyaada late matt karna ......
karan:heyy damini hiii rosh......
rosh:heyy karan jeej.....um nahi karan is cool nah
karan:yup karan will do ..........auum avni chalen
avni :haan chalo........byee diiii byee rosh
rosh n damini:byeeeeeeee avni/diiiiiiiii

[SAmeer also co-incidently come to the same mall to cheer his mood with his friends]
[karan n avni reach the mall]

karan:avni pehle hum tumhare liye kuch sarees late hai.ok fir baki sab k liye bhi kuch lenge
avni:[who is not interested in shopping.]hmmmmm
[karan n avni enter a shop..]..

karan :avni ye saari try karlo tumpe bohot achi lagegi.....
avni:umm nahi mujhe ye vali pasand aayi..... simple but nice one.......
karan:as  ur wish tum try karlo tab tak me apne liye kuch dekh leta hoon.....
avni:haan thik hai....tum jao me choose karloongi time bhi save hoga ok
karan:yup good idea....
[karan leaves.......sameer n his friends enter the same shop ]

rahul[sam's friend]:sameer kya yaar hum tumhe yahaan apna mood change karne ke liye laye aur tum...chal na yaar.....mujhe apne liye kuch shopping karni hai
sameer:arey tum aur sid jao me yahi rukta hoon......ok
sid n rahul:okk chal byeee hum aate hai thodi der me......
sameer:hmmm

[in the meantime avni wears the saree n comes out to show it to karan]

but she slips due to heels n den......as we all know our sameer catches her........
[sameer looks at avni........she was looking very beautiful....in the red and green saree....

[avni tries to move away from him but was unable because he had caught her tightly on her waist]

avni:mujhe chodo jai......
sameer still staring at her beautiful eyes.....
avni:jai mujhe chodo.......
sameer:sorry ...........woh main.....tum bohot sunder lagrahi ho.....umm i mean me tumse baat karna chahta hoon...
[avni tries to get out of the shop........but sameer follows her and at last he catches her and forcibly takes her to the changing room]


avni:jai mujhe chodo.......ye kya kar rahe ho tum......juss leave me
[sameer comes very close to her......he touches her face very lovingly.......avni is also now lost in him...
she also touches his face........]



sameer:avni kyu kar rahi ho tum aisa......kyu
[avni rememberss tht now everything is finished and now she is gonna mary karan......avni push's him back...n tries to move out.......but sameer again takes her near the wall n goes closer and closer]

sameer:main jaanta ho avni tum mujhse abhi pyaar karti ho.....to fir ye duriya kyu
avni:nahi jai main nahi karti tumse pyar...
sameer:but I LOVE U AVNI..........
[avni really feels tht he means wht he's saying]
sameer:bolo avni kya tumhe kuch bhi nahi hota jab me tumhare paass ata hoon
avni:nahi mujhe kuch nahi hota....
sameer goes more n more close to her
sameer:ab bhi kuch mehsoos nahi hota
avni:nahi .....[.her voice was becoming low n low as sameer was coming closer and closer]
sameer:main jab tumhe touch karta hoon tab tumhari dhadkane teez nahi hoti avni..........batao
avni:na...hiiii
sameer touch her waist and brings her more closer.....
avni:ja....jai mujhe jaane do ..
sameer:tumhe kuch feel nahi hota jab main tumhe kiss karta hoon
[sameer passionately kisses  on her neck increasing the intensity of the moment.........they were really close n were totally lost in each other....sameer was abt to kiss her on the lips.....but den........avni realises tht she is going to marry karan..and wht they r doin is really wrong........]
avni push sameer away from her ]


avni:[avni started crying]jussss stop it jai ..nahi hota kuch bhi feel  mujhe.......kuch nahi hota.....kuch bhi nahi .......nahi hota.......[she is really sad tht she is marrying karan when jai loves her n she too loves him.......]

sameer wipes her tears.......

sameer:avni i really love u i love u......
avni:but i hate u i hate u jai
sameer:but i love u ....
avni:i hate u ......i hate u........she says in a very low voice/.........
sameer:avni I really LOVE U tum mujhe chod  k chali gayi toh me marr .......

[avni stops him from saying this......she shuts his mouth by putting a finger on his lips]
avni:plzz jai aisa matt kaho......[she hugs him]i love u jai i really love u.....me nahi jee sakti tumhare bina...........

to be continued.........

precap:Savni are together and karan coming towards the shop...................


heyyy guys hope u like this part.....😊😊
this is written by me[juhi_karneet ]and deeps[marie1994]
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Edited by juhi_karneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG...
This was mindblowing guys...
You too doing gr88 job...
Loved the confession...
And cont soon....

Love
Sana.. 😳
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Thanx sana for appreciating our work......we will surely update the next part soon

thanx once again yaar
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wowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!luved it sply da phone part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow what a lovely update n romantic too

continue soon

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awesome update....
rocking one........
mindblowing......
gr8888888888888888888!!!!!!!!!!
cont soon...
thanks for da pm....
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thank u so much friends......will update soon
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just wow!!!!really   awsum...thank u 4r dis wonderul update...