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It's the blessed night for Prithvi and Damini.......Yeah they got married...after a long time of of heart n mind...finallly both decided that its only them who could stay forever along each other......during these days ....Prithvi had almost become the second mind of Damini...whatever she thinks...n feels.....Prithvi seems to know it all.....yet Damini sometimws wondered if her love for Prithvi was not as strong as is his for her....coz she could never excatly figure out whats going on in his mind....but whatever it may b...she had made herself sure that his love for her was not fake.....n thats what really counts to her....
Prithvi was about to enter Damini's room.....various thoughts brushing in his mind....
Pri: (mind) Kya....kya main Damini ko dhokha de raha hoon.....woh mujhe sabse jyada bharosa karti hain...aur main.......mujh mein aur Inder mein..... Nahi.....mainne Damini ko dhokha nahi Diya.....pyaar karta hoon main usse.....aur mera pyaar jhotha nahi....saath pheero ke kasmein lete waqt hi mainne than liya tha....aab chahe jo bhi ho jaye.....lekin mere iss badle ki aag mein....main aapne rishte ko nahi jalne doonga........I love her......Lekin...jaab usse sab saach ka pata chalega.....mujhe .....kya sochegi......nahi nahi..aapne maksad ke poora hote hi....main usse sab sach bata donga......aur yeh bhi bataubga...ki mera pyaar....uske liye koi dhong ya natak nahi....sacche dil se pyaar karta hoon main usse.....aur karta rahonga.....agar woh bhi mujhe pyaar karti hain...toh woh zaroor samjhegi mere baat ko...usse meri baat samajhna hiiiii Hogaaaa...
Prithvi finally enters the room.....n sees his beloved standing by the windows....Prithvi went n stood behind her....
Pri: Woh...aap....
Dam: Ohh...tum kab aaye.....mujhe pata hi nahi chala......aur last time bata rahi hoon Prithvi...yeh aap wagera choro...aaj se tum bhi mujeh 'tum' keheke bulaoge...
Pri: Hmmm....ohkay....waise...kya....kya soch rahi thii??
Dam: Kuchh nahi....yaad hain Prithvi....pehli baar....jab tumhe mujhe Toofan se bachaya tha.....hum dono ussi jagah pe gire the...
She smiles....n Pri: Han...aur tumne mujhe kya kya nahi kaha tha...
Both giggles remembering those sweet old days......Damini keeps her head on his chest.....Prithvi pats her back....an silence followed....but it spoke a lott...........................
14 months later:
It was almost done.....their revenge plan was almost on the verge of completion....the three brothers had already gathered the necessary proves against Ila Gujral..(the master mind) but only they waited for the delivery of Damini......(Yeah u got it right...) Damini was pregnant and was about to deliver a sweet little baby by the end of next month.....There were a few complications....so the Doctor advised her to b complete supervision...n that it has to be specially noted that she does not undergo any mental stress...coz that wud surely mean some adverse effects on the baby n the mother....
Prithvi had proved himself to be the best life parter...being mostly a friend to her.....she could share anything n everything with him.....their relationship was sooo strong that neither can even in a wildest dream can ever think of severing all ties from each other....Prithvi had always loved n cared for her....no matter whatever plans he had made....n now that she was legally his wife....he just protected her from the entire world......Damini felt to b at the top of the world...the quenie who was pampered a lot by her Hubby.....she just felt that shez the luckiest woman in the entire world.....
These days Damini realli felt restless....always back at home.....she was not allowed to go to office or take any stress......no doubt she had never wanted this child soo soon in her life...but it was Prithvi's happiness which mattered the most to her... it was like the countdown has begun....she wanted to get rid of tis weight now......awww....she coudn't even hug Prithvi properly......it was always there in between them.....
It was time for her to go to the joggers park n get some fresh air......since its her advance time...Prithvi had decided not to leave her aone..anywhere....He was waiting in the hall for Damini....n the wud b mother was just getting freshend up...for the short walk....
Damz came out of her room...Prithvi looked at her n chuckled.....
Pri: Arre.....meri golu....
Dam: Phir se....mainne kaha na....mujhe golu nahi bulana.....
Pri: pata hain....tum na.....aise hi bohut pyaari lagti hoon......(speads his arms)
Dam: haan haan...tumhe to main...bas....kaise bhi acchi lagti hoon.....(hugs him lightly)....arre lekin...ek baar iss weight ko uthakar to dekho......its like...aab to chala bhi nahi jata mujhse....
Pri: (smiles a bit) accha....madam se aab chala bhi nahi ja raha.....to...main kis din kaam aaunga....
He just picks her up in his arms.....
Dam: Arreee......Prithvi....kya...kya ker rahe ho....utaro....
Prithvi was about to leave with his sweetheart,,,,,when his cell phone rings...
Pri: Aghhhhh!!!!!!!!! Perfect Timing.....(He puts her down...n checks....Sameer calling...)
Pri: Haan...Jai...batao...
Sam: Bhaiyya....bhaiyya....bohut bari problem ho gayi hain.......woh Mr. chawla...aa gaye hain office.....surprise visit.....n like. He wants to meet Jai.....aur Avni..le kar aa rahi hain unhe.....main....main kya karoon.....Bhaiyya.....kuch batao....
Pri: Jai....tum....ghabrao nahi....thande dimaag se kaam lo...I noe u can do it.....n I am cuming in few minutes....
Prithvi keeps off the phone n looks at Damini....her eyes filled with curiosity...
Pri: Damini...mujhe abhi issi waqt office ke liya nikalna hain.....I am sorry...I'll come back n tok to u....take care....
Dam: Arre...per...(Prithvi turns back n leaves...) Prithvi....rithvi...ruko....
Dam: Aisa....aisa kya ho gaya hoga....aur phir Jai ka phone....Prithvi...itna pareshan kyun ho raha tha....kahin....kuchhhh( her eyes widened) Kahin...mamaa ka tabiyat....mamma theek to hain na.....may b main pareshan hongi...issiliye Prithvi ne bataya bhi nahi.....mujhe office jake check kerna HIIIIIIII HOGAAAAA (hubby influence😆)
Cut to GUJRAL OFFICE:
Sameer standing there ....his face hardened......Ila...all shocked...Avni.there stood still...her face had no expression...she looked like a stone man.....she lost all her power to react....Mr.Chawla had finally disclosed the most bitter truth.....Sameer tried to defend himself....but all went in vain.....
Prithvi enterd the office...the awkard silence that prevailed in the office made him sure....dat its all over....for the first time in life...his feet trembled.....his hands felt cold....he felt numb...as to how to handle this situation now....
Seeing Prithvi entering....Ila stood up...
Ila: (in tears) Beta...I mean Prithvi.....humnein tumpe kitna bharosa kiya tha...aur tum....tum ne...meri..
Prithvi looked at Samee...but Sam's eyes were fixed upon his lady love Avni...she looked stern n firm....her eyes had nothing more to express...
Sam: (near Avni) A...vnniii..(his voice trembling) main.......kuchh to bolo...avni....dekho ekbar meri taraf.....
Mr.Chawla: Look...U..Mr.Saxena...whatever....aab avni tumse kuch nahi kahegi...aur tum bhinahi kahoga....tumh jo bhi kuchh kehna hain ya sunna hain...woh police sattion mein hi kerna.....U bloody Imposter.....!!!!!!!!!! Paise ke liye....kisse ke bhi ghar....
Pri: Stop it Mr.Chawla...humnein inke paison mein koi interest nahi hain....
Mr.Chawla: Ohh realli...to inke betiyon ki zindagi barbad kerne mein interest hain...??
[A CAR IS PARKED INFRONT OF THE GUJRAL OFFICE....DAMINI COMES OUT n ENTERS THE OFFICE]
Pri: Hum yahaan kissi maksad se aaye the...
Cha: Huh.....dekh liye ...Ila ji....main batata hoon ki inka maksad kya tha....aapke betiyon ki zingadi barbad kerke..aapko blackmail kerna.....aapke betiyon ki zindagi ki keemat maangte yeh log aapse ....U bloody....downmarket people...
Ila looked hurt.....she had lost all her power to speak.....she looked weak.....after all..she rellied so much upon them....they were like her strenghts.....she never feares..whenever Jai n Prthvi were around...she had always loved them like her own children...she could bear it no more...
Pri: Stop It...Mr.Chawla.....[DAMINI STANDING JUST BEHIND PRITHVI] Haan manta hoon ki main yahaan kissi maksad se aaya tha....lekin woh maksad .....Damini ya Avni ki zindagi barbad kerna nahi tha.....V wanted to ruin Ila Gujral.....Ila Gujral ko barbad kerna chahte the hum.......humarein papa ke maut ka badla lene aaye the hum....is aurat ne humharein papa ko humsein door kar diya....aaj bhi humhari maa uss dukh se ubhar nahi paayi.....iss aurat ke wajah se....humhara haasta -khelta paarivar bikhar gaya.......lekin iss badle ke aag mein humhein pata hi nahi chala kab main Damini ke liye jeene laga....kab mera dil bas ussi ke liye dharakne laga.....kab meri har din ushise shuru aur ushipein khatamhona laga.....main bhalehi yaahan kissi maksad se aaya tha....lekin Damini ko pyaar......yeh jhootha nahi tha....I love her....
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Dam: STOP IT.......PRITHVI.....tum......tum..kaise..??? Mainne..(she starts getting her breathlessness)
Pri: Damini.....relax...kuchh nahi...main..I can xplain....
Dam: Xplain....itna kuchh hone ke baad bhi....U ......(she takes some quick breaths) ....Think....I will lissssten to ur xplana(she could complete her sentences)
Prithvi rushes near her....
Dam: (Her vouce disappears.....she almost cannot breathe.....yet continues) Don't touch me...(she gets those cold sweats)
Ila: Prithvi Beta.....plzz...Damini ko hospital leke chalo....shez collapsing....
Mr.Chawla: Ila...ji..aap pagal ho agyi hain.....inta sab kuchh hone ke baad bhi aap iss gire hue insaan ko....Damini ke pass....allow..
Ila: Iss waqt yeh sab kehne sunne ke liye time nahi hain.....Mujhe meri beti ki zindagi pyaari hain....aur uski zindagi Prithvi hain.....Prithvi beta....jaldi karo...make it soon.....
Prithvi for the first time felt.....did he do some mistake is knowing Ila Gujral...jo maa aapne bachho se itna pyaar kar sakti hain....kya woh kissi ka khoon....his thoughts gets distracted seeing Damini almost collapsing......taking her on his arms....Prithvi rushes to the hospital
Prithvi was about to enter Damini's room.....various thoughts brushing in his mind....
Pri: (mind) Kya....kya main Damini ko dhokha de raha hoon.....woh mujhe sabse jyada bharosa karti hain...aur main.......mujh mein aur Inder mein..... Nahi.....mainne Damini ko dhokha nahi Diya.....pyaar karta hoon main usse.....aur mera pyaar jhotha nahi....saath pheero ke kasmein lete waqt hi mainne than liya tha....aab chahe jo bhi ho jaye.....lekin mere iss badle ki aag mein....main aapne rishte ko nahi jalne doonga........I love her......Lekin...jaab usse sab saach ka pata chalega.....mujhe .....kya sochegi......nahi nahi..aapne maksad ke poora hote hi....main usse sab sach bata donga......aur yeh bhi bataubga...ki mera pyaar....uske liye koi dhong ya natak nahi....sacche dil se pyaar karta hoon main usse.....aur karta rahonga.....agar woh bhi mujhe pyaar karti hain...toh woh zaroor samjhegi mere baat ko...usse meri baat samajhna hiiiii Hogaaaa...
Prithvi finally enters the room.....n sees his beloved standing by the windows....Prithvi went n stood behind her....
Pri: Woh...aap....
Dam: Ohh...tum kab aaye.....mujhe pata hi nahi chala......aur last time bata rahi hoon Prithvi...yeh aap wagera choro...aaj se tum bhi mujeh 'tum' keheke bulaoge...
Pri: Hmmm....ohkay....waise...kya....kya soch rahi thii??
Dam: Kuchh nahi....yaad hain Prithvi....pehli baar....jab tumhe mujhe Toofan se bachaya tha.....hum dono ussi jagah pe gire the...
She smiles....n Pri: Han...aur tumne mujhe kya kya nahi kaha tha...
Both giggles remembering those sweet old days......Damini keeps her head on his chest.....Prithvi pats her back....an silence followed....but it spoke a lott...........................
14 months later:
It was almost done.....their revenge plan was almost on the verge of completion....the three brothers had already gathered the necessary proves against Ila Gujral..(the master mind) but only they waited for the delivery of Damini......(Yeah u got it right...) Damini was pregnant and was about to deliver a sweet little baby by the end of next month.....There were a few complications....so the Doctor advised her to b complete supervision...n that it has to be specially noted that she does not undergo any mental stress...coz that wud surely mean some adverse effects on the baby n the mother....
Prithvi had proved himself to be the best life parter...being mostly a friend to her.....she could share anything n everything with him.....their relationship was sooo strong that neither can even in a wildest dream can ever think of severing all ties from each other....Prithvi had always loved n cared for her....no matter whatever plans he had made....n now that she was legally his wife....he just protected her from the entire world......Damini felt to b at the top of the world...the quenie who was pampered a lot by her Hubby.....she just felt that shez the luckiest woman in the entire world.....
These days Damini realli felt restless....always back at home.....she was not allowed to go to office or take any stress......no doubt she had never wanted this child soo soon in her life...but it was Prithvi's happiness which mattered the most to her... it was like the countdown has begun....she wanted to get rid of tis weight now......awww....she coudn't even hug Prithvi properly......it was always there in between them.....
It was time for her to go to the joggers park n get some fresh air......since its her advance time...Prithvi had decided not to leave her aone..anywhere....He was waiting in the hall for Damini....n the wud b mother was just getting freshend up...for the short walk....
Damz came out of her room...Prithvi looked at her n chuckled.....
Pri: Arre.....meri golu....
Dam: Phir se....mainne kaha na....mujhe golu nahi bulana.....
Pri: pata hain....tum na.....aise hi bohut pyaari lagti hoon......(speads his arms)
Dam: haan haan...tumhe to main...bas....kaise bhi acchi lagti hoon.....(hugs him lightly)....arre lekin...ek baar iss weight ko uthakar to dekho......its like...aab to chala bhi nahi jata mujhse....
Pri: (smiles a bit) accha....madam se aab chala bhi nahi ja raha.....to...main kis din kaam aaunga....
He just picks her up in his arms.....
Dam: Arreee......Prithvi....kya...kya ker rahe ho....utaro....
Prithvi was about to leave with his sweetheart,,,,,when his cell phone rings...
Pri: Aghhhhh!!!!!!!!! Perfect Timing.....(He puts her down...n checks....Sameer calling...)
Pri: Haan...Jai...batao...
Sam: Bhaiyya....bhaiyya....bohut bari problem ho gayi hain.......woh Mr. chawla...aa gaye hain office.....surprise visit.....n like. He wants to meet Jai.....aur Avni..le kar aa rahi hain unhe.....main....main kya karoon.....Bhaiyya.....kuch batao....
Pri: Jai....tum....ghabrao nahi....thande dimaag se kaam lo...I noe u can do it.....n I am cuming in few minutes....
Prithvi keeps off the phone n looks at Damini....her eyes filled with curiosity...
Pri: Damini...mujhe abhi issi waqt office ke liya nikalna hain.....I am sorry...I'll come back n tok to u....take care....
Dam: Arre...per...(Prithvi turns back n leaves...) Prithvi....rithvi...ruko....
Dam: Aisa....aisa kya ho gaya hoga....aur phir Jai ka phone....Prithvi...itna pareshan kyun ho raha tha....kahin....kuchhhh( her eyes widened) Kahin...mamaa ka tabiyat....mamma theek to hain na.....may b main pareshan hongi...issiliye Prithvi ne bataya bhi nahi.....mujhe office jake check kerna HIIIIIIII HOGAAAAA (hubby influence😆)
Cut to GUJRAL OFFICE:
Sameer standing there ....his face hardened......Ila...all shocked...Avni.there stood still...her face had no expression...she looked like a stone man.....she lost all her power to react....Mr.Chawla had finally disclosed the most bitter truth.....Sameer tried to defend himself....but all went in vain.....
Prithvi enterd the office...the awkard silence that prevailed in the office made him sure....dat its all over....for the first time in life...his feet trembled.....his hands felt cold....he felt numb...as to how to handle this situation now....
Seeing Prithvi entering....Ila stood up...
Ila: (in tears) Beta...I mean Prithvi.....humnein tumpe kitna bharosa kiya tha...aur tum....tum ne...meri..
Prithvi looked at Samee...but Sam's eyes were fixed upon his lady love Avni...she looked stern n firm....her eyes had nothing more to express...
Sam: (near Avni) A...vnniii..(his voice trembling) main.......kuchh to bolo...avni....dekho ekbar meri taraf.....
Mr.Chawla: Look...U..Mr.Saxena...whatever....aab avni tumse kuch nahi kahegi...aur tum bhinahi kahoga....tumh jo bhi kuchh kehna hain ya sunna hain...woh police sattion mein hi kerna.....U bloody Imposter.....!!!!!!!!!! Paise ke liye....kisse ke bhi ghar....
Pri: Stop it Mr.Chawla...humnein inke paison mein koi interest nahi hain....
Mr.Chawla: Ohh realli...to inke betiyon ki zindagi barbad kerne mein interest hain...??
[A CAR IS PARKED INFRONT OF THE GUJRAL OFFICE....DAMINI COMES OUT n ENTERS THE OFFICE]
Pri: Hum yahaan kissi maksad se aaye the...
Cha: Huh.....dekh liye ...Ila ji....main batata hoon ki inka maksad kya tha....aapke betiyon ki zingadi barbad kerke..aapko blackmail kerna.....aapke betiyon ki zindagi ki keemat maangte yeh log aapse ....U bloody....downmarket people...
Ila looked hurt.....she had lost all her power to speak.....she looked weak.....after all..she rellied so much upon them....they were like her strenghts.....she never feares..whenever Jai n Prthvi were around...she had always loved them like her own children...she could bear it no more...
Pri: Stop It...Mr.Chawla.....[DAMINI STANDING JUST BEHIND PRITHVI] Haan manta hoon ki main yahaan kissi maksad se aaya tha....lekin woh maksad .....Damini ya Avni ki zindagi barbad kerna nahi tha.....V wanted to ruin Ila Gujral.....Ila Gujral ko barbad kerna chahte the hum.......humarein papa ke maut ka badla lene aaye the hum....is aurat ne humharein papa ko humsein door kar diya....aaj bhi humhari maa uss dukh se ubhar nahi paayi.....iss aurat ke wajah se....humhara haasta -khelta paarivar bikhar gaya.......lekin iss badle ke aag mein humhein pata hi nahi chala kab main Damini ke liye jeene laga....kab mera dil bas ussi ke liye dharakne laga.....kab meri har din ushise shuru aur ushipein khatamhona laga.....main bhalehi yaahan kissi maksad se aaya tha....lekin Damini ko pyaar......yeh jhootha nahi tha....I love her....
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Dam: STOP IT.......PRITHVI.....tum......tum..kaise..??? Mainne..(she starts getting her breathlessness)
Pri: Damini.....relax...kuchh nahi...main..I can xplain....
Dam: Xplain....itna kuchh hone ke baad bhi....U ......(she takes some quick breaths) ....Think....I will lissssten to ur xplana(she could complete her sentences)
Prithvi rushes near her....
Dam: (Her vouce disappears.....she almost cannot breathe.....yet continues) Don't touch me...(she gets those cold sweats)
Ila: Prithvi Beta.....plzz...Damini ko hospital leke chalo....shez collapsing....
Mr.Chawla: Ila...ji..aap pagal ho agyi hain.....inta sab kuchh hone ke baad bhi aap iss gire hue insaan ko....Damini ke pass....allow..
Ila: Iss waqt yeh sab kehne sunne ke liye time nahi hain.....Mujhe meri beti ki zindagi pyaari hain....aur uski zindagi Prithvi hain.....Prithvi beta....jaldi karo...make it soon.....
Prithvi for the first time felt.....did he do some mistake is knowing Ila Gujral...jo maa aapne bachho se itna pyaar kar sakti hain....kya woh kissi ka khoon....his thoughts gets distracted seeing Damini almost collapsing......taking her on his arms....Prithvi rushes to the hospital
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