FF: Life without u.....Tum Bin.....UpDt....... Pg5 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx irika.................Glad u enjoyed it dear................Than u sooooooooo much dear..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx sweet4u..................Hope u continue to enjoy dear..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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And haan one thin more..................How did u all like my new avtaar?.................Kaisa laga?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx cute gurl...............glad u liked it dear..............Next part is going to come soon.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi everyone................Here's the next Part-- 2.................

Hope u all enjoy this one too..................

At last Ranbeer made his decision…………….He decided to leave the town…………..leave Derabassi…………….He seemed to have had enough of it……………..inspite of his elder sis and bhabhis protesting Ranbeer left the house……………..promising his bhabhis………….he would keep in touch with them…………..

But he had some other plans………….he did not want to live anymore………….people he loved the most…………people he cared for the most…………..were no longer in his life………….he didn't feel like living at all………….the pain was immense…………..the loneliness……………the anguish………….were unbearable………….What could Ranbeer have done?.....................

Ranbeer had decided to end his life…………….and would have done it…………………if that day Paarth had not been there…………..and saved him………..Ranbeer would have killed himself……………

Ranbeer opens his eyes…………….He is sitting in the garden of the backyard of the huge mansion he and Paarth along with his mom (Played by Harshad Chopra and Himani shivpuri in my FF)……………had shifted to last year…………..

He had tears in his eyes…………….he looks at the dial of the watch……………which he considered pricelessly precious……………afterall it was Rano's last nishaani he had…………….He holds it to his forehead………..closing his eyes he says-- Pata nahiin tum kaisi ho Rano…………….bas yehi umeed hai kii jahaan bhi ho…………….jiske saath bhi ho………….khush ho…………………Jaanti ho aaj London se phone aaya tha………….hospital se tha phone………..keh rahe the beeji theek ho gayi hain…………..aur kuch hii dinon mein wapas aa rahi hain………………..vo aur Guddo donon hii derabassi laut rahe hain………………Kya karoon Rano?..................

Ranbeer continues heaving a heavy sigh-- Naa chate hue bhi………….mujhe waapas uss ghar mein lautnaa hii hoga……………..beeji ki khaatir………………Shanno bhabhi bhi yehi chah rahi thi………………………..waise bhi unkii tabiyat kuch khaas theek nahiin hai……………aur jab unhein yeh pata chal gaya kii unke jaane ke baa kya hua…………………toh unhein bahot dukh hoga………………..isliy Paarth se keh kar kuch dinon ke liye jaana hii padega…………………

He says with a grim look on his face-- Tumhe toh kho hii chukaa hoon…………..abb…………….beeji ko nahiin khona chahta……………..nahiin khona chahta…………….

He closes his eyes…………..and tears roll down his cheeks……………

There someone who was listening to all this…………..comes upto him…………and puts a hand on his shoulder…………trying to console him………….like he had been doing for the past five years he had known him………………but in vain…………….and feeling helpless everytime he saw him just sooooooooooo alone in the higly successful world he had created around him………………

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Posted: 16 years ago
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love the next part even better!!

i could actually feel the emotions as i was reading
kya kahein!


WELL DONE INDEED!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well done i loved the part please continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey you included Harshad in it 😍
I liked this update a lot. Very emotional though i dont like that Ranbir is so sad.😭 Hope he meets Rano soon. 😃
Thanks for this...👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx cutegurl...............Glad u liked it that much dear..............And also that u liked this part even more than the previous one.............and haan u enjoyed every emotion I tried to convey..................Thanx once again............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx irika..............Glad liked this too dear................Next part coming weekend..............till then take care...........

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