ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 113

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

hiya paris!!!

as usual loveddd everything bout your updatee....
cuteee mayur scenes... funny elements to it....
my fave was the mayur moment in the car and the whol bhabi sceneee!!!
awesomeee!!!
lovedd it!!!
cant wait for the next updatee!!
xxx

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

amazing chapter!
loved it to the core!
mayur have such an understanding now!
my fav part was at the pizzeria when nupur is introduced to sameer n roshni
n roshni is uday's gf??
anyways continue soon

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

wow awesome update
i love maynk's understanding nature
and the whole office part and then sameer flirting with nupur and his face expression
awesome part paris ...
and one shock uday with rosh

Originally posted by: nikki028

awesome update paris............lovd car seq d most............his monolgue n tht sweeeeet punishment......
precap toh rockin tha dear.........plzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooon...........😳😳😳

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Simple awesome!....i love the deepness of their understanding....it's like simple things/incidences like these are romantic enough!

 

And i am sooooo sooo eager to read the next part!

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Wow paris,

What an update yaar.

Its super-duper,mind-blowing, fantastic.

Just loved every bit of it.

And our Mayu- he is so understandable and a perfect gentle man with his own attitude.

The way he handle Nupur is really amazing.

I know Mayur r rocks but u made them super-duper rocks.

And uday- Oh my GOD he dated with roshni. It was more surprising.

Paris u made my day yaar. Its full of love, understanding and their cute nok-jhok

Awesome  job.

U know what- im alwz eagerly waiting 4 ur update.

So, plz update soon.

Faria--------------------------------

Originally posted by: hiba.aijaz

it waz wonderful paris.........now as i hav read da whole thing i can comment on it,,,,,,,,,,,,,well,it waz....very gud effort,,,,luvd how u xpressed dat deep affection n luv btwn dem widout ne cheesy dialogues n gud sms's (where did u get dem from.hehehe)now i culd use dem *evil smile*newayz w8in 4 da nxt 1 n may ur business prosper

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey simply awesome update dear
i just cant tell u how much beautifully u have written it
simply mindblowing
i loved the way mayank introduced nupur to his colleauges

n mayur in car😳 n in restaurant. just loved that scenes

u r awesome.
plzzzz do continue soon
i cant wait to read further
n sorry i forgot abt udday
so roshni is his girlfriend
hmmm seems interesting
plz update ur next soon

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

first of all...m vry sorry 4 d l8 reply...
well...cuming bak to ur post...
twas awesum!!
twas really xelent!!!
soooo nice...
nd luvd sameer nd roshni after mayur lunch!!
hehe!!!
gr8 man!!!
pls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)