SS:Victory of love,ch:6pg20 updated - Page 5

Originally posted by: lavuza99

gr8..........

agey ka part .............

continue it.

.........

mje nahi laga tha k tum itne achi writer hio........

yeh tumhara 2 he jo ne padha..........................

is se pehle tumhara khali ek padha tha........

u , maha,n premeerxoxo write so nice....

tum teeno milk kyun nahi kch likhte..

i think k woh bst ho ga..........................

Originally posted by: riks1

very good part..

plzz update...i want to know wat happens next.......

update fast!

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggggggg

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Nice and im waiting for heer's reaction.
But I want her to be a woman and stand up for her self not like It's okk, everything happens for the best.
I wish she tells that if this is ur decision and listen to my decision and tell her decision, coz that's what a normal person will do if that one is in her state.
I like if she acts real than being so mahan.
And a great update

Originally posted by: maha_k

hey just read ur ff dear really really nice

premmmmmmm he is so stupid but i want heer to stand up for her right i dont like mahaan heer at all

continuee soon and pm me plzz😊

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi neha

Hi sia

Nice update. You described prem's feelings perfectly.

Thank you 😳😳

I never expected this to happen, I know that prem could never abandon his child even then I had tiny-miny hope that he will select his love after what he had gone through. I don't question his decision, I know his decision is right. as a father he has responsibilities for his daughter, from which he cant escape. But plz I don't want heer to accept this. let her fight for her right. let the truth come out that sneha is not his daughter.

I will not disappoint you thats a promise 😉😉

I want her to stand with what she said and leave. And then prem should not rest until he knows the full truth about ash and sneha, or let heer find out the truth.

Soon the truth willl come out

Waiting for next part. This was very interesting part.

Thank you

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggg asap.

Originally posted by: Premeerxoxo

Awwwsomeeeeeeeee FF Yaar mujhe PM karna Pleaseeeeeeee :D

Loved it :D

I have updated My FF:kashmokash as well,here is the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1117461

Here is the Third chapter

CHAPTER 3

Following prem's shock revelation, the room is silent each person keeping there thoughts to themselves nobody wants to be the first person to speak or to demand an explanation.

Prem searches the faces of his family members for any reaction finally his gaze rest upon Heer's face, He tries to find an answer in the eyes that he fell in love with for the first time in Shiv Mandir.She was giving nothing away her eyes were glazed but just for a second he caught a glimpse of the pain he had saw in shiv mandir for the first time.His heart was beating really fast and his mind racing. But before he could say anything else His dad speaks,

"Yeh sab kiya hai prem,tuni yeh faisla karini se pehli aik baar bhii heer aur chahat ki Baari mai nahii socha", he said vehemently

"Socha bauji ,bohut socha ,aur sochni ki baad he yeh faisla kiya hai ,sneha mere zimmedarri hai aur mai apni zimmedaari se moo nahii phir sakta,ghalti he sahee likin hai tu sneha mere he betee", he says fighting back the tears

Heer's face is still expression less,she has her fists clenched at her sides.After listening to this brief explanation she decides that she doesn't want to hear any more. Without thinking her feet move of their own accord and she runs to her room. She closes the door and leans against it. She sighs at suddenly she cant hold the flood of tears back and starts to cry. She wants to scream and shout but cant.A millon thoughts are running through her head she thinks WHY did he do it? What about there daughter there chahat ,what about there marriage life,she thinks that what person gets a second chance at life and he has thrown it away. Then she thinks WHAT ABOUT ME?!!!!!!!!!!!!! She is upset but then she realizes that she is angry more angry than she has been in her whole life, She rushes to the wardrobe and reaches up to the suitcase and pulls it down,a few other things fall but she doesn't care she knocks them aside. She then starts to throw in her cloths in the Suitcase.

Prem walks in the room,he is alarmed by what he sees. He is getting dj vu. 6 years ago she left him and now the history is repeating she is leaving him again.

"Heer mere baat suno,''.heer''.Heer''.heer listen to me, heer please listen to me", he pleads but she doesnt reply to him.

He keeps calling her but she ignores him again and again its like he isn't there. She closes her suitcase and strides towards the door, as she passed him He grabs her arm and forcibly turn her towards him. Prem pulls her so close that the tip of their noses were touching.. he hasa tight grip on her arm and she cant break free immediately. She is drawn to look into his eyes by the power of his gaze.

"Mujhe samajni ki koshish karo heer, tum mujhe aise chod kar nahii jasakti", he says through gritted teeth.He makes his anger plain.

Heer is forced to put her hand agains his chest and she can feel the beating of his heart,she feels the force with which he loves her, she can feel her own emotions

Stirring nut then she remembers his decision .

"Mujhe jo samjna tha samaj gaye prem'..is se ziyada na mai kuch samaj pawongi nahe bardasht kar pawongee", she says angrily looking into his eyes

She struggles to break free from his grasp,but she manages to pull away from him

She immediately runs out of the room,knowing that if she stays any longer he wont let her leave and keep filling her with his excuses.

Heer takes two steps at a time in her hurry to leave the house. She feels like she cant breath and she must get out now. Behind her she hears prem's foot step at the top of the stairs ,she starts to run faster almost Crossing the threshold but then suddenly her father-in-law,Lalit Juneja calls to her in a loud forbidding tone,

"Heer. ( she freezes and slowly turns to face the room. All the family members were still gathered there.) Heer kaha jaa rahee hai tu ..ha'.hum sab ko chod kar ..apni bauji ko chod kar, prem ki ghalti ki sazaa tu hum sab ko kyon de rahee hai beta

Tujhe yaad hai tu jab che saal baad is ghar mai aye thee tu ,tune mujh se waada kiya tha kit um ab humi chod kar nahii jayegee, aur aj tum apna waada thod kar jaa rahee hoo..", he says tearfully

Prem is standing at top of the stairs almost holding his breath afraid to do anything or say anything he changes everything to the worse.

" yaad hai bauji apna har kiya huwa vaada yaad hai mujhe , likin appka beta apna kiya huwa vaada bhool gaya", tears were streaming down her face as she spoke.

" Tu tu hami kyon sazaa de rahee hai uski ghalti ki liye, agar tu is baar chalee gaye tu tera yeh bauji zinda nahii rahega, apna parivaar ko U bikarti huwi nahii dek sakta ab is umar mai , main tere age apni haath jorta hoon ,is ghar ko chod kar mat jaa", He says pleading in front of her folding his hands

She puts down the suitcase and takes hold of her father's hands. She looks him in the eyes and says,

"Bauji 'is tarah apni haath jodh kar mujhe sharminda mat kijiye,theek hai app nahii chahti ki mai is ghar ko chod kar jawoo tu mai nahii jawongi,yahee rahongi ,appki betee appki paas he rahegee" Lalit smiles weakly through his tears .

In the background Gayetri also smiles but it is a fake smile. A moment ago she thought that all her wishes would come true but now her plan was close to failing completely

Because heer wasn't leaving.

Prem sighs a breath of relief. Atleaste she didn't left the house and he still had a chance to convince her.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Waiting for your replies