JTJTYJNAA----pg 18 THE PLAN

m fic is a mixture of DV n pcr  (of when rt n mc were there) n charecters too.. so its a combination . but completly different frm the yhe sagars thought ...people pls do read n comment.......

i m posting every my every part in one post only so that i wont be difficult for its readers to search page by page

 JANNE TU JANNE TU YEH JANNE NAA

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Maharaj Aryavardhan: King of  Aryanagar i.e (Aryanagar +DELHI+AJMER)  Dad of Dhram.

 

 

Jayavardhan: Bro of Aryavardhan he went beyond every limit of evil and cruelty. Father of Agni n arjun.

 

 

M Kamalavati : Sister of jay n aryavardhan and mother of Veer Agasthya N Maharani of ( Delhi n Ajmer )= Pithoir ( mom of rajat from prc)

 

Maharaj someshwar Agasthya:  Husband of Kamalaviti n veers dad . Died long ago in war.( Survanshi) (dad of rajat from PRC.)

 

M. Nivriti: Adopted sister of Somashwar Agasthya love veer terribly as her own child.

 

 Rajkumar veer: son of somashwar n kamalaviti. A very handsome n cool dude. Does everything which is correct according to him. Listens both to his heart n mind.He is bit naughty only if the situation is to be n also haughty. He is very attached to Dhram. N his best frds are R: Arjun, Pundeer, Chand and Sanjum (same from PRC). N falls in love with shera cum Ritika ( theres a twist)

 

 

R: Dhram: son of Maharaj Aryavardhan a  handsome dude.Wants everything to be perfect. Never thinks from his heart. He trys to listen to his mind most of the time but veer never leaves him to do so.

 

R. Agni: son of jay. Very haughty thinks too much of himself. Falls with shera.Agni looks like new chand from prc.

MAYANK: is shera's frd looks like Rajkumaar samar shing fr prc

 

R Arjun: son of Jay( fr prc) cool dude always runs after girls. Almost is a same age of veer.

 

Shera : Is a daughter of a dakoo.Does every thing that the boy does. But never hurts any innocent. She is very sweet n bubbly. Loved by every body. She is haughty n naughty too. She learnt every thing in order tokill her moms killer. But leads a royal life n very beautiful indeed. OUR MUGDHA of course.)( her frds vashali  n chamki fr prc)

 

SIA: Naughty ,beautiful , always makes trouble fr her sister .  But loves her too much. ( fr DV OLD)

 

Roopmati: dadi mom of shera. (Dadi of mug fr prc)

 

M . Ankoor: father of sia ( jai chand from (old) prc)

 

Mr. Rukmini : mom of sia .(Frm Prc (old) sayno's mom)

 

 Sarkaar Bhima : dad of shera. .(Fr DV)

 

 

VILLAN: M Anash Gadval {Bhimdev frm prc }

 

Sumyukta :Opposite of veer.

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Edited by junglli billi - 14 years ago

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It was a very beautiful morning n rays of light lit the large beautiful room all decorated room with gold n gems.....

   A large bed was there in between of the room on the carpeted floor. beautiful paintings were hung on the walls.....

    And a handsome boy was sleeping on the bed with a smile on his face a ray of light hits his face . He wake's up n then smiles n thinks that
"yes today is a special day , really special.HE gets up n baths and does suryanamaskaar dresses himself up (black n white rajkumaar's robes)

Then only his mother comes calling for him.
Its  Maharani Kamalavati in her yellow colour sari
she was was some of the ornaments too.Her hair vas wet  n  vas front she was carring n an aarati plate.


M.Kamalavati: KYa tum uth gaye bate?

Veer  was in front of the mirror :   Kabka maa. Kya appne mujhe.. Arjun aur Agni samajh rakha hai?

M. kamalaviti: kya humhe toh yaad hai na ki ajj kya hai?

Veer: haan maa ...... AJJ DHRAM mare sabse bade dhai ka janmdin hai...............     (he turns looking dashing )

m.k : Sirf dhram ka nahi bate Agni ka bhi.

Giving him prasaad.

 Veer: taking it says: Haan laken uske hoone yeh na hoone se koi farak nahi padtaa ..... Ghamandi kahe kaa. Har baar apni manmanni karta rehta hai Lakin Ajj mai use nahi Chodunge . App ko pata hai maa Kal vo mujhese aur Dhram ko kya...

MK : getting bit annoyed :Abb bas bhi karo veer.... vo tumhara Bada bhai hai.

Veer (smirking n saying more to him self): pata hai . Varna use mai pure mahel me Bhaga bhaga ke maarta "

MK hears some of this : KYA?

veer: kuch nahi maa bus Agni ke tofe ke bare mai soch raha tha.
mk: Acha .. abb  badbadana bass bhi karo bate .Aur jaa ke apne Dhram ko uthao...

veer : kya ? kya vo abb tak so raha hai maa...

Mk: haan vo Kal Raat ko Bohat Batte karte karte daer ho gayi thi naa isliya .

SHE EXISTS

LAGTA HAI AJJ PHIR VO APNI ANNE WALE RAJKUMAARI KE SAPNE DEKH RAHA HAI:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

SAYS the CREW

Crew enters Laughing Veer also starts laughing with them.

They r his frds SAMJAM ,PUNDEER ,CHAND n RAJKUMAAR ARJUN.

Veer after greating them happily : Aree vaha Arjun  tum ajj itni jaldi tayar ho gaye. ....
EVERY BODY LAUGHS >>>.

Arjun spends lot of time in bathroom actually so his bathroom is very beautifully maintained,

Thus dharam na veer some times  goes to his n makes mess of his bathroom.

Arjun;hain vo kya hai na ki ..... hai ajj bhaiya aur dhram ka janam din hai na yo.... zera ...zaldi tyaar ho gaya.... pani se kusheti nahi ladi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Every body turns to him :::;;;; all together >>>>>>>>>>>>.   

Achaaaaaaaaaaa?

A : hangs his head

Pundeer : Yeh to ghode bech ke so raha tha  veer ,Humne ise jake Uthaya

 .Veer laughs

Sanjum: yeh to kuch bhi nahi tha veer .

CHAnd hai aur hummne ise snan ghar jabardasti bhaja toh yeh soo raha tha .

Sanjam Garam pani ke maze le raha tha yeh.

Pundeer: hummene ise bahar nikalne   ki koshish ki.
veer :koshish matlab?

Veer bit confused

Pundeer : (smirking) MAtlab ka kya matlabhai veer. Hum ise  pani mai se kich rahe the aur yeh snan ghar mai rekhi hui kursi ko ..... phir vo tuut ke haath mai aa gaya .🤣

Chand: hum to thak gaye the aur sanjum ne ise yaad dilaya ke ajj bhut saari ladkiyan( rajkumariyan) aane valli hai. Tab jake yeh pani se bahar .............. 🤣

Arjun : dekho tum ab bas karo chand varna mai.........

Sanjam: varna kya? phir se gir javoge
Abb ruk mai thumhe

he starts chasing

Sanjam running : thumhe pata hai veer....... jab .. maine raj...kumariyeh .. kaha to ....to yeh    ......jhet se bhar nikla aur.... bhagam bhag mai do..... baar gir pada................

every body. 🤣


then a hansome young man enters n saysssssssss....... Kyun veer tum aur tuhari toli phir se shuru ho gayi?............

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a handsome young man enters.... with his hair slapped back. perfectly dressed  wearing orange color robes n looking cooolllllll......

he says: Kyun veer tum aur tuhari toli phir se shuru ho gayi?............

Veer still laughing beautifully says : array dharam tum sunoge to tum bhi bhot hasoge.... yeh... yeh  arjun....

arjun attacks Veer both laughing n trying to close veers mouth

Dharam: acha ab bus bhi karo tum sab .

trying to pull them off . he himself was laughing .But no use

Dharam stands up straight  n shouts: AJJ MERA JANMADIN HAI AUR TUM LOG MUJHE BHADHAI DANE KE BAJAY JAHAGD RAHE HO\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ 

THUMHE SHARAM NAHI AATI  KYA????????

including veer every body stood up n stood silently.
Dharam turns in satisfaction n says : Thick hai abb chalo  neche chalte hai .

veer (with a mischief smile on his face) : Dharam ek baat kahu to humme sharam nahi aati kyun ki na to hum ladkiyan hai aur nahi tumhari taraha seedhe sadde hai (dharam turns) aur dusiri baat yeh ki hum tumhe Bhadayi (congratulate) nahi  dhenge kyunki thumhare dil ki ajj biddaii hone wali hai

veer gives five to his frds

Dharam confused : kyun?
 
Arjun: ajj Duniya ki sab se khubsuraat -khubsuraat  ladkiyan anne wale hai .

Dharam: : tum log kabhi nahi badloge .

sanjum : nahi Dharam sach mai

Dharam:: mujhe koi farak nahi padega

 V:koi khubsuurat ladki tumhe pasand aa hi jaae giii dharam
  Dharam: :blushing slightly : kabhi nahi

chand: kyun nahi ? ( in a sarcastic  voice)

Dharam : Kyunki asi rajkumaari jo mujhe pasand hai vo kabhi nahi milegi.......................

Pundeer eyeing at veer  says :kyun nahi milegi ..... ? zaroor milegi .....
acha bataoo tumhe kaysi ladki chahiye  .... hum sab saath milke  dhundenge ... kyun veer ...

veer: ha ha kyun nahi.....

Smiling naughtily

D slowly falls into the trap n starts dreaming ..........

veer: with a cruel  smile asks :Dharam kaha khogaye ho tum? BAtavo kaysi ladki chahiye  thumhe?

Sanjum: hain bolo jaysi bologe dhund  ke layenge Langdi yeh..., luuli yeh..., andhi yeh... behri  ....yeh...,,,,,,,totli.........., yeh pagal.........

Veer smirks n runs n shuts his mouth dy keeping an hand on his mouth veer didnt want to miss this chance of discription of dharam's dream girl. after which he will get another opportunity to tease dharam whole his life  n even he can tell it to Dharam's wife n children later or even he can torcher  himto do  some mischive 

 everybody pulls sanjum back at the same time
dharam says coming out of trans : sunjum ne jin- jin gundo (qualities) wali ladki boli hai un saari gundo wali ladki chahiye .
veer looks at sanjam  angrily

Then veer smiles n goes near to dharam puts a hand on his shoulder n says in a serious tone .

v: nahi dharam hum sab jut nahin  sach suna chahthe hai  tumhari rajkumaari ke baare mai. taki agar humme vasi koi mile toh hum use tumhe soup de,,,,,,,,,😉
arjun hai ... coming forward.... ayse ho sakta hai kiiiiii....... jo tumhe pasand aayehgii aghar vo humme se kisi ko pasand a gayi to?
pundeer (smirking ) toh kya Dharam hamme se kisi ka dil tod dega.
Chand : coming forward,,,, lekin agar tum pehle se hi batadoge to hum use duur rahenge .

 
they knew if they will emotionally blackmail Dharam he vill tell them

Seeing dharam dreaming again veer was happy that his frds atleast  have learnt how to trap  their victims.....
n now only the thing needed vas

Veer:(happily) bolo dharam......

Dharam walked in front to the balcony

Where was the beautifulterece with flowers  ,,,, n trees touching them from the ground dharam was lost in its fragrance ,Every body gave five...

he started telling lik a parrot

D: Mai ek ayse ladki ko pasand karoonga jo duniya ki sabse khubsuraat ladki ho ....susheel ho...jese .... dekh te hi mera maan kahe ki hain yehi hai vo jes ki mujhe talash hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, yehi hai vo ... jis ke saath mai apni saari zindegi  guzaar sakta hoon................

 everybody smirks at his back
 he turns back everybody becomes silent 

Dharam comes back n sits on the couch near by.... n ... continues....

"uskiaddamai jaadu hona chahiye aur masoom bhi ....... bhut hi payaarii...ghamandi bilkul nahi . aur jab bole to aysa lage ki uske muh se moti baras rahe ho. aur mera aur sabka pura- pura khayal rekhe ..........sabse pyaar kare... lakin mujhse sabse jyada..............

Dharam  breaks suddenly........ he comes to originality seeing smirks on veer's n his frds faces . he came to know that they were boobing him(fooling him).he was trapped completely now......
then quickly trying to make it right ,,,, he was planing to say that he was joking...........

but veer n his toli were laughing at him .......

he knew he vas goneeeeeeeeeeee .......

dharam slowly n angrily  : Dekho mai to mazaak kar raha tha  ..
V still 🤣 mazaak gusse mei nahi has kar kiya jaata hai dharam 🤣

sanjam:🤣 chodona ...veer... yeh dharam ...ke hasne ka tari ka hai ......
D: (controlling himself ); Sanjam aur veer chup ho javo vanna mai tumhari bajaunga..

v: hum log koi dhol nahi hai ............. jise tum bajane cale......🤣

dharam knew it was coming so he started going ........

v: oiiii ....... dharam ruho 🤣hum sab sooch rahe the ki ajj tumhe tumhari rajkumaari  say mila hi dete hai ......

 sanjum : hai jo sunder ho suuuuuuuuu ......... sheelll ho.......suheel ki kya jaroorat hai hum use arjun ke snaan ghar ke pani mai daal dete hai khud ba khud panise susheel ho jayegiiiiiiiiiiiii..................(dharam chasing  sanjam.....)

veer:🤣 n coming out of it aur kya kaha tha tumne jab.......(.dharam chasing  veer.....) vo...... bolegii......to mukh se moti..... girenge...........?...Toh ek rajkumaari  ki kya zaroort......hai tum tum. kesi.
 D : chup...ho jao .tum..........

V: continues....... sone ki khan se shaadiiii......... kyun nahi kar late?..............

V: aur  in sab se to achha hai ke tum apni perchayi se hi shaadi  kar lo .......vo thumhara bohot.......... khayal rekhegi ....bal savarne mai tyaar hone mai🤣.....................

while running hi dashes vith sone handsome rudy guy  n the laughter dies.....................

thats it fr now.............

 PRECAP: sia enters .........................

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while running hi dashes vith Agni he dress like a perfect hero which he is not

A: Dekh ke nahi chal sakte ho tum '. Yeh is darwaaze ke aagge kyun bhag rahe ho tum '

laughter dies.....................

v: becomes angry mai anddha hoon kyun? '.. dekh ke tum nahi chal rahe the . mera kamre mai aake mujjhse takra ke mujhjhe hi data rahe ho tum?'''mai jo chahe karu thumhe k'''

Chand interrupting says: janne do na veer

Veer: lakin ,,,,,,,,,,

Dharam : Hai veer janee do

A: opening his arms : jannam din'''''

Veer: ruko ''. Har baar dharma ko mai hi janam ki bhadhai data huin aur ajj bhi mai hi dunga '.(showing attitude)

A: dekho tum '..

D:' nahi Agni . veer ab bohat  '.pareshaan  kar liya  ab tonbhadhai dado

veer laughing goes near him n hugs him tightly

 

When agni comes near him''.

 

Arjun : ruko bhaiya abb meri bari hai '.

 Nnnn hugs dharam  

One by one every one hugs him '.. n dhram was the last one to do '''

 

Veer was eyeing on Agni as though telling  him that it was a great humiliation for him

 

Dharam : abb   bas bhi karo veer '.acha chalo hum sab niche chalet hai

 

Puja  for his  n  Agni's  long life will be done in few hours n the party will start after that

 

 

AAAAAAAAAAAnd   some where far away in awadhi's palace 

 

Sia was shouting at her maids '' who was standing with her back on them  

 

 

Sia : tum log kesi kaam ke nahi hoo'.Janna ajj hai aur tum mujhe abb bata rahi hooo..

It was maharaj's order they cant do any thing

 

Sia turns  '''' she was very beautiful  those brown eyes ,masoom chera , lovely voice '. But looking haughty now    ' '.. she was very proudy never takes care of her anything , but very cute  '''.

She was wearing her red dress n was getting ready to go to Aryanagar '.. n   she had very less time to get ready becoz her dad had atlast agreed her mom's request ''.he had loads of work   

 

 

Sia : tum logon se kuch khena hi bakaar hai Maine tumse lal rang ka haar mangvaaya tha naa ki neela'''..  she vent on''''..

 

Sia : anne do meri bahen ko  vo thumhe theek karegi Mera itna bada apmaan kar diya 'tum logone

Then she remembers that her sis is not vit her n her beautiful eyes fills with tears  ''.

 

 

Her sis was her cousin sis SUMYUKTA far away frm her But they love each other very much .

She calls Sia's mum n dad as pitaji n maasa too . they too love her ' but sia did not see her from past two years she don't know how she looks where she is now n was very angry vit her

 But if anything goes wrong vit her she trys to threaten every body saying that she vill complain  to her sis''.. n she vill punish them''.

 

 

M. ranuka enters :Kya hua sis appin becharoo  par kyun rob chala rahi hai?///

 

Sia  coming back to reality trying to hide her tears : kuch nahi maasa bas ayse hi'

Turning to her mum

M R knows that sia wept fr her sis again but she too kept quite didn't want to open the convo again : accha ab jaldhi Kkijiye   app tayar ho jaaiye hum sab appka intajar kar rahe hai

 

 

At laast  she comes out looking gorgeous

 

Her mom asks: aagayi app kabse  app ka intazaar ho raha tha ''

Sia (taken aback ) pitaji naaraz toh nahi hai na maasa'????????????

 

M rukmani : nahi toh  '..   apko toh pata hai na vo bas humme chodne a rahe hai '..

Sia  n her mum grts in paalki

 

 

   M Ankoor :chaleya 

 

They reaches  Aryanagar  boundary '. 

 

 

 

And here the havan was over they were inviting   guests '.

Even Dharam veer n his  toil were inviting to there surprise '''they were getting introduced to the families ''.

And on other hand Agni was showing attitude  ''..n some stupid raajkumaaries n girls were really impressed n  smiled '.. n nnn added fuel to it'''''.n started over acting '''''''..

 

 

DV were trying hard not to laugh n were happily greeting them  ''''..   some girls were eyeing on them''.n    '''.smiling 

 

 

Veer: smiles n says frm the corner of his mouth   : dharma abb tumhare liya achha mauka hai apni rajkumaari dhundne kaaa ''''..varnna vo dekho  arjun kahi tuhariwali na legaye''''.      

 

 

 

PRECAP : Dharam could not bear tears in sia's eyes n goes to her

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n here i start m part 4

Recap: intro of sia'''''  n havan is over n arjun  flirting .

 

Here it goes'.

 

Arjun wasf  flirting with the girls bit far away'.

 

Dharam laughed at his bro's innocence :Chinta mat karo Veer mujhe in ladkiyon mai koi dilchaspi nahi 'hai ''koi bhi meri  sapno ki rajkumaari ki taraha sunder nahi hai ''.

Veer:Pyaar mai umar aur khubsuriti nahi dekhi jati''..

 

Sanjam comes from his back smiling : Aarya vaah tumhe payaar ke baare mai bhi pata chal gaya hai .??????  (Smirking) 

 

When every body has come n Dharam n agni has got everybody's blessings ''''..

 

Jayvardhan: Abb jashan shuru  kia jaye'.

 

Then the royal dancers comes in n starts dancing n other programs..

 

Dharam ,Veer n his gang starts  getting bored  So they decides to escape '

But were caught by JV( i.e  Jayvardhan) N went back to sit . they tried again' actually all the guests were eating.

 

Sanjam shouted pointing his hand down towards a legs of the girl saying: Dekho ' dekho chuhaa'''''''..

 

All the girls jumped at this n started shouting n running here n there ''

 

One girl shouting : CHUHAA>>>>>>>>>>>>>>CHUHAAAAAAAAAA>>>>>>>> 

 

JV  heard this n ran towards them . he knew that it was one of  the Shararat of veer's toli ..

 

After assuring those Girls that every thing is right '. When he came back '.every body was missing expect Agni'.

 

He eyed angrily at Agni n asked : yeh sab kahan gaye'?

 

Agni: PAta nahi pitaji abhi tak toh yehi the '.vo sab'.

 

Jv( Angrily) : tum se toh puchna hi bakaar hai ( pushing him  aside ) hato  yahan se '

 

Agni : abb maine kya kiya''

 

Agni feels as though Jv doesn't love him . every time he will be shouting at him fr no reason''.

 

And here Veer n his toli  with dharam  came to the garden Laughing n imitating their poor terrified  victims (girls).    

 

Sanjam🤣 :vo laal rang phene hue rajkumaari ko  dekha  tum logo ne ?//// Pehle kayse ghamand se keh rahi thi''''. (imitating her voice >>>>''while others vere laughing'.)''..   MERe rajya mai toh mai, sirf  phoolo  beche hua chadar pe chalet hunnnnnnn'..Yahan toh sirf chadar  (Carpet) pe   ,mere payar  mai chub raha hai ''''''.

 

Chand : mera bas chalta toh mai use kanto pe chalvata '

 

Dharam🤣 : Chalo humnne ' use  phoolon se  na sahi lakin chuhoo se jaroor kar diya ''''''Vo kayse uchal rahi thi'''.. HA 'ha..ha'.Every body was laughing '

 

(some times dharma also ascts like a kid with them..)

 

They were walking around in their beautiful garden where so many bushes trees were there . so that their could not find them' Many more guests N their daughters OFCOURSE '.. were coming Veer n gang were encouraging dharma infact teasing Dharam to choose one of the gfirls amoung them'

They were all commenting they were hiding on some height so that they can see the entrance. NNNNN there it comes <<<<<,

 

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

 

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

 

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

 

Everybodies attention was there '

 

Dharma n veers parents were close to them . but they themselves never met them'

 

Dharam : chalo 'ajj avadhi ke raja aur rani ko dekh late hai 'Ajj tak sirf unke bare suna hai '

 

Chand Naughtly: Tum sirf raja aur rani ko dekhna chaha te  hoo????

 

Dharam n veer : kya matlab

 

SAnjam: in dono ko to kuch bhi nahi pata 'Avadhi ki do rajkumaariyan hain Ek ka naam sia hai aur dooseri ka naam ''''..    Pata nahi kuch hai  lakin dooseri vaali pehli se bhi zayaada khubsoorat hai'''.Kaha jata hai ki vo duniya ki sab se khubsoorat hai . lakin kuch saloon se vo gayab ho gayi hai''Shayaad uske parivaar valon ko pata ho''.

 

 

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

 

Maharaj Ankoor ki jai'''

 

Maharaj Ankoor : gets down fr the horse n hugs M arayavardhan M rukmini gets out out of her palki n arti is done by M. kamalavati'.

 

(nivriti calls her didi''..m. rukmani)

 

M.k : kayse hai app sab aur hamari  dono  rajkumaariyan kahan hai ?

 

 M R: rajkumaari sia toh pass hi ke male se raajkumaaron ke liya kuch tofa lane utri hai

 

Nivriti (eagerly) : aur Unki behan'?

 

M R : bit taken  Aback : Pata nahi vo khan hain kaysi hai ''..Lakin kuch saalon ke baad vo hamesha ke liya hamare paas aa jayengiiii'.Dreaming''.

 

M K: cutting in between : chaliya andhar chalet hain''''.

 

Going  inside'.

 

M r : vayse 'dono. . rajkumaar   kahen dekhai nahi de rahe hain'..

 

Veer : dekha'hamare bagaar tih yeh sab rah hi nahi sakte DHAram''

 

But dharma was looking at the enterence where a palki has just landed  n a beautiful girl in rer red dress steps out '. But now she was looking Haughty''

 

Sia : yeh  kya mere liye koi nahi ruka?//////

 

*(as v all know to girls it is the manners that a boy or a person givesr his /her hand to hold to give respect)

 

Sia : aur mera itena bada apmaan ''mai apne bahan ko zaroor battanungi '..( THEN HER USUAL BLA ''BLA'''BLA''''')

 

But she starts weeping  remembering her sis'''''..

 

Pundeer : Baap re baap kitni Ghamndi hai yeh ladki'''

 

Pundeer: Aysa lagta hai 'aysa lagta hai ki yeh  behri hai aur sab ko apne jaysa hi samajhti hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, varna eitne zoor se kyun chelaa rahi hai''

 

Veer ,arjun , chand n sanjum : hai''''.

 

But dharm was gazing at her lik anything ..

 

Veer: kya hua dharma'?

 

CHand : lagta hai DHArAm dar gaya'.

 

But veer was feeling odd,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,may be Dharam started liking her ''' but how come???????????????????   She is just opposite of the girl which dharma described''''''.

 

M R  n niviriti comes there ( dharma also goes there)

 

M R : app theek toh hai na'

 

Sia runs n hugs her mum : maasa mujhe ek baar'' sirf  ek baar  usse milna hai ''

 

D was feeling very sad   ,,,,,,,,,,,     it vas as though something solid fell into his stomach >>>>>>>>>. He never felt lik this before''' He couldn't bear this he wanted to something to ''.say some thing   to her ,,,but '''..

 

 

She embraces her  n takes her I n

 

Dharam was upset she didn't even look at him While he was soooooooo concerned about her '. He vas acting too odd he went inside '.. leaving all of them there'''''

 

Veer : dharma '''.

 

Chand kitni mushkil se hum bahar nikle han aur tum?////

 

D: In  strong  voice >: nahi chalo'.

 

Every body : kya hua hai iyse?

 

Veer knows probabali what might hav happened''''

 

 

PRECAP:SIA : (turnig angrilily at Dharam loudly :; AYSE NAHI HO SAKTA .. AUR  VAYSE BHI MAI TUM SE YEH SAB KYUN KEH RAHI HOON''''

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n here i start m part 5

RECAP : sia entry n dharam feels bad when he see sis weeping

N Here Dharam goes silently inside the palace ...he was searching for sia....who was sitting far away on the couch watches the dancers .....she had stopped weeping ...

n other rajkumaaries were looking at her but no body went near her . Dharam wondering why goes near her.....Veer's gang was trying to do their usual mischief  . but veer was noting his bro's behavior  ....................

Dharam goes to sia n smiles : Mai ....Mai   .... rajkumaar dharam hoon ........vo aaj mera he janam....din ..hai ....

sia (smiles at his innocence ) N   GOD  Dharam's heart  was going to burst...........

 

She moves bit aside n asks him to sit beside he was so handsome n calm she couldn't let him stand n disrespect him''

 

She turns to him n says : mai nahi janti thi kit tum  hi rajkumaar Dharam ho'''vo'' tumse kabhi mile nahi na isliye '. Mujhe nahi pata ki tumhe aur tumhare bhai Agni ko kya pasand hai''.

 

She takes out the gift which she has got fr them from near by'..

Sia : yeh tumhare liya'.

 Dharam takes It n looks at her graceful face smiling: shukriyaa'..

 

Taking it n wondering what it could be '. But what ever it is '..it is really precious for him''

 

D : vayse app yehan akeli kyun bathi  hain? Appka koi  doost nahi hai kya yahan?   ''..

 

Sia ( enthusiastically) n with attitude : nahi mera koi doost nahi hai yeha 'main kise arye ' gayer ko apna dost nahi banati'.aur vayse bhi mujhe kese dost ki jaroorat  nahi hai''.

 

DL felt bit awkward : meri bahen aur jootikaa ( her another frd) hi meri sabse doost hai '..aur unki jagha koi nahi lesakta'.

 

D( turns to her disagreeing her ) : nahi ayse thodi hi hota hai '.ase bhi to hoo sakta hai ke app apne kisi khas doost ko kho rahi hoo'

 

Sia turning to him angrily( bit loudly) : Ayse nahi ho sakta '. Aur vayse bhi mai tum se yeh se yeh sab kyun kah rahi hoon'..

 

Dharam thought hr messed every thing : mai'.  mai to bas uhi keh raha tha '. Mera appke dil ko jhot pahuchane ka koi matlab nahi tha''.

 

Sia ( still angry): toh theek hai ''Tum kya chahate ho aur kya  nahi iyse mujhe koi farak nahi padta '.. Behtar hoga agar tum apne kaam se kaam rakho'..

 

She goes away frm him'.

 

Dharam was feeling very hurt nobody ever spoke to him like this '''he was only trying to do frdship vit her but sheeeeee'''''

He was feeling as though he had lost some dear one '..he was looking onto her who sitting away on the couch n was sometimes glancing at dharam  angrily '''''.

 

Sia:Here was confused that y did she tell      him  all these things y did she even speak to him'.. she never normally speaks to a stranger '.that also soooo sweetly?/////////////  

 

 

Veer vas observing Dharam from long time n calls his frds nfinding him alone n sad he goes to him''.  He keeps his hand on dharams shoulder

He turns back n smiles at him..sadly'.. 

V: kya hua dharma?????? (in serious tone)kya use rajkumaari ne kuch kaha hai'''

 

D: nahi toh bas ase he''

 

Sanjam ( sarcastically):Kyun kahin tumne use appna dil to nahi de dyaaaa'.

 

Chand pokes him'.

 

V: Agar kuch nahi hua to tum etne udaas kyun hoooo//////////

 

Pundeer( folding his sleeves ) agar use ne kuch aysa vasa kaha toh mai uski'''''

 

D: Nahi   pundeer '. Ismai unki koi galti nahi hai '.vo main e  he use kuch jyda suna diya'.

 

Everybody looks at each other 

 

D tells everything'.

 

V: Dharam tum hamesha ayse he karteho    '.tum apna koi ghatiya sa bhashankyun dete ho''''?

 

Pundeer: koi baat ho yeh na ho lakin tumhare paas lamba   chauda bhashan jaroor tyaar hoota hai'.

 

Arjun : aadat se jo majboor haaiiiiii''''

 

Veer: abb bas karo tum sab''''..( every body taken aback'..they knew this tone of veer'''which was reall serious n determind'''''thy were not allowed to cross it '.)

 

V: looking at D: tumhe usse pyaar toh nahi ho gaya hai na??????????

 

D:looking into his bro's eyes n smiling lightly: pata nahi veer'..lakin vo mujhe pasand hai '''.( D  knew that he actually liked the girl'..or may be he likes her more than liking''..looking down again )

 

Mai unhe'..(n stops)''

 

Veer cannot let this happennnnnnnnn'''''.

 

PRECAP:     dharam: mujhe unse milna hai baat karni hai ,,,,,,

 

Sia hugs him'''''''.

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n here i start m part 6

RECAP: DHARAM TROUBLES SIA ''''' BY GIVING HIS COOL LECTURE😆

v: (cannot let this happen cannot let his bro to be sad on his birthday ........)
he knew that his bro was falling in love or may be fell in to it ...n would never joke in these matters ......
V:(sitting beside on the couch ..............in dharam): bolo dharam kya chahiya tuhmhe ......?
Sanjam : hai dharam tum jo kuch bhi mangoe thumhe ajj milega ...tumhare janamdin ke tofe ke roop mai ...........
Dharam looking into his determined frds face says: mai unse baat karna chata hoon .....unse dosti karna chahata hoon..... par vo to .....
V : vo sab tum hum pe chod do.....hum koi n koi tekhdam(martar or magic ) karke use manalenge....bas tum vohe karo jo hum kehte hai
D:rukoooo......... ( in what r u going to do look )
Chand : bharosa rakho dharam ....
Arjun:hum tumhari pari ko kahi nahi lejayenge'.

Sanjum : vayse bhi vo humme bilkul pasand nahi hai '.

Everybody starts going away from there 'to make a plan

Veer: dharam tumne to kaha tha ki tumhari raajkumaari susheel honi chaheye'.

Dharam:blushing slightly:abb vo meri kab se hogayi'.?    Mai to bas unhe pasand karta hoon'.pyaar nahi'

Veer : in his mind: samay ' samay ki baat hai dharam''.jab ho jayega bada maza ayega'

Sia :there found her old frd  jootikaa '..she is also very pretty n sweet'not lik other raajkumaaries 'they were chatting sitting ..

Veer n gang comes down' as sia speaking to jotikaa a dasi goes there '.

Dasi: raajkumaari sia app se koi milna chahata hai'

Sia: koi'.????? Uska koi naam nahi  hai kya?

Dasi(frightened): ji '..vo,''

Sia (makes up her mind ) : theekhai chalo''.

Jotikaa: pulls her down: tum theek to ho na sia ?

 Kahan jaa rahi ho tum'veer n his toil was hiding behind the curtain near by '..n dharam was standing away in some channel type of  way,,,,,,,

Veer: mai is e nahi chodunga'.

Pundeer : sia to uthke anne hi vali thi '.lakin yeh ladki'..( in frustration)  

Sia : kyun kya hua??
Jotikaa :tumhe nahi pata ?? ki is tarah kesi ke bulane par nahi jana cahiye'..aur aryanagar mai to bilkul bhi nahi'.
Sia : kyun?
Jotikaa:hai kyun ki yeha ke rajkumaar aur unke doost bohut shaytaan hai '..Yahan tumhe bohut savdaan rehna hoga ''
Arjun:mujhe lagta hai 'ki abb tumhe bach ke rahna hoga ''.
(uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu)
veer: kuch na kuch to karma padega abb'
.veer calls the dasi backn says something to her n she goes ''
veer goes ahead '..coming out of hiding ''
Arjun: trying to catch him'.: veer kahan jaa rahe ho tum?
Veer: abhi batata hoon''(turning n smiling graciously )
He goes near the two chatting girls 'n asks Jotikaa with a charming smile on his face '.

Veer: rajkumaari jootikaa ji mai hoon rajkummar veer ji mujhe appse kuch baat karni thi''. Kya app mare saath baahar aasakti hain??????
Veer knew he had done it cleverly'..he knew it that he was so charming that '..he could make any girl fall with him'n his akhiri teer was his killing smile'..
Jotikawas beautiful herself ''.when she saw veer her heart started pounding heard
Nnn her brain stopped working'.he is such a dashing guy ''..how could she refuse him'still loking at him she gets up '. N looks at sia
Jotikaa: mai abhi atti hoon''''.
Sia (confused) : par''

N leaves with veer

Dasi: rajkumaari sia 'apkoo koi sandesh dene aaya hai'.
Sia: to le avo'
Dasi nahi '.rajkumaariji'. vo sandesh vaahak sirf appko sandesh dena chahata hai
Sia (confused ) ': theek hai '..
She goes there '..
Veer was walking far from them'with jotikaa'.
Veer glances at his frds 'n signals'.they pushes pundeer front into the channel'.( where dharma was hiding'.)
For them always pundeer was the easy person to hold on coz'.he was not interested in girls'..at all'.n'there was no need a=of making an image or impressing'.. any one so''
Pundeer:to sia: rajkumaari sia '..Aayiyee - ayiyee mai app'.hi 'ka'intazaar kar raha tha'.
Sia :turning : kya'''' kyun ho tum? Aur '.aur kya' chahate ho yum?
Pundeer walking straight into the channel'' to her'.in a sarcastic way'.(like a gunda rajkumaar'..)
Sia:bit frightened :kaun ho tum'..aur 'aur 'kya' cahate ho tum????? Mujhe yahan kyun bulaya'..???
Pundeer bit confused '.n she is so pretty he didn't want to hurt her 'or make her weep: vo mai '.tum kyun ''..kahan '.aur''
Dharam vas hiding behind the curtain n was getting very angry'..
N veers frds were hiding on the other side of it ..
Sanjum:yeh pundeer kya kar raha hai'..
Chand : pagal ho gaya hai yeh'.Rajkumaari ko dekh ke'.
Arjun:agar iski vajha se hummari yojana kharaab hui toh mai isko appne snaan ghar mai duba 'duba ke maarunga '.nahi''eysa karne se to mere snaan ghar ganda hogayega''Me to ise kitched mai'..duba kar'.
Sanjam: bas karo '..
Sia :comes to halt she recalls jotikaa's talk about Aryanagar's'rajkumaars'.)
As pundeer was also wearingrajkumaarr's costume'.she thought 'if this is any prank played on her then she wont leave them'.
in a bold sort of voice)kya chaheye tumhe ????....... aur dekho'..LSia
Pundeer(coming to sense he should not be so smooth to her'.):tum'.
Sia shouts :kya????????
Pundeer(in tough voice n moving towards her'.): jabse tumhe dekha hai'/ dil mai kuch kuch hota hai''
Sia (walking backward): tum'.mere..paas mat anna'.varna mai'.
Pundeer: varna kya????karogi..tum'..yehan to koi bhi nahi hai'..na tumhare pitaji'..aur nahi tumhari vo '..gumnaam behen'..
Sia : tumhe m'..meri'..behan ke bare mai kyse pata chela'.

Pundeer himself don't know y he he said it or may be he knew'' it would come'.to frighten him she would definitely say that'.
Pundeer : tum uske chodo aur appne bare mai socho''..socho raajkumaari''''''''..kabse mai tumhe bula raha tha aur tum ho ke mere paas aa he nahi rahi thi'.
Sia : matlab'.tumne juht bola'.
Dharam was getting worried '..seeing her frightened like this''
Pundeer: hain'to''.abb to tum bhi yahi ho'.to bataavo mai kaysa lagta hoon tumhe''dekhne mai'..
Arjun: slowly: bavakuuf sa'.(n gives five to chand.)
Sia : mai kyun bataauuu
Pundeer :reaches her n stands exactly infront of her '..
Pundeer: kyunki mai '. Tum se shaadi karme vala hoon'
Sia (frightened ''shouting'..)kya?????
Pagal ho gaye ho tum''..janne do mujhe'.
Then she turns to walk back'.
Pundeer's hands were trembling'.to do this but any thin for veer ,,,'..he holds her hand'.
Sia :starts weeping'. :dekho tum '.chod do'..mujhe''.dekho 'tum''.
Pundeer: dekh he to raha hoon'

Dharam could n't bear this '''how could he let her weep'..or hurt her because of his selfishness'..
Sia was struggling'
Sia chado,'''''cha=odo mujhe'..
Arjun : bas kuch daer aur pundeer'..bas dharam ke anne ki dari hai''
Dharma wants to end this'. He comes out'.
In tensed voice ,,,,,,,,,,Pundeer chood do use'mai kuch nahi cahta''

Chand: is dharma ka demaag to theek hai na '.kya keh raha hai yeh'.
Arjun: yeh sab kuvch beegaad ke rakh de ga'.veer kahan gaya'.chalo hum he kuch karte hain'.

Sia : weeping trys to go near him'..

Dharam : feeling guilty : pundeer chodo unhe'..tum

Pundeer Knows him n cuts him'.:tumduur raho dharam'..yehan tumhara koi kaam nahi hai'..jao yehan se

Dharam thinks cant he understand ''its not right'his lady was weeping'.

Dharam : angrily : pundeer tum'.

Pundeer :signaling dharam.,''to  give him( pundeer himself ) a light slap'.

While which sia was looking at dharam'.

Dharam: in frustrastation'.

Pundeer knew it was coming'.n dharam will mess every thing up'.

He slaps dharam withhis free hand'

Sia: dharam'.

Dharam : dekho  unhe pundeer mai bilkul maazaak nahi kar raha hun'..bevakuuf'.

Dharam moves forward'to  force pundeer '.leave sia'.he didn't want to beat his frd '''for his stupidity'..how can he do that?

But pundeer gives him another blow tightly'.

Dharam in frustration '..gives him a blow'.in return '..thinking'. cant he understand''
Veer n toil were enjoying this seen n laughing'..

Pundeer falls down at dharam's one blow'.n sia also falls with him'.

Sia gets up ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, runs,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, her savor    nnnnnnn hugs him''

Dharam was lost when she did that

Sia :was  weeping

:dharam '..dharam'..

Dharam : bas  'sia ' mai '..

When pundeer's frds came there Dharam n sia comes to their senses'' n   the couple separates ''''''.

:Dharam : pundeer mai' darasal'..

Arjun : acha  kia tumne '.dharam'.( while other's were giggling)

Dharam : nahi mujh   ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,  vo''''

Sanjum: jao dharam'..aur apni sia ko bhi lejao'''..

Chand: varna pata nahiis pundeer jayse loog kahinse  tapak na pade'.(sarcastically)'..

N glaring at pundeer who was still on the ground'..nthroughs an angry look at him'. His left eye was all red''''..

They pushed dharam '.n asks him to go''n sia to move'..as dharam turns to ask pundeer sorry'

Then dharam also accompanies her walking thtough the channel  but keeping distance '.sia was still weeping a bit '.. she was shocked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Arjun(smiles naughtily): itne paas lakin itne duur???????

Sanjam : at this throws the show case near by'..

Sia jumps slightly n runs to dharam n holds his arm'..

She did not dare to look back'..n dharam too didn't look back he knew that his frds did it'..

A+S+C gives five happily'.rejoicing'.

When dharam n sia  disappers they turns to pundeer''''''''..

 

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n here i start m part 8

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Music plays .......as follows......... N a lady sings with her band ''''''''sia feels as though she was herself singing

 

The music plays''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

 

Sawaariya ' sawaariya '..mai toh hui bavaria tuune maan mooh liya '..sawaariyaan hoo'..

(She looks at dharam lovingly ''n he smiles '''her heart beat stops'..she watches him admiring his smile'..)

 

Uljha sa yeh maan hai '..sulgha sa yeh tan hai'.. Sapnoo ka savaan hai '..naynoon ka angan hai '' jhalke maan gaagariya''sawaariyan'.hoo''..

Sawaariya ' sawaariya'''music

 

(dasi brings the bangles'Dharam was busy in selecting n she was just staring at him'.he knew she also started liking him'n thanks to VEER N HIS TOLI '. As she was sitting so close to him'n after selecting he gives her to wear but instead she gives away her hand '. To him'.Dharam smiles n takes it '''then the lady sings sia's heart' )

Jo tu yuhn tu paas ayaa hai '..

Jo yuhn tu dil pe chayahai'

Toh maine kya paya hai kyse kahoon'.hai'

Kahin dhadkan ki kaliyan hai'

Kahin sapnoo ke galiya hain'

Maan main rangraliyaan hai kyse kahoon '..

 

(dharam smiles looking at her n again bend his head slightly  looking at her bangles n then at her)

then the song

Tu 'jo'mujhe''ayse bahkaye'.

kabhi_- kabhi mujhe badi laajse ayeee'

Buhli huin abb jayse apni dagariyaan'.

Jabse hai dehi maine prem '.nagariya''prem nagariya'.

 

Sawaariya'.. Ho'.. OOOOOoooooo

 

( dharam gives her hand back 'sia blushes'. N observes the bangles''Dharam watches her with a cute smile, on his face'.. Sia still blushing looks into dharam's eyes n '.eye lock'.)  Every body smirks'))

Tu jo mila mujhe toh ye saara sama badal gaya'

Khile lage phool se mari raahoon mai''

Phir yeh laga mujhe ki yeh dharti nayi hui'.naya amber hua'.

Meri aur teri chaha mai'..

Chanchal hava tarana koi gaye'..

 

( wing blows her hair making her look more beautiful'..)

Nadiyaan bhi kahaani kahti jaye'..

Jab se meli sajna'.

Tujhse nazaariyaan'

Hogayi hai sudh ' budh ki mujhse..gataria'..

Sawaariya ' sawaariyaa''''music fades'.

 

Veer n gang comes there'. Sia n dharam were still immersed in each other '.

 

Pundeer: (clears his throat): everybody laughs

 

Sia n dharam's eyelock breaks'.n comes to halt'.n starts pretending as though he was searching bangles n sia too'..

 

Jotikaa : laughs ) bas bhi karo '.abb tum dono'. Hume sab pate hai'..ke yahan kya chal raha hai''

 

Sia : kuch nahi chal raha hai hum dono ke beech'..

 

Arjun: lakin humne toh app dono ke baare mai pucha hi nahi hai'n laughs'

 

Dharam: knew that his frds vere watching them from some time': kab ayee tum sab yahaan'.?

 

Veer:..(sarcastically):Hum toh abhi abhi ayen hain '''..

(with the glimpse of laughter in his voice )Kabse, yaha bathe-bathe tum dono ko, dekh raha tha''..Lekin kuch samajh mai nahi..ayaa ke tum dono kar kya rahe the'

 

Sia blushes'

 

D: aur ayega bhi nahi'.( smiling at his bro's innocence'')

 

Sia: gets up looking at jotikaa' :chalo mujhe mahandi lagani hai'( who goes wit her'. N)

 

sanjam: teasing : aur dharam ke naam ke hi mehndi lagana'..

 

Dharam smiles at her n looks at his frds,'..

 

Veer : toh?

( while others smirks'..)

 

D:Toh kya?

 

Sanjam: humme nahi pata tha ke tum itne ehsaan faraamoosh ho'..dharam'.

 

Chand  : hummne tumhe tumhari raani se melaya aur tum'..humme hi'

 

Dharam: knew they were emotionally  black mailing him '.n decided to tell them his progress well they desirve the truth after all: Batata hoon chalo'..

 

He tells n reaches veer's room 'where pundeer was sitting on the couch '..wit black eye''.. Others starts laughing looking at pundeer's condition

 

Dharam : mujhe maaf kardo pundeer'..

 

Veer :goes n sits in his beautiful kings style'.: hain 'hain '.maaf  kar do becare ko pyaar ke maare ko'.(sarcastically)

 

Dharam: gives him'not so funny look' : pundeer '..

 

Pundeer: chodo dharam'.hota hai'.stands up'. N hugs him'.

 

Dharam hugs him back'.n pats him'. Breakingtheir hug says shukriya'.

 

He sits on the couch'n in serious tone '..:Lakin pundeer tumhe ek haffte ke liye mahel mai ghumna baand karna hoga'.fir '.fir'(hesitating'a bit) veer'..veer se duur rehna hoga'..

 

Pundeer (shocked):kyun ? ''Bhala mai kyun dharam se duur rehne laga'.?

 

Dharam : kyun ke tum ne sia ko daraya'.aur use lagta hai' ke tum bure ho'.

Pundeer: toh'.?

 

Dharam: frustrated:  toh kya????? Tum veer se nahi mil sakte( he said this wit such an intensity that'''as though it was there in his mind to say it from long time'')

 

Actually some where in his heart he was jealous of veer's frds '.He always wanted veer to be with him 'everytime '.every minute''..every sec '..but veer had too many frds'.n these were also very close to veer. Sometimes Dharam feels as though to veer they are more important n close than him'.

 

(But u know our veer is always BINDAAS)

 

Pundeer :seriously: main ayse nahi kar sakta'..mai  'mai  veer se duur nahi reh sakta'..

 

( the room went too cold''it filled wit emotions )

 

Veer goes to pundeer n puts his hand on him '.every body goes near him'expect dharam  who was looking sad

Veer: with the glimpse of laughter in his voice ):Pundeer '' mai toh'mai'toh tum, logoke bagayar,nahi rah sakta'..aur'..,'yeh tumlogo ke seva aur kuyn samajh sakta''.mai toh tum logo ke bageyar , kahin jaata bhi nahi'.aur, duur rahna toh ,bohot duur ke baat hai'..

 

A'.S''C''.P says together''HAin tum aysa kar bhi nahi sakte '''..kyunki'

 

'JAHAN RAJA VAHIN USKI PRAJA'''.

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Edited by junglli billi - 15 years ago

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Edited by junglli billi - 15 years ago

Awww....hun....it wasn't bad at all...please continue with ur FF....I'm sure as the parts keep cuming, more people will start to comment.... Edited by rajatnmughda4ev - 15 years ago

Wait a minute....I'm very confused about the Shera and R. Ritika thing..... Are they the same people?

hey that was good...
yh me to thinkng same here......this shud be in the DV forum....also are shera n ritkia the same pple..:S

ahhhhh.... omg... it is chhoooo cuteeeeee...... i loved the way veer teases dharam..... pls pls plsssss post soon..... i didnt get the ritika -shera bit though.... i guess its a suspence... neways.... plssssssss post soonnn

i'm a bit confused anout r and shera are they same people plz tel btw it was gr8 do cont plz post in dv forum plz thanx

lol great part
nice update
though like everybody else i m confused abt ritika n shera
i think its a suspense update soon lol

hey...............very nice yaar............