U believe in ~DESTINY??~ -MN SS!!! last part-pg 33 - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hey Nice part Jana

Liked it
Mayu organizing a party quite a shocker
Mayu still loves to tease Nups
Like dteh way Nups silentky prayed for Mayu
They still love each other yaar
Hop their probs get sloved soon


yeahh it is quite shocking 😆
thnks fr rewading afshaa 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Yash
wow dear
great update.
awesome one
loved it to the core

good going
keep it up


heyy thnks Farii 😊
glad u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht

YASHHHHIIIIIIIIII

LOVED IT COMPLETEY
DO CONT SOOONN


thnks Sariska 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Firegurl

h dear wats up welllllllll your update was really interesting n it seems that mayur care 4 eah other


Hey Kanishta 🤗
thnk u sooo much 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

fantastic part yash

n loved it hun
thnx 4 d pm


thnks Samira 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maloo19

lovely part

plz plz update soon


thnkss marium 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u sooo much all for the lovely comments
hI am nnow updating the next part 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago


First of all "A VERY VERY HAPPY BELATED FRIENDSHIP DAY" to all of you.This update is a gift of friendship to all my buddies.Enjoy reading 😊
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EXCEL COLLEGE:

It was  a routine normal day of the college.Nupur and Suhaani were busy in thier classes.After classes,Suhaani and Nupur came out to leave for their homes.

-Nupur's POV-
     "Everyday I wish that I could not get a glance of Mayank as I could not face him as it would remind me of all our moments and make me sad but today when he is not in college I am dying to get a glance of Mayank,WHY?......why? am I missing him? but why would I miss him? why did I pray for him last night? Ohh..!!! what should I do?

                

When Nupur was walking in the corridor she saw a image of a person in library.She got excited unknowingly and ran towards it and then she realised that she was actually IMAGINING.She was standing still there 😔 heplessly.

S: Kya hua? tum yahan kyun aayi bhaagti hui?........Now dont tell me that imagined Mayank like in some stupid SRK movie hun

Nupur could not say anything but stood silently

S: Are u serious?......Ohh god..!!! when will u turn normal my filmy girl (with a tum kabhi sudhrogi look)
N: Main normal hoon (in a low voice)
S: u said something?
N: nooo.....lets go home

Suhaani and Nupur left for their homes.
 
                 

BHUSHAN HOUSE: (at 7:30)

Nupur's phone rang.It was Suhaani.

N: Hello
S: Hello sweetie...wassup?
N: nothing yaar just watching some stupid stuff on TV
S: okk..so leave that stupid thing and get ready.I am coming to pick u up
N: pick me up? to where? Where r we going?
S: I am going to kidnap u my dear
N: kaaaash 😳
S: shut up and get ready in 15 ok
N: 15??? ok then bye....I need to get ready na bye
S: byee 😊

Suhaani came after 30 min to Nupur's house.they both took a auto and left promising Nupur's mom to return before 10pm

N: Suhaani,hum kahan ja rahe hai?
S: kahan na kidnap kar rahi hoon
N: ohhhooo.....bolo naa

                   

For this Suhaani asked her to look out of the auto where she saw a house........MAYANK's HOUSE
 
N: 😲 😲 hum Mayank ke ghar kyun jaa rahe hai?
S: woh I am sorry yaar,woh Mayank aur Purab win ho gaye hai aur unhone ek choti si party organize kiya hai......Purab ne kaha tha tumhe invite karna ko,aur agar main bata deti ki Mayank ke ghar mein party hai to tum kabhi nahi aati na to isliyee........
N: Suhaani...... 😡......Purab ne keh diya aur tumne....woh to stupid hai par tum bhi........
S: Ohh stop it Nupur.......kab tak yu bhagti raho gi.......shut up n lets go

Suhaani stopped the auto outside Mayank's house n Pulled Nupur's hand and stand her outside,paid the fare and was waiting for Nupur to say something

N: Suhaani.....u r very bad
whenever u need to convince me for something u encourage me saying face it n alll........
S: 😆 😆 😆.........sorry hun
but thats the best trick to convince Nupur Bhushan u know
N: hahahah...so funny.but promise me not more than 1 hr ok?
S: yeah sure....only 1 hr

-Nupur's POV-
     Oh Nupur.....what r u doing again? I think today only you thought that you wouyld not miss him  and try to avoid him and now how did u get convinced.No,Nupur u cant do this.go back.
No Nupur,u were waiting to see him and now when u huv a chance u cant go away.go meet him,face him.GO GAL.

                   

Nupur and Suhaani went inside Sharma Mansion.It was full of guests,everyone enjoying and having a fun time.

Purab saw both of them standing at the door and signalled Mayank to look him at the door

-Mayank's POV-
       I saw her standing at the door.I was that finally Purab and Suhaani suceeded in bringing her to the party .She was looking beautiful as ever.Her hair flying in the air and Wooww..!!! she wore a white dress......my favourite color.Is it a co-incidence or.........

Purab came to Mayank and took him away
Mayank and Purab went together and recieved them with a smile 😊
 
                

P: Hi Nupur,Hi Suhaani
S &N : Hi Purab
M: Hi Suhaani,Hi Nupur
N: Hi Mayank....congrats
M: thank u soo much
S: *ahem ahem* congratulations Mayank (giving him a gift)
P: not fair Suhaani...aur mera gift? (putting a face)
S: hmm......dono ke liye hai
P : just kidding...anyways thanks.well Nupur tumhara gift kahan hai?.....nahi layi very bad
N: wohh Purab......well......
M: (cutting Nupur's line) tum aagayi wahi kafi hai......thanks for coming
S &P : *ahem ahem* 😆 😆 😆
Mayank and Nupur feel a bit embarrased 😳

M : shut up 😡
P : waise Suhaani....aaj tum bahuit achi lag rahi hoo
S : thnk u Purab
P : Ohhhooo.aur main Purab....meri taarif nahi karogey (in her nautanki style)

 Purab was about to say something when Mayank cossed him and said quickly

M : tum bhi bahut achi lag rahi hoo Nupur (as ever-in his mind)

Nupur thoght it was better to keep silence as it would give Suhaani and Purab one more chane to pull their leg so she just smiled 😊

M : ok guyss......come in and have fun........I ll be back in a sec hun

                 

Mayank went to see other guests.Some were busy dancing with each other ,while some in flirting.Suhaani and Nupur stood at one corner watching everyone and having fun and sometimes Mayank and Nupur stared at each other and sometimes smiled at each other but neither talked to each other. When Party was on full swing, Nupur saw a beautiful girl entering the party.She dirctly went to Mayank and hugged and Maynak recieved her with equal warmth.She wished him and gave him a bouquet of RED ROSES.This made everyone and even Nupur a bit feel awkward as Mayank was never that kind who would hug a girl in front of so many people.
 
                 

-Nupur's POV-
Who is she?...and OMG...!!! she hugged Mayank.Ok fine so what she hugged him..but why am I getting jealous? JEALOUS-no way Nupur.she may be his school friend.But Mayank cant hug even his school friend naa...he is such a unromantic fellow.who would know better than  u.Ok fine Nupur...stop thinking about her

               

Nupur tried her max not look at her and Mayank standing together and laughing.She felt a bit sad but controlled herself.Atlast she lost it and asked Suhaani

N: who's she Suhaani?
S : how would I know? aur waise bhi........hume kya karna........hmm.....jealous?
N : jealous...no way.main to bas aise hi pooch rahi thi

Suddenly,CJ entered and talked to them

C:Heyy Guysss
S & N : hii...how r u?
waise tum jaanti ho ki woh ladki kaun hai (Nupur in a hurry)

Suhaani dint knew to feel bad or laugh at her

C: Ohh she.she is Dia...a fashion designer by proffession
N: Ahhh...!!! mujhe uske bio-data se kya karna hai.......yeh pata hai ki woh Mayank ki lagti hai?
C: tumhe kyun?
N : ohhhooo...batao naa
C : well.....I dont know yaar

              

   CJ was also a very good friend of Mayank and also Nupur and knew everything about them.They talked to each other for a lil time and then CJ left.Suhaani and Nupur were also planning to leave.They were walking towards the exit when they heard someone talking
 
Guy1 : hey u know who dat girl is?
Guy2 : noo.....
guy3 : you dont know.....she is Mayank's NEW GIRLFRIEND
Guy2 : ohhh really.....wooww
Guy1 : ohh maannn!!! Mayank is a rockstar man

This made Nupur heart break into many pieces.No could hear the sound,only she could feel the pain.She felt as if someone had killed her from inside.She could not neither cry nor evenbe happy for him.She could neither accept it nor could revolt,she just did what she could............left from their silently before anyone could see her.

               

Nupur went running to the parking area and Suhaani followed her.Suhaani saw Nupur standing near a car.Suhaani held Nupur's shoulders and turned her to face her.She saw tears in her eyes.At first Suhaani could not believe that is was the same Nupur who used to cheer her up and make her laugh during tough times could actually cry for a guy.Suhaani tried to say something but before she could Nupur hugged her and broke into tears đŸ˜­ đŸ˜­ đŸ˜­.She broke the hug and said..........

N: Suhaani......dekha tumne........Mayank mujhe bhool gaya..........woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta........woh chala gaya mujhe hamesha ke liye chodke.........😭 😭 😭

      maine aaj tak apne aap se bhi yeh baat chupayi par aaj............suhaani main aaj bhi Mayank se utna hi pyaar karti hoon.........utna hi jitna pehle karti thi..........ya shayad usse bhi jyada 😭 😭 😭............par woh mujhe bhool gaya Suhaani......he moved on.

    Haan kyun nahi..........main hi pagal thi jo soch rahi thi ke Mayank mere kismat mein hai......to kya hua hum saath nahi hai par hum ek doosre se pyaar to karte hai.........par nahi wo mujhse pyaar nahi karta....nahi karta Suhaani

S: Nupur........listen...dekho.....(even Suhaani was falling short of words)

N : *U know what Suhaani........I LOVE HIM...........I STILL LOVE HIM n I WILL LOVE HIM till my last breath.............kyun ki he is my FIRST LOVE aur first love ko kabhi nahi bhool sakte hai* 😭 😭
(and again hugged her and started crying)

               

           Suhaani tried a lot to console and however took her out and they both took a auto to home and went away.

Suhaani and Nupur thought that only they both knew what happened a few minutes ago but their destinies had something else stored for them.It ws no more a secret between them but was also heard by Mayank himself.............
(just to let u know that Mayank dint hear the whole conversation but just heard from * to *)

                  

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Thats it guyss.Thank u sooo much for reading.this time I tried my max to write as long as possible n I hope u r quite satisfied with it
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                                                               THEY MEAN A LOT TO ME 😊
 


Edited by yash.dilse - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
u stopped in such an interesting point....pls continue soon.....
great update dear.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh....its nice dear 😊
plzzz continue it soon.........i am very exited.......

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