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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank you Amruta. Sam and Amruta Gr8 Updates. No problem TIna. Waiting for your update.

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Abhi--Captain aap theekh hain na??

Gunny-Haan kyun?/
Abhi-Nahi bas check kar rahe the.
And abhi rushed off..
Gunny dint know what was happening...he went to the infirmary!!
He saw Vidya awake..
Vidya--Thank god aap aa gayee....aap theekh hain na..
Gunny nodded.
Vidya sighed..
Gunny sat silently beside her..
He needed to tell her evrything...all his confusions....but he knew it wasnt right!...she wasnt the right person...she was already ill...so he left it.
Vidya-Kya hua??
Gunny-Vidya humein jaldi kuch karna hoga!!..
Vidya nodded..
Vidya-Mujhe jaanneey doon...
Gunny looked at her ..
Vidya--Please Sir..Cadet Vidya Saxena ko janney doon....sir aggar meri jagah koi aur hota toh??...AAp apneey desh ke barrey main sochte na....waisey hi....mujhe ek cadet ke tarah dekho it will be easy!!
Gunny-Vidya....how can I not see the reality of my life...the truth is that your not just any cadet to me..
Vidya-Main jaanti hoon its tough....but we have to do it sir....humarey desh ke liyee aapki jaan ke liye....let me go..
Gunny--Kal 9:00 hours par mere room main...seeyou Cadet!!
Gunny left!!..
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Next morning Gunny was confused...he decided to speak about evrything to someone....but he dint know who...
MGG...But then how would he tell him about vidya and him...MGG was a proofessional and this was against the laws.....so he left that..
Maa...Well she was in enough trouble..
Abhimanyu--He dint knoe anything about vansh vidya and all..
Whom would he turn too.....there was noone!!
Abhimanyu entered his room..
Abhi--Captain hum aapse kuch baat karna chathe hain..
Gunny-Boliye...
Abhi--Aap Shikha ko achi tarah se jaantey hain.....is she as innocent as she looks??
It was a direct question...completely serious..
Gunny had got his person...It had to be Abhimanyu...Abhimanyu had told him that he was always there as a friend.....it was time to speak to that friend..
Gunny-Abhimanyu main aapse baat karna chatha hoon..
Abhi realized there was something...Gunny never called him Abhimanyu..
Abhi-Please humein batao....kya chal raha hain yeh sab??
Gunny decided to tell Abhi the story as short as possible..
Gunny-Ok jo main aapse kehney jaa raha hoon....woh confidential...
Abhi-Alright go on..
Gunny-Vidya par kal raat hamla plan kiya gaya tha...maine shooter ko pakda tha..maine uska chehra dekha tha..
Abhi-Kaun hain woh??
Gunny-Shikha....she was holding the gun at vidya....
Abhi-What??????/
Gunny-She claimed that she got a letter threatning her to kill vidya...if she dint they would kill me..
Abhi--Lekin Vidya-Shikha - Aur aapka kya connection hain?
Gunny was silent..
Abhi-Tell mee..
Gunny--Woh Shikha mujhse pyaar karti hain...toh they had an advantage...meri jaan ka wasta de kar..
Abhi nodded..
Abhi-Lekin Vidya kyun??
Gunny-Uski bhi ek kahaani hain....Vidya Lieutanant Vansh pradhan ke honey waali biwi thi...
Abhi was shocked!!
Abhi--You mean woh Vansh Pradhan jo eagle..
Gunny-Haaan..
Abhi-Abb main janta hoon iss sab ka connection...Cadet Saxena par kiyee gayye sareey hamlein....it all makes sense..
Gunny--Ek aur baat hain..
Abhi-KYa??
Gunny-Lt.Vansh Pradhan mere bhai tha...mera judwa bhai!!
Abhi was like shocked big time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Abhi--Judwa bhai????
Gunny-Haan....aurr is waqt woh vidya ko bhi threaten kar rahe hain ki woh mujhe marr dengey....they want vidya in their gang otherwise they will kill me.....they want her to do some illegal work.....
Abhi-Captain humne aisey missions kiyee hain.....theres no harm....vidya ko bhej kar hum unhe trace kar lengey you knoe that plan.......na toh aapko kuich hoga....aur naho vidya koi illegal kaam karegi..
The look Gunny gave Abhimanyu said it all!!
Abhi--Ohh...
Abhi was frustrated..
Abhi calmed himself..
Abhi-Dekhiye Captain...Aap aisa nahi kar saktey....main aapka darr samjhta hoon....lekin Captain........aap aapney personal feelings ko yun....apney kaam ke ...aap samjh rahe hain na..
Gunny was reserved about telling abhi about him and vidya he decided to fake it..
Gunny-Jaise aap soch rahe hain waisa nahi hain....main vansh ko kho chuka hoon vidya hi hain jo mujhe vansh ke baarey main batati hain.......aisa kuch nahi hain..
Abhi-WEll Captain jo bhi hain...personal feelings hain...you feel protective about her kyunki woh aapkey bhai ke biwi thi....but captain humara kaam pehle aatta hain...yeh desh pehle aata hain....humein jald se jald ek team banakar iss mission par nikalna chahiye..
Gunny nodded and there wasa knock...Vidya entered
Abhi decided to leave..
Gunny-Maine kaffi kuch discuss kiya Abhimanyu ke saath..aur maine aapna faisla le liya hain..
Vidya-Kya hain faisla??
Gunny couldnt look at her into her eyes...He turned away...
Gunny-Hum bahut jald ek team banakar iss misison par jayengey!!
Vodya knew it was tough for him..
Vidya turned him and kept a hand on his cheek..
Vidya-We'l come out of together.....dont worry...main sahi salamat wapas aaongi...I promise!!
Gunny nodded..
And they hugged!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
abhi came out of gunny's room...after all the conversation he had wid gunny he became concerned about gunny...wats wrong wid capt randhava he thaught...why capt was so disturbed? being gunny's frd abhi was worried for him...though gunny was denying , abhi knew dat he(gunny) had feelings for vidya...dats why he wasnt ready to send her for mission....
wats wid shikha...her behaviour was very weird...
abhi : mujhe shikha par najar rakhni hogi...
n then.....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Abhi was thinking about the whole thing when he heard Gunny calling him. Abhi turned behind to see Gunny coming out of his room walking towards him. He saw Vidya leaving Gunny?s office. Gunny caught up with him.

Gunny: Humein MGG ko inform karna hoga aur phir unke permission se strategies plan karna hoga.

Abhi nodded his head.

Gunny: Captain aap ne humse kyon puchha ki Shikha innocent hain ki nahi? Aapko doubt kyon hua.

Abhi: Actually kal dophar ko hum aapke office mein kuch files wapas rakne gaya the , waha humne Shikha ko aapke office mein dekha. Aap nahin the. Aisa lag raha tha ki woh humare aane se pehle kuch kar rahin thi aur jaise hum enter huye woh chup chap kadhi ho gayi. Uske baad hum HQ gaye the aur late wapas aaye to isiliye humi aapse baat nahin kar payee. Jab mein wapas aa raha tha humne Shikha ko point 1857 ki taraf se wapas aate dekha. Itni raat gaye woh point 1857 aakeli kyun gayi? Unki jaan ko khatara hain isiliye to woh yahan hai. Akela jaane ka matlab.

Oh God! Iska matlab kal raat ko Shikha ne mujhe aur Vidya ko point 1857 pe dekha. Woh hamara picha kar rahi thi.

Edited by Darwin - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Guys gr8 updates..... 👍🏼Vijaya, Amruta n Tina gr8 work..👏👏Luved the UDs😊
Gunny didnt know how Shikha came there..It was damn difficult for someone to go up there alone n risky too n a girl like Shikha had gone there alone...Was there someone else wid her too...This girl was here in KMA bec there was a threat to her life n she is roaming around alone..Gunny dint know wht was happening...What was Shikha upto???? What had she seen out there?? Now he was sure there was something tht he didnt know abt Shikha.....But wht was it??? Why was Shikha gettin so mysterious??
Abhi was not able to know wht was goin on Shikha wanted to likk Vidya but why?? Abhi felt he knew the answer to this but his heart didnt want to accept it...HE alwys knew wht Vidya n Gunny shared bet each other but he still didnt wanna accept it n now he had come to know tht Vansh was Gunnys bro n Vidya was goin to marry Vansh..Then it striked him tht Gunny had said JUDWA so tht meant they were identical twins....Oh God!!! Abhi felt what was goin on??
Gunny was more worried for Vidya than anything else..HE ddint care what Shikha saw or wht she felt abt him..He had told her tht there was nothing for her in his life but this girl but she didnt want to understand...He decided to speak abt it to her..He wanted to know abt it...
Gunny started walkin towards Shikhas room ..He wanted answers to his numerous questions n he knew only Shikha wud answer tht no one else.
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Edited by sweetdreams4040 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sam....as usual fabulous update!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thnks a lot Amruta. So sweet of you dear😊

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As Gunny was goin towards Shikhas room he saw tht Abhi was coming tht way..

Abhi-Capt. Aap kahan jaa rahe hain. MGG ne urgent meeting bulayi hai.. Hum vahin jaa rahe hai.. Aap bhi chaliye..

Gunny-Chaliye..

There was no way to skip this Gunny felt.. There was something or the other coming in his way of knowing the truth.. He left with Abhi

MGG had called the meeting to discuss abt the new strategy to trap EAGLE..

The meeting was a long one. Gunny kept thinking abt Vidya n the scene of Shikha holding the gun at Vidya hadnt left Gunnys mind. . He was just thinking abt it

The meeting was over. But MGGs experienced eyes had come to know tht there was something wrong with Gunny..

MGG-Theekh hai.. The meeting is over..Ab aap jaa sakte hai..

Everyone was leaving tht MGG called out to Gunny..

MGG-Capt Randhawa.. One minute Can I have a word with you??

Gunny-Yes Sir

MGG came near Gunny

MGG-Capt. Aap theekh hai.. Koi dikkat to nahin..?

Gunny-Dikkat nahin.. Aur aap kyun pooch rahe hain Sir.Aapko kisike dikkat se kyaa lena dena hain.

Gunny was sarcastic.He himself didnt know the reason why he was being so rude to MGG.He knew he had to keep a control over himself.. He recovered

Gunny-Sorry Sir.. Koi dikkat nahin hai.. Im fine.Thanks for the concern.. Ab main chalta hoon..

MGG knew something was terribly wrong.. Gunny had reacted very badly.MGG felt he was the reason to it which was very untrue..

The first thing Gunny did after coming out of MGGs cabin was he went to check out on Shikha.. He wanted answers to his numerous questions.

As Gunny reached the room he saw the room locked.. Where had Shikha gone??

Gunny was clueless.. What the hell was goin on he felt. . He remembered the yesterday scene again.Had Shikha gone to Vidya..?? What did she want to do now? Gunny cudnt think of anything else.. He literally started running towards the infirmary.He opened the infirmary door to see tht........................

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Edited by sweetdreams4040 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

when he opened the door he saw vidya...she was much better now....infact she was getting discahrge from infirmary....there were floweres in her hand....she realised his presence

vidya : are sir..ap yaha? ap thode pareshan lag rahe hai...is everything ok?
gunny{to himself} : thank god...vidya thik hai...bt i guess i shouldnt tell her abt shikha right now...
vidya : are ap kya soch rahe hai?? meri presence me bhi kisi aur ka khayal?? kahi shikha to nahi??
gunny was shocked to hear dat..
vidya : are..mai to bas majak kar rahi thi...shikha ne mujhe ye flowers bheje hai...aur get wel soon ka card bhi hai...
gunny was very surprised...at one moment shikha wanted to kill vidya and now she had sent her flowers and card.....i must talk to shikha...he thaught..akhir shikha karna kya chahti hai??
vidya : are ap phir soch me pad gae....aap thik to hai na sir?
gunny : ab tak to nahi tha...tumhe dekhne ke bad i am perfectly fine..
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hey sam gr8 uds....by the way where are tina and vijaya?
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Posted: 16 years ago
first time i am going to ud a FF so pllls forgive me if something is wrong
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gunny went through the corridor just thinking abt vidya saying dat shikha had sent her flowers.at dat time suddenly he heard a gun shot.he was just running so fast to see who was it .at last it was abhimanyu practicing .
gunny(to himself):thank god.. mein jo sochta wo nahin hai
abhi:capt. , aap tek hai mein aapko subhe se dek raha hun......
gunny:nothing ,capt. u carry on
gunny leaves with a tensed face.then he started to walk agin to shikha's room.he had hope dat he can she her.at last shikha was der.she welcomed him.seeing gunny's face she understood wat was going in him becos she loved him very much dat uska feeling woh samj paa rehe thi.
gunny:tum janthi ho mein kislye yahan aaya hun
shikha:hain
gunny:toh mujhe batao, tumne he vidya ko kadam kar ne ke bare mein soch rahithi aur ab tum uske liye flowers be bej rehi ho
shikha:mein iske liye sirf ek javab de sakthi hun woh hai ,mein tumse pyaar karthi hun aur karti rahungi.
gunny became angry and when he turns he sees vidya and vidya had heard everyhting wat shikha had said.
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hope u all liked it
Edited by halley - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ofcourse i liked it. very good
nice try, keep it up.

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