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Part 39

Yug is in thoughts

He donot know why he is in pain

Yug:yeh kya huwa hay muje…..itne baichinii kyon……………lagtha hay vrinda parishaan hay………kyon ki tabi muje itna dard hota hay

The weird person sings

Tere leela anmol hay ………..

Tere chatur kaha hay……………

Tujse milatha hay yeh jagat

Nadaan yah sab…………

Na samajenge tera upkar

Kyonki meet se badkar is duniya mein kuch bhi nahii hay………….

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna………………………………..

Vrinda lifts her up

The little boy…….

She asks

Vrinda:beta tum teek ho toh na

Where jumki is speech less………as vrinda is already crossed the lines

Ab mein kya karoon agar kisi dushmani ke log ne dekh liya toh yeha nayaa yudd hoga….

Hey baghwaan,,,,,,,,aur choti memsaab ko yeha ki baaremein kuch nahii pata

As she moves towards vrinda

Dadabeer:kaun hay yeh ladki aaj kal ki zamamene mein koi apna kissi apne ke liye nahii kartha aur yeh ladki kisi ajnabhi bacchee ke liye apne jaan jokat par lagaii,,,,,,,,,,,,

Kitne sansaskaar hay….kaun hay hey

And he moves and gives hand to vrinda

Winds blow

The person………sees this

Yeh who haat hay…………..

Jo dushman ke khoon ko pehachaan thi hay

Lekin yehi who masoom dil hay……….dadabeer

Jo barso ki tere dushmanii ko……………mitane ke liye..us kanna ne chuna apne radha ko…………………………

Jo haat ab mila rahe ho……..na hey shuruwaad hay tere…………………………dushmani se dosti tak………….

Vrinda lifts her up

Vrinda:shukuriya

Dadabeer:kaun hay tu beta..kaha ke rehne wali hoo…………….jara hame batoo….tune apne jaan par khelkar uss maa ke bachee ko bachaya……………..hay

Before vrinda opens her mouth………

Jhumki is tensed

But the lady………..says

The lady:dadabeer.yeh nayee hay.seher se ayee hay………………….hamere door ke rishde dar………………….

And at the time……………..kaka come sto dadabeer

Kyon dadabeer kyon janna chahtee hoo……………..

Uska naam…kya rishtaa judna hay kya

Yeh mere rishte daar hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Seher mein padthi hay chuttiyon ke liye ayii thi…….

Vrinda beta tum teek hoo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Dadabeer:vrinda kitne acchee naam..yehtoh radha ke naam hay………………………..

Kaka:ha dadabeer yeh sach mein radha hay….

Tan may be aur mann may be……………

Dadabeer blesses her

And kaka takes leave with vrinda

Vrinda:are kaka.aap nekyon nahii bataya.ke mein gawn ki uss had tak rehne wali.ladki hoo……………….

Kaka:yeha ki log poorani khayalat ke hay..jaat unch neez……sab jeez .dushamani……………..toh toh………yeha ki rehne wali nayee ho na………..

Aur mein jaante hoo……tum vikram rathod ke …………………….poti hoo………na………….

Vrinda:ha aap mere daduu saa ko jaante hay…………..

Ha jaanta hoo…..pehle tum jooo..waha…………..tere naukarani.tere liye parishaan hay

The lady comes to her

Beta tune mere bachee ke jaan bachayee hay

Baghwaan tere manoo kamna poori karle……………….

Vrinda:mere mano kamna…ke rashte us baghwaan ne pehle poore karlee……yug ko mere zindagi mein bechkar……………………………..

Kaka:ajeeb khel hay……………vikramaditya rathod…….jiskeliye dushmani se badkarkuch nahi.aur tere sab se badee poti.pyarr kedewaane………………………..lagtha hay…….tere kadawaat ko bhoolne ka samay aa raha hay…………lekin kanaa…..tere radha ko………….iss dushamani se badkar .uss dushtoo se bhi bachana…….teek hay…………….

And jumki comes to kaka

Jhumki:aap ko lakh lakh shukuria ……….kaka……..aap ne muje bachayaa….agar kisi ko pata chala ki……..vrinda se sarhad paar kiya aur dushman ke gawn mein……poow rakha.toh yeha mahabharat shuru hone…………jyada waqt ahii lagtha…………………….

Jhumki comes to vrinda

Jhumki:aap ne toh muje darra diya.agar aap ko pata hay…………..agar kisiko pata chale ke aap ne us saharad ke gawn pe kadam rakha hay…….toh yeha lasshoo ke der lagegi…………aur khoon nadi tarah behekegi…………….

Vrinda:kya .baat hay……………jhumki.tum toh bade filmy baate karrahe hoo……….

Jhumki:Dekho didi aap ne batayaa…toh mujse jyada aap ko nukhsaan hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Phir aap ke dadusaa……….aap ko mehel se ek khadam bhi bahar na,,,,,,,,,,rakhene denge…..haa

Vrinda:are haa..chances hay..aur dada saa ka hukum…………sab ke liye..pattar ke lakeer hay………..is liye soch vrinda…agar yug yeha pouch gayee toh………………….haa…tuje bahar jaana hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,yaad hay…………na…………………

Vrinda comes to the room…………………

She thinks of yug

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Part 40

Yug kaha ho tum

Mein tuje bahut miss kar rahi hoo…….

Tuje bas ek baar dekhna hay

On the other hand …………

Yug tries to come out

At that time

Dadabeer sees yug

Yug also sees him

A smile on his face……….

Yug ..dada beer calls him

Yug:jee dadu aap ne muje bhulay a hay…………..

Dadabeer :ha a yug.tuh kahi bahar jaane wali hoo…….

Yud is tensed……….

Kya karoon mein……….

Dadabeer goes to the room

He opens a box.and he takes a potrait

Barsoo baad muje tera yaad aya hay .bachaa………………..aaj uss ladki ko dekh kar…muje tere yaad ayee thi…………….mein ne dushman ke lakeer kee chee hay

Lekin uss mein apne kudh ke beti ko bhi……….hawaas kiya

At that time rakhi comws in and sees potrait

Mein jaanta hoo baba…aap hamesha muje aur payal ko eki darja diya

Who apka khoon hay..khoon hamesha khoon hota hay

Ap ko payal ke yaad toh ayege…………………..

On the other hand

Payal Is worried……….

Jab bhi hawa palat thi hay

Toh muje darr lagtha hay

Ki kahi ahahat se koi tufaan ajayee…………..

Kanaa.mein ne hamesha apke pradhana ki hay

Pooja ki hay apka………..phir batayee………………na.eh kaise bechainee hay………….

On the other hand

Yeh kanaa……..ab jaldise mujse yug ko milado….

Phir hum saath saath milke tere aarthi karenge

Pata hay na……….jab mere saath yug hota hay

Muje kisi aur kee saath ki jaroorat hi nahii……………………

She closes her eyes……….

On the other hand………..

Yug remembers vrinda…………………..

He takes the bag

He takes the red cloth

Suddenly he sees vrinda smiling at him

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Aankhon mein ankhne teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhe mein kuch raha hua kya
Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

Shoor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi

Aadha sa wada kabhi
Aadhe se jayada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is trah wafa ka
Chode na chote kabhi
Tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka

Mein Tera sharmaya hoon
Jo mein ban paya hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi
Raste miljate hai
Manzile miljati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Yug smiles

Kya baat hay…………aaj kal yug ko kya huwa

Mann hi mann muskuraha tha hay

Apni duniya mein kho jaata hay

Baat kya hay…………………….

Dil ko kaise samaj oo

Jo tere yaad mein doond tha hay

Kabhi phurusat mein tanyaanii hoo mein

Bas tere…………………… hi naam

Hay

And he looks at moon

At the same time

Vrinda feels yug

She smiles

At the next morning

Yug tuje aaj vrinda se phone meinbaat karne padegee….

Lekin kaise yeha toh dadabeer ka beta hay

Har koi tuje pehachatee hay

Lekin padoson yaa seher mein koi nahii janta hay………..ki tu kaun hay

Is se pehle koi tuje dekhle ..tu eha se baag jaa.warna maa yaa maa bua tuje rokh kar ……………..tujse dere saali sawaal karke ,tuje rokh leta hay

Udar dekho musibaat aa rahi hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Jiska naam maya…….hay…………..

Chal yug bhag jaa…..

And he sees dadabeer coming in opposite direction

Yug prays to god….

At that time suddenly winds blow

And the saint comes and sings

Pyarr hay zindagi ki jeene ke tamanna

Tu hay mera jeene ke wajah jay

Tumbin jaane kaise jeeoo

Kyonki……..preet se badkar kuch bhi nahii

Preet hay………duniya chalane ke

Preet hay sab kuch mera

Tere preet se ………hoti meree subha aur shaam

Tujse preet lagaii sajna

Tujse preet lagaii sajna

Yug hides himself into the people

And he steps into the line of krishan ghad.,,,,

Winds blew………………..

Krishana…………radha radha…….

Hare Krishna……………..govida gopal radhe radhe

Mangala bole radhe radhe

Gopi nandana radhe radhe

Gopi nandana radhe radhe

The kaka says

Yeh dushman se jeene waloo………

Iss mohabbat ke toofan..se bach kar kaha joougi

Kal radha ne paar ke tum log ki sarhaad ke rekha

Aur ab kana ki…………………

Duwa dena……..iss pyarr ke maseeroo ko….

Jo anjaan banke nibarahi hay…………nafrat ke andee yon kar apne masoom pyarr ko…………..

Rokh sakthe toh rokh loo………….

Vrinda suddenly wakes up

And feels happy

On the other hand

Payal and rakhi wakes

As well as yug steps in

Vrinda feels very happy

Part ends

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Part 41

Yug sees himself in a different place

Yeh mein kaha agaya

Kuch pata nahii

He smiles

Lagtha hay tere pyarr mein muje kya se kya karna padtha hay vrinda

Ab muje yeh pata nahii ki mein kaha hoo………………

He moves…………..

Lagtha hay dadabeer ke darr ke wajah se…………..

Mein kahii aur agayaa

On the other hand

Vrinda:yeh kya huwa hay muje

Achanak mein yug ko mehasoos kyon kar rahii hoon yeasa laghta hay ke yug yehi par hay…mere saath……..

Uski kadam iss zameen par pada hay

Kahi yug muje dhoond kar yeha toh nayeee gayaa hay…………..

And she goes on…………….

On the sides both rakhi and payal are also worried…………..

Where yug is worried…………

He stays at a place

He looks at moon………………..

The kaka sings

Lag tha hay tere leela…..

Yug yug se chaltha hay

Tere pyarr ke taqaat

Muje kya se kya banatha hay

Tere pyarr ke door se……

Mera jagaa mehek utti………….

Tere arrizoo se…………

Mera jeewan …….ke saas judi

Tu hi mere………..jeene ke wajah

Tu hi mere saasoo ke pechchaan

Ab tu hi mera……..

Jeevan tan aur mann

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna………………………..

Yug listens to the song

Kitna accha gaata hay

The kaka stops

Pranam….manorar kaka kaise yehaap

Aap ne muje pechana nahii

Mein yug…dadabeer ka pota……..

Manohar kaka:yug.tu dadabeer ka pota.kitne bade ho gayee ho

He sees someone listening to the conversation

Are kisi ko pata chale toh gadbad ho jayege……………..

Yug:kaka aap ka gana bahut sundar.preet…………

Kaka:ha beta preet…………….kya hey wahi preet jo insaan se kya kuch nahii kar wata hay…….

Kahi isse preet ne toh tume waha se yeha tak toh layee na……..

Yug shocks

Yug:Kaka aap ko kaise pata

Kaka:muje nahii pata toh kisee pata beta…………………agar nahii pata hoo toh kya huwa..tere ankheen saaf saaf tere saari raaz khol rahe hay……………

Ab nayaa manzil..nayee safar………………….

Aur nayee…..tarana…………………

Ha yug ek baat ki khayal rakhna……….yeha ka mahool kuch teek nahii.is liye sab ko yeh batana ke tum mera mehamaan hoo…teek hay

Yug:wow kyon………………

Kaka:mujse bais e mat karoo beta……agar yeha rehna chahtee ho toh…………..

Yug:mein ne already buamaa ko bata chukka hoo…….ki mein seher jaa raha hoo..agar dubara ghar chala gayaa…toh muje bahar bechene ke galthi…….bua nahii karege……is liye…..samaal ke……………..soch ………samaj ke..yug…..tere liye safe hay…yehi rehna………………….

Yug:ha kaka sab ko bhol donga ke mein apka rishte daar hoo……………..

Yug:thank god yug………you are safe.ab araam se yeha se vrinda ka pata doond sakthe hoo……………….

Next day morning…………………….

Some weird people are moving around……………….

In jeeps………..

Manohar kaka……yeh log kaun hay

He asks some people

Pata nahii kaka…kuch log doosri shehar se aya hay.abahut hi bartmeez log hay…………….

And he moves………..

Yug in meantime.searching ………

He is looking around…………..

He sees some bangle shops……………..

Back ground music is played

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna

Vrinda ko chudiya bahut pasand hay……….

And he purchased…………red bangles …………….

For her

Suddenly winds blow……….

The weird persons…………….dashes him…………….

Bangles fall from hands

But yug manages to get them

And he moves from there

The scene see by some villagers

Kitna bala aadmi hay isne

Kuch nahii kaha un log ko

At the next minute

Vikram rathod comes from the mandir

..

kaka sees as yug is opposite to him……………………

he feels nervous

yeh kya ho raha hay bagwaan…………

the weird persons dashes him.

And vikram rathod falls……….

The weird persons says

Yeh…………..budde dikayee nahii deta hay kya

All are speech less

VR:agar tume tameez nahii maloom toh lagtha hay muje sikhani hi padegaa…….

The weird:achha toh tum…..hame sikoogi..tazeez

Andhe lifts his hand

VR:stuns…….

Before he raises his hand

One hand stops………….

The weird person………… yeh kau n hay jo muje rokha……..hay

Before he says he gets a blamp………….

He turns to find………….

Yug is standing….with anger in his eyes………

VR looks at him surprisingly

Yug:yeh jo bhi hay……bhujurok hay…..aur hamere yeha…..bhujurok log..samman dee jaate hay………awisharwaad lejaate hay unse……..unka apmaan nahii……………….tu chahe jis miitee se bana ho………lekin yeha ki mitti har bachaa ko …yehi seek deti hy……..chahee who jaha ke bhi………rehne wala kyon naa hoo…….samaj gayee

The weird person:lagtha hay,…….panga lene ke mood mein hoo.yeh tumara rishte daar hay kya

Yug:ha rishta hay……..kyon…………

Mera inka risht hay ki yeh mere dadu ke umar ke bara bar hay………aur har who insaan jo mere dadu ke umar ke hoti hay……wow…..mere dadu ke barabar hay..aur mein apne dadu se pyar kartha hoo.aur unka apmaan ho toh muje usse sabat sikana padega..

And he hits the other person…………….

He bags all…………….

Huge blows….

VR sees this surprisingly

Aaj kal ke zamaane mein……….bhi yesa sansakar joo.badoo koo itne samman de na wala aulad

Bahut kush naseeb hay…….iska pariwaar jo yesa beta huwa hay unee…………………

Yug looks at VR

VR:sees him with smile

Kaka:barsoo baat……………VR ne smile kee…hay

Yeh wahi smile hay………..joo………….us waqt de tha tha jab dababeer aur iska dosti huwa kartha tha……………….bagwaan.is ladka jis tara se VR ko muskhuraat wapas ki.us tarah………….is ka nafrat ke dil mein  pyarr ka barsaat bhi barsaa do…….

VR:beta mein ne kabhi bhi iss gawn mein nahii dekha………………lag tha hay…………….nayee hoo kaha ke rehne wala hoo……….

Mumbai se……….padtha hay waha……………

Before yug could answer………

Kaka answers…………….

Achaa…………..

Beta pehle baar yeh ehsaas dilaya hay ke

Hamere sansakar kitne uncha hay…………aaj kal ke zameen e meinbhi yesa vichaar ……………aursoch….

Accha laga beta….

Tumara naam kya hay….

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