MN FF -Ye Dooriyaan- Pt14 -pg 141 - (6-May) - Page 45

Amazing update Divya

Loved each & every bit of it......

specially Nupur's puzzle ...OMG ....it was too Good......

I am just loving the way you are describing the young love ......

And thanks a ton for updating it so regularly ..I feel like giving you jhappis for this...............🤗  🤗  🤗

I'll be waiting for another rocking update

Luv
Nidzy~

aww...poor mayank! stuck in the puzzle trying to use deductive reasoning, but i wonder why doesn't he just go up and ask her like last time? just ask her! i do that and it works, and you don't have to rack your brain so much either! its muy facil!
but i get him too there are a lot of what ifs attached to it, what if she says no, what if she doesn't say anything like last time? wait has mayank found out her address yet? but thats no excuse either he could just go and wait at the school for her!
yea i know im more crazy than usual today, how thats possible? even i don't know! go figure!

i loved the whole convo, getting sent out of class (thankfully hasn't happened to me since 5th, and thank God for that!), passing notes (was doing that today lol) it was so cute!
actually scratch what i said about loving the amazing convo, i loved the whole part!! cuz it was absolutely awesome, and realistic and totally brill!!
waiting for the next one, continue soon!!

btw i edited my last comment! late i know, but better late than never...

oh another thing! they are 13 year olds here, right? wow, good to know there are people other than my oh so charming friends who fall in love at the age of 13 lol idk if they (my friends) are gonna last, but i know mayur will or rather im majorly hoping they will...
Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 14 years ago

soooooo damn cute....school  love story....I like the flashbacks ..

OMG..DD!!!

Divz.............

Lovely update.......... liked the MN class converstation and Nupur lovely puzzle and mayank analysing it in the end..........

Do continue soon...... 😊

awesome divya..am in love with this ff...

i juuss lovedd the parttt divyaa dii! 🤗

wow divya awesome part!!!

oh datz gr8, i jst luvd der convi ,... continue soon :)

Gosh Divya wat an update. 😍😍   Edited by swati05 - 14 years ago