My collections of One-shots upd.pg.94 - Page 61

By godd sumi u r d best.......🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣v i was laughing contuinuosly when i was reading the last part.....lolz

I slowly started to unbutton my sherwani...but I guess I was too late...because I felt a tigress...who I think was my wife few minutes ago...jumping on me...

 

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This part is rated R...we need our privacy...shoo away!

 

"Nai..."🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣hahaha......well that was a good one yipeee.......after a quite long tyme u hav updates yaar.that too shaddi n sy=uhagraat hhehe the convo btw yuna was hillarious n cute..bichaara hamara daffoor kuch samaj hi nahi paaya...lolz..........hey but wat hapehned to unforgive circumstances n dil ka rshta yaar no update...well waiting for thiese n that updatesssss

Sumiiiiii.....after a long time finally you have updated a YuNa shot.....lolz.....this was fabulous.....the first part where both think that they are mad at each other was funny....lolz...and it was cute as well....then the conversation they have....to clear the misunderstandings was sho sho sho cute...and amazingly written....both understand each other so well and love each other so much...but being the hot-headed people they are...they end up fighting....lolz..and the last part🤣🤣......it was hilariously crazy......she was the one who initiated the whole thing....lolz....and Yuvi was stupefied...and she actually told him to unbutton his sherwani....otherwise she would do it herself...🤣...and then she pounced on him like a tigress....lmao....you are crazy girl.....you are an awesome writer and this is really great !!!! Keep on writing...lolz....and update soon....love you*hugs*

hey sumi when r u gng to update one shots on my request,lz do so soon.also one very romantic first night of naina-yuvi one shot,but plz make it a big one.

it was so cute yuvi totally clueless hehe i htot he was the experienced one. i liked dat yuvi forgave naina for suspecting him i always thot there relationship was more one sided u noe wid naina all forgiveness bt this was good loved d one shot

though y should we go away we jalo sab tantrum of naina lol

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

hey sumi when r u gng to update one shots on my request,lz do so soon.also one very romantic first night of naina-yuvi one shot,but plz make it a big one.

lol this was what i also demanded a one night shot lol.......adn as far as romatic go ..i think sumi only does comedy with YuNa..........didnt u read how she made the romantic/ passionate night turn into a rape scene........ 😆 😆 😆 poor yuvi.........kuch samjh hi nahi paya..........

naina asked him blatantly............."hav u done this before"

@ sumi........now over to you....... 😉 first of all a big hug for completing my one shot.... 🤗 i knw ur not feeling exactly on top of the world these days.............but i really appreciate u writiing such an awesome OS.........

lol..........bechara yuvi........just coz ur on team naina doesnt mean u have to show our chief as a dufford........not on his wedding night atleast 😆 😆 😆

but i loved all parts.......i was surprised macky wacky wasnt ther.......but i guess he was planning his 5th kid.........afterall he has no other work!!! 😉

lurve you for this.........and one down one to go........remember my yuvi talli os

keep up the great work........ur talented and u knw it!!! 😉

lmaoooo great OS

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After a loooooong time i got to read a masterpiece created from bad mood n boredom 😆😆 

cute one-shot.. i loved the way they sorted things out so easily..then naina had to sort the next part as yuvi behaved like a total dafford lmao ..

aaaagey kahani sab black out karte hai 🤣🤣 wah sumi tumi dis was funnny but ma chief is not like tht woh ladki galt hai not ma chief!!!! tell ur nanzie 2 control aaj kal ki kudiyaaaan;)