MN FF -Ye Dooriyaan- Pt14 -pg 141 - (6-May) - Page 44

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwwwwwwww . . . amazing! Just went through the whole thingy! 😃 Loved it. You've written it in an exceptionally well manner! *bear huggie* xx 😳

-Kanky
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Divzzzzzzzzzzzzz,
 
I wrote a hugeeeee comment for you but it got deleted man. Here I go again, mou told me about it and i was like no way man i had visited this thread twice hoping that  a miracle happens and divz has updated but no luck. When we were talking i thought we were talking about chapter 5, but then Senny got a bigggggggggg pleasant surprise. It feels so good to be here after few days man, and reading your FF makes things even more brighter and nice.
 
Divzzzzz you have no idea how much i loveddddd the cute little update which was almost based on the past and the intial feelings of love but then the best thing which i found amongst all was how you connected that beautiful incident from the past to the present.
 
i lovedddddddddd how they were thrown out of class hehe, i have never been not even for once though i was extremely naughty as well divz and then i loved how they both were upset and blamed eachother. I loveddddddddd the genuine answer by Nupur which was not really confusing but still not clear, but above all was honest and a sincere attempt to answer his question.
 
Excellentttttttttttttttt work divzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
 
Keep rockinggggggggggg!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Divya

r a yaar it was wonderful update as usual.

simply beautiful.

both have some special feelings for each other.

loved mayur so much.

the way mayank asked nupur about her feelings was amezing.

i really loved this maynk.

and nupur - heheheehe usne tou mayank ko tension main dekh kar maza arahe hai.

but i really like nups ans, though it was confusing for mayank.

divya again awesome update.

loved every bit of it.

keep updating.




Edited by fariaa70 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my comment on pg.57
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
indeed she left puzzle
do cont soon
and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dee
u hv realy become a gud girl im so proud of u dee
nupur talking of love is so confusing😕 only for me, coz u kno😛
btw id agree hiding stuff frm ur mom is terribly difficult😆
mayank n nupur thrown out n they r upset😲😕
i used to b ssooo glad😃
mayank is agn super direct😛
n nupz showing atti😆
go on girl its ur haq😆 girl friend dharm types......shaadi ke baad its only the guy who shows😛😆
nupurs answer is so cute😳
n mayanks diagnosis is lol logical😛

dee awesome part
but continue being a good girl dee
coz u kno im eagerly waiting😳

also dee how can u thing frm  the pov of a 13 yr old
amazing👏👏👏👏👏
ur too good dee...perfect at it
loved the part
madzz
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Posted: 14 years ago

it was beautiful very very well written

 
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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG Divya:)))Amazing update:)))

 
Well Describe their feeling ilike the way u have describe everythings:)))😳
 
haye waiting for u next update:)))
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Posted: 14 years ago
v nice part..lovely
mayur r such cute kid..
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