Hey Steffi!!!!!😃
Sorry for the delay in commenting. Just got time and read this one.
Very different from your usual style of writing and not very unpredictable (no offence meant). I mean somewhere I knew from the very beginning what the end would be like. Yet that does not take away the fact that I liked the simplicity of the concept. Sweet and cute and with its elements of thrill as well! All in all a good one shot, just read that it's your first and I think for that a pat on the back. I can never really gather how writers are able to squeeze in a storyline with a defined ending all in just a one shot and you have done quite a good job of it!👏
Love
Smriti
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