SS:Victory of love,ch:6pg20 updated

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Posted: 15 years ago
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First af all i am not a good writer at all 😆😆so kindly bear with me 😆😆

VICTORY OF LOVE

A girl was lying on the bed crying non-stop without making any sound,her eyes were red after
knowing the truth,the bitter truth of her life ,After six years she got her husband her life back
and now it again seemed to her that she will loose HIm again ,Again they will be separated
There daughter Have to suffer There chahat has to suffer .the girl Was Heer Juneja.wife of
Prem juneja.



The endless tears were rolling down her cheeks,she was sobbing and he can hear her sobbing
the tears was due ti him in his eyes and he cant wipe it,he cant console her because he knew its all his fault all his fault,they are suffering because of his one mistake,which he had done 6 years ago.
that one night separated him from his love and again the dark shadow of that bight was falling on them.there is no way out ,what should he do?he was confuse......


When they both were weeping lying on bed trying hard to sleep with there back towards each other
someone knocked on the door.Prem wiped his tears and got up to open the door,she notoced that
he got up to open the door she heard him talking to someone ,she recognized the voice.it was her
Mother-in-law's voice Gayetri juneja,she saw that prem left the room with his mother

Gayetri broght prem out of his room to the Drawing room and asked him

Prem tune kiya faisla kiya hai ?,she asked him

Faisla...kaisa faisla maa?, he asked her confusingly

Dekho beta,mai samaj sakti hoon ki tujh pi kiya beet rahe hai..likin humi
kuch tu karna hoga naa.....Akhir sneha bhii tu is ghar ki betee hai ,tumhara khoon hai
usse bhii tu uski pita ka pyaar chahiye ,uska parivaar chahiye...."she said like she was very concerned about him""

Maa.mai kuch samjha nahii...''again trying to avoid his mother he turned his face""

Moo phir lene se sachchai tu nahii badalti na beta ..Sneha tere zimmedari hai
tera Ansh hai ....tujhe ussi is ghar mai lekar anna he hoga ""she said to her stubbornly""

Maa ..mujhe kuch samaj nahii araha ,,mai kiya karoon?(tears rolling down his cheek''

Faisla tujhe karna hai prem.......ab sab kuch tere haath mai hai.....tu kiya karna chahta hai
us bachchee ko apna naam dekar uska haq dena chahta hai ya phie ussi dunya waalo
ki taanni sunni ki liye chor dena chahta hai ..""saying this she patted on his shoulder and left from there""


Prem also turned around to go to his room and saw that Heer was standing infront of him
Tears of pearl were rolling down her cheek..He was confused what to do?He cant loose her again at the same time he didnt want to hurt sneha.......

Heer had listened to prem and gayetri's convo she was waiting for his FINAL decisssion
What he want and what he will do?Will he choose his illegal child or his Love and chahat?
They both stare at each other hopelessly ,they both can see the pain in each others eyes..
Kiya hopayegee inki pyaar ki jeet ya phir judaa kardegee inhi yeh zamana?




INDEX
Ch:1:- pg 1
Ch:2 :- pg 3
Ch:3:- pg 8
Ch:-4:- pg 12
Ch: 5:- pg 16
Ch:6:- pg 20





I know it was very bad i typed in a hurry so sorry for all mistakes i did 😃
This willbe An SS i think so not sure cause i have to continue my FF as well
So please leave your comments and tell me should i continue or not?



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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeee too good continue soon asap.
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heyy neha u should continue itsss veyy veryy nice
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u wrote it very well
plzz continue
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you actually wrote it very well... and should continue it too...
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OMGG...u HAVE to continue...u mustt
That was sooooooooooo dramatic...i need to know what happens next....so pleaseeeeeeeeee updateeE??
Pretty please?
....with a cherry on top?
No?
.....with whipped cream AND a cherry on top?? =D
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Originally posted by: sereaishitedare

OMGG...u HAVE to continue...u mustt

That was sooooooooooo dramatic...i need to know what happens next....so pleaseeeeeeeeee updateeE??
Pretty please?
....with a cherry on top?
No?
.....with whipped cream AND a cherry on top?? =D



hahahaaa

I will try dear 😆😆
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awesome
please continue asap
and please pm me when u update
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nice one!!
plzz continue
please PM me when u update
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Hi neha

madam first and foremost never think you are not a good writer.😡 You are, remember that always😛.

Neha it was soooooooo good. You know I am very excited to know how will you unfold this story. No one of us wants premeer to be separated. You described their feelings so well👍🏼 Plz kill gayatri, why she creates for prem.

Do continue it. waiting to know what decision will prem take?

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