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Sorry I took so long to unreserve😳
Anyway, on to the update😃
He always forgets his towel?😆 I love the part where Heer is sarcastic in the beginning about him needing help changing. I love their relationship =)
Aww I love Tauras! He's so cute! reminds me of my doggy kinda😆 Where was I? Oh yeah! Aww so sweet. he wished her first? I love how he tells her how he does care about her and everything.
Aww he lost his lucky charm? I love how Heer tells him it wasn't his lucky charm cuz well, it isn't. Unfortunately the poor boy's in denial. I loved this part: "Prem..." I spoke softly. "You know that the charm is within you and that your charm, which is to always stand up for friends is the luck for you. You don't need some stupid lucky charm. You know that you are the luck and you, yourself are the charm." Heer knows just what to say
Yeh Sanjana kaha se agayi?!😡 Iski toh main......*tries to calm down* Me no like her! Can I please poke her with toothpicks?
Poor Heer. That must've hurt. And it must've been hard to keep those tears back. Why couldn't Prem go to the Heer instead? I mean, Heer was there at the game, not her! Heer was there when he was freaking out. Urgh! And the nerve of that girl, smirking at Heer.
Honestly I feel so bad for Heer. That last bit had tears coming out of my eyes...The way you wrote it, I can totally feel her pain
Shifali, you're an amazing writer! I love this FF of yours. Can't wait to read the next part.
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