Only Us..NEW FF, Part 4-Page 6 - UPDATED 09/04/10!

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Hi, friends...right now i'm very depressed from the news about the ZRA awards..I don't mind the ways the story is going in CB...today's episode was actually quite enjoyable...so take my mind off the cheating that Zee did with us using the ZRA award i started a new FF...I hope you enjoy it..I probably won't be as good as the other FFs on the forum...Hers's the start...
Radhika was an adopted girl found by Brij Mohan Shatri at a mandir..the people in her family are Shastirji (Good), Devki (Good), Amma (Bad), Priya (Radh's older sis (Bad)) and Vishaka (Radh's younger sis (Good)).
At the Shastri House....
Devki (D): Beti, zaara shukar (sugar) farana..
Radhika (R): Ji Maa,
R: Yeh liyjae,
It was in the morning, Vish went to college, Radh was not aloud to go to college, but when Vish went..she would drop her off and as a treat she was allowed to go to one class..Art class.
D: Tu galdi se tayare ho ja beti, tumhe Vishaka ko college vhee toh chor na hai
R: Ji maa, Mein abhi tayare ho kar aati ho.
Radh was ready.
Vishaka (V): Chale Radhika,
R: Haan chale.
Now Vish and radh were outside college...they were about to go to their classes.
V:Mein aapni class mein jati hoon, tu art class hi jaygi hamesha ki taara,
R: Haa, mein bohut shukar kuzar ho ke Babuji ne Amma ko menaliya tha mera art class jaane keliya...Mujhe art khaas kar painting karna bhut pasand hein.
V: Aacha aab teek hein, mein clati hoon..bye.
R: Bye.
In art class....Radh enters the classroom
Mrs Malhotra (Teacher): Aao, aao beta, aaj dehri kesae ho gayi..
R: Vho...
MM: Koi baat nahi..main janti ho ke mein aapni favourite student ki yeh galti maaf kar sakti hoon..chalo aab tum beht jao..aur tumhara jo maan ho ho vho bena le na..Teek hai.
R: Ji...she smiled
Radh painted the beautiful view of a mandir from the window oppostite she was sitting.
Class finished. Miss M came over..
MM: Wow, beta..tume ne itni jaldi..itni aachi painting kaise baana leti ho...sab raang...sab lekiyre..sab perfect hein.
R: Mein bas ko mera maan kehta hein baanane ko voh hi banna leti hoon.
MM: Haa beta, isse se pata chaal to hein ke tumhara maan kitna saaf hein. Chalo aaba tume isse apne special room mein rakh do aur ghar jaao...class finish ho chuki hein.
Radh went into a large room...full with large, beautiful and colourful paintings she had made over the years...when she would paint she would get lost in her world of colours. She placed the painting in a corner and locked the door..she gave the key to Mrs M and left.
R: radhe radhe
MM: radhe radhe.
Mrs M was Radh's favourite and only teacher after in college as she didn't live a normal college education..she was stop from being educated after 12th standard and now went to art class because she loved painting...Radh loved her a lot..she shared everything with her. she was more than a teacher..she was like a mother for Radh. Mrs M knew about Radh's life and they ways she was treated by her older sis (Priya) and Amma...but she knew that radh was a gem that even if you tried, you could not find.
Outside College..Vish is waiting for radh...radh arrives...both start walking.
V: Aagi aapni art class se, vhee meri to aaj bas hi hogayi, pehle math, phir science aur English vhi...paata hein Radhika...kabhi kabhi mera vhi dil kata hein ke teri taara meri vhi ek class hi hoti...
R: Nahi, Vishaka..tu parle..tu nahi janti ke tu kitani lucky hein ke tume se oppertunity milli hein.
V: Oh please Radh..you are truly a geek!!! saying sarcasticly. Aacha yeh baata ke tumhari favourite book kaun si hein....haa mujhse paata hein ke tu meri puranee(old) kitaab hi parti hein par un mein tumhe kaunsi pasand hein.
R: meri..meri favorite...Romeo & Juliet hein.
V: ROMEO AND JULIET...usse mein tume kya acha lagta hein...mujhe to bahut boring lagta hein.
R: nahi Vishaka, R & J bohu romantic hein..mujhe bohut pasand hein.
V: Aacha usse kitaab ke Romeo ko choro, tumhara sach ka Romeo kahan hein?
R: (looking down, blushing) Paata nahi.
V: Toh paata kar, waise tume kaisa Romeo chahe?
R: Mujhe...mujhe aaisa ladka chahe jo bohut aacha ho, mujhe bohut pyaar kaare, mera khaiyal rakhe, baaron ki izaat kare aur...aur..
V: Aur....
R: Aur...bohut handsome ho...she said while blushing and smiling.
V: Oh ho..tu to bohut romantic banri ho..aacha aapni ye romantic baate chor aur ya ha mera intizaar kar jab tak mein usse paas wali tukan(shop) se notebook le aao...teek hai
R: Teek hai....😊
Hope you liked it...this is my first FF...I hope you enjoyed it..please post your 2cents 😊
Thanx for reading!!!
Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 2
Part 3 - Page 3
Part 4 - Page 6
Edited by RaDev_4Eva - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice start on the ff can't wait for more
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nice start! can't wait for more!
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Thank You all soooo much!!!!!😊
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Hey that was nice....... 👏 👏 Please update soon 😊
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Great start! I can't wait to read the rest. Please post as soon as you get a chance.
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What a start dear, please write more. Thanks.
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really nice start Radev_4eva👏
please update soon 😊
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😃..thank you ...👏👏
waiting for the next.....It really hels..now i am not worried about the current track..i just watch it for avi and rubi and dadi...and then just forget it....
So thank you for taking us to a different world.....
Good luck
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good ff 😃do pm me when u update.

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