forgive me if u can-savni ff ch 6pg 17

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forgive me if u can-savni FF
this is a savni ff,i have started this ff from that episode when sameer
denies that he married avni and the baby is not his.and avni commits suicide .
now prithvi ,damini ,ila are discussing what to do now damini suggests that avni will never forgive jai but prithvi wants that avni and jai should start a new life when jai enters.
sameer[jai]:main aa gaya aunty
damini:ab kyun aye go avni ko tumhari ab koi zarurat nahi hai,tumhari wajah se meri bahen marte marte bachi hai
when avni enters avni is shocked to see sameer she remembers all those things that happened on damini's wedding.
 




damini:avni..........
sameer turns and looks a her
prithvi:avni aao  betho na
damini to sameer:tum jao keh diya na jo keh na tha
prithvi:damini yeh avni ko decide karne do

sameer to avni:avni mujhe maaf kar do main dar gaya tha
yeh baccha hamara hai
avni:di iss insaan keh do yeh yahan se chala jaye
damini:sun liya tumne ab jao yahan se
prithvi:avni yeh tumhara aakhri faisla hai kya
damini:haa prithvi,aur avni isse maaf kyun kare

after listening avni's final decision sameer leaves

avni is sitting in her room 
avni is thinking about jai and crying
avni:kyun aaya woh yahan
bas avni ab tumhe kamzor nahi banna hai ,tum apne bacche ko khud paal sakti ho,mujhe kisi ki zarurat nahi hai


sameer in his flat
sameer:accha hua avni ne mujhe maaf nahi kiya
maine apne papa ki maut ka batla le liya hai ,aur avni ki kismat main yehi likha hai
par mujhe kyun bura lag raha ki avni ne mujhe maaf nahi kiya
maine jo kkiya sahi kiya .

next day
ila:arey avni kahan ja rahi ho
avni:ma aisi hi main bahar ja rahi thi
ila:theeke hai

scene shifts to sameer's flat
varun:bhaiya kahan ja rahe ho
sameer:kyun mujhe koi kaam nahi aa sakta kya 
varun:nahi batana to theek hai







Avni goes out with roshni for a walk

{avni is still lost in her thoughts]

Roshni sees er friend in the park '''.she asks avni to sit on the bench n wait for her'''n rosh goes]

 

Sameer also goes to the park.to cheer up his mood'''.

 

Avni to herself": Jai tum kyu aaye vapis kyu baar baar mujhe sirf tumhara khayal aata hai'''.tumhare saath bitaye huye saare lamhe mujhe yaar aate hai..akhir kyu????

[then she think of all the moments she had spent with him their first meeting'''.]

Jai main tumse chahte hue bhi nafrat nahi kar sakti''..kyuki kyuki''''..

              

[sameer was sitting on the next bench  and was hearing all this]

 

Sameer: kyuki avni tum ab bhi mujhse bohot pyaar karti ho''..u love me

 

Avni is shocked to  c sameer there ''sameer stands in front of her and opens his arms

 

Avni dint think of anything'she ran towards him and hugged him tightly'..they were so lost in each other ''.that they dint notice the ppl around

 

Sameer: Avni I love u ''..i really love u so much'''.mujhe pata hai mene tumhe bohot dukh diya hai''par me tumse bohot,bohot pyaar karta hu'''tumhare bina mein bilkul akela hoon avni'''tum nahi to kuch bhi nahi..tumse nafrat karne ka natak kartey kartey mujhe tumse sachem pyaar hua hai''plzz mujhe chod ke mat jao

 

Avni : Jai I love u ''..i really love u'.tum mujhe plzz chod ke mat jaana'''.me mein nahi jee sakti tumhare bina''.mar jaungi tumhare bina''.

[sameer hugs her very tightly '''']

 

Sameer:nahi avni aisa mat kaho'''..tum nahi rahogi to mein jeekar kya karunga'

 

[but then suddenly avni remember the past n  she moves back''.n runs from there''..sameer is shocked]

 

Avni:ohh n ye mene kya kar diya'.ye nahi ho sakta'''.nahi''

 

Sameer: avni kya hua plzzz ruko avni'..

 

Avni runs from ther e n goes to GM

 

Sameer : ye tumne kya kiya sameer kyu kyu tumne use hug kiya'''kyu

                Magar avni mujhse abhibhi pyaar karti hai''''..avni agar tum abhi mujhse pyaar karti ho to kyu mujhe chodkar chali gayi'''.nahi sameer isme tumhari galti hai..tumhe apne feeling our emotions ko kabu me rakhna hoga'..


[Gujral mansion]

 

Illa n damini :Avni tum aagayi '.aao na breakfast karlo'''..aur rosh kahan hai'''

 

[avni has teary eyes''..n she doesn't ans to them n leaves from dere n goes to her room]

 

Avni sits near the window''..

 

Avvni : ye tumhe kya hua tha avni '..jab usne apni bahen kholi ..to tum kyu gayi uske paars ye jaantey hue bhi ki usne tumhe thukraya tha''kyu maine vo saari baatey kahi..kyu???

 

[she remember's what sam said during prida wedding]

 

Avni :  jai kya tumne kabhi bhi mujhse pyaar nahi kiya mere liye tumne kabhi kuch feel nahi kiya''''..wo saare lamhe jo humne saath bitaye kya vo saare jhoot the''

 

Aur aaj tum ne jo kaha kyat um sachem mujhse pyaar kartey ho?

 

[she wipes her tears n says'''.]

Avni : nahi avni tum aise kamjor nahi pad saktti'''..tum apne bachhe ko khud pal sakti ho tumhe kisi aur ki koi jarurat nahi hai'''avni bhool jauo jai ko usse judi har baat ko mitado usse judi saari yaaden'''

 

 

Sameer : ye mujhe kya ho raha hai kyu mujhe har pall avni ki yaad aarahi hai'''.kahin me usse pyaar'''.rr arey nahi sameer tu use deserve nahi karta''..jo tumne kiya uske baad  avni tumse bohot nafrat karti hai.aisa soch bhi matt''.magar mein use jitna bhoolne ki koshish karta hoon utni jyaada uski yaad mujhe aati hai'''.kyu??

 

Prithvii: kyuki tumhe avni se pyaar hua hai sameer''u actually love avni'''..

 

Sameer: shayad aap sahi keh rahe ho bhaiya''..

 

[next day at GM]

 

Dam to pri n illa : mama maine avni ke liye aur uske baby k liye kuch socha hai''

 

Pri n illa :kya\??

 

Dam:yahi ki avni ko ek life partner ki jarurat hai ''.

 

Pri: kya?? Damini tum ye kya keh rahi ho'ye kaise ho sakta hai


Dam:me sahi keh rahi hu prithvi'akele zindagi bitana bohot mushkil hota hai'.

 

Pri: dekho damini ye decision avni ka hai '''hume pehle usse is bareme baat karni chahiye

 

Illa :damini ye bilkul sahi keh raha hai ,'''.rosh.jao avni ko bulao hame usse baat karni hai abhi

 

Rosh to avni : avni di aap yahaan ho mene aapko saare ghar me dhoonda aur aap yahan ho'''

 

Avni : haan vo me bass'''.arey par tum mujhe kyu dhoond rhi thi.kuch kaam tha''

 

Rosh: nahin dii'..mama di aur jeej aapse kuch baat karma chahtey hai'''..jaldi chalo

 

Avni''..par kyu aise kya baat karni hai''.

 

Rosh: di ab chalo '''.woh hi tumhe bata denge

 

[rosh n avni come in the main hall]

damini :aao na avni baitho yaahan

avni : aap sab log itne pareshan kyu lag rahe hai......

dam: dekho avni ab mein jo kehne vali hoon isme sirf aur sirf tumhara decision hi hoga jaisa tum chahogi vaisa hi hoga hmmm....hum sirf tumhe aur baby k liy ye karna chahte hai.........

avni:; haan di par baat kya hai......

dam : avni......kya tum ...........tum......

avni : di plzz batao na kya baat hai

dam: avni kya tum dobara shaadi karogi...........

avni : [tears flood out frm her eyes] di............mujhe pata hai aap ye mere liye kar rahe hai.........par

dam:par kya avni ..........dekho hum kisi bhi tarah ki  jaldbazi ya jabardasti karenge.........hmm tumhe time chahiye to tum lo kyuki ye tumhari zindagi hai..........tumhe pura haq hai .........tum sochke batana.......

avni: ok di me chalti......aapko main 5 min baad miti hoon aur apna faisla batati hoon

all:thik hai.........

avni goes to the garden.......

avni is crying.........n is very sad..........

avni: avni tum kamjor nahi ho sakti.........apne lie nahi to apne parivar ke liye itna to tum kar sakti ho na..mama ne di  ,rosh aur jeej ne tumhe kitna support kiya hai.........tum unki khushi ke liye itna nai kar sakti.............[avni decides tht she will remarry]

[avni returns ...all r tensed n r eager to noe her decision]

avni: Mama .....me shadi karungi............me shaadi k liye taiyyar hoon...........

[all r happy.........but pri.....thinking abt wht sam said......]

pri in his mind: sameer tu ne der kardi bhai....avni tumhe maaf nahi karegi......kaash tune uske sath aisa nahi kiya hota.........]

avni: par maama..mera baccha....kya iss halaat me koi mujhe apna payega??

dam: avni tum uski fikar matt karo.hum haina.......tumhe koi bhi apnane se mana nahi karega....

avni: aap kehte to me ye shaadi karungi.........aap sab ki khushi me hi meri khushi hai....

dam illa rosh avni hug.........

illa : avni me aaj bohot khush hu............ab dekhna tumhari zindgi me sirf khushiya hogi.........

avni: mama me abhi aati hoon

[avni suddenly goes frm there ........in her room .........locks her door]

avni cries very much she was doing all dis only for her family............she took all the photos of her n sameer n cried alot..........]

avni: jai bhale hi tumne mujhe itne dukh diye..........magar maine hamesha sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai...........magar ab tumhe strong hona hoga avni apne family aur baby k liye........unki khushi ke liye...........

scene shifts to the main hall.......dam n illa sitting on sofa]

ila : achha hua avni shadi k liye maan gayi.........

dam:haan maama me uskeliye bohot khush hoon

illa: Damini kya tumhe mrs..sharma yaad hai.........hamari family frend...unka beta karan........wo bhi bohot acha hai......vo bhi mr sharma ke saath kaam karta hai........ruko me abhi unhe call karti hooon

dam:mama unhe aaj hamare ghar dinner pe hi bula lo na usi bahane karan aur avni mil lenge...ek dusre ko samaj payenge,.......

ella: bilkul sahi kaha damini

[prithvi was listening to their convo]

[pri goes to Sameer and explains abt avni]

sameer was sad  yet happy for avni

sameer: acha hua bhaiya jo avni ne shadi ke liye haan kardi.......vo hamesha khush to rahegi

pri: ye tu kya keh raha hai sameeer.....me jaanta hun tujhe,.........tum kitna bhi kehle ..par tu avni se bohot pyaar karta hai........to kyu usse doorr hai.usse apni dil ki baat bata de......vo jarroor manegi........

Sameer: nahi bhaiya vo nahi manegi ab koi fayda nahi........mere vajah se use bohot dukh miley hai kam se kam abhi usse apne hisse ki khushiya to hasil hogi


[Sameer leaves hiding his tears.............prithvi is upset]


Precap: Karan n avni meet......karan waiting for avni's decision]


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