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Posted: 14 years ago
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res ke aage kuch nahin bolna tujhe 😛😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm....nice part. Par u knw na....no Rajeev no maza!!! But I wud not deny that I liked the way Kashish n Piyush met....bechare ki coffee gira di....n he was more upset abt that...hehe. That was interesting. Par Manu....jaldi se Raj ki entry kara do...uske bina kuch bhi nahi bhata...hehe.

Try to continue soon dear.




Thanks Sumaiya... I knw I knw.. Rajeev ke bina kuch mazaa nahin hai...
actually I was thinking ki uski entry thoda late karun.. par aab mujhe lagta hai ki meri pitayi ho jayegi tum sab se... aur main chote chote ke haaton se pitna nahin chahti hun ..
so He'll be there in the next 2 parts... 😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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And Rajeev will be in .. on special requests...
Mujhe thodi story change karni padegi.. but.. as long as u guys are happy... it's worth 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HUMEIN AISI MOHABBAT HAI TUMSE


Agle din subha kashish uthi hai aur tayar hone lagti hai... usse Angad aur Kripa ki 1st anniversary ke liye ekgift chahiye hota hai... apne favourite Jagjit Singh ki Ghazals ke saath apne din ki shuruat karne waali kashish aaj kuch khoyi khoyi si thi... woh Jagjit singh ki yeh Ghazal sunte sunte
fir se apni raat waali yaadon main kho jaati hai..
Sunte hain ki mil jaati hai.. haar cheez dua se ....
ek roz tumhein maang kar dekhnege khuda se....

Apni sharton par jeene waali kashish aaj mehsoos karti hai ki kaash jo woh khuda se maange usse woh mil jaaye.. usse uska piyush waapis mil jaaye.. aisa nahin hai ki Kashish sirf sochti hi rehti hai.. usne apni poori koshish kar li hoti hai yeh pata lagane main ki piyush aakhir gayab hua to kahan hua.. par usse koi bhi safalta nahin mili hoti hai...
Inn sab main khoyi hui kashish ko ekdum se Veena ki aawaz sunayi deti hai ko usse bulane upar aagayi hoti hai...
Veena: kashish... beta aaj Kripa aur angad ki nniversary hai... ..
Kashish: haan mumma mujhe unke liye gift lene jaana hai... bas neeche hi aarahi thi...
Veena: Jaanti hun Kashish, subha subha tu kis ki soch main khoyi hui hai... par beta, humlog chah kar bhi kuch nahin kar sakte hain, piyush gaya to gaya kahan.. kissi ko nahin pata.. aakhir bina bataye..woh aise kaise ja sakta hai..
Aur sach baat kahun Kashish, mujhse yeh bilkul bardaash nahin hota hai ki woh tujhe teri engagement ke din hi chod kar gaya.. pata nahin aakhir kyn mujhe lag raha hai ki woh kuch galat kar raha tha..kya.. yeh nahin bol sakti..
Kashish: Mumma.. hum iss baare main baat nahin karenge..
Veena: janti hun,haar baar ki tahar bhi tera yahi javab hoga.. par beta..mujhe aab lagta hai ki woh tere layak nahin tha.. tujhe apni zindagi main aage bhadhna chahiye.. baaki tu apni marzi ki maalik hai.. par haan..pichli baar maine teri haar zid main tera saath diya tha.. iss baar main aisa kkuch bhi hone nahin dungi..
Kashish: jaanti hun mumma ki aap ne meri har zid poori ki hai.. par thoda sabr kijiye..jab tak mujhe yeh nahin pata lag jata ki piyush hai kahan..main apni zindagi ka koi bhi faisla nahin lene waali hun...
Veena: Theek hai kashish.. jaisa tu chahe.. par sirf 1 saal.. uske baad main jo kahungi..to wahi karegi..
Kashish: sochte hue..theek hai maa... aab chalein??? mujhe bhookh lagi hai aur main jaldi se shopping karne ke baad mujhe AK ke ghar bhi jaana hai... warna.... aaj aapki beti ki pitayi ho jayegi
Veena: haan, bacha.. chal..
Kashish breakfast karke shopping ke liye nikalti hai... woh FM on karti hai.. jahan par yeh gaana aaraha hota hai.....

Taaron ko mohabbat ambar se
Phoolon ko mohabbat shabnam se
Jaise dil ko mohabbat dilbar se

Humein aise mohabbat hai tum se
Ab tum bhi kaho na kuch hum se

Sawan ko mohabbal badal se
Aankhon ko mohabbat kajal se
Peron ko mohabbat payal se
Humein aise mohabbat hai tum se

Koi nahi tha jiske liye hum
Jaan apni dete, duniya lutaate
Koi nahi tha nazron main apni
Jisko sanam, apna banate

Sapnon ko mohabbat aankhon se
Aankhon ko mohabbat raaton se
Raaton ko mohabbat yaadon se
Humein aise mohabbat hai tum se

Sab kuch tha lekin saajan nahi tha
Baadal hi dekhe saavan nahi tha
Hum se shikayat karta tha yeh dil
Surat mili thi darpan nahi tha

Haathon ko mohabbat kangan se
Nathni ko mohabbat dulhan se
Sanson ko mohabbat dhadkan se
Hai aisi mohabbat saajan se

Sawan ko mohabbal badal se
Aankhon ko mohabbat kajal se
Peron ko mohabbat payal se
Humein aise mohabbat hai tum se

Taaron ko mohabbat ambar se
Phoolon ko mohabbat shabnam se
Jaise dil ko mohabbat dilbar se
Humein aise mohabbat hai tum se .....

Issi gaane ko gungunate hue kashish ek traffic signal par pahunch jati hai...
Apne khayalon main khoyi hui Kashish ko ehsas hota hai bahar  halki halki baarish shuru ho gayi hai aur traffic thoda slow pace par chal raha hota hai ...... jisse dekh kar uske chehre par ek muskaan aajati hai..... usse baarish bahut pasand hoti hai....
Kashish: wow.... this is a prefect weather....tabhi usse saamne ka ek restaurant dikhayi deta hai



jahan subha subha log baith kar masti kar rahe hote hain..
Kashish: yeh sehar hai hi itna matwaala ki log yahan itni masti karte hain... kaash main abhi iss samay yahi hoti.. par mujhe to shopping .... shopping.. WOW.....
fir woh iss restaurant ko dekhti hai and she remembers...
Kashish (thinking)... yeh to wahi restaurant hai.. jis par maana jata hai ki 3rd floor par Ghost rehte hain....
kashish uss raat mainkho jaati hai jab woh aur piyush ghost tour par nikale the...

Kashish aur piyush ek restaurant main baithe hue apni coffee ka wait kar rahe hote hain.. ki piyush ko ek pamphlet dikhayi deta hai...
GHOST WALK..... wowwwwwwwwwwwwww



Piyush: are Kashish, dekho.. ghost tours.. wow..chalte hain mazaa aayega..
Kashish: whattttttt!!!! Ghhhhh...oooooostttttt tours!!! no ways.. main kabhi nahi gayi... aur kabhi jaungi bhi nahin....
Piyush: are Kashish... daro mar... Ghost tumhein dekh kar waise hi darr jayenge.. tum itna kyon darr rahi ho.. woh paas bhi nahin aayenge..

Kashish: Whattttttttttttttttt!!!! Piyush tum hadd karte ho... main kabhi iss tour par nahin jaungi...
Piyush: are kashish, kyn darr rahi ho.. waise hi 2 ghante ki walk hai... 1 mile ka safar hai... aur hum tum....
Kashish: ji nahin... hum tumke saath saath bhoot bhi..

Piyush: are main hun na.. fir.. waise bhi main bahut charming hun...tumhein apne kaaboo main kiya hai to bhooot kya cheez hai.. usse bhi kaaaboo main kar lunga...
Kashish: kya kaha.. mujhe kaboo main kiya hai... jaooo.. main tumse baat nahin karti...

Piyush: are yeh to naaraz ho gayi... dekho Kashish, waise bhi hum dono aaj raat ko ferry ka wait karenge.. woh 11 baje aayegi.. to tab tak..hum ghost walk par chalte hain... mera yakeen karo... kuch nahin hoga..
Kashish: (thoda kamm darne ka pretend karti hai..) hmmm.... okay.. par agar bhoot mil gaya to tumhein... ummmmmmmmmmm....

agar bhoot mila to main jaisa kaungi ... bhoot se waisa hi karana padega....
Piyush : (baap re...) kya se kya ho gaya... haaan haan theek hai... maine tumhari baat maan li...

itne main dono ki coffee aajati hai...
hala ki yeh ghost tour par final jaane ka sun kar kashish ke gale se coffee neeche nahin utar rahi hai.. but she is trying to pose as if this tour is nothing doing to her... jabki reality main.. it has already started giving goosepimples to her...
☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️

yahan piyush ka bhi haal tha.. bol to diya.. par usse khud bhi bhoot se darr lagta tha 😆
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

jaise taise dono apni coffee khatam karte hain.. and after paying the bill.. they start towards getting their tickets for the tour... par jaise dono ke pair uth hi nahin rahe the...
Kashish(thinking): hey bhagwan.. kahan phass gayi..
Piyush(Thinking): hayyo rabba.. kahin main khud hi bhooot na ban jaun..

Kashish: thoda himmat karke... chalein piyush... with a forced smile on her face..
Piyush: uski smile ko dekh kar samajh jata hai ki Kashish darr gayi hai...
ummmm.. kashish.. on a second though.. kyn na hum kahin aur chalein??

Kashish: (thinking) lagta hai ki piyush darr gaya...
... 2 piyush ... thoda bahadur bante hue...are nahin.... GHOST TOURS.. it's exciting..chalo chalte hain... kya pata ... ek do bhooton se bhi mil lein...

Piyush: (thinking) bete laal.. aaj to tu gaya.. yeh to chal ke hi rahegi aab..
2 kashish... wow.. chalo..

dono wahan pahunchte hain..jahan se tour shuru hota hai...after buying the tickets... they listen to their guide for the instructions that he was telling ...
it was 8 o'clock when the tour begins..

Piyush: (in Kashish's ears)Abhi bhi time hai... dekh lo.....
Kashish: understanding what he means.. ji nahin.. hum chal rahe hain...it will be fun... wow.... maine yeh kabhi nahin kiya.... and I cant believe ki main sach main GHOST TOUR par ja rahi hun...

Tour shuru hota hai..and they both enjoy a lot..chalte chalte... Piyush ko shararat soojhti hai..
Kashish ke  kaan main... jaldi se gudgudi karke apna haath hata leta hai...
Kashish Guide ki baatein bahut dhyan se sun rahi hoti hai.. aur piyush ki iss harkat se darr jati hai and she holds Piyush's arm tightly...

Piyush: are kashish... kya hua..
Kashish: wohh... woh... mujhe laga...ki koi tha..
Piyush: aacha..kahan..mujhe to koi nahin dikhayi deta.. hum sab ke alawa.. koi nahin hai kashish.. tum mera haath kass ke pakadlo.. agar darr lag raha hai to..
Kashish: haan .. yeh theek hai...

5 min ke baad..piyush fir se waisa hi karta hai..
Kashish: aur darr jaati hai.. Piiiiiyush.... woh .. mujhe laga ki mere kaan ke paas koi tha..
Piyush: with a smirk... aacha.. mujhe to koi nahin dikh raha hai...
Kashish: (seeing the smile on his face.. understands)... aacha..tum the woh..mujhe dara rahe the... and hits him on his arm playfully....
Piyush for the rest of the tour holds her close and they both enjoyed the tour a lot....


honk honk... peeche horn ki aawaz se Kashish apne khayalon se bahar aati hai... ateet ki yaadon ke taaza ho jaane se uski aankhon main aansoo aajate hain... jinhe woh jaldi se hatati hai .. aur apni shopping ki taraf bhadti hai..

Kashish: phew.. kya lun.. kya lun...
tabhi Kashish ko yaad aata hai kiek baar AK ne usse bola tha ki unhein bhi ek bahut hi sundar sa masks chahiye hall main lagane ke liye..
Kashish.. pats her back that she remembered it at the correct time and searches for a good wall hanging kind of masks..

waise bhi Kashish ko lagta hai ki New orleans ke haar ghar main ek Mask to hona hi chahiye 😊
She founds one ....




Kashish ko yeh masks dekhte hi pasand aajata hai and she buys it off.....

apni shopping khatam karke Kashish jaldi se waapis ghar jaati hai and quickly changes as she also had to help in the party celebrations..
Veena ko apne saath le kar she heads off the AK's house...

After reaching there....
Angad: Are badi maa..aacha hua aap aagayi.. yeh Kripa ki bachi..
Kripa: Angaddddddddddd..meri koi bachi nahin hai..
Veena: koi baat nahin.... jaldiho jayegi...
yeh sun kar sab hass padte hain aur Kripa sharma jaati hai....

Kashish: chalo aab main aagayi hun... mumma aap yahan baitho..main inki help karvati hun..
Veena: aacha theek hai.. kuch help chahiye to batana..
Sab: aap bas baithiye... yeh to hamare kamm karne ke din hai.. aur aapke aaram karne ke...
yeh keh kar sab apne apne kamm ke liye chale jaate hain.... aur veena hass padti hai...

sab tayarian karke sabhi change karne chale jaate hain.. kynki party shuru hone main sirf aadhan ghanta reh gaya hota hai....

dekhte hain ki kis ne kya party dress daali hai...

Kashish is looking angelic in this beautiful dress...


Kripa is wearing a dark purplish dres which is looking gr8 on her...


Angad is wearing...


and looking as handsome as ever...



The party is in full swing..
and in comes Charu and Akshat.. who are close buddies of AK and Kashish...
AC: hey guys....
to AK...
Wish you both a very very HAPPY ANNIVERSARY...
Akshat: bahut bahut bhadhayi ho Angad.... iss Kripa ko 1 saal tak jhelne keliye...
Kripa....kya kaha tumne...
Angad: are kyn yaar ..aaj ke din bhi pitva raha hai...

yeh sun kar sab hass padte hain
Kripa: haan haan.. yahi sawal main tumse puchungi jab tumhari aur charu ki shadi ho jayegi... fir detail main sunungi...

meanwhile Angad notices... that there is someone else also with Akshat and Charu... and he nudges Akshat..
Angad: Akshat.. aisa kyn lag raha hai ki yeh jo tere saath hai inhein kahin dekha hua hai..
Kripa:(to the person standing near Akshat) are Rajveer... m I right.. tum Rajveer ho na.. aka ... Raj...

Raj: yeah... Kripa...Thank god..tumne pehchaan liya.. agar nahin pehchante to iss akshat ki wajah se mujhe bahut joote khane padte ki bin bulaya mehmaan hai party main..

Angad: are Raj.. yaad aaya... tum Dr ho na.... dhyan nahin aarahi hai tumhari line... but I remember that you had helped us a lof on our Florida trip...
Raj: yeh yeah...Dr hun.... woh bhi pagalon ka... 😃
Angad: hahaha.. sahi hai...

Sab hass padte hain... and they introduce Raj to everyone else also...

Raj: iss party ki decoration bahut hi aachi hai...
Angad: are wahh..tumne to aate hi heere ko parakh liya....  aaoo tumhein milvata hun.. ki woh heera kaun hai..

Angad ...Kashish.. ko aawaz maarta hai..and she walks up to where these folks are standing...

Angad: are Kashish, tumhein yaad hai humne tumhein Raj ke baare main bataya tha..jisne hamari Florida Trip main bahut madad ki thi... aaj mil lo inse... yeh hai Rajveer... aka Raj..

Kashish: Hi Raj... nice meeting you...
Raj: hi Kashish... aapse milkar bahut aacha laga... (and he is totally smitten by Kashish )
(Thinking seeing Kashish) .... yeh jitni seedhi dikhti hai... utni hai nahin... saamp hai saamp... jisne ek aadmi ki zindagi tabah kar di....kitni bholi dikhti hai... par.... hey bhagwan.. koi aise kaise kar sakta hai...
itne bholepan ka kaise koi naqab pehan sakta hai....

Edited by rmanu7382 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow very nice part....................kashish still thinks abt her past n the ghost tour was nice...................both were scared but didnt give up............n hamare hero ki entry bhi hogayi.....................kashish n rajveer........sounds different but its ok as long as its rajeev n aamna................oh god raj has this opinion abt kashish...............wonder what made him to think of her like that.....................cont soon dear.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally Raj ki entry ho gayi.....no matter wat he thinks of Kashish now.....I'm sure its gonna change.....well itmay be sumthing related wid Piyush.....but I knw we'll surely knw it soon. Till then I'm happy wid my her's entry........yay!!!! Thank u Manu....for this awesum UD....n for changing the story a bit. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh...Entry ke sath hi misunderstanding !
Hmm....Nice !
 
P.S - PM me when u update !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

wow very nice part....................kashish still thinks abt her past n the ghost tour was nice...................both were scared but didnt give up............n hamare hero ki entry bhi hogayi.....................kashish n rajveer........sounds different but its ok as long as its rajeev n aamna................oh god raj has this opinion abt kashish...............wonder what made him to think of her like that.....................cont soon dear.................



Thanks dear .... maine socha ki thoda diff daal dun.. u knw trying different combination of names...
so here's Kashish and Rajveer.,.... 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Finally Raj ki entry ho gayi.....no matter wat he thinks of Kashish now.....I'm sure its gonna change.....well itmay be sumthing related wid Piyush.....but I knw we'll surely knw it soon. Till then I'm happy wid my her's entry........yay!!!! Thank u Manu....for this awesum UD....n for changing the story a bit. Pls continue soon.




You are welcome Sumaiya dear..
it's been gr8 writing these ... but feels good tht there is smone who reads 😊

Thanks a bunch sweety !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Nisha... for reading and liking it...

happy reading many more parts to it

Love Manu