U believe in ~DESTINY??~ -MN SS!!! last part-pg 33

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Firegurl
hi dear finally we know the reason btwn mayur break up. dat was a wonderfull part n thnx for the pm

ohh kanishta thnks fr reading 😊
glad u liked it

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#152

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
yashu sorry 4 d late comment lov it was wonderful part mayu is bit rude thnx 4 d pm

its OK Samira
I am happy that u read it 😊

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: ravs143mayank
hey nice part dear........loved it!!!

thank u ravs 🤗

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: yashu_mjht
hey yash!!!!!!
awesome yaar!!...i read all the parts in one go...

continue soon!!...pls add me to ur pm list...

oh yashu......thnnks fr reading
glad u loved it

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yashasvini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl
Hey yashvani.......i just cam eacross ur FF...nd read the concept..its freakin awsmm..plz continue soon nd add me to ur pm list......

hey thank u sooo much
glad u liked it
I am gonna add u in PM list soon 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

@all:
thank u soo much for such sweet comments 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#157

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EXCEL COLLEGE:
Nupur,Suhaani and Purab went to their respective classes after passing time in canteen.After classes Suhaani and Nupur came out of their classes were leaving home when they heard some noise from the canteen.

S: yeh awaaz kaisi hai?
N: pata nahi.....lagta hai koi party ho rahi hai 😃 (in a excited tone) chal dekhte hai
S: hmm.....chod naa Nupur.
N: (in a sad tone) teekhe chalo 😔
Suhaani observed the sad face of Nupur
S: acha chal meri maa........meri emotional drama queen 😆

Nupur and Suhaani reached canteen where they saw all the classmates of Mayank and Purab having fun.Purab saw Nupur n Suhaani standing at the entrance.
P: hey girls.........come in n join us
N: par Purab ye party kis liye?
P: tumhe nahi pata.........jo inter-college quiz competition hai na kal uske liye as usual Princi ne mujhe aur Mayank ko choose kiya hai........to friends ne party puchlii
S: hun kya??.......hamesha to tu log hi jaate ho compettion mein isme nayi baat kaunsi hai jo party de rahe ho? 😕
P: nahi woh actually (he signalled Suhaani to come near) Mayank ne na apne b'day par party nahi diya tha to is bahane usko compensate karva rahe hai 😉
(in a low voice)
N: wahi to.......warna main soch rahi thi ki Mayank Sharma ab se parties dene laga 😆
P: 😆 acha chalo tum log aao na
N: Nahi nahi Purab........hum theek hai........u ppl enjoy hun bye.Chalo Suhaani
P: what???..........Nupur Bhushan aur party chod ke jaa rahi hai..........very bad.Suhaani tum to kaho na aane ke liye pls 😳
S: haan chal na Nupur......thodi der reh ke chale jayenge,ok?
N: par.........par Suhaani

Nupur did not even complete her sentence,Suhaani held her hand took her to the party area.They selected a table in the corner as per Nupur's request and sat talking to each other,munching things which Purab has bought for them.They sat for half-hour and then Nupur said its too late and they need to leave.Suhaani and Nupur were about to leave when someone Purab called them
P: arey tum log itni jaldi kyun ja rahi ho?
S: nahi its ok.......anyways thanks.Actually Nupur ko thoda kaam hai to............
Nupur,Suhaani were talking to each other when Mayank came there searching for Purab.
M: arey Purab kahan hai tu........main tujhe tabse doondh raha tha...........(he stopped seeing Nupur n Suhaani standing there)
oh Hi !!! I am sorry maine tum logon dekha hi nahi
S: its OK Mayank.....I understand.u were busy naa..........tumhare paas hamare time
kahan hoga 😉(she said sarcastically)
M: achaa.......to meri taang kichi ja rahi hai hun 😆
ok leave it..........come in na
"MAIN" party de raha hoon (he said this looking at Nupur who always use to complain that he is so boring n never organizes parties n nver even attends them too)
Suhaani understood this sudden change in his expression n whom he ws trying to target
S: hmm.......nahi Mayank thnks.woh Nupur ko thoda kaam tha too
M: kya.....??? Nupur ko kaam 😲
to this Nupur became a bit angry while Suhaani and Purab bursted out laughing 🤣
N: Suhaani....chale???
S: yeahh sure..........chal.bye guysss enjoy n ALL THE BEST
P: bye Suhaani (he said dreamily)..........bye Nupur take care(in a loud voice 😉 which got Mayank irritated again)
S: bye Purab
N: byeee 😊
Suhaani n Nupur turned to leave.Purab n Mayank syood their watching their girls leaving.Suddenly Nupur turned back,quite unexpectedly n said
N: ALL THE BEST Mayank 👍🏼 (with a sweet smile)
M: Thanks 😊

-Mayank's POV-
I came back from there after Nupur but smile on my face was unable to leave.Though many has wished me luck but Nupur's wish is always a special one for me.My happiness knew no bounds when Nupur wished me 😊.My mind told me that Nupur would never wish me, but my heart still believed that she would do it. I think I will never be able to win without her wishes.Though there is nothing between us now but,why was expecting her to wish me? Why was her wish so important for me?Why I wanted her to stay back?Why was my heart saying to stop her again n again?I dont like parties but still I did.........was it just because she likes them?Was it with a hope that she wud come there?Do I still love her?I dont know that its love or just my posessiveness that I cant see her talking or being with someone else.

Nupur reached home n directly went to her bed room n sat hugging her favourite pillow asusual thinking about the evening
-Nupur's POV-
Though I reached home but my thoughts are still left there around Mayank.I did not wanted to wish him but I could not stop myself wishing him may be because even I knew that his every competition is incomplete without my wishes.Is it just my thought or its for real? Was he waiting for me to wish him? Does it bother him whether I support him still or not? Whatever,I was happy to see him smile.His smile always had a effect on him n his eyes speak the unspoken words.And today his eyes told that he was very happy to hear me wishing him n as i he was actually waiting for this.

Nupur got down from her bed n went to mandir in her home slowly so that no one could see her at 1:30 am.She lit the diya near the temple n prayed
N: hey bhagwan...!!! Maa hamesha kehti hai ki jo wis hum doosron ke liye maangte hai woh aap zaroor kabul karte ho
Please bhagwan kal Mayank ki hel kar dena........woh bahut acha hai......aur woh win deserve bhi karta hai........hai naa!!! aap to jaante hi ho naa
please uski help kar dena bhagwan.........love u hun [😆]
After praying for Mayank,Nupur ran as fast she could into her room and slept

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Thats it for now guyss.I know its vry vry small but I really loved this update 😆........."apne mooh miya mithoo".Hope u like it too.Thank u sooo much for reading.dont forget to hit LIKE button.Comments/Criticize are accepted 😊

THEY MEAN A LOT TO ME 😊

Edited by yash.dilse - 15 years ago