ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-RN fic-[imp note-pg 149]24/05 - Page 2

Originally posted by: srojaleen

thanx priya!!!!!!!thankyou soo much for commenting😊i m soo happy that tumhein raj aur naina ka scene pasand aaya....aur haan naina ko abhi nhn pata ki vo raj ke liye kuch mehsoos karti hai ya nhn....kyunki beech mein vo 3rd person jo hai😭but dont worry main hoon na😆bhut jald bhagaa dungi usse.....aur naina ko raj ke saath posting ki koi zaroorat nhn padne waali😉ab u keep guessing and thnx for ur suggestion...i'll try to improve😊😊😊awesome yaar...!!!👏 👏 👏

pura ud read karne k baad yeh pata chala hai ki raj toh naina se pyar karta hai...😊!!! par lagta hai k naina abhi is ehsaas se dur hai.

 

mujhe lagta hai jis se naina phone par baat kar rahi thi...voh us ka voh so called bf hai...jo naina k passing out parade me nahin aa raha hai...!!! jis se naina raj ko milwana chahti hai...!!! par us se mil kar raj ko baht dukh hoga yaar...😭

 

ek baat jo sab se jyada achhi lagi voh yeh hai ki...raj aur naina ka takrana...!!! LRL me bhi raj aise hi dial bolta tha...jaisa ki tum ne yahan par likha hai...!!!😃 😃 😃

 

raj ki posting Delhi me hui hai...!!! pata nahin naina kahan par posted hogi...😕??? hope ki naina ko jaldi hi ehsaas ho jaye ki voh bhi baht kuch khaas mehsus karti hai raj k liye.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

 

aur naina k parents ko bhi raj ko maaf kar dene chahiye...!!! kyoun ki raj ne jo kiya tha...voh hi ek rashta tha naveen ko ek shaheed ki maut dene ka...!!!

 

do ud fast yaar...!!!😊

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. Its gud dat u cleared sum things. Its now quite easy to imagine the things.

 

I am really eager to knw Raj ne Naina ko kya gift diya. And also I'm w8ing 4 the 4th part as u said after 2-3 parts we r going to get a pleasant shock.

 

Pls continue soon.

thanks dear....i m really happy that u r commenting....yes i m sure u'll get a pleasant shock....and gift...vo to next update mein pata chal hi jaayega😊....thnx once again

only two comments??????😭plzzzz it's my request that if u r reading dis fic den do lemme know......comment for once atleast...soo that i can decide whether to continue or not

jooth bolna is very bad.......

jooth is dat u said dat dis is ur first time writing of ne fic.......

but reading d first part aisa lagta hai dat u r writing from long time......

really awesome...just loved it...👏.
rn wer brilliant also d convo was amazing....👏
👏
too good....

n dont mind for my first two sentences ...dat was just a joke.....

...
lipi

awesome yaar!!! liked it !!good itz sumthng new....update soon.........

thanx dear....i m glad that u liked it😊....and yes i m writing for d first time and i know i m not good as others but still whatever u said to encourage me will really help me to write even better....thnkyou sooo much😊

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

jooth bolna is very bad.......

jooth is dat u said dat dis is ur first time writing of ne fic.......

but reading d first part aisa lagta hai dat u r writing from long time......

really awesome...just loved it...👏.
rn wer brilliant also d convo was amazing....👏
👏
too good....

n dont mind for my first two sentences ...dat was just a joke.....

...
lipi

thankyou so much for commenting....i really appreciate that u took an effort to comment😊i know its boring to comment sometimes but still even this one line is  more than sufficient for me😊😊😊keep reading

Originally posted by: manatated

awesome yaar!!! liked it !!good itz sumthng new....update soon.........

Edited by rajeev fann - 14 years ago

that was really good

I can't believe that i haven't come across this Fic ... Well Now that i have i can say that it was a Very Good Start ... i like the Storyline, It's Different ...

and i'm definetly looking forward to reading more ... so do continue with this, and Please if You Can Do PM me ...

and Take Care

Yasmin

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good

plz continue it and do pm me whenever u update

thanks dear....thankyou sooo much for commenting....and yes i'll send u a pm whenever i'll update😊