Humain Aisi mohabbat hai tumse... FF RA

Taaron ko mohabbat ambar se...
phoolon ko mohabbat shabman se..
jaise dil ko mohabbat dilbar se...
humain aisi mohabbat hai tumse...


The story is about Kashish who loves piyush dearly.. and Rajveer, who falls in love with kashish...
The main characters of this FF are

Kashish


Rajveer


and Piyush ..


Dekhte hain.. kis ki jindagi kis se judi hai...

(PS: I'll continue if you guys like the story line.. )

Love Manu

(Hey guys.. if u want me to PM you the updates to the story.. then please let me know... i'll be glad to drop a note to you all)

Updates:
Part1 : Pg1
Part2 : Pg2
Part3 : Pg4
Part4:  Pg6
Part5:   Pg8
Part6:  Pg10

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Edited by rmanu7382 - 14 years ago

Wow....Rajeev hai to sab kuch chalega. Filhaal waise kashish luvs Piyush....w8ing to knw how u make it RA.

Pls continue soon.

manu yaar you have started a fanfic.. this is awesome... pehle kyun nahii bataya mujhe.. anyway it is very interesting... love triangle... kashish loves piyush.. rajeev loves kashish.. but kya piyush kashish se pyaar kartha hai.. well even if he does jodi tho humare rajeev aur kashish kii hii banegi na.. issi liye apun bindaas hai.. hahahaha... mujhko yeh ff ka title bhi bada achcha laga... good start....👏 manu jaldi se continue karo.. me waiting for you to start eagerly..😊 love you..🤗
Edited by sun_423 - 14 years ago

Thank you guys !!
I had a plot in mind.. so thot of making up a story .. Dekhte hain.. yeh kahani kya kya gul khilati hai

and Sur... yeah Piyush also loves Kashish ...😊   for a change...


aab ending kya hogi.. yeh to waqt hi batayega ...
Will post the story soon,...

love ya
Manu!!



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hey manu................anything abt Rajeev am there.........n also will surely love any ff on Raj....................the intro is nice..............kashish loves piyush and Rajeev loves kashish..........very interesting.....................the poem shayari was very nice...................cont soon with the story n plz pm me when u update...................

Prologue...

aaj tumhein meri zindagi se gaye 6 mahine ho gaye hain..piyush kya inn 6 mahino main tumhein kabhi bhi meri yaad nahin aayi?? kyn tum mujhe hamari engagement ke din akela chod gaye the.. mujhse aisa kaun sa gunah ho gaya tha piyush ki tum mujhse iss tarah akele chod kar chale gaye...tumne to mere saath zeene marne ki kasmain khayi thi na.. kya hua unn sab kasmon ka.. unn vaadon ka... Kashish yeh sab soch kar ro padhti hai...
kahan dhoondhun tumhain main.. kis raste ..kis dagar..kis nagar..

we see a beautiful house in new orleans..
The house is close to the missisippi river and it's basking in the glory of the sun receeding towards sunset...
entering the house we see a housemaid doing the last bits of her household duties before she retires for the day...
moving further we see a old lady, who is calling the housemaid for helping her finish cleaning the room before Kashish comes home from office..Veena, along with Maria did all the necessary work and Maria then retired for the day.. and Veena was waiting for Kashish to come back home.
Kashish is the MD for one of the Fashion magazines which is a craze in US and is based out of New Orleans (I took this city in Lousiana.. since New Orleans is the first place in US which I went to.. and it is amazingly romantic... is very very beautiful place.. but you also need to have a heart to realize the true captivity of this youthful city.. )
Kashish: Mom, where are you..
Veena: Kashish, aagayi tu.. aaj bahut der ho gayi..
Kashish: yeah mom.. magazine ka ek new look launch ho raha hai 15 dino main aur bahut kamm baki hai abhi.. aab thode time ke liye aadat daal lo.. thoda aur der akele rehne ki.. kynki main thode dino tak office se thoda late aaya karungi..
Veena: theek hai kash bacha..
Veena is thinking.. agar tujhe issi main khushi milti hai to yahi sahi.. kynki main jaanti hun ki tujhe kya baat andar hi andar se khaye ja rahi hai aur tu jitna uss se door rahe.. utna hi tere liye aacha hai.. janti hun ki tum Piysuh se bahut pyar karti ho.. par main bebas hun.. main khud nahin janti ki woh kahan hai.. kis haal main hai.. aur woh jahan bhi hai.. wahan gaya hi kyn..

Veena and Kashish both have dinner after which they both retreat to their rooms as kashish was very tired bacause of the hectic day at office..

Kashish apne room main sone ke liye jaati hai.. par roz ki tarah apni raatein woh sirf piyush ke baare main soch kar hi guzarti hai..
aaj bhi woh apne khidhki ke kinare baith kar chaand ko dekh rahi hoti hai and mann hi mann main soch rahi hoti hai..

aaj tumhein meri zindagi se gaye 6 mahine ho gaye hain..piyush kya inn 6 mahino main tumhein kabhi bhi meri yaad nahin aayi?? kyn tum mujhe hamari engagement ke din akela chod gaye the.. mujhse aisa kaun sa gunah ho gaya tha piyush ki tum mujhse iss tarah akele chod kar chale gaye... Kashish yeh sab soch kar ro padhti hai.....

manu dear.. now this was a very different start... piyush aur kashish ek dusare se alag hai.. chalo yeh tho khushi kii baat hai kii piyush aur kashish ek dusare se durr hai.. lekin is mein mujhe bura is baat ke liye lag raha hai kii kashish piyush kii yaad mein dukhi hai... awww.. i feel so bad for her... i just wish kii someone gets a new life to her lifeless life. aur mujhe patah hai aisa ek hii insaan hai aur woh hai humara hero sujal... tho jaldi se humare hero kii entry karwao... aur piyush kii entry jitni late kar sako utna achcha.. hahahahahaha... anyway very interesting.. keep up the good work going..👏 please haan jaldi se continue karna.. i'am waiting for Rajeev's entry..😃
 Edited by sun_423 - 14 years ago

grt story dear

Interesting part. W8ing for Rajeev's entry though...hehe. And Piyush has left leaving a suspense behind....gud!!!

Pls continue soon.