Ek pyaar Bhari dastan (FF) updated pg 35 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ayushi wonderful post ... DM and his Bandini are finally off to Pavagadh for much needed time off and TLC ... who is this mysterious person waiting for your next post
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Posted: 15 years ago

@ cuterosy..........its a surprise.........everyone will be surprised..........even i am surprised that i can think like that................glad u liked it

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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely FF scene.. but Precap.. ab kaun aagaya?? Please let SanRaj SR be disturb free..😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

PAWAGAD!!! the best place to be

oooooooooooo new entry !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow amazing yaar... what a story I looove it thankx for sahrin
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Aayushi I was dyeing 2 see them in their honeymoon trip.Eagerly waiting to read their romantic talk. But who is d mysterious person? Post d next scene ASAP. Feeling so happy dt all d wicked ones are getting punishment. Only Khemi is left out till now.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Loved it Ayushi!🤗👏🤗

Cant wait 4 da next one,do post it soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW ayushi,

just now i read ur all one all r just amazing.

PLZ keep writing & post next one ASAP. 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks guys for enjoying my new ff...............thanks for your lovely comments...........sorry for the delay...........I will be posting my new episode in few hours,.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
EPISODE 18

Both Dm and santu are now ready and they take baa and bapuji's blessing ............its afternoon now and they are about to reach at their desitination.............finally they arrived at pavagard..........DM gets his suitcase out from the car and goes to one of the hotel. They had this president suit booked at this 5 star hotel.

Dm ask santu to close her eyes and when they opened their room, it was decorated with roses. Whilst santu is walking, there is rose petals on the floor as well.........the whole room was then filled with love, and beautiful fragnence of roses just added another factor.

Dm ask santudi if she liked it or not? And she replied, " I loved it maalik" what more could I have asked for? Thanku maalik for making my dream come true.......Dm then says wait a minute there is another surprize for you.........Santu is shocked and asked what is it Maalik, and he says for that you have to wait till the evening.

Both of them gets changed and Dm takes her for candle light dinner........

Dm and santudi sitting on this beautifully decorated table. Both of them are blushing and doesn't know how to start the talk. So obviously our DM says, eh santudi kya khana hai..........Santu says aap ki marzi ( your wish)......

DM calls out the waiter and order some nice romatic french food. Both are enjoying the food. Santu asks him if they can go to this park and walk for few minutes. Both Santu and Dm are wandering in the park and enjoying eachother's company. Then santu sees this ice-cream wala and ask DM to get her vanilla ice-cream. Dm gets only one ice-cream cone and santu asks him if he doesn't want it. Dm replies that he will eat it after words.

Santu is enjoying her ice-cream and Dm looking at her with BR eyes. So after their ice-cream treat they are back in this hotel. DM close the door and ask santudi to sit besides him. Both of them are looking at each other's eyes. DM says you have filled my life with happiness and I promise to make your life filled with joy. Santu says maalik even I love you a lot and cannot live without you.

DM comes even more closer to santudi and Place a kiss on her lips. Then they have an eyelock. DM then tries to untie santu's hair and then the scene fades away...........

Next morning

Santu and Dm are going for joging and they are very tired. So santu says maalik can we sit here for a while? Dm says yehh, "thaiki gayu" chal theek che thora aaram kar leve to theek che ( even I am tired, so its ok we will sit here for a while).............both of them are watching couples running together.......Suddenly Dm sees that a women just fell on the ground and he ran there to pick her up...........Santu also go towards this mahila............

DM: areee aapk theek to hai?

Mahila: ji, thanks and with the help of DM she goes towards this bench...............

Mahila: ji mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki jaisey maine aap ko dekha hai phale kaha................( Why do I feel that I know you from somewhere?)

DM: hah, lagta to mujhe be aisa he hai............( yeh, same here)

Mahila: Yes, ofcourse Dharamraj..........or should I say Raj.........remember me... Sonali.....the most sexiest girl in college and you used to come after me?

DM: oh hey sonali and he hugs her......where have you been........ and please I was never behind you............even I was a dashing man in college days............

Sonali: yes, I agree and that is why half of the girls were totally flat on you.............so what brings you here?

DM: well this is my wife santu and we are here??is was about to complete his sentence when sonali intrupts............

Sonali: you are here on honeymoon...............what is this yaar.........you should have gone to paris, or london, or egpt or somewhere romantic yaar..........why here.........

DM: well my wife wanted to come here so I am here.............but you tell me what are you doing here?

Sonali: well i am doctor and came here to open my new clinic........but I must say that you have a beautiful wife and she is young too............

DM: thanks, well here is my number and address and we will be here for another week so just drop by and we will chat.............alrigh then take care............and he hugs her back

Sonali saying bye to Santu and Dm............

Santu in angry voice............Who is she? Aur app us se itna chipk ka kyu baat kar rehe they?

DM: so you are doubting me hah?

Santu: no I just cannot see you with anyone else.............besides I don't like sonali............

DM laughing and sayin mere priyea santudi I love you more then my life and nothing will come between us..............

Next scene................

Santu is getting ready and so does DM and she says today finally I will get to see Khodiyar maa's mandir.............she says thanku maalik..................

Both of them arrived at this mandir and santu says you go ahead and I will bring pooja ki thaali...............Dm says no we will go together and they are at this shop buying thaali when they see sonali..........she says DM.............and wave at him...........and Dm also gives her smile and says you are here ..........I thought you never believed in god..............

Sonali: yes, but I am completely changed now............I belive in god and I have heard a lot about this mandir .......and then she greets santu and says wah santu you are looking very preety in this saree..............

Santu, Dm and sonali both enter the mandir together.............santu and Sonali hands their pooja ki thaali to Pandit ji...........and pandit ji gives them back their thaali............DM then puts pooja ka sindoor on santu while Sonali watch this scene...............

Sonali: I never knew that you are sooo romantic DM.................

Santu: Yes, he is a very caring and loving husband and I couldn't have asked for anything else................

PRECAP: DM is feeling dizzy and Santu is shocked..............she is crying ..........Sonali says jo satya hai woh he satya hai.........

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Edited by Ayushi_01 - 15 years ago

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