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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: silverlinesky

awwww so sweet...i was missin PRC gang in DV...bt not nymore thnxs to ur fanfic...plz do continue...waitin for ur next update..



ill update soon for sure dear n thank u for ur comment .....................😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran99

it was good yaar update soon



😉thank u n ill update it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiri

it was gr8 yaar but wen will shera and veer meet .

 
 
 
                 esha



😉very soon dear i wanna run  dharam n sia dharam n sia's love story on the track n n then ur fav veer n shera....vl it wont take long dear ill do it quickly..............😆
very soon
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My 9 part is Sumyuka's intro

precap
: sia heart sings ………a song……
veer: looking at dharam : tum chinta mat karo ....pundeer ....apne kamre se bahar nahi ayega...

Dharam: smiles weakly agreeing
every body moves out of veer's room to sleep but dharam vas still standing there thinking...

Veer: kyun dharam ......, neend nahi aarahi hai tumhe?

dharam: nahi atse koi baat nahi hai...(moving out ) n turns ) Lakin ajj jo kuch bhi hua mere aur sia ke beech ......bohut jaldi ho gaya.....

veer :(smiling lovingly) dharam bua kya kahti hai...........pyaar pehli nazar mai hoo ya baad mai ..lakin asar to pyaar ka hi chodta hai....(he goes near him) pyaar .........pyaar hi hota hai dharam aur kuch nahi...

Dharam:(shocked) he thought that veer is not intersted in all these things ....n he vll never vanna also but....

V : kyun kya hua...?

dharam : mera bhai to bada ho gaya hai aur mujhe pata nbhi nahi chala ...
smiling both bro's hugs n takes farewell to sleep

n here sia n dharam slept very badly.......

morning dharam n sia got up early n went down...where sia dad was departing but Maharaj aryavardhan stops him ...n asks dharam n veer to show sia n other rajkumaaries their Kingdom.....

Dharam was very exited about this

But veer: was getting stomach ace he thought : yeh dharam toh sia ke saath nikal jayega lakin mai is ,.....is jotikaa ke saath fas jaaunga....

Arjun: kya hua veer?

sunjum:understanding his expression : chinta mat karo veer hum hain navo toh hum sab ke saath he aayenge....

Arjun: aur tum daro mat vo badi pyaari hai....(shyly)

chand : ab vo bhi tum he pyaari lagne lagi hai????(smirking)
they all got ready n they were actually accompanied by some other rajkumaar n rajkumaaries too.

sia was looking awesome n dharam dashing in his orange robes they all went ...

veer n gang left this couple alone....sia went for shopping ,playing on jhula etc etc....n our dharam dude vas fida on her every adda ....n 2 days went on lik that only....n veer n gang vere smirking at this couple....n missing pundeer n chan as chand stayed wit pundeer ....
n rantra vas getting angry looking at this couple....she goes near them...veer n gang becomes very happy:chalo thodi se entertainment toh ho jayegi .....varne yeh dono kitne boring hain....

Antra :looking at dharam: mujhe app se kuch baat karni hai....

Sia: kyun?

dharam: ji mai apko nahi janta .....

sia : aur jaroorat bhi nahi hai...

Veer n gang was enjoying,,,,,all this ....

Antra:getting irritated : mujhe ....

sia:tumhe dharam se baat karne ki jaroorat nahi hai...

Dharam :confused looking at sia : sia lakin ek baar inke baat toh.....

sia: koi jaroorat nahi hai...n pulls him away to another shop...by his arm....n she comes to halt bit later n looks into his smiling face ....n leaves his arm shyly.....

sia :vo maito bas...kyunki. (she stammers )...

dharam laughs at her cutely....:hota hai....agar apke paas koi ladka aata toh mai bhi aysa hi kar ta .....

Sia : was shocked how did he come to know that how was she feeling??????She smiles unknowingly....

Dharam: kya hua....?

Sia:kuch nahi.....chale ...
(they move on)

n here antra was burning .......veer n party laughed looking at her condition...

Arjun:raajkuumari ji.....(sarcastically)....

antra: jii....(she was still looking in D n S direction n then looks at arjun n others... seeing the unusual glee on there their faces she becomes more angry : kya hai???????

sanjam: uske sapne dhakna baand kar do....

Veer:vo aapka nahi ho sakta...(walking forward wit his royal attitude...beautifully in bet. of arjun n sanjam n smiles)

Antra:something pierces in her heart...or she feels to be.......in her mind....wow ...I wont mind if its not dharam it can be u too......

jootikaa: feels awkward n breaks the silence: kyunki vo sia se pyaar kar ta hai..

Antara:gives her a cold look: acha.... tumse kisne kaha...?

Arjun: humme to dekhai de raha hai... lakin tumhara pata nahi .... agar...tumhari akhhen hai toh....

Veer :chodo arjun....yeh unka kuch nahi bigaad sake gi....chalo...

antara was glaring at him swaring ....I LL SOON SHOW U >>>> U WAIT N WATCH HAND SOME VEER.............

they all went back to mehal n at last they some how convinces dharam to propose sia the coming morning...

after the visit today...most of the people went back only sia n antra's n jootikaa's families were there

Veer was feeling really restless he wanted to meet pundeer pundeer n meet him...n chand also said that pundeer was getting desperate him...n his others..so he decided to go n hav dinner wit him n his frds ...so he told his mom that he was not hungry n he ate already...
n at dinner M . Kamalavati told this....Dharam knew that veer was lying he did not any thing since morning.....n he went to meet pundeer ......but didnt include him......he felt very sad......... pundeer was also his frd ...he also missed him ..so he gets up
let m tell u that they were sitting on the ground n a small stool on which plates were kept...

M .nivriti: kya hua dharam...
(dharam calls nivi as choti bua n kamalavati badi bua)
Dharam: kuch nahi choti bua...

nivi: kahin tumhara veer se.....

dharam : nahi bua..............bas mujhe veer se kuch baat karni thi....

M kamalavati : achaa suno......toh....maine pundeer teen dino se nahi dekha......vo agar mil jaye to kehna ki mujhse aakar mile.....jii badi bua...
(he glances at sia ......sia she looked frightened....n he goes...)

antra finds all this ver fishy.....so she had heard that veer had 4 frds excluding dharam ....but she had seen only 3 so she escaped from there saying that she had enough food.
n there veer n others enters...

pundeer was sitting alone n very sad...he did not eat any thing....his food was kept aside(veer clears his throat )

pundeer :looks up.....n amused to see him infront ....:veer .... (hugs him...) n looking around agaye tum sab......

pundeer : bohut yaad atte o tum log...
veer sits beside him with his hand on his shoulder..who sits .on the bed...
n others sits onthe couch

sanjum: sarcastically : woh toh dekh hi raha hai....tumne bhuuk hartaal jo karrakha hai.....

veer: smiles n indecates them to pass the plate: abb kuch kha bhi lo....in dps a piece of chappati into the daal n keeps it before pundeer's mouth n he eats it .veer serves a byte to every frd n gives plate to pundeer....
N pundeer does the same… n puts a bye in front of his veer looks at him amused….

Pundeer: hum sab jaante hain…vo…kya tha….hamare raja ke liye????

A voice says: phele praja phir vo kuud….
Dharma enters saying n smiling…..:mujhe toh tum log hamesha bhul jaate ho….aur veer tum bhi…

Veer: nahi dharam …mai to bs tumhe pareshaan nahi karna chaahta tha…

Pundeer: walks front n hugs him…:tumhe koi nahi bhul sakta…

Dharam: to phir tum…

Sanjum: ara tum toh sia mai he gum the (sarcastically)

Arjun: hain humne tumhe sia ke naam ke samunder mai duub n eke liye chod diya….(giving five to others)

Dharma(blushes):lakin eska yeh matlab toh nahi hai na ….ke tum mujhe pundeer se milne bulao he na….

Pundeer : making him sit :dharam agar tumhe sia ne mere saath dekh liya toh vo tumse naaraaz hojayigi…aur humme se koi bhi tumhari muskuraahat nahi chin na chahata hai….

Dharam thinks how wrong he was ….he is loved by every one…everyone cares for him….says…smiling .ab khana shuru kare bohut bhuuk lagi hai….

After finishing thy went out of pundeer's room n on the way they meets sia n jootika but antra fills in….she hears there convo…….. in pundeer's room n decides to tell sia…but she decides to do it later Antra: vayse kya tumhare pitaji ko pata hai …ki tum yahan in ladkoo ke saath ho…

Jotika: furiously : kya mai tumhe ladka nazar aati hoon…..

Antra:nahin toh …lakin yeh sab toh ladke hi hain

Jotikaa: tum

Sia :stops her :chalo…(looking at dharam)…….hum sab ko chalna chaheye raat bohut ho chuki hai….

She didn't had any other choice ….if her father will find out about this meeting she will be in mess….

Dharam :smiles…..n sia leaves…with antra…..

Veer: was looking suspiciously at antra he felt as though she knew something that she should not have known…..
But jootikaa turns n winks…at veer he smiles cutly at her….

Sanjum (sarcastically):kahin tumhe iss se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya hai….veer…………..

Veer:comes to halt:chup ho jao sanjum….(seriously )

Sunjum: guiltily :mai toh bas mazaak kar raha tha….

Veer : abb keh dita hai aayanda mat kabhi mat kehna…

Veer didn't know y did he said this but …..he dint waana get paired with any wrong girl…..n yes he didn't get his girl but soon very soon he will be getting…his girl just like dharam…………..they all went to their respective rooms n mehal …
(leme expain guys so that it would be easy for u to imagine…..the whole palace was actually round…..n were made up of many many blocks…n there was a large area left n between .for every block there was a separate garden on its other side n were separated from each other….) veer n dharam's block was separated with sanjum , pundeer n chand's block they all lived together…n ajun's block was next to agni's block…..
              Mean while some where in thick woods chirping of girls was coming....
It was almost evening...the sun was set n the sky was turning from bluish-red to orange to violet.The three beautiful ladies were were walking in front n smiling broadly in their grand dresses n the others vere wearing simple dress expensive though......reveling that they they were some where related a royal family...the ladies other than the 3 in front were carrying large plates in their hands ....covered with red cloth ...they were the dasies

A girl spoke out of the 3 ..she had rough but sweet voice...n her face was bit naughty n boldshe was chamki....:says enthusiastically to the other two.... : ajj bohut mazaa ane wala hai.....

2nd one had coolsort of voice'she had naughty face but in reality she was not...:hain bohat
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3rd one said in soft misty voice which was now bit terrified :tum logo ko nahi lagta ki humme aysa nahi karna vhahiye tha???

chamki: chup ho jao tum....baar baar adcane daalti rahiti ho mat karo

rudali:chinta mat karo vyshali kesi ko kuch pata nahi chale ga

A lady comes to them ....(chamki gave the other two sharp look n they came close forming a triangle n stood rooted at the spot .

surali: her face was not so kind ...she was a severe looking women...her hair was tied into a bun at the back of her head. she had croaky type of voice: rudly: mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaya hai.....

chamki: slowly : hain kyse yaad rahega ... sathiya jo gayi ho.... bhudi .....
others gives a mysterious smile...........

surali : kya kaha tumne????

chamki(spats) kuch nahi...

surali:mai jaa rahi hoon ....lakin iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki tum log apni man maani karo...jayada daer mat karna...

she turns to go...

chamki: to confirm if she is coming back or not: kyun?

surali : maine raajkumaari sumyukta ko nahi jagaya aur raani ma ke aane ka waqt bhi hogaya hai....

chamki(snarls) : usne kaha tha ki ,use koi pareshaan na kare ......varna vo apni talwaar se us ka vadh kar degi...aur tumhara akri din hai...mujhe lagta hai...vo toh tumhe nahi chodegi.......
surari:holds her ear : toh tum darane ki koshish kar rahi ho....

chamki : koshish ????? mai toh tumhe daarraaa hi rahi thi
surali: tightens her grip: mai tumhe...

chamki:screems: abb jaooooo...

surali leaves .............

chamki : irritated ...shakes her head ..: kya yeh pydaish se he aysi hai kya....................pagal kahin ki.

vyshali: bala tali....

they reached the water fall com lake type of place....they were heading for bath....It was a beautiful place ...... the small stream ok water was falling from the top of the rocks like a shower....n the water was filled in bet forming a lake...

the tourches were lit on the bank of the lake....n moon wa already out..

rudali: bala tali???? bala toh abb ayegi jab use pata chalega ki sumyukta vahan nahi ....balki hamaare saath hai...

they all started laughing......

Chamki: abb bahar aa jao sumyukta...hum pohuch gaye....

A beautiful soft but bit sharp , jingling voice spoke behind them ...which they were hiding forming a triangle:(excitedly) cachhhhhhh.....

she comes front...she takes off black shawl .... off...

She was a young ex termly pretty lady...she looked stunning...she was not completely white as snow but was fair ................ there was a bright moon like radiance on her face..n skin.......she was a full aproved imagination of a boys dream girl...

.she was tall with jet black long silky hair..n jumur glittering n some long .....face n shoulder length hair hangings....inserted into her hair.of pearls ( it was white n black combination) n appered to emit faint glow

She was wearing....shocking pink robes.....her lahnga was floating on the ground...a bit.... it was grandly knitted...also her chunnari which was neatly pinned on the front, to her blouse on the shoulder....sher had a scroll tied to her lehnga on her waist.

              there was a chain made up of simple white pearls on her waist she was waring matching accessories made up of magnificent opals....gleaming below her throat n slim delicate fingers....this type of dressing was her style quotient ...

            She was as though a glowing celestial body from space with gods grace...on her................at this sight of hers her frds also went under trance for some time....
she took hold of her lahnga a bit high off her legs ...she walked forward gracefully...with raised eyebrows...she had a surpressed glee on her lips. scanning the beauty of nature...pouring her magic every where.......she took hold of chamki n revolved ones n said (excitedly) : yeh............yeh jagha to bohut khubsuurat ho gaya hai.....hai naa...????

chamki ( adjusting herself ) : haan thoda sa....

Rudali : kaafi dino baad aayi hoo na isliye

Sumyukta : bitterly : bohut din??????.....hum yahan, pure ek saal baad , aarahe hain....
she went near the water n puts her feet into it ...it was too cold...a shiver ran through her body...n turns to her frds..... n sniffed...

vyshali : bohot thanda hoga ....mujhe nahi lagta ki app naha paayangi.....

sumyukta: kyun nahi naha payenge?...hum, ....hum jaroor nahayenge...


Chamki: tumhe sardi lag jayegi... ....toh .....toh rani maa hemme saza dengi....
sumyukta she opens her mouth to argue but swallows it .........she...thinks well thts true....n shts on the rocks near by quietly .......

Her dadi n dad never lets her to go any where ....expect for threatening people...or for tax(vasooli) that also she was always accompanied wit atleast 15 daakoos....n 20 ...solders.... spying her ...... SO some times her frds smuggles her off of her father n grandmom's grip.....she alsowants some privacy u know....

chamki: abb chodo be....naraaz mat hona ...aur chalo thodi si masti karte hain...jab hum sab mil he gaye hain....

they all changed their dress expect samy n stated enjoying in water .....

sumyukta sang in her beautiful voice ...........

Behta hai man kahin ........
kahan jaanti nahi ....( wit her hands outstretched....n revolving)
koi rok le yehin..............
aage re mann kahin baage re mann ...............................

then her frds water on her ....n she laughs......the whole forest was Ringling wit her laughter..

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i hope u enjoyed  it 😉
u vll have to read further to know that sumyukta is a dakoo cum rajkumaari...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
it was brill loved yyour intro of sanyo gr8 do cont soon...
 
 
 
                                    esha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
hey cool part

hmmm Dharam and Sia's relationshp is sweet and Veer is also a very gud brother. His friends are just hillarious.

This Antara is sure suspicious and loks like she'll be trouble pretty soon.

So Sumyukta has entered the story now. Hmmm interesting and i loved how u introduced her it was just like  a fairytale.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
wow......
finally i read whole....
very beutifully expressed....
every scean is moving in  front of my eyes very clearly.....beutiful description....
but plz tell me who is playing the role of poondir .as harsh is agni....it will be easier for me to picturise....
and samyukta accompanied by dakoos why??????
 
i hope that girl jotika wud not get hurt when lovestory between veer and samyoukta will start.......
 thanks for twist of antra's behavoiur..it made it interesting...
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
awesum deary..
gotta rush..
 
*reserved*
will cum n edit later..
nthanx for keepin the promise...
 
 
Love ya my sweet heart badi behna...love ya to the core....t.ccccc
 
 
 
 
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Edited by cute_madhu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
😉

Originally posted by: hiri

it was brill loved yyour intro of sanyo gr8 do cont soon...

 
 
 
                                    esha

 
 
 
thank u dear n ill continue it soon😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: arwa72

hey cool part

hmmm Dharam and Sia's relationshp is sweet and Veer is also a very gud brother. His friends are just hillarious.

This Antara is sure suspicious and loks like she'll be trouble pretty soon.

So Sumyukta has entered the story now. Hmmm interesting and i loved how u introduced her it was just like  a fairytale.

 
thank u so much dear