FF: Life without u.....Tum Bin.....UpDt....... Pg5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello everyone...............😃
Here's presenting to all of u a FF written by me................I'll soon update the first part..............😃
The plot-- Ranbeer and Rano separate...............Thanx to Preet behenji...............Next the stor takes a five year leap..............and begins RR's journey of...............hatred..............love.............tears...............joy............revenge..............and lots more.................😊
Tell me how u all like the idea................and if u want me to continue or not......................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sweety i love ur plot ^^
keep it up plz ^^
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy i like your idea please continue...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Cool Plot 😃
Can't wait to read it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey interesting plot .... please continue. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sounds interesting. Can't wait to read it😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i like it 😊 can't wait to read it 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx guys for such an overwhelming response...................😊
Part--1

It had been five years………………since Ranbeer and Rano had parted ways………….five long years since Ranbeer had lost his love at his own hands………….five years since he had lost everything and everyone he had ever cared for………………five eyars since he had left his house…………..left Derabassi…………….never looked back………………….and five years since he had lost beeji………………

Yes that was the final nail in the grave Ranbeer had created for himself…………..with his own hands…………..under the guidance of his elder sis…………who for her own selfish reaons…………had destroyed her younger brother's life…………..ruined his dreams………….who realized the same…………but knew it was late…………….for any kind of regrets……………….reason……………..she knew Ranbeer won't ever come back…………….she had trie it many a times…………….but in vain………….Ranbeer was admant………………

That day………………which was few days after RR had separated……………….Beeji who had come to know…………after she returned from the city……………….as to how Preeto had admisnistered her evil plans…………..and had separated them……………….Beeji was mad at her…………….and the two had a heated argument……………..while Ranbeer stood there…………..silently listening to both of them fighting……………later that day beeji had taken to bed…………….and a few days later……………….

She became quite ill…………….she was paralysed…………….and gone into coma………………after which she was sent to London along with Guddo for better health facilities and care………….

Ranbeer…………….all of a sudden felt alone………………..lonely……………..he soon realized he was done with his family…………..their hypocracy…………their thoughts……………..their mentalities…………and isliye……………..

At last Ranbeer made his decision…………….He decided to leave the town…………..leave Derabassi…………….He seemed to have had enough of it……………..inspite of his elder sis and bhabhis protesting Ranbeer left the house……………..promising his bhabhis………….he would keep in touch with them…………..

But he had some other plans………….he did not want to live anymore………….people he loved the most…………people he cared for the most…………..were no longer in his life………….he didn't feel like living at all………….the pain was immense…………..the loneliness……………the anguish………….were unbearable………….What could Ranbeer have done?.....................

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey really really nice update....when i read the first para I thought Biji died 😭 but Thank God she is London with Guddo.😃 Ranbir seems very heart-broken and why wouldnt he be !! He lost his love and thattoo beacuse of his sister.No wonder he is no mood to forgive Preeto. Keep it up...👏⭐️ One advice if you like......you can edit your subject line to convey that you have added a part.That way people will know you have updated the FF.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks a ton devashree................Glad u sent in such a nice analysis.............simply loved it dear.................and next time se I will mention the updated page number................Thanx for the suggestion dear..................Thank u once again.................

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