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hai everyone ..
my name is Sri
iam starting a new FF named Tere Liyee
i love TSPLS very much but when vrinda married to Raj it is like humdilde chuke sanam if it continues
then it is going to be so boring.....
so i want to write my own ....
my new one hope guys enjoy a lot.....
it is a typical TSPLS......but still i hope u enjoy
i welcome all the comments and praises .....
because without that i cannot move onnn...
but pls encourage me for this.....
due to some reasons i divided the story into parts
the details are given below:
part 1-------page 1
part 2- part 5-------- page 10
part 6-part 13 -------page 11
part 14-16 -----------page 12
part 18-part 19-----page 3
part 20-part 21 ----page 4
part 22-part 23---page 5
part 24 --part 25----page 6
part 26-------page 7
part 27 ---page 8
part 28-part 30---page 9
part 31--------page 10
the details are given below:
part 1-------page 1
part 2- part 5-------- page 10
part 6-part 13 -------page 11
part 14-16 -----------page 12
part 18-part 19-----page 3
part 20-part 21 ----page 4
part 22-part 23---page 5
part 24 --part 25----page 6
part 26-------page 7
part 27 ---page 8
part 28-part 30---page 9
part 31--------page 10
my concept;
the theme
Tere liye mein har had paar karunga
Tere pyarr ke liye mein is jaga se kya aur
jag se ladunga
Tere liye bagwaan se bi lad jaayunga
Tere pyarr ke liye mein har bhandhan thodunga
Tere ishq mein kudh ko bhool jaakar mein fana hoo jaaunga
Tere liye har jakhm ko kushi kushi lelunge
Tere saath ke liye zindagi ki har imthaan ke gujar loonga...
Bus tere liye tere liyeee......
mout bhi ajaye phi r bhi tere liye ek aur baar janam loonga tuje paane ke liye hazaaro mout maangloonga........
sirf tere liyee......
a song is played
kabhi haste hai
kabhi roote hai
pyaar karle wale
dewaane hote hai-2
huwa...
chale haa rahe
yeh jaga bhagwan banaya hai
dil ko banaye hai
phir pyarr ko banaya hai
phool banaya hai
bhawree banaya hai...
parwat,moor,sab banaye hai par ek cheees nahi banaye hai usne socha are kuch cheesein insaan ko bhi banade ho sakta hai woh mujse bada cheesein banade ga
par insaan nebhagwan se ekkadam aage nikaal kar
pyar ki jage nafrat ko payada kiya joo pyar se bahut taqat hai
agar pyarr banate hai too nafrat sab kuch loot tha hai...sab kuch
pyarr jeene ka naam hai nafrat marne ka ...
dekth hai is kahani mein pyar ki jeet ho yaa nafrat kee.....
TWO VILLAGES NAME D VIJAYA GHAD AND NARAYANA GHAD
CAST:
BALRAAJ TAKUR:HEAD OF A VILLAGE
HE IS THE MASTER OF ALL, VERY PROTECTIVE,LOVE HIS FAMILY,BUTLOVE HISPRIDE AND ALWAYS CALLED ASMUKYA OF THE VILLAGE NAMED VIJAYA GADH......
GAYATRI TAKUR:TYPICAL AND TRADITIONAL WIFE OF BALRAAJ FAMILY COMES FIRST FOR HERLOVES HIS SONS DAUGHTERS AND ALSO DAUGHTER IN LAWS SHE IS FONDER OF GOD...
MAHESH TAKUR:ELDER SON OF BALRAAJ FOLLOWS HIS FATHER FOOT STEPS AND NEVER DISOBEYS HIS FATHER WORDS SEE ALL THE LANDS ...
VIJAY TAKUR:SECOND SON LIKES HIS FATHER
BUT HIS CONCENTRATION ON THE ENEMY SHIP WITH THE OTHER VILLAGE..
VISHAL TAKUR:SMALL OF ALL BUT HE STRICTLY BELIVES IN LOVE HE WILL BE NETRUAL,NOR POSITIVE NOR NEGITIVE....
RAJESHWARI TAKUR:WIFEOF MAHESH AND A OBEYABLE WIFE.. A TYPICAL PUNJABI LADY
URVASI:SHE IS WIFE OF VIJAY SHE IS GOOD
RAGANI:LOVABLE WIFE OF VISHAL VISHAL HAD MARRIED WITH LOVE AND ALWAYS LOVE BLOSSOMMED IN THEM.....
MAHESH HAS 2 DAUGHTERS SHILPA AND VEERA IN WHICH SHILPA IS MARRIED .....WHERE AS VEERA IS NOT MARRIED
VIJAY TAKUR HAS ONE SON AND ONE DAUGHTER
WHERE AS VISHAL HAS ONE SON AND DAUGHTER..
WHERE AS MAHESH AS ONE SON AND HE IS THE HERO HIS NAME IS YOGISH TAKUR AND EVERYBODY CALLS HIM LOVELY "YUG"
AND TWO DAUGHTERS OF BALRAAJ TAKUR ARE
MEERA AND RAAKHI IN WHICH RAAKI HAD BECAME WIDOW AND THIS IS THE REASON FOR ENEMYSHIP........
SECOND FAMILY WHICH ARE RATHODS......
THEY ARE TYPICAL RAJASTHAN'S FAMILY...
BORN RICH....
VIKRAM SINGH RATHOD:HEAD OF THE FAMILY
TRADITIONAL,ANGRILY,PRIDE,RICH AND DO ANYTHING FORFAMILY BUT STRICT AGANIST HIS WORDS..
AVANTI RATHOD:SHE IS WIFE OF VIKRAM OBEYS HIS WORDS ANDTYPICAL WIFE SHE FOLLOWSTRADTIONS...
ADITYA RATHOD:ELDER SON OF VIKRAM FOLLOWS THE FATHER STEPS AND NEVER GOES AGANIST HIM HE SEES ALL THE BUSSINESS EXPANSIONS..ALWAYS
MUKESH:SECOND SON OF VIKRAM FOLLOWS HIS BROTHER BUT OBEYS HIS FATHE R HE IS FIRST TO DEFEND HIS ENEMY AS HE LOST HIS SMALL BROTHER IN FRONT OF THENEYES
AMAN:SMALL BUT DIED AS THE REASON THE ENEMY CONTI.....
NIKALA RATHOD:WIFE OF ADITYA TYPICAL HOUSE WIFE SHE MANAGES ALL THE FAMILY
MANDIRA :WIFE OF MUKESH PRIDE OF BEING RICH SHE DOEN'T CARE ANYONE...
PAYAL"WIDOW OF AMAN BUT EVERYONE SEES AS A DAUGHTER SHE IS SO CLOSE TO THE TITLE CHARCTER.....
ADITYA HAS 2 SONS SAMAY AND GOURAV IN THAT GORAV IS MARRIED TO SHILPA ...WHO IS VERY KIND AT HEART
WHER E AS MUKESH HAS ONE DAUGHTER KALI SON MAYUR WHERE AS AMAN HAS ONE SON IS SHUBH.....
AND ADITYA HAS ONLY ONE DAUGHTER WHO HAS SEEMED TO BE GOD 'S GIFT TO THE FAMILY AS SHE IS THE CALLED AS GODDESS OF LAXMI AND MY TITLE HEROINE CHARCTER NAMED
VRINDA SINGH RATHOD.....
YOGESH TAKUR(YUG):A KIND HEARTED TYPICAL
HERO TYPE GUY LIKES TO PRAY PRANKS ON OTHER HAS A FLUTE IN HIS HAND HE IS KRISHNA OF HIS FAMILY AS RAAKI HIS BUA LOVES HIM MUCH AS RAJESHWARI...
SO HE IS KAANA OF THE BOTH AND HE PLAYS FLUTE AS KRISHNA .........
VRINDA SINGH RATHOD:A TYPICAL INDIAN GIRL BEINGA FROMA TRADITIONALFAMILY EVEN THOUGH SHE IS MODERN BUT VALUES AR E TRADITIONAL...SHE LIKES TO ENJOY EACH AND EVERY PART OF LIFE AND SHE IS LIKE BUTTERFLY , PURE FLOWER AND HOLY WATER....
SHE LIKES TO DANCE......ALWAYS DANCE......
THE TWO PLACES ARE SEPARATED BY A POND AND A GARDEN AND A TEMPLE AS USUAL ALL ARE SHARED ......
DUE TO THE ENEMYSHIP THE TWO CHARCTERS ARE AWAY FROM THEIR PLACES NOT IN ABROAD EXACTLY........
BUT THEY ARE AWAY FROM THEIR HOMES WHERE YUG IS DOING HIS STUDIES AT MUMBAI
COLLEGE OF ARTS AND SCIENCES
WHERE VRINDA IS AT DELHI FINE ARTS AND SCIENCES.....
QUESTION IS HOW THEY MEET
HOW WILL THEY UNITE
THISIS THE MAGI C OF LOVE
THIS IS THE GAME OF DESTINY........
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