Sacrifice (AK,AR,NP) Note PG 22 (26/10)

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Sacrifice

Shiv Kapoor an arrognant businessman who always gets his way. Neha Raichand a sweet innocent girl who can do anything for her family. What happens when Neha is forced to marry Shiv no thanks to Shiv hhimself and how she goes through his tortures. Will Love happen?

I will post a Character Sketch soon but this is my new
ff as decided. I hope you all will comment if you do not
comment then I will stop this ff I hope you all will like it.
Just to tell you this ff will be about 15 parts long so please
enjoy and I am planning on adding another couple but I will
change their names.
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Thanx To All
Rhea🤗

Character Sketch

Shiv Kapoor (Iqbal Khan)-
An arrogant businessman. He is very famous. Owns his own fashion house. Can do anything to get his way either by hook or crook. He has a best friend named Aman. Secret to why he is like this. 25 years old.
Aman Malik (Karan Singh)-
Shiv's best friend, waiting for his Miss Perfect. Makes everyone laugh including Shiv. He understands Shiv more than anyone as he knows his past. 25 years old.
Neha Raichand (Neha Bamb)-
A very sweet and innocent shy girl, but thats her to outsiders. She can be loud, strong, talkable, and shows people their place. Her weakness is she can do anything for her family. She has a best friend named Payal. 24 years old.
Payal Gupta (Shilpa Anand)-
Neha's best friend. Still in search for her Mr. Right. She is very talkative and loud plus bubbly, she always gets to the point and has a heck of an attitude. She is always there for Neha. 24 years old.
Vivek Raichand-
Neha's Dad. Loves his daughter a lot. He is a businessman.
Swati Raichand-
Neha's Mom, she is always at home with the kids. She is a housewife. Loves Neha a lot.
Aditya Raichand (Jay Bhanushali)-
Neha's younger brother. Still he is protective of Neha. 22 years old.
Ria Raichand (Roshni Chopra)-
She is the youngest of the three siblings. She always looks upto Neha. 20 years old.
New Character

Tia Sharma(Panchi Bora)- A very bubbly girl. She has come from London after 4 years from her studies. She loves to enjoy life she is never sad and always is happy. she spreads color in other peoples life. She is here to see her childhood friend, the only person she can call her own.

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Part One

A beautiful girl is holding a picture frame in her hand and then you see her eyes, tears are running down them; her eyes are now swollen and red. You see her whole face she is none other than Neha. "Why did this happen to me?" says cryingly. Then we see the picture frame is a her family's photo.

Neha hears someone come in the room; she is standing by the window. The person wraps his arms around Neha; she jumps a little but relaxes when she realizes its Shiv. Shiv kisses her cheek as a tear rolls down her cheek. Yes, Neha is Mrs. Neha Shiv Kapoor all becuse of Shiv. "What is wrong sweetheart?" he says.

"Stop it Shiv please it is all your fault I am unhappy." she says upset.

"Why just because I wanted you, and wanted revenge for the slap, you know I always get what I want, I have never heard 'NO'." he says in anger.

"Stop it Shiv!" she covers her ears.

The intercom buzzed in their room, it was the maid. "Yes what is it?" Shiv says annoyed. "Sir Mr. Aman and Ms. Payal are here." says the maid. "Okay we will be there." he says.

Neha and Shiv go downstairs to see Aman and Payal fighting over another issue again. "Payal, Aman shut up!" Neha says annoyed. And they shut up.

Neha and Payal go to the living room to talk. "How is Adi now?" Neha asks.

"Adi, Ria, Aunty and Uncle are all good Neha, don't worry." Payal chuckles.

"I miss you all." Neha says.

"Oh come on Neha not time for the sad talk." Payal pouts.

"Okay then tell me how do you feel about Aman." Neha grins.

"Aman, what a brat he is, he has no sense what so ever and all he does is cracks jokes." Payal says angry.

"I know now that you definitely love him." Neha smirks.

"NNNNNNNNeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaa" Payal whines.

"So Shiv did you tell Neha yet?" Aman asks.

"Tell her what." Shiv replies.

"About your past, duh, seriously man." Aman replies to the point.

"I am not going to tell her anything." Shiv gets angry.

"Why Man?" Aman asks worried.

"She will leave me." Shiv says upset.

Aman decides to close the topic. Neha and Payal come into the kitchen where the guys are. They all sit to eat dinner. "What is wrong Shiv?" Neha asks worried looking at his face. "Nothing Neha." he gives a fake smile. They are finish dinner and Aman and Payal leave.

Next Morning

Neha gets up and sees that Shiv is in the shower; she puts out his clothes and gets his things ready for him. Shiv comes out of the shower Neha quickly goes in for shower and then comes out. She ties Shiv's tie for him and then they go downstairs for breakfast. Neha gives Shiv his breakfast and eats herself.

"When are you coming back Shiv?" she asks politely.

"Why do you want to know?" Shiv says angry from last night.

"I am your wife Shiv." she says upset for his anger.

"Wife my foot." he finishes his breakfast quickly and angry and leaves.

Neha has tears running from her eyes. She thinks to herself, why me. Neha remembers how this all happened how all her problems started. It happened the day she had met Shiv at a club. Her mind gets flashes.

Next Part: Flashback

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Part Two
Flashback:
You see 2 girls dancing in a club one turns her face. She is Payal; she goes to grab a drink. Then we see another girl dancing like crazy. You see her dark green innocent eyes, and then you see her pink glossed lips, we see her whole face it is Neha. Payal comes back and they start dancing again. As Neha is dancing she doesn't seem to notice a pair of chocolate brown eyes watching her every move. We see that pair of eyes belong to Shiv. As Payal and Neha come back to the bar area they notice Shiv and Aman looking at them.
'Hi, do we know you?' Payal says irritated as Aman keeps staring at her.
'No, but we are Aman and Shiv.' says a flirting Aman.
From then on they all 4 started hanging out together with Aman and Payal always fighting. Shiv and Neha just staring at each other. One Day, Neha and Shiv met with each other and Shiv decided to be his old self because he wanted Neha, his selfish side was getting a hold of him. So when they met he kept on flirting which irritated Neha, she got super angry that she slapped him and left. Shiv upset decided he needed a way to get revenge.
Neha started helping Vivek in office. She and Adi found out her father was in some debt and he need some help to save the company.
'Adi what are we going to do, I am so worried I wish dad would've told us earlier.' Neha says tensed.
'Don't Worry Di, we will find a solution.' says Adi.
'I hope so.' she says back.
Neha and Adi are still trying to get loans; they are going everywhere to find help. One night, Neha was in her room reading when she saw Ria at her door.
'Ria Honey what is wrong.' Neha asks her.
'Di can I lie down with you.' she says.
'Of course, your my little baby sister always.' Neha says smiling.
'Is everything going to be okay Di.' Ria asks lying down with Neha.
'Yes it will I promise you.' Neha says patting her.
Then they got to sleep with Neha of thinking of ways to fulfill her promise she made to everyone. She is still tense about everything.
Next Day
Neha is in the office, going through papers trying to figure out how to get her dad out of this mess. She throws the papers and screams. The scene switches.
You see man walking into Neha's dad's company, you can't see his face. You here is footsteps going towards Neha's office. He opens the door of her office and you see his face. He is none other than Shiv. Neha looks up to see Shiv, she throws an angry glance to him and gets back to work.
'Neha.' He says huskily.
'What is it Shiv?' She says angrily.
'I will help your father from his debt.' He says as he sits in front of her.
'Wait you will.' She stands up at once.
'Yes, but I have a condition.' He says grinning
'What is your condition?' She says waiting.
'You have to marry me.' He says with a smirk.
'WHAT?!' She says shocked.
'Yes!' He says amused.
'But Why?' She says still in shock.
'I want you and I want revenge for that slap you gave me.' He says evilly.
'I agree.' She says without thinking.
A Week Later
It is Shiv and Neha's engagement, nobody knows about this money deal except Neha and Shiv. Their wedding is in a week. You can tell Neha is faking her smile. Shiv is smirking the whole time because he knew the situation is in his favour. It is time for ring ceremony. Shiv slips the ring in Neha's finger slowly and softly. Neha slips the ring in his finger quickly. Shiv secretly pecks her cheeks, she turns to him and gives him a dirty look.
'Neha you want to go Dance?' Shiv asks.
'Neha go dance with him.' Swati says.
'Okay.' Neha says softly.
Sangeet and Mehndi Day
Neha is getting Mehndi put on her hands and feet. She looks a little happy but then she becomes sad as she knows she has to do this for her family, her only weakness. Payal comes and sits with her she got her hands painted too.
'So how is my jiju doing without his fianc'e?' Payal asks with mischief.
'Shut Up Payal!' Neha says angrily
Payal and others start dancing celebrating the wedding that is yet to come. Everyone calls Shiv to search for his name. He takes Neha's hands and looks, he ends up finding it.
'Aww Jiju not fair that means you get rule Di.' Ria says pouting.
'It's okay Neha already has control over me.' Shiv says naughtily. Neha blushes.
'Look how Di blushes.' Ria says looking at Neha who turned redder.
Everyone goes back to Dancing. The function goes on till midnight. Neha goes upstairs and changes into her night suit, thinking about what is life going to do to her next. With all this tension she finally falls into deep slumber. Well Shiv is drinking away thinking about how Neha will finally be his and how he got his revenge. I will not leave her, she's mine, he thought.
Wedding Day
Neha and Shiv are sitting in the Mandap. They all stand up for the Gharmala, Shiv and Neha put the garlands on each other and sit back down. Neha's Dad puts Shiv's hand in Neha's. Then they get up for the saat pheres. After the saat pheres Neha and Shiv sit back down, and then Shiv put sindoor and mangalsutra on Neha, now they were man and wife.
Neha and Shiv sit down to eat. Swati comes with one plate for them and told that as tradition they have to share one plate tonight. Neha and Shiv start eating the dinner and, sometimes because Ria insists they feed each other too. As they start dancing Neha and Shiv start talking.
'Did you save my dad from the debt yet?' Neha asks tensed.
'Chill, I did.' Shiv says grinning.
'Ok now no more of this talk Payal and Aman are coming, be a good lovesick puppy.' Neha says quickly.
'Hey Man got some alone time yet.' Aman winks.
'Oh Aman how can they get alone time when we are all here.' Payal rolls her eyes.
'Whatever.' Aman says and Payal, Shiv and Neha chuckle.
Suhaag Raat
Shiv comes in the room to see Neha sitting on the bed waiting for him. Her ghoonghat off. She goes up to him and hugs him, which really surprises him. He realizes she was crying and wanted comfort. He sooths her and she stops crying.
'Why did you do this to me Shiv?' Neha asks.
'The real reason is I want you, you're only mine, you belong to me.' Shiv replies.
'What?' She says confused.
'Yeah, revenge was just an excuse.' He says arrogantly.
'Oh.' She says understanding.
'One more thing, one new rule, you cannot met your family anymore.' He says angrily.
'Why not?' She says worried.
'Because you're mine.' He says rudely and leaves. Neha cries again.
As of that day on, this is how Neha's life went. She did all the wifely duties. Shiv behaves nicely with her only if he is not angry. And She doesn't go see her family to not make him angry. They never consummated their marriage yet, but to the world they were married.
Flashback Ends
Next: Back to the Present
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Rhea
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Part Three

Neha comes back to the reality, she is about to go upstairs when the phone rings, she picks it up 'Hello.' she says. 'Neha' the person says to her. 'Yeah Shiv.' she says back.

'I'm sorry about this morning I was upset.' he says tensed.

'Really.' she says almost happy.

'Yeah meet me at Ritz Cafe for lunch ok.' he says smiling.

'Ok I will bye.' she says excited.

'Bye.' he says relieved.

She starts dancing around, looking through her closet to find something to wear for lunch. Why am I excited, she thought, she starts to blush. Could I be falling in love, she thinks. As she dances around, the phone rings, she picks it up.

'Shiv why did you call.' she says happy.

'It's not Shiv Honey, it's Payal sweety.' she says smirking.

'Oh..um Payal, hey what did you need.' she says embarrassed.

'Nothing just wanted to talk but why are you so happy.' she says grinning.

'Shiv invited me for lunch and I can't decide what to wear.' she pouts.

'Wear the black and white Poke a Dot dress.' she says knowingly.

'Oh Yeah, that's a good one, bye.' she says.

'Okay bye Hun.' she hangs up. So does Neha.

Ritz Cafe

Where is he, he was supposed to be here at twelve, it's already twelve thirty, I've been here for half an hour, she thinks. As she was lost in her thoughts, Shiv came and kissed her cheek and sat down across her. She sees him and pouts in anger.

'Sorry, I know you're upset that I am late, but I got stuck because of a last minute meeting.' he says sincerely.

'I forgive you, now let's eat I am hungry.' she says in one breath.

'Okay.' he grins.

The waiter arrives and they order their food. After dinner, they share a yummy chocolate cake. Since Neha came from taxi, Shiv decided to take her out for the rest of the day. They went to the beach and just watched the waves, thinking of life. They played around in the beach. As they are enjoying their day, imagine this song:

http://www.musicindiaonline.com/p/x/4CmmMQWklt.As1NMvHdW/

Bachna Ae Haseeno- Aahista Aahista

Aahista aahista
Mujhe yakeen ho gaya
Aahista aahista
Yeh dil yahin kho gaya

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Dekh loon yeh khwab main
Ke raaton mein tu aa key eh kahega
Ke tu ji rahi hai meri zindagi
Sochi kya baat hai
Yeh ankhon se tu dheere se sunega
Kyun na rok loon main yeh din yahin

Kissi se bhi na
Kahenge hum na
Yahin pe kho jayenge

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho' ho'.
Hua yeh pehli bar
Ho'ho..ho'
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Mujhse ik pal mila
Yeh lamhe saare sab se chuppa lo
Teri jo kahani suna chala

Aur uss pal mein hi
Tum aa ke mujhe apna bana lo
Mujhko mera har ik kal mila

Phoolon ka hum na
Le ke bichauga
Khwabon mein kho jayenge

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Aahista aahista
Mujhe yakeen ho gaya
Aahista aahista
Yeh dil yahin kho gaya

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Neha and Shiv get back into the car and drive off home. Shiv looks at Neha and decides it's time for her to know the truth, they can't live like this forever. As they reach home, and go up to their room, Shiv calls Neha to the bed as he wants to talk to her.

'Neha.' he takes her hands in his.

'Yeah Shiv.' she says looking at him.

'I knew I should've told you this from the beginning instead of saying you're mine I wanted to say is that I love you, the only reason I didn't say it Neha was because I went through a bad past, I was afraid, the only reason I am like this is because of my past, but I want to us start fresh, I will tell you my past when I am ready is that okay, and if you don't want be with me it is okay I won't take the money I gave.' he says getting up turning from her.

Neha gets up and hugs him from behind and pressing her head to his back, leaving him shocked.

'If I wanted to leave you that would be my mistake as I have fallen in love with you, I understand your pain Shiv we can start fresh, I will wait till you're ready to tell me your past okay, I love you too I can't live without you.' she says happy.

With that, Shiv turns around and looks into her eyes, and sees just love. His lips descend towards her, and he softly touches his lips to her, the kiss turns more passionate, they don't realize when they started taking each others clothes off. They are now tangling around in white sheets, as Shiv waits, then he slips into Neha. Neha crys out in pleasure and a tear slips out of her eye. Shiv kisses the tear away. They fall asleep like that.

Scene Switches

'When do you think we should tell them?' a woman says.

'Soon.' a man says back.

'Aman you naughty boy what are you doing?' she says feeling him caressing her waist.

'What am I doing Payal?' he says naughtily.

She gives him an You-Know-What-I-Mean look. Yes, Payal and Aman are secretly dating for how long, the truth is since they have met. The fighting was just a fa'ade. They are sitting in the beach. Payal gets up and starts to walk so does Aman.

'You know Aman I love you a lot I don't want to hide this anymore.' she says seriously.

'I understand but Honey, you know my parents won't approve right away.' he says upset.

'Then how long am I to keep this relationship in the dark I want to tell Neha all about it.' she says sad.

'I know, I need time to convince my parents, can you give me the time.' he says consoling.

'Sure.' she says smiling now.

'Okay.' and they walk off.

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Rhea

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Part Four

Next Morning

The sunrays hit through a big window, where we see two lovers wrapped in each other in white sheets. Shiv opens his eyes to see his petite wife wrapped around, holding onto him for her dear life. Neha opens her eyes to see Shiv studying her, she tries getting out of his hold. He grins seeing her struggle and then pecks her lips, she pouts.

'Hey Beautiful.' he smirks.

'Hi Handsome.' She grins back.

'I am thinking we should go for Honeymoon.' he says smiling.

'Really!' she says excited.

'Yeah, okay let's go shower.' he says grinning.

'You mean You!' she says sternly.

'No I mean us.' he says to the point. And with that he picks her up, walks into the bathroom shutting the door, quieting all protests and hearing moans.

At The Breakfast Table

'Shiv stop being naughty and eat your breakfast.' Neha says pouting, trying to get Shiv away from her.

'Okay let's eat.' he says finished.

'Don't you have to go to office.' she says.

'Not today, I booked us tickets to the Bahamas, we have a 2 day cruise there and back.' he says back.

'Yay, thanks Shiv I love you so much, I always wanted to go there.' she says excited.

'Love you too.' he says kissing her lips.

'Shiv I want to see my family, pretty please with a cherry on top.' she says with a puppy dog face.

'Okay.' he says reluctantly.

Neha's Family's House

Neha was sitting with her family chatting about how her married life is going. She also told them she is going on Honeymoon tonight.

'Oh Mama I am so happy, me and Shiv are going on Honeymoon to the Bahamas, he booked us a 2-day cruise for there and back.' she says excited.

'That's good Beta.' Swati says happy for her.

'Oh Mama where is Adi?' she asks.

'Here I am Di.' Adi comes in and hugs her.

'Oh how is my boy.' she replies happy.

'I am fine.' he says.

'Did you find yourself a girl yet.' she asks.

'Uh, no not yet.' he replies.

'Yeah Di tell Adi Bhai to get me a Bhabhi soon.' Ria says coming in.

'Oh My baby, how are you?' she says hugging Ria.

'I'm fine Di' she replies.

Back At Home

Its A day before the Honeymoon, we see Neha and Shiv on the balcony wrapped in a blanket talking, mostly Neha is talking and Shiv is romancing.

'Shiv I hope Adi finds a girl soon.' she says tensed.

'Why are you so worried?' he asks.

'I hope he finds a girl that is not after his money.'

Scene switches, we see a girls legs, she is wearing black pencil heals. The camera moves up, you see she is wearing a plaid black and white skirt. The camera moves up more, you see her wearing a black tank top. You notice she is walking in an airport. You see her light blue eyes, her red lips, her perfectly shape eyebrows.

Scene switches to Neha and Shiv sitting in bed talking still in each others arms. They are still talking about Adi.

'Oh so that is why you are worried about Adi, he had a bad past too.' he says.

'Yeah that girl only wanted his money so he started to drown in work and stopped believing in love, he doesn't see girls anymore.' she replies sad.

Scene switches to the girl again, she is still walking her hands and hips swaying. She stops, looks around, then hears her name being called.

'Tia!' she turns around and we see she is Tia. (Panchi Bora)

Scene switches to Adi sitting in his bed looking at someone's picture. He is crying uncontrollably looking at the picture.

'Why did you do this to me?' he says to the picture. He stares.

'I loved you and this is what I got, it was all fake from you.' he replies. He wipes his tears.

'I have to get rid of you.' he says. He grabs his lighter and lights the picture and watches it blow to ashes.

We see Neha and Shiv still talking. Neha is still worried she secretly prays he gets the girl he wants. God, please send someone for Adi, she thinks. The scene ends on Adi's sad face on one half and Tia's happy face on the other half.

Next Part: I am not telling!!!

Here is a new Character for you all. I dropped the bomb. What connection does she have to Adi, Shiv and Neha.

Thanks Rhea

Tia Sharma(Panchi Bora)- A very bubbly girl. She has come from London after 4 years from her studies. She loves to enjoy life she is never sad and always is happy. she spreads color in other peoples life. She is here to see her childhood friend, the only person she can call her own.

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Part Five

Honeymoon Day

"Shiv you have all the suitcases loaded right." Neha says sternly.

"Yes Sweetie I do, don't worry." Shiv replies.

Neha and Shiv get in the limo and off they go to where the cruise is. They arrive there and load their stuff on the boat. In ten minutes the boat goes off. Neha and Shiv are watching the sea on the deck.

"Shiv I am so tired." she says relaxed.

"Hmm, do you want to for a hot bath in our suite." he says trying to help.

"Yeah can you come with me." she says as they walk back into the suite.

"Sure, with pleasure Honey." he carries her to the bathroom.

Scene switches, we see Tia in the car with Aman. They are laughing. They stop at a house. Someone comes out of the house it is Payal. She gets into the car and they all start talking. Tia knows about Payal and Aman.

"So Ammy where is my childhood friend." Tia says happy.

"He has gone on a Honeymoon with his wife." Aman replies.

"Also known as my best friend Neha." Payal says.

"Oh you mean Neha and Shiv got married." Tia says curious.

"Yeah." Aman says back.

"I was always hoping those 2 would be together." Tia says smiling.

"Yeah, by the way someone is happy to be back." Aman says winking, Tia blushes.

"Aman maybe we should go see Adi, Tia will be even more happier." Payal teases, Tia turns redder.

"Stop it guys." Tia says pretending to be angry.

"Okay sorry, we are going to see Adi anyways." Aman says.

"I hope he recognizes me." Tia says.

Aman, Payal and Tia come to the Raichand house. The servant lets them in. They go to the family room and sit. Aman gets bored so he calls Adi. Adi comes rushing down.

"Hey guys, who is this beautiful woman?" Adi asks.

"You don't recognize her?" Aman asks.

"Hmm no." Adi answers.

"Aman why don't you just tell him because he doesn't obviously recognize me, yeah?" Tia says a little angry.

"Woah girl take a chill pill." Aman says.

"Shut up Aman!" Tia says angry.

Then it clicked for Adi, it was Tia their childhood friend who always used to fight with Aman. (Yes I know you're wondering how do Shiv and Aman know the Raichands from childhood, I forgot to mention that Shiv and Aman discovered that the Kapoors and the Raichands are really good friends from the young days that's why Neha's parents agreed to the marriage, hope I cleared the confusions.)

"Wait is that you Tia?" Adi says questionly.

"Duh." Says Aman, well Tia slaps her forehead.

"Don't Bug him guys." Payal says.

"Why not." Aman says.

"Its not nice Honey." Payal says romantically so he will listen to her.

"Ha, don't play games with me Baby." Knowing exactly what she is doing.

"Aman you better listen to me." She gives him the look.

"Why?" He asks grinning.

"You know in our apartment we share the bed, well you won't be sleeping there anymore." She smirks well pretending to look at her nails.

"Okay I will stop." He replies scared of what she is planning to do.

Honeymoon Is Paradise

"Shiv, get up I want to go to the pool." Neha says trying to wake Shiv up.

"Later!" He replies burying his face in the pillow.

"Okay then I am going to go and by the way lots of guys will see your wife in a bikini so hmph." She says going off to the pool.

Neha arrives at the pool with a sun robe on top of her bikini, she had especially got it because she knew Shiv would like it but he is sleeping, I will woo anther guy who respects my wishes in stead of sleeping, she though angrily. As she lays in the lounge chair, a guy comes beside her.

"Hey Beautiful." The guy says.

"Hi I am Neha, your name." she says kind of angry.

"I am Kunal." He replies with a flirtous smile (played by Eijaz Khan)

"Um, I am married please leave me alone." Neha replies uneasy.

"Really or is this a joke." Kunal says prying.

"Excuse Me!" she says angrily, takes off her robe and jumps in the water.

She sees Kunal about to jump so she quickly gets out and sees Shiv buying a drink. She runs to him and smiles while he gives a bored look.

"Shiv please tell that guy there you're my husband." She says pretending to be innocent.

"Why should I you're the one that said you would find another guy to be with." He replies pretending to be sad, but hiding a grin.

"Sorry, please tell him to go; I will do anything you want. She replies kissing his cheek.

"Okay." He replies grinning.

Kunal comes and see Shiv's arm around Neha's waist. Shiv is whispering in Neha's ear making her go red. He goes up to them and they turn to see Kunal.

"I told you I was married." Neha says.

"Yeah I am her husband Shiv Kapoor." He gave a don't mess with me look.

"Ah, oh." Kunal feels awkward.

After Kunal leaves, Shiv gives Neha a drinks, kisses her lips then her cheeks, well she goes red, and now he gives her a you're-in-trouble smirk.

"What?!" Neha says seeing the smirk.

"You said you would let me do whatever I want if I help you, remember?" Shiv says grinning

Neha smacks her head in realization, this devilled human had to be the guy she loved and was married too, god didn't like me at the time probably, she thought bitterly.

"Okay what do you want?" Neha asked knowing he was up to something.

"2 days in our hotel room in the Bahamas." Shiv says winning his lottery.

"I should have known you would say something like this." Neha says shaking her head.

"You don't have to accept my condition but if you don't I am going tell Kunal that you told me too fake being your husband." Shiv says grinning.

"Fine! No one can win against you." Neha says.

"Then why do you try, Honey!" Shiv says romantically.

"I don't know, let's go swimming now, I can see you want touch me in the water, I made a good choice with the bikini." She starts to grin.

"Yes you did, Sweetheart, the bikini is doing wonders to me." Shiv says flirting.

"Why do you think I got it, Honey." Neha winks back. And they go off to the pool.

Okay Guys, that is Part 5, hope you enjoyed it, my next update will be in 2 weeks or less, I can't update next Friday on the 10th as thats my

Birthday day, I'm so psyched for it lol.
Thanx Rhea
J

*****NO PMS THIS TIME PLEASE CHECK WEEKLY FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!*****

Edited by superstar15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
hey
gr8 intro
thnx for the PM
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
heyy. nice introduction!. can't wait to read the first part.
is shiv played by iqbal khan?
and what about neha? neha bamb??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
Nice concept! Looking forward to the first chapter 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: prabhi

heyy. nice introduction!. can't wait to read the first part.

is shiv played by iqbal khan?
and what about neha? neha bamb??

Yes its Iqbal Khan and Neha Bamb just changed their names
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Posted: 17 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: superstar15

Yes its Iqbal Khan and Neha Bamb just changed their names

ok tht good. haha i got worried 😳
..haha tht added more to my excitment!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8

intro is interesting really a nice one⭐️ please continue it soon

"When someone loves U,
U dont realise it...
When U realise it,
Its too late.
U always love the one who leaves U &
Leave the one who loves U!"

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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
thanx for the pm buddy...i like the concept
way to go
waitng for the character sketch
Asever
Amneet😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
thanx for the pm me dear i like the concept wow sound good .

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