Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)"The Concluding Part" pg. 99

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Kaise kahe hum.


"Pata hai Raj tum aaj bhi vaise hi ho jaise 3 saal pehle the." She said.

 

"Haan par jaise samay k saath sb badal jaata hai vaise mai bhi badal gaya hoon Naina aaj." He said combing his hair.

 

She became quite. Kuch der baad hum dekhte hain ki dono apni jagah par naashte ki table par baithe hain tabhi phone bajta hai. Naina uthai hai phone.

 

"Hello kaun?"

 

"Are hello Naina puttar kaise hai tu?" an old lady said.

 

"Paire panda mummy jee, kaise ho aap?" she asked.

 

"Jeete reh puttar , Raj kahan hai aur wahan sab theek hai na." she asked concerned.

 

"Sab theek hai yahan mummy jee aap fikar na karo . Ye lijiye" and she handed over the phone to Raj.

 

"Kaise hain mummy aap, paire paina?" Raj said.

 

"Mai acchi hoon puttar, par Naina ki awaaz ko kya hua? Tu us ka khayal to rakh raha hai na.?" she asked concerned.

 

Raj was silent. " Haan maa jaanta hoon , mai koshish karta hoon par," he couldn't continue.

 

"Beta samajh sakti hoon mai ki abhi tak tu Vaishali ko bhool nahi paaya hai par Naina bhi to teri zimmedari hai na ab? Agar is tarah se tu Naina ko apne aap se door rakhega to kab tak jee paayegi vo??"his mom asked.

 

"Hmm", it's all he could say only.

 

"Beta jitna gum hai tujhe Vaishali ko khona ka hume bhi hai aur Naina ko bhi hai, Naina ka gum hum sab se jyada hai beta par maine dekha hai us ko kitna chup chap rehti hai vo, tera har kaam karti hai bina kuch kahe. Par beta pyaar to saath rehne waale jaanwar se bhi ho jaata hai to Naina to fir bhi insaan hai na." she said.

 

?Pata hai maa, par mai nahi bhula paa raha hoon Vishu ko.? He said with teary eyes.

 

?Beta apna jee mat dukha , are mai to batana bhool hi gayi  batana tujhe kal ki Alekh aa raha hai vahan. Naina ko bata dena us ka dost hai na. Aaj yahan aaya tha milne hum sab sab se aur keh kar gaya ki kal vo vahan tere paas aayega mai us k haath se Karwa Chauth ka kuch saamaan bhej rahi hoon tu bata dena bahoo ko. Ek baat maanega meri?? she asked.

 

?Haan Kahiye maa.? He said quietly.

 

?Beta karwa hai kuch dino baad mai chahti hoon ki tu Naina ko ek saari dila la Karwa Chauth par.? His mom requested.

 

He was quite unsure weather he should say yes or not , fir bhi us ko laga maa ki baat kabhi maan leni chahiye maa kam se kam khush to ho jaayengi isi bahane. ?Theek hai maa, mai koshish karoonga.?

 

?Theek hai beta mai rakhti hoon phone ab.? His mom said.

 

?Theek hai maa, paire paina.? He said.

 

?Zinda reh?, and she hunged the phone.

 

Naina diwaal k peeche khadi ho kar ye saari baatein sun rahi thi aur roye jaa rahi ti.

 

Hello friends ye hai meri nayi fic jis ka naam hai , ?Kaise kahe hum?.

It?s my diwali gift to u all and I hope that u all will give it same response as all my fics and it will be a short fic which will finish till ?Bhaiya Dooj.?

Reply and give ur views about my this fic.

 

 

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suhana.dixit thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
dat was a nice start...but is dis fiction related to KMA or LRL? or something new ..by d way i liked the characters ...Is Vishu Raj's past?????
 
Do update soon n thanx for informingπŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey new fic!...yaya!!....nice part...lukin frwrd to dis new stry!...
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Posted: 15 years ago
story line  seems to be good
1 part is nice
update soon long asap.................
dreamer18 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
I am speechless!!
 
It is a briliant start!
 
So Naina and Raj are married. Their marriage seems to be an arranged one. Raj loves someone called Vrushali and something terrible has happened to her(Vrushali). Raj isnt even trying to save his marriage... sorry... try and make his marriage work with Naina. Aalekh and Naina are (best) friends.
 
This is what I have figured out from what I have read. Please correct me if I am wrong.
 
I love the story line! Cant wait to read more!!
 
Loads of Love,
❀️dreamer18❀️
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!!!!!!!gr8 begining............loved. it.....

one more ur collection......waiting to read ahead as urs r(fic)  always  awesome 1s

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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 begining
sounds too interesting
Raj and  Naina are married
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Too good!!!!
 
Naina kitni dukhi hai!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­Raj toh usse theek se baat bhi nahi karta!!!!!😑 πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘
 
Not again!!!😑 πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘Raj loves Vaishali and can't forget her and their marriage is a compromise!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
 
Kuch naya try kar leti!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Yeh plot bahut hi ghisa pita hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
 
I hate this concept of Raj's ex popping up everywhere!!!!😑 πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘
 
Raj thinks Naina is responsible for it!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
 
Karwa Chauth aane waala hai magar sab kuch uski maa ko bol bolke karwana padh raha hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 
 
Naina toh usse pyaar se baat karti hai magar Raj nahi!!!!!😑 πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘
 
Aalekh aa raha hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats great!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
-Anonymous11- thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
Hiiiiiiiiiiii VARTIKA  HOW R U ???????????
GOOD START  SOUND'S INTERRESTING CONTINUE SOON DEAR
KAHI YE VISHU RAJ KI GF TOH NAHI HAI NA I HOPE NOT ANYWAYS UPDATE SOON SWEETY
LOVE
DEEPA...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
SORRY PATA NAHI DO BAAR POST KAISE HO GAYA