ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 111

it was so cute!
paris it's great!
The bonding between mayur was really wonderful

it was amazingly ebautiful...very simple and sweet...plzzzz update soon

first of all...m vry sorry 4 d l8 reply...
well...cuming bak to ur post...
twas awesum!!
twas really xelent!!!
soooo nice...
nd luvd sameer nd roshni after mayur lunch!!
hehe!!!
gr8 man!!!
pls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 14 years ago

gr88 prt

marvelous work!

i loved ur update!

for the first time.......it was long..........

but i felt like reading it more and more and more........

as u say........

there is no end for wants........

yaar.......

i loved it to the core......

who said that only romantic updates r good?

i love this update.......

i have read it more than 5 times..........

and now i am commenting...........

i know that this is wrong that i should have first commented.......

but this was too good.........

kitna acha tha..........

u portrayed their emotions so well........

especially when mayank boosted her up........

and that punishment one.........

and that mesmerizing one............

plzzzzzzz update soon..........

and when u update........

do pm me..........

plzzzzzzzzzzz soon...........

i will be waiting very eagerly..........

awww...so so sweet!!

Originally posted by: ghtk1

i soo wish the CVs could be matured enough to get some idea 4m ur FF.loved it thoroughly....plzz continue soon.🤗

thank u so much dear!

aw.....................really superb..............
just loving it....
i am shocked to know that is roshini.....good going....
waiting for next part...

wow...........wat an update..........isse kehte hain bindaas😃

hiya paris!!!

as usual loveddd everything bout your updatee....
cuteee mayur scenes... funny elements to it....
my fave was the mayur moment in the car and the whol bhabi sceneee!!!
awesomeee!!!
lovedd it!!!
cant wait for the next updatee!!
xxx