thanks a lot it was toooooooooooo good enjoy reading it update soon
Originally posted by: meghaparti
Thanks Dear ..Great Update..I really enjoyed reading it dear!😳👏⭐️
lovely its tooooooooooooooooo good just loved it⭐️
Originally posted by: ashah030
yayy.... finallyyy.....
it was rellli good... the suspense is killing me now.... whAT is the secret yaar................ newayssssss great part... plsssssssssssssssssss update sooonn... and pls dont take a huge gap again...... cant wait.....love yaaaaaaaaaashah
i m really sooorrrryyyyy for the delay but here i m wit m two parts as a repayment for m dely ppl so plz enjoy n do comment😉
Part 2 of sayno's intro
The frightened grand mom urgently walks to her grand daughter's block 'through the red carpeted corridor's calling for her n dasies following her '''''
Sumyukta's block was a part of a big cave designed like mehal ''..
As rani ma 'walked 'she passed room which had soo many arms, room of musical instruments '..,a practice room '...,a bath room n many others''n only ladies were visible bowing to the Queen''(they were sayniks in red color top n black bottom) .the Queen reaches the large door which was gracefully carved n was with a large golden handles '
She desperately opens it n clambers inside ''''''..the room was very large ( her room was like she had in prc (old)') n large purple curtains hanging every where n beautiful big windows ''. Heavily curved wooden dressing table wit a large mirror'.
Pink com brown soft carpet was spread across the room ..n single red carpet was making a way through the room where there was a large bed where on its 2 sides of the bed tables wooden cupboards cum tables were there'..
The Queen looked at the bed n was shocked ''.pretty grand daughter was sleeping peacefully on her wit her hands folded to her stomach,,,, sleeping straight 'smiling in her dream'.
The Queen throws a sharp side way glance at surali '''as though saying wat is this than? n asks everybody to go ,,,,,,,waving her hand at them'.
She walks to Sumy (sumyukta) n keeps her hand lovingly on her grad daughter'..n says: uthiye sumyukta dekhiye toh sahi ki kaun aya hai .
Sumy (sumyukta) was awake '.she was jst actin '.her frds smuggled her inside 'she opens her eyes slowly n looked into a kind faced women with grey eyes ''she was wearing grand white robes '..n some jewelries n her chuniri on her head 'she winks '
Sumy: gets up: dadi ma'(excitedly wit a cling in her voice) : app ''.
Dadi ma: hum toh darhi gaye the''jab surali ne bataya ki app kamre mai nahi hain'.
Sumy: stunned: ji'., ji'vo jhut bol rahi thiiii'''''..
Dadi: aura b isliye use saza bhi milegi' (Eyeing her)
Sumy: she looked as though she would faint: saza '''..kyun...dadi ma'.nahi'.
(She didn't want anybody else to get punishment coz of her ')
Dadi: kyun nahi????.....hum unhe 'yahan se'
Sumy: nahi '..nahi dadima'., vo'vo''.., galti hamari hi, thi, 'hum he yahan se baahar gaye the ', ghumne ......hum yahan, reh , kar thak gaye the , isliye''.
Dadi (smiling) : Isiliye app apne doston ke saath ghumne cheli gaye'.?...aur hammare aane se pehle laout ayyi ho. Hain na'..
Sumy: shocked: lakin appko kyse ?
Dadi: kya hum appko nahi jaante?(keeping her hand on sumy's head) humme app pe naaz hai '.aap mai sach batane ki himit ki'.
Sumy:( hugs her): dadi maa'..
Dadi: abb chaliye bhogan karte hain..
After having dinner sumy tells her dadi mom about her trip to jungle'she was sitting down on floor n her dadi on the bed combing her hair n takeing her jewelry.
Sumy: dadi maa, app ko pata hai, humne vaha,gaana bhi gaya'.
Dada: aacha apne rajkumaar ke liye?
Sumy: dadi maa?
Dadi: hume toh laga ke shayaad aapko apka rajkumaar mil gaya'
Sumy: lakin dadi ma'.,( in serious tone) appko pata hai na, ayse nahi ho sakta , hum pyaar nahi kar sakte'.
Dadi: pyaar puchke thodi na karte hain , vo toh ho jaata hai' aur aapka rajkumaar toh kahin ''. Bathy aapka intazaar kar raha ho ga'''''.
Sumy: app '..app ko kyse pata (demanding)
Dadi: kyunki jab aapka naam karan horaha tha '.maha pandit ne kaha tha ke 'appke aur aur aape jivan saathi ka rishta sirf is janam ka nahi hai balki kayin janmoo ka hai'.aur vo ladka app se bohut pyaar karega''.naaki appki khubsurati aur appki shorat se'.aur app unki zindagi mai praveash kar ke unki zindagi sawaarengi unki madad karengi'.aur app hamesha logo ke pariwaaro ko, rajyo ko,dilo ko jode rakhangi'.isiliye app ka naam sumyukta rakha gaya hai'.
Sumy: ( dreamily ) : aur baba ne shera '
Dadi : shaking a bit : hain theek hi oh rakha hai ''''''jara sa ' kuch hota nahi hai'' ke appko gussa aajaata hai aur aap use chodti nahi hain'.sher ki tarah'.
Sumy: smilin a bit n intaking breath: isme hamaari, kya galti hai , log humme gussa jo, delaate hai'.
Dadi: aur isiliye tih sab aapse darte hain'.chaliye abb app jaayiye aur naaha lijiye'. '''..yaad hai na '..ke kal appko jaldi se uthna hi aur talwaar baazi ka abhiyaas karna hai '''''(thoughtfully) appne baba ka kaam bhi karna hai'.
Sumy: ji dadi maa ( she takes bath n sleeps)
{ she practices sword only 2 times per week}
Morning her frds wakes her up by raising by raising the curtains''.n the light ''''.straight falls on her face '.she slowly opens her eyes n gets up yawning in her blue night dress stretching her delicate hands'.gracfully'n gets ready '
She was wearing black top n bottom ,rajasthani type ,shirt wit side up tying (or buttons) looking royal still than'.
Sumy's frds n dasies tried to give her a terrifying dakoo look but didn't succeed much in doing it'.n they al went to diff block it was darkn lanterns were lit every where as they passed in the room a man was sitting on the top of the chair '.with his men on his side both sides in black robes .
When she entered he laughed cruelly n came to her .he had cruel face n had a mark on his left cheek , he had cat eyes which were not showing any mercy but were gleaming wit happiness he was her baaba''''
Baaba : in harsh voice : haaaaa'.. mera shera '.aaaagaayaa'..
Sumy: throws sideway glance at her frds '.indicating to leave''they does as they were told'.) : baaba , yeh'.., yeh sab ya hai'.( in a serious tone)
Baaba : aaajj mera shera '.kesi insaan ke saath abhyaas karega'.jisne uske baaba ka maazaak udaya hai'.
Sumy: (taking in breath'.angrily '.:kya?
Baaba: hain'isne tumhrre baaba ki baat nahi suni aur humse hammara kaam nikalvaliya aur pyse bhi nahi diye'''''. Aur suna hai key eh talwaar bohut achi tatrah se calaleta hai''isne hamaare panch logo ko maar dala aur ise pakdne ke liye hammare dus log lage'.toh maine socha kea bb ise tumhara mukaabula bhi karlena chahiye '''''.ha'.ha'.ha'..jo'iska akhri mukaabula hoga''''
They threw the man out n gives him the sword '..this is again a new challnge for her she thought'''.she hav to prove herself again''''''killing is not the solution of everything though''''''.she wil make this git bend for sure,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
N she also takes her sword out of case which was very grand '.decorated wit diamonds on its handle n bit thin and sharp so tht she can hold it comfortably .
Sumyukta: angrily : tumne yeh bilkul theek nahi kiya hamaare baaba ka apmaan karke '
Man :tum jayse logo ke saath aysa hi karna cahiye''.aur tum chinta mat karo'''''''.
Sumy: accha '''''''''
The man starts it first n sumy blocks his sword wit hers n throws him backward giving a scratch on his shoulder ''he then scrambles ti his feet n tried to get her again but she blocks it again n kicks him on his feet n he falls down on the floor shaking n his talwaar shudders ''..she snatches it n gives him a sharp look which terrifies him''''.
Sumy: sarcastically: looking around at her ppl: acha , toh tum log , is chachundar se pareshaan the?
(other's laughed)
Sumy:raises her hand to stop: keeping her sword on his neck: bolo, hummme hammara pyse de rahe ho ,(slightly tightening her grip on is neck) yeh phir'''''..
Man: frightened : dunga''''.. mai abhi dunga '''(he takes bugs out wit his bleeding hand).
Sumy: Rampyarre lelo'''''''(n she leaves the mans sword there''''''wit a clatter n turns to go'''''''..then only there cam her father's sream'''''she turns the man was standing wit the sword to attack her'but she was too quick for him'.she takes her sword n prices it in the middle of his chest '''''..
Baba: rejoicing:shara'''''.. mera''bacha'''''''mera bacha'''''''''''mera shera''''''''..
( he cals other's to say ) bolo shera ki '''''..
Other's: jai''''''''
Baba: holding her : mera bacha''''''tum se koi nahi jeet sakta'''''.koi nahi''.ha '.ha'.ha'''''bilkul ek ladke ki tarah ho tum.shera'.nahi,,,, nahi ladke bhi haar jaate hain'lakin tum'.tum kabhi nahi haarogi'..mera bacha'''''
Sumy:gives a weak smile n looks at the man he was still withering '' blood was still rushing out of him''', she turned''',turned her gaze away from him,away from her dad''''. She was feeling sick''..in her mind: lakin, hum koi ladke nahi hain baba, hum ek ladki hain'.,humse '.,humse yeh sab nahi hoga,,,,,'.., y don't u understand '.dad '..n .dadi'..wen men hesitates doing all this how could u expect me doing it?
She walked to her room absentmindedly. A dasi came n washed her legs n hands n asked her to change but she ordered her to leave her alone waving her hand.
''''''''''She was recalling her past. Wen she was young'she was told tht her whole family was a royal one but they did hid themselves here for her security away from their enemies as their kingdom captured. And she led her life like a complete princess wit ful delicacy '.Under the impression tht her dad was the greatest n he couldn't do anything wrong. Her dadi taught her every right n wrong''' n also epics ''But wen she was 13 she grew suspicious n saw her dad n other's torturing a victim to death for some reason ''''''then she was told tht in reality her dad was not a king ''''''''.her mom was the one '..Rajkumaari Ananya '''''but fel in wit baba n they got married. N thus they r there n her mom (Ananya) died wen she gave birth to her. N her Baba lied to her coz he loves her very much n didn't want to loose her''''''.Wen sumy argued wit him tht wat ever he is doing was wrong then her baba lied to her tht he was fulfilling her mom's wish to establish a fulfilled, fully fetched kingdom in the area (villages) from where they are threatening n taking the money'''''''..n the they r taking is as a tax which they will use in the establishment of their kingdom''''.
( NOTE: It is a lie ,which she don't know yet ''''.her father had no such intensions''''.)
Her mother's sis was Maharani Rukmini and thus sia was her cousin sister''.they used to stay together always some times here n sometimes in Awadhi, but always together '''''''''.. But wen she came to know about the "so called truth" she decided to help her father to fulfill her mom's wish n stared learning sword fighting...Horse riding n som other tactics '''..
Due to which she was not able to meet sia... their meetings grew very small for yrs ''''''..but now it had already ended n now they were not in contact for almost 2 yrs'''..
She was very desperate to meet her maasa n pitaji (she calls sia's mom n dad -maasa n pitaji) n sister.
And another tribe of ppl fought wit theirs n if they n a boy named Tasha always troubled her but she didn't kill him becoz his mom n sis were very nice.
Now she after few yrs of practice she is a perfect sword martyr ''''''.. but once she gets any scratch or any wound she wil be unable to fight (coz she was brought up wit such a delicacy n she was too sensitive) n thus she always saves herself from getting wounded in every fight. She never kils a person'''''.if he is innocent n unless n until he desperately wants himself to be killed. She was stil kid dish n girlish bcoz of her g'mom. She never weeps in front of anybody else other than her frds'''''''''..wen ever she kills som body ,for few days she always goes under depression
But nobody understands her'she thinks '''''..y was she always taken for granted'''..n now she really wants her man to com n take her away from this mess''..but she was not allowed ..Her father wil not. He had already warned her about it. Her mission is to complete her mom's wish n later she has got to go to her Original world in ''''.Awadhi''.wit her grand mom to her family.
She absentmindedly gets up n baths again n changes her dress this time she was wearing brown lehnga wit red border wit match blouse n accessories. This time her hair hanging stripes were made up of gold wit golden bunches at the end of them'''''.
She was sitting on the carpeted floor wit her legs in water house of heh room. Her frds enters n looks at her :sitting beside her: tumne ajj use maara????
Sumy: simply nodes
Rudali: trying to cheer her up : aur isme tumhari koi galti nahi thi 'vo to khud hi marne ke liye utavala ho raha tha ''''.
Chamki:hain'.aur..vayse bhi
Sumy: looks at chamki n she breaks ''' n she holds her n weeps.
Chamki: chup ho jao Sumyukta'''''chup ho jao'..
Vyshali: kyun na hum abhi bagiche mai ghumne chale?... ( excitedly )
Sumyukta: wiping her streaming eyes: nahi, humme kahin nahi jaana''''.
They informed this to rani maa n went away'..
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