Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 34

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Posted: 19 years ago
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poonam di that was very romantic
all the parts were great keep up the great work 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sadDe

ur most welcome poonam...n u do great work yaar... 👏

luv ya too... 🤗 🤗

n well...abt yr last part..i dont think writin has much 2 do with feelings..coz i really feel very strongly fer yr hone walay jeeju..par abhi tak writin mai i suck!! 😳 maybe i dont love him strong enulf.. 😳 par u shud keep goin..gud work..👏

thanks again..........😛🤗

and for ur confusion...........may be it happened wid u ,but it doesn't meant dat u don't feel 4 him .........of-course u feel.👍🏼.i bet u have a strong feeling for him😳.😊.......after all he is ur future pati yaar😳......but hunny maine apna personal experience share kiya tha........coz i always think dat writing aur main ....kabhi nahin😆.😆.😆...............but after falling in love wid arjun😳 ...........i write dis ff😛..........and .........i also write so many poems in hindi n english in my diary............if we will meet anyday ,i will show u😉.........

.congrats for ur engagement👏............and shaadi mein invite kar rahi ho na............😳......and don't worry jald hi u will start witing also😉........my best wishes wid u.😃🤗🤗

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ziddi

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poonam di that was very romantic
all the parts were great keep up the great work 😛

awwwwwwwwwwww mamta u come back sis😃.🤗.......how r u😛..........i m so-so so glad to see u back😃.😃.😃................love u soooooooo much.🤗🤗🤗

Edited by poonam kg - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 aww pooh lub u re dat was awesme cmt soon sweeto cya soon :kiss :hug: :hug
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Posted: 19 years ago
poonam... this is not good... not good at all... 😡
u shud update this daily,twic a day,hourly... something like that... kitni demand hai dekho!! 😃
waiting 4the next part 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: newkidontheblok

👏 aww pooh lub u re dat was awesme cmt soon sweeto cya soon :kiss :hug: :hug

o shiva!!!!!.......u read my ff in ur very busy shedule ......how sweet u r.😳😳......dis is a pleasent surprise 4 me........😃.........love u hunny......🤗

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: tunna

poonam... this is not good... not good at all... 😡
u shud update this daily,twic a day,hourly... something like that... kitni demand hai dekho!! 😃
waiting 4the next part 😃

OMG!!!! itna gussa mat karo dear.😳........lekin yaar if i write twice a day or hourly......den arjun ka kya hoga😆........he needs my time 😳.......samjha karo.😳😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

thankssssssss alots my dear frnds for ur sweet n lovely response. 😳
recap: first wedding anniversary of arjun-bhoomi.

arjun (on phone): hello keshav, haan sab ho gaya na.....ok we will reach there in 1 hr. 😛

arjun calls all the member of goenka family;

a:aaj main aap sabko kahin le jaana chahta hoon,,,,its a big surprise. 😉

baisa: kaisa surprise arjun? 😕 😕

a:baiasa wo surprise hi kya jo time se pehle bata diya jaaye. 😉 😉

bai: ye bhi theek hai,achha hum sab chalne ko tyaar hain. 😊

a:(towards maansen n yuv):aur aap?????? 😉

maansen:dekho arjun tumhaare inn stupid surprises ke liye mere pas waqt nahin hai......mujhe office mein bahut kaam hai.

yuv;mujhe bhi ek meeting mein jaana hai.

a:yakeen maaniye kakasaheb ye surprise aap dono ki meeting se jyaada intresting hai. 😉 😉

bade dadaji: maansen ye kya tareeka hai, jab poora pariwaar jaa raha hai ,to tum naa kaise keh sakte ho... 😡

maansen n yuv making faces but atlast they agreed 4 going.........

all of them reach at the destination.........

sidharth: bete arjun ye hum tumhaare office ke paas kyon aa gaye? 😕 😕

a:bus papa ,aap mere sath aayie.

then all of dem see a big building situated just next to arjun's office.

bhoomi;arjun ye building kab bani. 😕 😕

a:bhanwariji building ko dekhne ke sath jara uper padho kya likha hai. 😉

den all of dem look upside n shocked.......coz dat is.

bhoomika textiles

b;arjun ye sab kyaaaaaaaa??????? 😕 😕 .....matlab ye kab ????????? 😕 😕 kaise??????????? 😕 😕 😕 aur...... 😕 😕

a:bas-bas ab ye sawaal -jawab band karo aur dekho to jara aaj bhoomika textile ke inogration per chief guest bankar kaun aaya hai 😛 ..........den she see mrs. roy there. 😊

b:(becomes very happy):mem aap 😃 ....aap kab aayeein ...

m.r: bhumika, mr. arjun ne nujhe iss baare mein pehle hi bata diya tha........tum jaise talent ko khone ka thora dukh to hua tha mujhe ,lekin usse bhi jyaada khushi hai tumhaare aage badhne ki. 😃 ......lekin haan mujhe jab bhi tumhaare designs ki jaroorat hogi.......i will call u. 😛

b:kyon nahin mem ,aap ne hi to mujhe meri manzil ka rasta dikhaya tha.......main hamesha aapke liye yahaan hoon. 😃

kushaal:jeeja maine to pehle hi kaha tha kii kuch na kuch garbar hai.......

reporter: mr. maansen aapko kaisa lag raha hai aaj...

m:(obviously he should tell a lie 😉 )bahut achha lag raha hai, hamaare ghar ki bahu ki kaamyaabhi se achha hamaare liye kya ho sakta hai.

yuv;dad main jaa raha hoon.

m;nahin yuv.......press waalon ke saamne apni image khraab mat karo.

a: ladies n jentlemen may i have ur attention plz.....now its the time to inograte our new compani "bhoomika textiles" 😛 .........aur inogration karne aa rahin haein......

manasvi:jaao bhoomi ,inogration to tumhein hi karna hai.

a:ladies n gentlemen plz give a big hand for mrs. manasvi goenka. 😃

m: shocked ..........arjun main??????????????????? 😕

a:aayie na bhabhi.plz. 😛 😃

b:haan bhabhi iski sahi haqdaar aap hi hain ,jaayie na. 😊

den manasvi cut the ribbon n all of dem becomes so happy, 😃 😃 except maansen n family. 😆 😆 😆

they return at home.a-b in their room.

bhoomi:arjun tumne ye sab kab kiya, aur kuch bataya bhi nahin. 😕

a;bhanwari tumhein yaad hai na, maine kakasaheb se waqt maanga tha ,jab unhone tumhein goenka group join karne ko kaha tha.......bas uska yahi ek ilaaz tha ki tumhari apni ek compani ho , 😛
ab kakasaheb tumhein goenka group join karne ke liye majboor nahin kar sakte .......kyonkii ab tum kisi baahar waale ki nahin balki apni hi companai mein kaam kar rahi ho. 😊 ......aur fir ye ek chota sa tohfa hai meri bhanwari ke liye hamaari wedding anniversary per. 😳 😳

achaa main abhi aata hoon..........den arjun go from dere.....when he return he saw dat bhoomi write something.......he stand behind her n take her diary......

b:arjun........arjun plz mujhe wo do mujhe......plz do naa.......

a:arey aise kaise de doon, 😉 jara dekhoon to sahi ,meri bhanwari ne kya likha hai ismein. 😉

b:arjun plz de do na,dekho zid mat karo plz......arjun plz........achha theek hai ,laao mujhe do, main padh ke sunaati hoon. 😳 lekin tum apni aankhein band kar lo. 😳

a;ok 😛

hamaare dil kii gehraayion mein ho tum; 😛

hamaari pooja ,hamaari prathnaaon mein ho tum; 😛


subah ke narm ehsaas aur shaam ke haseen saaye mein ho tum; 😛


saager ki gehraayion aur saanjh ke kshitij mein ho tum; 😛


taaron ki jhilmil aur baarish ki rimjhim mein ho tum; 😛

foolon ki khushboo aur chaand ki chaandani mein ho tum; 😛

aur jyaada kya kahein........

iss dil ki her dhadkan mein ho tum......... 😛

haan "ARJUN" iss dil kii her dhadkan mein ho tum......... tum aur sirf tum 😳 😛 😳




(bas-bas bahut bore kar diya maine aap sabko, i think next time ,i should stop writing poems here otherwise all of u gonna bored wid my ff..... 😆 😆 😳 plz don't kill me if u don't like it 😳 ..)

a: bhanwari tum 😛 .......ye sab.....kaise matlab ....tum likh sakti ho??????? maine to kabi socha bi nahin tha. 😛

b:maine bhi kahaan socha tha arjun, 😳 ye sab to tumhaare pyaar ka jaadu hai 😳 ......verna tumhaari bhanwari ko to tum jaante ho na. 😳 😳

a:o bhanwari !!!!!!!!!!!!den he hugs her. 😳 😳


precap: maansen, yuv n kushaal making evil plannings, arjun give a another surprise to everyone.
Edited by poonam kg - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: poonam kg

o shiva!!!!!.......u read my ff in ur very busy shedule ......how sweet u r.😳😳......dis is a pleasent surprise 4 me........😃.........love u hunny......🤗

🤗lub u too re 🤗

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Posted: 19 years ago
aww poo such a cute part nd ur poem roks re aur haan dun stop writing poems i luv ur poems dey r really sweet 😊 lub u 🤗

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