JTJTYJNAA----pg 18 THE PLAN - Page 9

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me too, i will eagerly be waiting for u fascinating update.
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πŸ˜‰ hi ppl an update for u hope you lik it n i just hope it may wel help you a bit over com the depression ...................as we will be unable to watch prc again 😭

Veer n sumyukta meet

 

 

Mean while veer n gang wokeup ngot ready ''dharam was wearing a yellow suit with his over coat n''''''

Veer was in black grand embroidered neck, full sleeved kurkta with side tying n above his knees '''''' a same coloured embroidered belt ( cloth ) on the waist n black dhoti n a golden belt wit a sun's dolor was tied on his forehead ( sorry ppl I don't know wat is it exactly called ) '''..he was looking awesome lik every day but some thing differs today the air senses different today'''''..he thought'''''''

They had mata's darshan''''''n decided to go back but were lost some where in jungle''''..

Dharam : hum log toh phas gaye hain '''..

Veer : koi baat nahi ( in a clam voice ) hum sab rasta dhund lenge ''..

Pundeer: yeh jungle bohut Ghana hai aur khatarnaak bhi veer'''..yahan kayin saare daakuon ki toli bhi hai'''''.

But veer turns without warning turns his horse n rides it in the direction '''''''.. he didn't know y he was doing tht '''''''' they were entering deep jungle '''''.. his frds coming behind him calling but he felt as though he didn't mind '''''''''''. Somthn was pulling him like a magnet n he rides  straight '''''''''..rising speed '''.blowing his hair back leaning forward ''

.then he suddenly stops his horse ''''''.wait I had seen something'..he comes back n''''there was a beautiful garden  without a compound wall ''''.though''.

Veer: gets down so does his frds''

Sanjum: yeh kya hai.

Chand: aysa kyse ho sakta hai ''''' jungle mai bagicha vo bhi aysa ?.....................

Dharm : behtar hoga  agar hum andar naa jaaye veer'''..khatra hosakta hai'''

Veer: nahi hoga'.( in anxious voice ) he was sure wat ever it is ''' but this entry of his will not let him into trouble ''': chalo

N they all enter .it was beautifully maintained al around the long trees n bushes were there n all kinds of plants n flowers ''''

Veer: his heart rate was on its peak of pounding ''.he felt as though he was going to get something ''''''. Something very precious : tum log iss taraf jao mai ise taraf jaata hoon '''' ( indicating left n rt direction respectively) aur agar koi ensaan mile toh awaaz laga dena ''''' hum us se yahan se baahar nikalne ka raasta dhund lenge '''''

 Every one obeys him''''''''.

 

 

Ne ne sa sa sa re re re sa sa sa ''''''''''''.

 

N there enters Sumyukta from the main walking through '''wit her frds , surali n dozons of female syniks behind her '''''..she was feeling happy also after tht incident''''''she felt as though flowers are smiling at her '''..sumy smiling touches the flowers  on the bushes n runs '..laughing ''''..but wants to get rid of surali n soldiers ''''''.

Veer heard voice faintly n hides himself '''beside the other side of a thick bush from where he cannot c any thing ''''.

He hears a sweet n excited voice n has a boiling sensation in the pit of his stomach

Sumy: aaj toh , saare phool khil gaye hain, '''.(touching som)

Surali: kya hua '''.. kamre ma toh app badi udaas thi lakin  abb''''.

Chamki: sarcastically: hain . kyunki aaj ise iska rajkumaar milne waala hai''''.kyun ? tumhe koi eetaraaz hai isse surali???>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Surali throws a sharp look ..............

Sumy: she never said this before '..dreaming though her was excited'..her eyes scanning : hamaara rajkumaar gode pe aayega aur ,,,,,,,,, aur humme ,yahan se bohut duur lejaayega , haamare rahoo mai phul hi phul bechayega ''''''.,aur .,aur agar ( narrowing her eyebrows n turning to them) hum usse, tare bhi tood lane ke liye kahenge na,,, toh vo hamaare liye leaayega ( raising her eyebrows excitedly) ''''''''..

Veer smiles at her innocence '''

Surali: teasingly: achaa''''.. Kahan'.kahan hai vo''''.

Sumy: points her hand at the horse n excitedly: vo dekho'''..,,, hammare rajkumaar aa gaya ''''..

Every body looks at it n she n her frds gets a chance n runs away''

She runs from veer's back he did not see her but her fragerence was unique''

Surali: arye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,yeh toh aap he  ka ghoda hai'.: looks back: yeh kahan chaligayi hain'.dhondo unhe''''.. kahin baahar na jaane paaye''''.

Veer smiles at this unknown girls cleverness n hiding goes in her direction

Chamki: ruko.toh sum'''''.

Sumy : hamaara naam mat lena ,yahan'''''..

Veer at last stands up n looks aroud ''.4 girls were there ''a girl was running n touching the flowers ''''''''. Laughing in her clinging voice n her anklets making wonderful noisewit her back on him .she goes to the tree n shakes it n flowers falls on her '''''''.

Stops n says''': Dekha, ek dakoo ke beti se, takraane ka anjaam ???( n laughs)

Veer watching at her intensity smiles ''..n starts going back to find his frds ''''.then only surali n sayniks comes so she runs ''''.runs into him '''. He turns to see the source of the noise '.she falls into his arms '''' there faces were very close ''''''..

 

Ni ni sa sa sa re re re sa sa sa sa

Ni ni ni sa sa sa re re re sa sa sa

 

Nisa nisa re ''..sa re sa re sa re ma rema re ma pa

Ni sa ni sa re sa re sa re ma re '''''''''

 

( sorry don't know exactly)

 

Sumy thought tht she was on ground so she closes her eyes ''''.. but feel's one arm on her waist n the other on her back . she feels as though she have got goose bumps in her stomach at the very thought 'she opens her eyes n finds tht she was holding a handsome guy with her one hand seized around his neck n the other on his shoulder''he had great brown eyes n attractive forehead showing tht he was brave, liberal and generous n he was tall n had great physique '''''''''' with help of which he can conquer the world '''.he had untidy brown hair but looking very cool n cute '''''.

 

He was the handsome n charming man she had ever seen'''''.n wit the intensity he was looking into her eyes a shiver ran through her.

 

Veer's pt of view'''''..

Veer was stunned , he felt as though he was in some fairyland , this grl is having the breathtaking beauty , the whole surrounding has become airless al of a sudden ,it was as though she made the surrounding look more beautiful , she was the comlete vision of perfection ''''..

Veer lost in her large black eyes'''''.a shiver ran through him wen a sudden thought came to him " if I ll touch her she would go dirty"

 

Chamki: comes frm behind : sum'''''''.shera''''.

N looks at her who was still in veer's arms

Chamki: shouts : yeh kya kar rahe ho tum ?
veer: comes to halt n straightens her n himself

Chand, sunjum n dharam n her frds arrive

Chamki: pulls sumy back  as though veer was somting contameous  '.veers frds amused by seeing sumy'

Chamki: kya dekh rahe ho tum sab? (demanding) ( to veer) aur tum'''.tumhe toh mai nahi chodungi'..

Veer: calmly: dekhiye ''.maine kuch nahi kiya hai'.s

Chamki: tumne rise haath lagaya'(furiously )

Veer: desperately: nahi 'maine ,,,,toh bas'''..

Chamki : frustrated : aur tumhe kya ho gaya hai '''''''''..tum kuch kehti kyun nahi? ( looking at her)

Sumy : herself was shocked her mind went blank , she was not knowing how to react '.she simply looked at Chamki wit her mouth half open .

Sanjum : dekhiye''.mare doost ne toh inhe bachaya hai''''

Chamki: shaking sumy: tumhe ho kya gaya hai''

Veer: loudly : maine kuch nahi kiya hai yehi mujhse takraai '''''.

Sumy: '''how dare he was blaming her ?...sniffed : acha,,,,,,,,,( pointing her hand at him furiously ) tum , aake humse takraaye hamaare hi bageche mai ''.,,aur ,,,aur hamme haath lagane ki jurat ki ,aur humme pe saara ilzaam laga rahe ho??? Aur humse maafi bhi nahi maangi'''''.

Veer: he didn't want her to blame him: angrily: dekh ke tum nahi chal rahi thi '.( swishing  his hand ) aur hain '. (pointing her) rahi baat tumhe chune ki mujhe tumhe,haath lagane ka koi shock nahi hai, samjhi'''

Sumy: gasped : tumhari,,,, tumhari yeh himat '..she slaps him'''.

Veer: looking furious : wanted to run at her n break her into 2 : tum pagal ho kya ( shouting)

Hos frds ver astonished '''''..veer never shouted lik this never got so hyper '''''lik this tht also on a girl'''..

Dharam: veer'''..

Chamki : vayse tum sab yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Dharam:: vo hum sab is jungle mai khogaye the to jab hummne yahan logo ki aahat  sunni toh yahan raasta puch ne ..poohuch gaye''''..

Sumy: in serious tone looking at veer : hum tumhe, raasta batadenge''''..(they started moving)

Dharam: thought ''.. wel flirting may calm  the situation down; vayse aap jaysi khuubsuurat ladki yahan '''is jungle mai kar kya rahi .hai''..

Sumy: raised again: hamaari marzi, hum jo chahenge karenge''''''..tumhe isse kya? Aur hain , humme ayanda se, kabhi khuubsuurat mat keh na , hum khuubsuurat nahi hain'''''..( then she turns n resums walking)

Dharam: shuts his mouth ''

Veer: looks at her perplexed : normally all the grls likes to to be praised ''''..but this girl''.somthing is wrong wit her: sahi kaha tumne ''..bohut badsuurat ho tum '''..

Sumy: turning to him: kya kaha tumne ? abb hum tumhe , nahi chodenge ( widely ) : n now she was going to attack him for good'''''.

But surali shouts at her men : vo dekho ..vahan  bhi kuch ghusbathiyen hain ''''( her men hav caught pundeer n Arjun''they were atleast 50 of them 'veer n gang surrounded)

Veer: takes out his talwar

Sumy: furiously: ruk jao''''( coming forward demanding wit a damn right attitude) kya ho raha hai yeh sab ?

Surali: angrily: yeh ghusbathi hain .aur tum jao. Apne kamre mai abhi '..

( she was her dadi's fav n faithful dasi but it doesn't mean tht she can interfere in this type of situation sumy thought)

Sumy: dekho surali ''' chodo in logo ko agar humme gusa aaya toh '''. ( in damn serious tone'.. veer never thought she had such type of tone too'')

Surali ; bitng her lip ( she knew her limitation): jaysa aap chahe'''.

Veer looks at her perplexed she was childish com matured ''.

Chamki : yeh tum kya kar rahi ho.sum..shera.isne tumhe haath lagaya ''..iska matlab jaanti ho na tum'.tumhe koi haath nahi laga sakta .kyunki'..

Sumy: hain , hum jaante hain, humme chune ka matlab ,maut hai, agar baba ko pata chal gaya '''' toh , toh vo in sab ko maar dalenge '''..aur hum yeh nahi cahate''

Everyone amused'''..

Surali: lakin .aap''''..

Vashali: bas kijiye surali '..in he bhadkaane ki koshish mat kijiye..

Rudali: tum theek keh rahi ho shera '''' inhe chod Dena cahiye''''.. aur vaye bhi inki koi galti nahi hai''

Sumy: surali.yeh baat kisi ko pata nahi chalna cahiye ''''''kisi ko bhi nahi'''

Surali: irritated: theek hai '''''''..

They reach the entrance '' n she sends 2 ppl to show them the route

Wen they climbed their respective horse

Dharam looking at her winks: shukriya

Sumy: smiles: everyone looks amused she looks beautiful''''' vl veer doesn't 

Sumy: aur hain, appne iss dost ko bhi, zera tameez shikha dena'..

Veer: squints his eyes: aur tum', tum billi ki tarah jhaptna band kardo''n then he rides off '''.

Sumy was burning red ''''''.

Arjun: to the solider vayse kya yeh ladki''''''.

Solider: jayda saval mat karo''.tum log hamare sarkaar ke haath nahi lage '''. Khushiyan mannao.. varna zinda nahi bachte'..aur haan yahan phir galti se bhi mat aana ''''

Veer: asks him to shut up it was already night so after leaving them near the edge of the jungle they went away'

Veer: shukriya'''''.πŸ˜†

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Edited by junglli billi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: pen_71

wah wah wah wahπŸ‘



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: junglli billi



wow yaar ur fst again ..................πŸ˜† n thank u very much...................πŸ˜›

u r always welcome😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely update sweetie will wait for the next part!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
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  thank u very much guzs for ur wonderful response n now i will post the next as soon as possible i think this friday or sat nnnnnnnnnnnnn tttthhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaannnnkkkksssssssss a lot all of u πŸ˜‰ cant tell u how glad i m .............πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
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a bit confusing but thats a very good atempt made by you and this shows your intelligence......πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
yes buddy keep it up waiting for ur next part!⭐️
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Originally posted by: real_sanyogita

a bit confusing but thats a very good atempt made by you and this shows your intelligence......πŸ‘πŸΌ



πŸ˜†  thank u yaar peheli baar kisine intelligent samja.............🀣
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Originally posted by: rumela711926

yes keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ




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