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Neetu2825

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Thanks 4 continuing the story. Since the show sucks big time, these FFs are all we have. Update soon!

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srilu

@srilu_123

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Part 33

Vrinda comes to the room…….

She opens the wardrobe………

She looks at the wardrobe…….

Suddenly she sees her phone…..

Lot of missed calls from payal…

Vrinda:chachi……………….

At the time yug reaches the home……………..

He looks for brij……

But he didn't find brij…………

At the time he sees the phone…………

Missed calls of rakhi……

Yug:mabua…...kya baat hay…………

Rakhi:pata nahi ………..yug tere yaad ayee thi………tum teek toh ho…………

At that time……………..

Muje jaldi brij se milna hoga…………

At the time………….

Balweer moves to the room………

Balweer:har baar toh kahetha tha ki mein kuch naseeb hoo kyon ki mere ghar mein hamesha ladikyaa……………ghar ki laxmi tere pass hay..

Vikram:toh wahi baat hay…………

Balweer:teek hay issbaar mere ghar mein warris hoga aur tere ghar mein beti hoga………….

Vikram:Bagwaan hamesha se tere suntha hay na

Balweer:ha vikky is bar bhi mere baat sunaya hay baghwaan ne…………….

Iss liye mere ghar mein potha diya………….

Aur who phool tere ghar mein de dhi…………..

Payal and rakhi are still talking……….

payal:achha bol tere sham kaise hay…………

payal:…mera sham……………bahut hi achaa hay………..

rakhi:mein jaanti hoon payal…..tum yug ko dekhna chahtein ho na…….

Payal:ha rakhi aur tum vrinda ko………..

Rakhi:teek tere mano kamna bahut jald poore hone wala hay….

Payal:kya baat hay rakhi……..

Rakhi:haa is bar poonam chaturti par yug ara ha hay….wada kiya hay usne……………….who jaroor ayaga………………..

Payal:toh isbar mein tumari mano kamna poori karungi………..vrinda bhi arahe hay………….

At that time some weird person is shown…….

Istalkingto some village peoples….

Kab tak hame iss vikram singh rathod ki hukumatt chalane denge……………..dushman………….

Kya dushmani hay.parampara………..sb kuch hay……….kahi ,mokhe aye hay……..par eh do log ek doosre ki dushmann hay ………lekin kabhi bhi warr nahi kar rahe hay………………….

Other weird personJaldi kuch karna hoga warna ek din iss dushmani ki aag mitgayee toh hamara raajya hamere haat se chala jayega………..

One personBas vikram simgh rathod ki kamzoori hamere haat lag jaye…….

Other person:kamzoori hay….who kamzoori kuch hi din mein yeha chalkar are rahi hay………….

Kya aur usee din…….balweer ka sabse bada sahara bhi araha hay…………

Ky aaraha hay……………

Dadabeer ki pota……aur vikram singh rathod ki pothi…………………

At that time a old person……………..

Is at mandir…..

He is called rana kaka………….

He is said…….

He sees at Krishna and radha ……….idols…..

Krishna:kya kana tuje kabhi apne radha ke pass jaane ka mann nahi kartha hay…….lekin kahi tum bhi darthe hoo……ki agar tu chala gaya toh iss doo logonki sardaar tuje dand na de…………….

Kyon kana……………

At that time a voice overhears……….

Kyonki samay ki chakra vyou…….badalthi hay……….aur har disha ki saath hawa ka rukh bhi badal jaate hay………..jis tarah poorani paani nayee pani ki jagah lethe hay……ussee tarah hamesha ethihaas kudh ko dorathe hay………..

Samay ka yeh sama bata degi inn logon ko………..

Ki kana ka khel shuru ho chuki hay……………

Graha badal raha hay….waqt badal gayee.hay

Iss do jahan no ki kismat badal ne wali hay………….

Aur who maseera ane wali hay……….

And he sees vikram singh rathod………and dada beer…………

Tum dono bahut ladiiee kee na ab ladoo ladai

Pyarr se………..

Kyon ki pyarr ke taaqat nafrat ke jahan se………sama mein bhi kushboo hay……….

Mehek the hay………….

At that time…………vrinda and yug was shown…….

A back ground song…..

Tuje se mere jeena hay….

Tujse mere marna hay……..

Tere bin kaise jeeyo mein

Har pal ek din mein marjaoo…

Tere bin…..tere bin…..

Nayee lagtha …………….

Tujsang preetlagaii sajna…

Preet yeh yeh preet

Na dekhte darm na yug………….

Iss darthe se ansaam tak

Yeh to puchtee hay……

Jal se pavirit…………..dil se k duwa……..

Tere bin na jeeyo…..kaise

Tuj sang preet lagee sajna…………..

Nafrat ke yeh kaise aag………..

Lagiee ne khudarat ne

Nafrat jaha se yeh par

Do dil ke ek jaan………

Ladine hay koi nayee jung is pyarr ki manzil ko……

And at the time yug meets brij…

Yug:kya baat hay brij.tum bahut parishaanho……..

Brij:jis baat ka darr hay wahi huwa hay………………yeh ki maya ne tere bauji se kaha hay ke tum delhi mein hoo………aur musibat mein ho……… is liye

Yug:isliye kahi bauji…….delhi…….

Brij:ha yug tume jalde se jald wapas narayan ghad jaana hoga……….warna anjaam bahut boora hoga…..pata nahi maya kis hard tak tere baat kahe hogi tere bare mein…………..

Yug:yehi toh mein chahta hoo……

Brij:yug tum teek toh ho….are mein tumara

Problem ki baremein socha tha hay,,,,,,,,

Yug:ha brij muje maya ko confess karne hay…….

Kisi bhi haal mein muje….maya ko saari sach batani hay………..

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srilu

@srilu_123

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

pls send comments
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srilu

@srilu_123

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Part 34

Yug came back to the room…………………..

He takes the chunery he remembers yug

Bas kuch hi din hay vrinda……………

Phir mein ……

He gets a call……..

He picks the call………..

And says babhi maa…………….

Rakhi:kya baat hay yug….bahut kush dikh rahe hoo …………..

Yug :ha bua ma aap ke liye ek surprise hay………….

Rakhi:bataoo kya surprise hay…………..

Yug:nahi buamaa……ane ki baad bataunga……….

And he cuts the phone…

He gets maya's phone……

Yug:ha maya.

Maya:kya baat hay yug tum muje avoid kar rahe hoo………..

Yug:mein pehle yaisa tha………..

Us din mein ne sirf papa ke baat rakne ke liye yeh baat kahe hi hay…….lekin zindagi bar iss bojh ko mein apne saath nahi rak saktha maya……is liye mein tujse baat karna chahtein hoon…………….

Maya:yug tum jaantehoo ki mein tujse…….

Yug:hamera dosti ko pyarr ki naam leni ke galat fameee tuje yeh maya………lekin muje nahi………mein ne sirf papa ke liye…..

Maya:aba kya huwa yug

Yug:ab muje mere manzil mil gayee…………………..

Maya:yeh kyon nahi kehtee yug ke vrinda tere zindagi mein ayee yug,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Yug:h maya mein vrinda se pyarr karthe hoo…maya……….

Maya:aur agar tuje mujse shadi karne pade toh……..

Yug:toh mein mar juunga……….kyonki vrinda ke bina mein jee nahi saktha …………………

Maya:she cuts the phone……

Mein bhi dekh tha hoo yug tuu yeh rishta kaise rakoogi………….

At she angrily phones to someone………

Vrinda in meantime………………….

She is praying to god…………

Her Krishna…………………………

Krishna:pata nahi kanaa jab me mein y\ug ko dekhta hoo….ki aisa lagtha hayki who mere liye banaya hey…………..aur mein uske liye…………….

Mein do din mein apne ghar jaa rahi hoon………..

Narayan ghad…………….

Apno ke pass ja raha hoo,,,,,,,,,,itne saalonki baad……………lekin………..mann me darr sa lagtha hay kanna…………tu mera saath har kadam par saath dena ……….kana…………..

Uditi patang jaisa yeh mere dil hay……………

Tere wore keech thi mere jahan

Tu jaha hay waha mere duniya

Yeh baat tumse har haal mein kehana

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna……..

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna……………..

Radha kanaa,………ki jodi……..hay

Har janam ke saathi hay

Mushkil raasthe ………….mushkil rahee……….

Phir bhi chalna saath saath mein

Nafraat ke iss dilo ko mitake

Pyarr ke taraf banana kadam

Yeh toh kahani…..hay

Tuj sang preet lagaii sajna

Vrinda close her eyes………….

And group of people talking to themselves……

And few people met some weird person…….

Sab kuch plan ke mutabit chal rahe he na,,,,,,,

Dekho…………..kisi ko iss baat tak badang nahi hona hay………ki iss sab ke peeche .hamera saab ji saath hay…………….

And a person is shown…….

He is in disguise……….

A two person……..brought by few people….

Sabji:opens his eyes

One of the weird person….

Sabji dekhyee in do log ko.parampara thode ne ke bare mein baat kar rahe they…………..

Sabji:kya kiya ino mein…….

Sabji yeh divakar yeh.aur yeh narayan hay…dono bhai hay…….

Iska baap ne in do no log ke naam par zameen ……..chod dhi………

Bees saal purana hay………

Ek issa ustaraf aur dosra issa istaraf…………..

In dono bhaii ko ek ko narayan ghad ki zameen aur dosri ko vijaya ghad ke zameen…………….

Hamera kanoon ke issaf chale rahe they,……….

Likin ab yeh dono ek hona chahtein hay…………..

One oftheperson………sabji…hampar reham kijiye…..hamare maa chahete hay……

Ki hum ek saath rahe…………

Sabji:aaj tu kal poora gawn………toh ek din vikram rathod aur balweer bhi………………is ke dushmini bhi katam……………..

Is liye and he kills one of the person…….

And other also be killed…………..

And sabji orders……..

Sab ko ek kabar phelo ki dono bhai ne ek doosri ki hatya ki.aur es kokamse kam das dino tak hawa de dethe rehna……………

And the sabji………………goes from there..

The old person.kaka….again says to kana………

Yeh kya ho rahe hay kana………..

Who log dushmani bade imandar se nibhara he hay………lekin saath saath ek assthin ka saap paal rahe hay………jo ek din unee dal degi……

Rohoo…….kana iss anardh ko rokh……..

Ho sakth ahay jagada rukh sakth hay……

Par eh log unee rukh ne nahi dengena…….

Unee hawa denge………

Kuch karoo kana……………………..

Kuch karoo kana………………..

At the time yug is preparing to come home…………

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Sadaf

@sadaf.12

Senior Member

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

really gud update hun... liked the convo between yug n maya...!LOL maya is gonna turn evil aint she? plz update soon! <3

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Goldie

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Thanks 4 the update. The story is progressing really well. Looking forward 2 ur next.😊

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srilu

@srilu_123

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Part 35

Maya in her room………..

Yug tum chahe mujse door jitna bhag na chahete hoo………utna baag sakthe hoo…………

Lekin mere zindagi ki maksat tume pana hay…..

Aur mein paake rahungi…..iskeliye muje kuch bhi karna pade ……..

Mein kar luungi……..

Meantime rakhi is preparing food in the kitchen…………

She is very busy…..in preparing daal roti…………..

And also kheer……….

Kya baat hay ………….gayatri comes……

Badi acchi khusboo are rahi.hay

Rajeshwari also preparing something in kitchen……

Kyon nahi.is ghar ka ladla jo wapas ara raha hay…………

Rakhi:ha maa.itne saalooki baad yug wapas araha hay…..usko dekhne ke liye ankheen taras gayee hay……………itne saal ki baad…………..

Govind kaka……….chamia…….she calls servant..

Mahesh comes in……….

At that time balraaj is in his room…infront of photograph…………

And a young boy's photograph resembling yug…………………

Yug:tera intezaar hay……………..

Jab tu paida huwa….tha yesa laga asmaan mein bahut barish huwa…….lekin shubh sankeet sab ne kaisa jab gokul mein krishan aya tha yesi hi……huwa tha………..tu hastha haytoh aisa lagtha hay…ki duniya chalthe hay us par………bas aaj toh……………….jaldi se apne dadabeer ke pass aja…toh………….vijaya ghad tere raah dekh rahi hay…….

Brij and karan also prepare to leave…….

Yaar mein ne suna..waha tumara dada beer ke baat chalthi hay……….

Yug:ha…..dadabeer …..ke hukumat chalthe hay……waha hamere family ke jyada respect hay……

Karan:ha paisa wale jo hay………

Yug:dadabeer waha ki sher hay…………

And they smile………….

Yug…………isbaar uska pota akele nahi uske saathuske manzil aur pyarr ko leraha hay……….

Shit…..muje laga mein vrinda ko apne saath……….gawn mein.le jaasakthi ………

Lekin usse apne ghar jaana hay…….ab usse dekhne ke bin jeyoo kaise……………

A background…..song

Rishte diloki jud jaate hay

Pyar ka naam hay ……..

Jaage jaage soye soye…….hum hay

Tujsang preet lagayee sajna…………….

And he remembers the song………………..

Pehle nazar ko salam………………

And he keeps the red chunery into the bag…………

A girl shown in front of mirror…..

Veera:oh veera……kaha hay tu…called by rajeshwari…..

A girl is shown…

Veera:mama aap chilla kyon rahe hay………………..

Mein jaanta hoo ma….is ghar ka sab se ladla araraha hay…….aur sab tayari mein busy hay..mein kya karoon…apne bhai ke bare mein aisa sochiti hay…………….

Veera:mein apke ladle beta ko kuch nahi kaha hay……..

At that time phone rings ……

Everyone are shouting rakhi lifts the phone……..

On the other line is shilpa……..

Shilpa:bua kaie hay aap………

Rakhi:shilpa…..kaise hay tu……….

Shilpa:toh bua yug araha hay……………..mein usse milna chahete hoo…..mein kuch hi dino mein ussee milne ke liye …..ararahi hoon………

And she keeps the phone……..

Rakhi:is ladki ko sab se jyada jaldi hay…………….

Are mein toh bhuli gayee sab se jyada tayari karne hay…………………

On the other hand………….

Vrinda is also packing…………….

Pooja and mahi are also packing bags………….

Pooja:vrinda……..muje tumari jagah ajeeb lagtha hay………..

Vrinda:dekho ab tak tumne hamere log se mila nahi…..tum abse darthi hoo…………mere family se milogi toh pagal ho jayugi……………….

Vikram singh rathod…………hawa bhi narayan ghad mein chalna hay…….who mere dadu se pooch kar chal thi hay……….

Aur mere dadi……..avanti rathod……jaisa pati…….ulta unke patne……..kabhi bhi …..dadu ki baat nahi dalthi hay…………..

Aur mere papa……………..aditya rathod……business samalthe hay………….

Aur nikala mera mama a har maa ke tarah hay

Aur mere do bhai..

Ek hay gourav aur dosra samay…………….dono papa ki isshaar o pe chalta hay….aur bhabi toh mere favourite hay……………

Mukesh chachu seedi hay….lekin mandira chachi…….kamandi hay……………..

Aur kali toh bilkul bachii ki tarah hay………

Aur lekin mere favourite toh subh bhaiyaa America mein hay……………….

Aur ghar mein mere favourite toh payal chachi hay……..

Iske saath ghar mein naukar………….sab log……lekin muje delhi acche lagthi hay………………….

Ab chale………..

And she forgots something…………

She opens the door….she sees the gift………..

She remembers………..yug…………………………

Background song……………….

Rishthe diloke….

Pyar dil ka……………………

Jaage jaage soyee soyee……….

Tuje sang preet lagaii sajna……………..

Pehle nazar ko salaam……………….

Yug tujse door itne din kaise rahoongi mein…………………………bahut yaad ayagi tere……………….

In meantime………..a weird person…………………….

He with his peoples……………………………..

Kya baat hay vinay babu…………kis soch mein doobe aap………………………….

Are aap toh sabji ka beta hay…………..

Vinay:a person………….

Are mein ne suna………hay ke ……………vikram singh rathod ke pothi arahi hay……………….

One person:aa……………vrinda…….naam hay uska…….

Vinay:vrinda……………….suna hay Sundar hay………..

Other person:haa chote sabji bahut sundar …………

Vinay:toh muje usse milna padega………….

Pooja:kitne ghante ke safar hay………………….

Vrinda:are ab tak isse bus par chada nahi……………absi se shuru…………………….

Ha chalo vrinda narayan ghad tuje bhula rahi hay…………

On the other hand…………..

Yug also says…………………

Vijaya ghad……………….

Takdeer ka rashtha………

Mohabbat ka daastha……………………

Do alag raasthe…………..

Par ek manzil…………….

Vijayaghad ke milestone is shown………………….where yug ………….

And narayan ghad…mile stone and vrinda is shown……………….

And also mandir…………..Krishna and radha…………….s idols……………..

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srilu

@srilu_123

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

hai
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Presadhi

@Binky

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

love the update hun please do continue that to soon cos cant wait to read the next part😃

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srilu

@srilu_123

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Part 36

A girl is dancing round…………..

A boy comes to her…….

They put their hands together

And they start dance……………..

And suddenly winds blow…………

And huge strom comes and takes them a part…………

Suddenly the boy falls……the girl comes to them and screams ………..as yug…………..

On the other hand the girl falls and the boy also screams ……….vrinda………..

Suddenly vrinda wakes up with a scream……..yug…….

She sees around………as she is at hostel……….

She calls to yug…….but his phone is switched off………………

Yeh kya tha….kyon aaj kal jabv se muje gawn jane ke baat se itne darr lagthe hay…….

She moves to the cup board………she sees the doll…………

Vrinda:yug.pata nahi mann bahut bechainn hay……………..pata nahii kya karoon………

She remembers yug 's words………….

Yug:vrinda…………jab tum parishaan hoo…..toh apne ankheen band karoo.aur uss insaan ka chehra yaad karo jisse tum issduniya mein sab se jyada pyarr karthe hoo……….phir dekhna……….tumri bechainne dor hojayage…………….

Yeh wada hay…………………..

Vrinda close her eyes.she remembers yug………………

Vrinda:yug sirf tera chehra muje har takleef se bachti hay.jab tak tere pyar ke taaqat hay………..muje kuch honahi saktha hay…………..yug………….

On the other hand suddenly yug also wakes up…………

Yug:kya baat hay muje eisa lagaa ki vrinda ne muje yaad kiya…….and he goes to the cupboard……..he opens and takes the cloth………….he sees phone………who shit mein ne ….charging rakna hi bhool gayee……………..

Aur muje subha hi vrinda ko call karne hay……

He sees at moon……………………

Yug :vrinda…………muje iss baat ka fikar tumareliye hay…………..pyar ke kadam humne badayee hay……..dil ke raasthe mein chalna shuru kiya hay………………….lekin judaai se darr lagtha hay……….vrinda..kyonki yug vrinda ke bina nayee reha saktha hay………..eh sach hay……………..

Har janam mein mangtha hoo tujse rab se

Tum mere jeene ki wajah hoo……………….

Tere saath mere zindagi ki manzil hay…………….

Tujse hay mere bandigi……………..

Mere wadaa hay har kaadam par jab tum mud kar dekhogi muje paugi……….

Mere saas sayaa banke tere saath hamesha rahege……………..

At that time banaran lady starts her song………..

Saasonne ek tuje se waada kiya………

Kabhi bhi judaai na hone kaa………………….

Ek kasam de diya…….

Par tab kya hoga……………..inka…………..

Jeewan mein zindagi jab nayee mood lege…………….

Kya ek nayaa eithaas likegi yeh prem kahani…………………the ane wali har peedi iss mohabbat ko kahani banake sab ko sunayega,,,,,,,,,

Ya dum thod degi yeh prem kahani………iss nafarat ke afsaanoo ki………….

Jo……………diwaar banke ……khade hay……inoo do jahan pe……………….

Lekin milna hay unne…………………….

Kyonki issbaar kane ko apne radha se milne se koi nahii rokh saktha……………..

Yug wakes in the morning……..

And he gets ready………………to leave for station……

On the other hand………………

Vrinda also goes to the station………………….

They move into the train………………..

They sit in different compartments……………….

But both are aware of ths fact that they are in same train………………

Yug:vrinda kha hoo…………..tumne mere phone nayee…………..utaya..kyon…………….

On the other hand……….

Vrinda:yug kya baat hay tumne mere call ka jawaab nahii diya………………..

All are enjoying the journey…………….

Vrinda in meantime looking from the door………….

Pehle nazar ko salam…………….

Yaar tera pehle nazaar ko salaam………

Dil se lagane wali rasthee pe shukriya……………………

Ab bas kuch gante………….

Phir dekhna…………………..bas ekbaar ghar jayoo……phir koi na koi bahan a banake muje wapas delhi jaana padega…………lekin delhi jaoo kaise kyonki vrinda bhi apne ghar wapas jaarahe hay……………..

He suddenly gets phone……….

He sees vrinda's number….he jumps with happiness…………….

Yug:ha vrinda……….

Vrinda:yug…kya baat hay.tum mere call ka jawaab nahi diya………..

Yug:who mere phone ka battery low tha is liye….switched off….aur charge kiya toh ghadi ke liye late huwa…..accha vrinda mein toh poochana bhool gaye…….tera place kaha hay…matlab mera hone wala sasuraal kaha hay….

Vrinda:yug waise bhi yeh sawaal mera hay……………lekin tumne muje poocha hay toh meinbataungi ki tera sasural aur mera myaka……….hay……..suddenly somebody dashes yug and phone slipsfrom his hand…..he picks ……and vrinda…………

Yug:who sorry vrinda kisne dakka diya tha aur mera haath se phone gir gaya hay…………………sorry

Vrinda:accha…………kyonna kuch mazaak karoo…..

Yug:ha vrinda…….bolna tere ghar kaha hay………….

Vrinda:ghar ka pata itne asani se nahii milage mr yug…dhoodna padega….

Yug:achaa yeh baat hay..kya mein isse chunouti samaju……….

Vrinda:tum jo chahe samajlo…chahe chunauti ya.pariskha……………………lekin tume ismein pass honi hay……….

Yug:ab exam yeh who bhi pyar ka …………hum har chunauti keliye tayarr hay……………….lekin balike….yeh baataoo…….hame inaam kya milega………by twirling his eyes……………

Vrinda:agar tum chahte hooo…ki jo chehe who milega who kahungi tum badi galatfami mein hoo….vrind aphass ne walomein nahii hay……….

Yug:ha phasa ne wallo mein……jis tara se muje phasa diya hay………….apne pyar mein……

Vrinda:accha toh saara khasoor mera hay,……….tu toh dhood peete bachee hona…………….

Muje tujse koi baat nahii karne hay………and she puts phone in anger,………………

Yug:waise gussa jyada karthe hay……aur gussa mein bahut pyari dikhti hay………………..

And he smiles

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