The Honeymoon is OVER - Page 56

So finally I have read it .😊

wow afee. tooo good yaar. loved it. hope to see you entering my competition. you cant use this scene though. you've already posted it here.

Originally posted by: alja

So finally I have read it .😊

First of all thank u so much Afee for writing a scene , I was dying to read one !!

It was a really simple and sweet and lovely scene 😃

Yeh Amrit ko to dekho , sahab ki subah nahi hoti Bebo ko dekhay baghair ( by the way aaj kal to rano se hi subah hoti hai , hahaha !!! )

And Suman saying that paraji has not seen parjai ji was so sweeeet

Although this shirt thing is such an old phenomana but i still love it , i really hope they show something like this 😍

And yes Bebo running away with Amrit's eyes closed was 🤣

Nice job dear 👏👏

thanks for the lovely comments
glad u liked it, ufff i too want to see the shirt thing
now i am waiting from u, do write the 2nd part of amrit leaving UK
still waiting

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

wow afee. tooo good yaar. loved it. hope to see you entering my competition. you cant use this scene though. you've already posted it here.

thanks for the sweet comment
glad u liked it dear
WHAT??????????????????
i can't use this scene, ufff i really wanted to use this one
its mean i have to use the next scene i am going to write,
but i think the next scene is little bit ahem ahem😳
😆

Originally posted by: juhuti

thanks for the sweet comment
glad u liked it dear
WHAT??????????????????
i can't use this scene, ufff i really wanted to use this one
its mean i have to use the next scene i am going to write,
but i think the next scene is little bit ahem ahem😳
😆

perfect!

Dear Alija...
first of al...kaan pakadke sorry...
maaf kar dena yaar...
itni der kar di meine... i was kinda gettin used 2 ur jiju s timings...
so, sorry 4 d delay, Dear...
comin 2 d scene....

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ⭐️
it was awesome, yaar.... 👏 👏
mind blowin!!!👏
"mera pyar aap ki kamzori nahi taakat banna chahiye , haina?"- this dialogue was so beautiful.. 😉
and Bebo callin Amrit, "Mr.Malhotra"..tht was soooooo sweet, yaar.... 😛
And behind d curtain!!hmmm..ahem ahem....😳 😳 😳
"choriye " part was so romantic, Dear...
One tite squeeze frm me....
love u,
kanmani
🤗

Dear Ganga....
Sorry 4 taking sooooooooooo long.....
a li'l held up wid ur jiju, yaar...
hope u ll forgive me....kaan pakadke sorry!!!

first of al, hats off 2 ur patience!!!!!👏 👏 u ve taken soo much pains 2 do this 4 us...
can't thank u enough, dear...😛
it really takes so much time 2 write scenes...esp long ones....
al of us love u for tht!!!❤️

Comin 2 d scene 10....
Awesome!!! Wonderful!! splendid!! Mind blowin!!!👏 👏
i m at a loss f adjectives, Dear.....👏 😊
Pyar-wali jagda was sooo cute..i d always wanted somethin like tht...
life wud b so borin widout fights, rite?? 😉
Amrit consolin Bebo aft a fight...😉

ofcourse!!! we gotta agree Amrit s a wonderful husband...👏
thinkin abt her n her happiness al d time...it was so beautifully described in d scene, Dear...❤️
the train scene again!!
I was kinda transported 2 d good old days... 😍
And Deviki Aunty s entry was soo sweet..it was jus perfect..mother-daughter reunion!!😛
Amrit strokin Bebo s hair... was soo sweet....
ofcourse, he sets an example 4 d perfect husband!! 😉

And Ganga..wots dis?? only 15yrs for Rano??? 😡 😡
I was expectin a life-time sentence 4 tht churail!!

Wow, Ganga... u r so gud at rememberin dates...
And al of us ve 2 thank Babloo bhaiyya 4 bringin AmBo closer...
Amrit s one thotful person..he s saved d diary 4 Bebo...tht was a sweet gesture....
pink clor dress was jus perfect...
The kiss n d rain scene was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic!!! 😳
can't stop blushing!! 😳

the proposal album....
awesome idea, Dear... 👏
he made Bebo feel imporatnt n how much she means 2 him....❤️
one f d things wich i love abt the whole scene s tht Bebo also expressed her love 4 Amrit...❤️
i d always imagined wot tht wud b like!!!

yeh Shravan bhi na.... 😡
ufffffff!!!!!! he desrves dis... 😡
it was his mistake 2 let go off Bebo....
n d way AmBo defended each other was tooooooo gud....

Bebo pregnanat??????????
OMG!!!!!!!! atlast!!! 🥳 🥳 🥳
so happy bcoz, he didn get rano preg by mistake!!!

PART 11
Amrit pacin outside the labor ward....Narang family s presence...
perfect family....
Baby girl!!!😛
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
'nother laadli.... tht wud b gr8....n d kid takes after Amrit?? yipeee....
wish d kid has 3 oth brothers like Bebo... 😉
Amrit s proved himself 2 b d perfect dad too..changin nappies n all...😊
how sweet the scene was...
n d last part was..... 😳 😳 😳
Ganga, u gotta give a thot 2 writin...u r tooo gud at it, Dear....
here s a tight squeeze frm me....
love u,
kanmani
🤗

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww, dear...
Awesome scene...👏 👏
i loved it.... 😛
subah-subah romance?? so romantic.....😳
Amrit s usin his brains at last...he made her come to their room!! gud job, Amrit!!😉
yeh Bebo ko kiya hua? "pyar aur abhi?" pyar karne keliye koi shub muhurat nikhalna hai kiya???😡
koi ise samjayiye na....
bechara Amrit... 😕
sirf ek kiss maang raha tha aur yeh de nahi rahi hai...
and the kitchen scene was soooo cute!!! 🥳
i love it wen he hugs her frm behind!!❤️
So beautifully written, Dear...... 😛
Hope 2 wotch somethin like this onscreen....

PS: Sorry 4 d late reply, Dear....
kaan pakadke sorry!!

here s a tite squeeze frm me!!!
love u,
kanmani
🤗

Originally posted by: winkydinks

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww, dear...
Awesome scene...👏 👏
i loved it.... 😛
subah-subah romance?? so romantic.....😳
Amrit s usin his brains at last...he made her come to their room!! gud job, Amrit!!😉
yeh Bebo ko kiya hua? "pyar aur abhi?" pyar karne keliye koi shub muhurat nikhalna hai kiya???😡
koi ise samjayiye na....
bechara Amrit... 😕
sirf ek kiss maang raha tha aur yeh de nahi rahi hai...
and the kitchen scene was soooo cute!!! 🥳
i love it wen he hugs her frm behind!!❤️
So beautifully written, Dear...... 😛
Hope 2 wotch somethin like this onscreen....

PS: Sorry 4 d late reply, Dear....
kaan pakadke sorry!!

here s a tite squeeze frm me!!!
love u,
kanmani
🤗

OMG Winky ur back wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
really happy to see u back...
missed u yaar..............
back to the comment
thanks for the lovely comments
glad u liked it dear....
now i am waiting from u and dunia,
well let dunia alone right as she is busy with other things
but as u r back then u should write one ok
thanks once again for sweet comment
and thanks for the hug....
afreen

OMG...
This was too good...
You are too gr888....