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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera


sorry ok phir deepika di and juhi bohut achi story hai😛


tumhara ff bhi bahut accha hai kal maine tumhara love by chance pada bahut accha tha
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love by chance woh toh sab bhool gaye hain,apne purani baatein yaad dila dein
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Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

love by chance woh toh sab bhool gaye hain,apne purani baatein yaad dila dein


mujhe toh bahut accha laga,prithvi and damini ko milane ka plan aur sameer aur avni ke chote chote scene
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so wat do u say i should continue it
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Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

so wat do u say i should continue it


ya u should continue it
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ok so i will try to update it soon
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Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

ok so i will try to update it soon


great
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fogive me if u can-savni ff
part-2

introduction of new character:
https://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u199/maha_prakrti/Fan%20Club/Karan%20Singh%20Grover/157092.jpg

karan:he is a doctor
and ila's choice for avni
he thinks avni is right for him,and is ready to accept her.
but will he be able to impress avni 


prithvi:sameer chahe tu jitna chupale main janta hu tu avni se bahut pyaar karta hai,avni bhi tujhse bahut pyaar karti hai
main tum dono ki zindagi barbad hone nahi dunga,mujhe avni se baat karni hogi


sameer remember all those moments he spend with avni
sameer:avni ne sahi decision liya,sach toh hai ki i don't deserve her.....................
par main usse pyaar karta hu woh meri patni hai ,woh mera baccha hai,main kaise  dekh sakta hu.......................
par main avni se uski khushiya bhi toh nahi cheen sakta , avni ka  haq hai unn khushiyon pe


Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye. 
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye. 
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na 



Milke bhi, hum na mile, tum se na jaane kyun. meelon ke, hai faasle, tum se na jaane kyun. anjaane, hai silsile, tum se na jaane kyun. sapne hai, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo ooo.. 

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Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye. 
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye. 
Tu jaane naa..aaa... tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane naaaa... 




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Nigahon mein dekho meri, jo hai bas gayaaa.. 
Woh hai milta tumse hubahuu.. 
Ooo, jaane teri aankhein thi ya, baatein thi wajaaa.. 
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo... 
Tum paas ho ke bhi, tum aas ho ke bhiii, ehsaas ho kee bhi, apne nahi... 



Aise hain, humko gile, tumse na jaane kyun. 
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo... 
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na 

Ooo jaane na jaane na jaane na .. aaa tu jaane na .. 
Khayalon mein, lakhon baatein yun tu keh gaya... 
Bola kuch na tere samne... 
Ooo, huea na be-gaane bhi tum hoke haar kein... 
Dekho tum na mere hi bane. 
Afsos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rota hai, sapne sanjota hai, pagla hua... 





Soche ye, hum the mile, tumse na jaane kyun. 
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun. 
Anjaane, hai silsale, tum se na jaane kyun. 






Sapne hain, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.uuu.... 
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye. 
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye. 
Tu jaane naa.. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na 
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaaaane na... 





scene shifted to varun's room
prithvi:varun sameer ne jo kuch bhi kiya ho,par main jaanta hu woh avni se abhi hi pyaar karta hai
varun:par avni bhabhi ne shaadi ke liye ha kyun ki?
prithvi:aur kya karti woh varun....main jaanta hun vo sirf gharvalo  ki khushi ke liye kar rahi hai
varun:aap baat ki jiye na avni bhabhi se ,ek baar
prithvi:main dekhta hu ,ki kya kar sakta hu,tu jaake sameer ko dekh
varun:hmmmmmmmmm

scene shifted to sameer's room
knock knock......................
sameer wipes his tears
sameer:kaun hai.........
varun:bhaiya main
sameer:arey chote aa jana
varun comes and sits next to him
varun:bhaiya aap theek ho na
sameer:haaaa mujhe kya hua hai
varun:bhaiya avni bhabhi dusri shaadi kar rahi hai
sameer:haan varun mujhe pata hai.......thats great na ..
varun:aap khush hai 
sameer:hmmmmmmmmmmmmm me uske liye bohot khush hun
varun:aap ka baccha kissi aur ke naam se jana jayega,usspe apka koi haq nahi rahega
sameer:haq toh mujhse usi din cheen gaye the jis din maine avni ko thukraya tha

and sameer leaves
varun:main avni bhabhi ko aur sameer bhaiya ko milake hi rahunga


scene shifted to gm
ila:arey jaldi karo aaj ladke wale aarahe hai avni ko dekhne
roshni:mumma main avni di ko taiyaar kardu ......unhe aaj itna sundar banati hun ki vo bilkul pari lagegi.......
ila:haa jao..par jaldi karna vo log aate hi hoge.
roshni:ohhkk mama...
 
scene shifted to avni's room
knock knock.......
avni:kaun hai
roshni:di main
avni:aa jao roshni....
roshni:chalo chalo main aapko taiyaar kar deti hu
avni:roshni main theek hu mujhe.............
roshni:no no no ,mujhe kuch nahi sunna aapko me hi taiyar karoongi........


ila:arey prithvi tum yahan 
prithvi:ha main avni se milna chahta tha
ila:avni se badme milna abhi bahut kaam hai
prithvi:ji ..bataiye kya karna hai.?
damini:mumma maine avni ke liye yeh jewellery choose ki hai ,kaisi hai?
ila:bahut acchi hai....jao roshni ko de aao vo avni ko ready kar rahi hai
damini:ji mumma
prithvi:damini ek min main de aata hu avni ko
ila:theeke tum jao prithvi
damini tum mere saath ao bohot kaam baki hai.....
damini:ji mumma

Scene shifts to avni's room....
 


avni: Roshni ab aur kitna taiyyar karogi tum.......
roshni:di abhi kuch bhi nahi kiya abhi toh jewellery bhi dalni hai........
avni: dekho roshni plzz mujhe bohot uncomfortable feel ho raha hai.....me jaisi hoon vaise hi thik hun
rosh:diiiiii
avni:vaise ladka hai kaun......
rosh:vo ek surprise hai.....
[pri enters avni's room]

rosh:arrey jeej aap.......aaiye na aap vahan kyu khade hai
avni:haan jeej ander aaiye..
rosh:jeej pehle aap ye bataiye ke di kaisi lag rahi hai.......
pri: avni tum bohot sundar lag rahi ho.....bilkul pari ki tarah....ye lo
avni: thanx jeej....
rosh: ohh thanx jeej .par aapne kyu taklif uthai.....kisi servant ko keh dete....
pri:arey nahi isnme kaisi taklif......itna to me kar hi sakta hu na...
rosh:haan ...[rosh's phone rings].di main abhi aati hoon.tab tak aap ye jewellery try karo....
avni:thik hai

[pri gets a chance to talk to avni abt sameer]

pri:avni mujhe tumse kuch jaruri baat kehni thi..
avni:haan jeej boliye...baat kya hai..
pri:avni....tum khush ho??
avni:..........um .haan jeej mein bohot khush hu ...[she says with a fake smile on her face]
pri: avni...dekho agar tum ye shaadi nahi karna chahti hoo to abhi bhi der nahi hui.....tum..

[he was completing his word when rosh entered.....]

rosh:jeej aap abhi bhi yahi hai ......damini di aap ko kabse dhoond rahi hai........
pri:par me avni se kuch baat karna chahta hu.....
rosh: jeej di ne aapko urgently bulaya hai aur aapko ready hone ko kaha hai......
pri: ok roshni me jaa raha hun

[avni thinks]
avni:ye jeej kya kehne aaye the.........
rosh: di aapne kaunsi jewellery choose ki
avni:ye waali ye simple aur sobour hai......mujhe yahi pasand hai..
rosh:oohh fooo di aap bhi na itni simple design...thik hai jaise aapki marzi...


[scene shifts to sameer]
sameer is on sofa watching tv.....
the song ...bas ek pal was being played......he remembers all the sweet memories of him n avni.......tears flood from his eyes........

varun: arey bhaiya aap ro kyu rahe ho
sameer: arey nahi yaar vo ...vo meri aankh mai kuch chala gaya
varun:accha ...
sameer:haan .....me abhi ata hun
varun: lekin jaa kaha rahe ho....
sameer : kahin nahi....me abhi aaya

[scene shifts to GM]
mr sharma ;mrs sharma ,karan n his sister enter GM

gaurd: baby ji vo mehman aa gaye....
rosh:acha thik hai me unhe receive karti hun....

rosh goes out and receives them....
rosh:hello uncle ,aunty....kaise ho aap ......arey karan kahan hai
karan: heyy rosh mein yahaan hoon
rosh; wow karan tum to bohot dashing lag rahe ho yaar.....itne saalo k baad mil rahe ho.....acha chalo chale andar sab wait kar rahe hoge....

illa:arey aaiye aaiye mr n mrs sharma....kaise hai aap sab....
mr sharma:illa ji hum sab thik hai aur aap kaise hai.....
illa :bhavan ki kripa se sab thik hai ........arey karan beta tum bilkul badal gaye ho....bachpan me dekha tha tumhe......uske baad aaj mil rahe ho
[karan touches illa's feet]
illa :arey khush raho beta.....chaliye sab hall me chalte hai.....
all:haan chaliye

illa:damini prithvi.....khane ka intejam kardo na jaldi...
damini n pri: jiii
[damini n prithvi order the cooks n servant....they bring the eatables n tea]
they all have tea....
mrs sharma:tum sab se to mil liya par hamari avni kahan hai
karan:haan vo kahan hai.....
rosh : arey vah di se milene ko itne bechain ho....hmmmm
karan: kya kare bhai itne sallon k baad mil rahe hai......
rosh:itne jaldi thodi milne denge.....hehe
karan:tum bilkul nahi badli rosh....

illa:mrs sharma aapko to avni k bare me sab pata hai na....eske bavajod aap use apnane ko taiyar hai na....
mrs sharma: illa kaisi baat karrahi ho.....mujhe pata hai avni nirdosh hai.....aur ye media vale bhi baat ka batangad banane me expert hai.....karan bhi maan gaya hai.....bhai vo dono bachpan ke dost hai.......
illa:thank u mrs sharma
mr sharma: illa ji is me thank u ki kya baat hai  avni bohot achi ladki hai......bas ek bar usse mil le bachhe ek dusre ke saath thoda vakt gujare....to jaldi se shaadi kar lenge......vaise avni hai kahan

illa:roshni jao aur apni avni di ko bulao.....
roshni:haan mumma 

[rosh brings avni in the hall......avni was totally looking gorgeous........Karan cud not move his eyes frm avni........]

illa : arey avni aao yaahan
[avni was really surprised to see karan her childhood frend  n his family]

avni:uncle aunty aap[she goes n touches their feet]
mrs n mr sharma:khush raho beta..........kaise ho tum..
avni:me thik hu...aur aap?
sharma's:hum thik hai aao baitho.......
karan:hiiiii avni 
avni:hiiii karan....[they were uncomfortable....n damini saw this.....]

damini:mumma hame in dono ko akela chod dena chahiye.....kyu prithvi
prithvi:haan  bilkul[though he was unhappy....he managed to look happy]
illa:avni ,karan jao tum dono....garden mein ghum aao
karan:ji aunty ..avni chaley
avni:haan....

[in the garden........]
karan:avni ek baat kahun .......tum bohot sundar lag rahi ho
avni:[she was sad but managed to talk]thank u......tum mere bare me jaante hue bhi mujhse shaadi kyu karna chahte ho.......
karan:avni...beete hui baate yaad karke kya fayda hmmm.....zindagi to chalti rahegi na....hum ek nai shurvat kar sakte hai
avni: haan magar kuch baate aise hoti hai jo hum chahkar bhi nahi bhul sakte.....
karan:avni chodo un saari bato ko...........aur batao tumhare bare me.....
avni:karan tum to mujhe jaante ho na....mein ab bhi vaisi hi hoon...simple....mujhe pub ya disko jaana bilkul pasand nahi.......
karan: hmm acha hai i like it........aur tumhe mere baare me kuch nahi puchna.....
avni:nahi ....tumne mujhe samjha mere liye itna hi kafi hai
karan:dekho avni .....mein tumpar koi ehsan nahi kar raha hun ok to plzz tum apneaap ko kamjor matt samjho.....hmm agar tumhe time chahiye to tum lo...ok
avni:thanx ,.....
kara:acha me tumhare jawab ka wait karunga....
[karan leaves from there..........]

precap:avni's ans........yes/no..............sameer and avni meeting....]
heyyy guys hope u liked the part ..
it is written by juhi[juhi_karneet]and me
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Hmm nice so Ila has choosen Karan for Avni ok!afterwards he can fall for Ridhima[Shilpa/jenny] umm Savni crying oh u made me cry also really missing them now.
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wow depika di and juhi kya part tha,best out of this world arey i m speechless