SP Fanfic: Dostana - part 12 on p17 {10.05.09} - Page 4

Originally posted by: judyp

Great part, enjoy NS meeting, scenery description was very good.. Keep it up..

Look how far you have progress as a writer from 1 FF to 2 FF .

 

 

Reena behen.. meri jaan..

i just loved the update.. it was mindblowing..

i loved each bit of detail that you portray....

u are such an amazing and gifted writer... you write so well.. loved it...

Neel the lazy messy one.. Nahar the opposite of Neel.. hehe...

Saloni thought he was married.. so now her path has cleared.. lol.. oopsie.. she haven't met Neel..

Nahar felt some tingles.. aww.. sweet cute..

loved it so much reena...

continue when you have the chance..

luv u

your beloved dost😛
shobby

reena di, where's the next parttt .. can't waittt xD

Originally posted by: xmanisha

reena di, where's the next parttt .. can't waittt xD

Originally posted by: jaanlover

 

Hey Manisha

 

I was not feeling well yesterday so I couldn't update...but I will work tonight on the new part and

I promise that I will post the new update on Tuesday.

 

Sorry dear

 

Lots of love

Aapki Reena di

Originally posted by: jaanlover

 

Hey Manisha

 

I was not feeling well yesterday so I couldn't update...but I will work tonight on the new part and

I promise that I will post the new update on Tuesday.

 

Sorry dear

 

Lots of love

Aapki Reena di

no wonder I didn't c u.
get well soon reena.. take ur time..
pls eat, take medicine on time and loads of rest..

luv u,

tumhari dosti,
shobby😛

Originally posted by: ramas

great part reena keep it up.

Originally posted by: shobbybee

Reena behen.. meri jaan..
i just loved the update.. it was mindblowing..
i loved each bit of detail that you portray....
u are such an amazing and gifted writer... you write so well.. loved it...
Neel the lazy messy one.. Nahar the opposite of Neel.. hehe...
Saloni thought he was married.. so now her path has cleared.. lol.. oopsie.. she haven't met Neel..
Nahar felt some tingles.. aww.. sweet cute..
loved it so much reena...

continue when you have the chance..

luv u
your beloved dost😛
shobby

Originally posted by: jaanlover

 

Thank you so much jaanu...your comments are always so sweet, kind and warm

I'm glad you loved it.

well I'm not a great writer...but I try my level best to write a nice story for you all 😳 😳

 

I will update really soon jaanu

Love you very much

Aapki dost Reena

reena dearest..😛

you are most welcomed =)

take your time reena..
pls take good care of urself.. take loads of rest..
get well soon..
hope you are doin good now..

luv ya.

I will post the next part tomorrow in the moring because I get the whole time error message when I try to post the new part