Three (Iqbal Khan) FF - Pa 2 - Pg 3 11/04/09

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Friends... to be honest this is my first fan fiction. I've read many fan fiction based on Iqbal Khan. I am a huge fan of his and huge fan of these show Kumkum - Karam Apnaa Apnaa - Kaisa Ye Pyaar Hai - Maayka so I mixed up few characters from the show to make my story. I hope you enjoy reading much as I enjoy writing it. Please help me by supporting with you comments and encouragement.

Thank you
Love
Miketa

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Part 2 - Page 3

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Three – Love Lies Betrayal it's about a guy name Shiv Wadhwa who was three and half years old when his mother passed away. His father took care of him and his sibling Sumit after his brother's wedding his wife token care of him. Shiv bonded well with Kumkum and slowly depended on her the most even after Dhruv and the twin's birth. Several years pass by for them. Shiv grew into fine young lad in American and now returning back to India, but when he reached home – his entire world shattered in front of his eyes.

Will Shiv reestablish his world again?
Three – Love Lies Betrayal is about a girl name Mahi. She comes into the life of Wadhwa family through Dhruv.
Was Mahi coming into Wadhwa family positive or not?
Three – Love Lies Betrayal its heartwarming story of a small town girl name Gauri Dixit who goes through a lot of hardships and finally comes out with triumphant colors.
What's store in Gauri's life?
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Characters

Shiv's Family
Mahen Wadhwa (Salil Ankola): He raised both of his sons on his own after his elder son Sumit got married to Kumkum and his worries for Shiv vanished.
Sumit Wadhwa (Husain Kuwajerwala): loving and caring husband to Kumkum. He is very devoted and hard working. He knows that nothing can come between him and Kumkum or their relationship long as he live. Sumit loves his family and is willing to sacrifice his happiness and his life for the sake of his loved ones. He is a perfect son, a perfect husband and a perfect father of three adorable kids.
Kumkum Wadhwa (Juhi Parmar): Married into rich family. Kumkum is the ideal woman: prefect wife, bahu, mother, bhabhi and sister.
Dhruv Wadhwa (Vivan Bhatena): Young, Charismatic, and Dynamic, Photographer who comes from a rich background. He falls in love with simple girl name Mahi, whom he initially thinks as modern girl, but after their marriage he comes to know that his wife has a past hidden from him; but still his love isn't affected by her past and loves her as well respects her too.
Mahi Dhruv Wadhwa (Neha Bamb): Dhruv's wife who has a dark past which she hasn't told anyone not even her own husband who she vowed not to keep any secret from the rituals of marriage.
Aashka Wadhwa (Kanchi Kaul): She is Sharman's twin. Aashka is very docile and a replica of her mother, Kumkum. She loves Sumit more than anything.
Sharman Wadhwa (Gagan Malik): Wadhwa Sharman Wadhwa as he proudly calls himself. He is Sumit and Kumkum's son. He is Aashka's twin brother. He is a fun loving boy and is loved by entire family mostly his Chachu.
Shiv Wadhwa (Iqbal Khan): Shiv is Mahen's youngest son. He is very charismatic. He loves going around with women and enjoys his life. He has a very good business sense and his father has high hopes from him because his elder son (and Shiv's elder bro) settled in life. He does everything with a lot of energy and passion. He has a very volatile relationship with his lady love, (revealed later on). Due to his kundali issue (only his father knows about not even Kumkum his bhabhi) he had to let go off his love and marry a simple name Gauri. Shiv's relationship with Dhruv gotten sour after he married Mahi and his relationship with the twins' rocks (loves to spoil both of them the most) also get heck from his bhabhi as well.
Other Characters
Gauri Dixit (Pallavi Subhash): Gauri hails from a small hamlet of West Bengal, a sweet and simple girl who always wants to see her family happy. She puts the happiness of others before herself. All she desires for herself is a loving husband. On the threshold of marriage, she is on the verge of turning her dream into reality... But what does fate have in store for her? Even her cousin Kumkum can change her fate?
Sia Garewal (Snigdha Srivastav): Dhruv's friend but Sharman understands her much better then anyone else. Sia shares emotional relationship with Sumit and Kumkum after her father's death.
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Big Thank you to Peachgirl.... 😛
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nice
PM me when u update
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Great Job
Is this a Shiv-Gauri FF or Shiv-Mahi FF?
Continue Sooon
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Shiv finally completed his education in American. Only thing Excites Shiv the most returning home after many years and lay down in his Bhabhi's lap. (From Shiv's condition – it's easy to understand his sickness for home). Shiv quickly books himself ticket home. Also does his shopping for his family members. Shiv's friends stare at him…

Shiv: What?
Yug: Dude you aren't the only one returning home after many years?
Shiv: Your point
Yug: Relax… look at our friends (Shiv takes a glance) they think you have gone nuts in the name of home.
Shiv smacked Yug on his head.
Yug: What was that for?
Yug continued rubbing his head.
Shiv: Being smart and yes I am home sick plus I want to meet someone special.
Shiv's friends: Oh
Yug: Girlfriend?
Shiv only smiled and leaves from the room.
Yug: Saala...
Max: Yug, what does Saala means?
Yug: Saala means how sexy you are and clever…
Max: Thanks
Rest of the gang also leaves from Shiv and Yug's room after Yug goes looking for Shiv and finds him sitting alone in the garden starring at the bright blue sky.
Yug: There are you man? (Shiv turns around) Saala I was looking for you everywhere and you are sitting here alone? (Shiv just smiles) Ab bola {Say something}…
Shiv: Kya?
Yug: About your family and the lucky girl who stole my friend's heart?
Shiv: Alright! In my family there are many people who I love the most and I can not imagine my life without them.
Yug: Awesome and now start introducing them slowly by who you miss the most…
Shiv: That's easy!
Yug: Start
Shiv: I miss the most is…. (Yug impatient) my Bhabhi
Yug's jaw drops "your bhabhi" Shiv looked at him "I thought it would be the person you love the most".
Shiv: Yep, my Bhabhi! Kumkum Bhabhi is the person I depend on the most after my mother's death. Kumkum Bhabhi knows my dislikes and likes. In fact every-little desires of mine as well.
Yug: Cute!
Shiv: I wonder what Bhabhi must be doing at this moment.
During the evening, Kumkum orders every single servant in the house...
Kumkum: Tony, make sure you check every-little details of today's function before guest arrival.
Tony: Ma'am, don't worry Tony is here.
Tony leaves…
Kumkum: Because you are here that's why I worry. If my Shiv was here then how depends on these servants. My Shiv can handle everything without begin told.
Yug: Next on the list!
Shiv: Mera Sharman
Yug: Sharman?
Shiv: Sharman…Sharman is every ones favorite kid along with his twin Aashka. Both of them are incomplete without each other and Bhaiyya always stuck between those two. Sometimes Sharman makes things so difficult for Sumit Bhaiyya to handle.
Yug: What do you mean?
Shiv: Sharman always enjoys calling himself my son because I'm cool happening dude and Bhaiyya gets teased up fast. Even he's master in setting bets between people without them knowing. Right now I wonder what Bhaiyya and the twin are doing.
Sumit, Kumkum, and the twin are watching footage of Dhruv's engagement party. Sharman keeps on fast-forward and Kumkum hits him from behind.
Kumkum: What are doing?
Sharman looks at Kumkum…
Sumit: Sharman kept it!
Aashka had her head on Sumit's shoulder…
Sharman: Ma isn't the movie camera shaking in Krish Uncle's hand (Kumkum nods her head) if the movie camera was given to me then it would have rocked.
Sumit: Sure and when I gave you the movie camera you disappeared.
Aashka: Papa, he didn't disappear, but he was fixing his setting with his maya {girls}.
Sharman: Yeh Aashka why don't you start the arrangement for the wedding instead of being Pa ki chamchi.
Both twin start slapping each other back and forth…
Sumit: Sharman
Kumkum slaps Sharman on his shoulders…
Kumkum: What are you doing? Always fighting like two-year olds.
Sharman: Ma, I don't – she does (points at Aashka)
Dhruv comes into his parent's room with bottle of oil in his hand. Dhruv sat beside Sharman…
Sumit: Can't sleep again?
Sharman: Pa, how can bro sleep without bring bhabhi home?
Dhruv slap Sharman on his shoulders.
Dhruv: Ma, can you put oil in my hair?
Kumkum nods her head. Kumkum makes Sharman move toward Sumit.
Sharman: Not fair
Dhruv: chal
Sharman: Pa this not fair
Aashka: Come' on its Bhaiyya's wedding.
Sharman: Pa, did you see Aashka change sides.
Sharman leans behind Sumit and Sumit placed his hands on each shoulders of Sharman.
Sharman: Bro if you have Ma then I have Pa.
Kumkum nods her head…
Sumit: but when Ma is Pa is also there (Sumit snuggles Kumkum)
Dhruv, Sharman, and Aashka: We know that
Sharman gets up from his spot…
Sharman: but Pa this is not right. Everyone left me alone.
Sumit: Now what will Wadhwa Sharman Wadhwa will do?
Sharman: Because its marriage fevers going around otherwise if Chachu was here then he would show you.
Sumit also get up from his spot…
Sumit: What would you guys show me?
Sharman starts running and Sumit behind him…
Yug: Looks like tera Sharman follows your path.
Shiv: True!
Yug: Who's next?
Shiv: Dhruv and Papa and what are they doing at the moment.
Dhruv continues laughing his head off…
Sharman runs into his Dadu's room and hides behind his Dadu.
Sumit: Papa, did Sharman come into your room?
Mahen: Nope
Sumit: Papa, don't lie
Mahen: Sumit, I'm your father and why would I lie?
Sumit: Fine
Sumit leaves
Sharman: Thank you
Mahen: Why do you like getting yourself in trouble?
Sharman: That's Wadhwa Sharman Wadhwa
Shiv smiled
Yug: Now tell me about the lucky gal
Shiv: Later

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Please let me know how did you like first part...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice ff dear
plz add me into ur pm list
and pm me too when ever u update the next part
love sana
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wow nice part 1 plz continue soonn love sana
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hey ..just caught up wid ur FF..seems nice..i'm readin it only for Iqbal n Neha..
So Dhruv is gonna get married to Mahi?..but i think Shiv loves her!..aww..so sad..
he will get married to Gauri though he dusnt like it i think..
Shiv and Kumkum's bond is sweet...n i like Aasha..Kanchi is one of mah fav's..i love the bond d whole family shares..its really nice..
Yug so wants to know about Shiv's gf!..lol..but he wont tell so easily na..
update soon
-aish

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