FF: Hamari Chahat-- part 9 page 10.. 10th dec 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 4

prem and heer in their car
prem driving just when his phone rang.
it was preet.. 😃
prem picked up the call and put the phone on loudspeaker modee

preet: hi bhayya meeting overr?

prem:yup...yours over too ?tumharee kaisee gayee

preet:as usual..meree beti bilkul mujh par gayi hai.. app ko pata hai gunn ko bilkul parhai ka shoq nahi hai but stii she got a decent B so i am pretty gladd.

prem:you should be.. itna improvement jo haii..give her my love
heer:and mine too :)

preet.: haha i surely will..oh jis ka baat ke liye phone kya tha woh to kehna hi bhool giyaa congratulationss

prem:kis liye??

preet: kis liye..PB i knoww chahat did excellent.. is she around..usse phone do

prem:(the smile preet had brought to prem's face through is absolute love and affection vivid in alll his conversations now faded away as the thought of chahat s lie came into his mind)
after a slight pausee: umm no she is nt around

preet: how come?? chalo koi baat nahi i ll be coming to ur place in like half an hour actually one hour or so then will go to work from there..

prem:aaj tera off hai.. tu hamesha bhool jata hai!

preet:thank you PB...i love you ...yaar mein apni off khud kaise bhool gaya..? such good news PB i love you alott

both heer and preet were laughing at the fact that preet s daughter gunn was 12 years old and he was still a child..but a mature child very hardworking..
how he was the same silly preet but also how he knew his duties very well.

prem:mujhe pata hai u love me..acha ab ghar aa gaya bye

preet:bye pb..see you in a while

prem back to the anger again..back to the fury..hurt more than ever..barging inside his housee almost screaming chahat..chahat..!hon...come downstaies right now!

even though prem was angry his scoldings even had words like honey sweety darling baby because at the end of the day he could not be sooo mean to his bacha.even though he was abt to scold her and was all willing he also knew how difficult the task was for him each time. 😛


Edited by rrk401 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
very nice update !
wating for next update !
update soon !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome updates 👏  pls continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A biggggggggg thankyouuuu to all the people who have given such encouraging repliessss =)
Even if its a few of u i shall continue to write if you guys likee it even the slightestt bit
thanks again guyss

Edited by rrk401 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good ff plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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