mini ff-'OUR WAYS' last part pg 16

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

awww...tht was sweet update..

very nice...

thnks for pm...

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Dolly

@kptl

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

awww tat was such a cute update....
luv da interaction bw ash meher nd preet....
so abhi really is caring toward heer...how sweet....

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Annwesha

@annwesha09

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

lovely update !!

plz cont soon..

thanks a lot 4 ur pm.

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newt2007

@newt2007

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

lovely part

cute scene between Prem and Heer. nice Gmom changed for good.

BTW where are the kids?

wondering how do they call the kids now?

When Heer call Prem both Sr and Jr will come together.😆 Preet won't have not much problem becasue Heer will call Sr. Prem always not Sr. Preet

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago

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saranya

@nehara

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

hey..
great update..
i really liked it...
premeer were cute...
update soon.... :D

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

cute part!

prem's dialogues were nice....

continue soon

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

part 11

two years later

"prem .....prem utho" say heer
prem:heer plz sone do na
heer:prem aaj office nahi jaana kya
prem:uff ho heer and get up from bed and went to bathroom meanwhile heer came downstairs and do arti and then do to kitchen and say "maa aap yaha kya kar rahi hain"
g3:kyun???mein nahi aa sakti
heer:nahi maa aisi baat nahi hai mein to bas
g3:heer ...and start laughing mein kar loon gi tum jaa ke prem aur bacho ko dekho
heer:jee maa and leave from their and goes to children room and say "utho kya baat hai aaj school nahi jana kya
jr.preet:plz maa thordi dair
heer:apne papa ki tarha lazy hogaye hoo
prem:are wah!subah subah meri tareef
heer:aur nahi to kya bilkul tum par gaye hain
prem:heer mere bache hain mujh par hi jaaye ge pardosi par thodi jaaye gein
heer:prem(in anger)
prem:acha baba sorry!!!! tumjao aaj mein in ko tayar karta hoon
heer:are u sure
prem:of course heer tum jao
heer:theek hai and leaves from their meanwhile prem make them ready and come downstairs to eat breakfast and time to leave and heer kiss jr.prem,preet and chahat and say bye
prem:aur meri
heer:kuch to sharam karo
prem:heer mein saath na insaafi kyun
heer:prem!!!!!!!!!!!
prem:plzz ek
heer:acha theek hai
and kiss hi on cheek and say bye
prem:bye and leave and heer standing their smiling

in evening prem return from office and then
g3:are beta tu aa gaya
prem:kyun maa kya baat hai
heer:woh heer......
prme:kya howa heer ko and run to their room and see heer sitting on bed
prem:heer kya howa
heer:kuch nahi bas doctor ke pass gayi thi
prem:doc. kke pass lekin kyun...sab theek to hai na
heer:haan baba sab theek hai and btw congratz
prem:thank u ..lekin kis liye
heer:for once again becoming a father
prem:acha woh.........what???
heer:haan
prem:heer im so happy and hug her and say iss bar mujhe beti chahiye
heer:prem beta bhi to ho sakta hai
prem:nahi heer beti kyun ke humare pehle se do bete hai aur ek beti tumhere side par do hotein hai aur meri side par ek not fair is liye is baar beti
heer:prem!!!and hug him

after nine months

prem:heer dekho kitni payari hai
heer:aakhir mujh par gayi hain
prem:nahi mujh par
jr.preet:wrong meri sis mujh par gayi hai
jr.prem:nahi mujh par
chahat:nahi mujh par and start fighting and heer say "shut up" and all become quite
heer:hum sab par gayi hai theek hai
all:okay!!! and all hug her and say "thank you"

picture complete and they live happily ever after

the end
i want to make end part on premeer scenes i hope u like my ff
thnx
with luv
SAM

Edited by samrocking30 - 15 years ago