My own version of JJKN! Updated Oct 28!! - Page 2

The third part!

Purab enters the house. Tamanna is shocked! Purab's eyes catch Tamanna and he is shocked too.

Purab: Tamanna tum yahan?

Tamanna: hi Purab!

Jassi: tum donon ek dusre ko jante ho? Tamanna Gulmohar ka next collection design kar rahi hai.

Purab: toh tum hi ho who famous fashion designer!

Tamanna: aur tum who hi famous business man.

Jassi: par tum donon ek dusre koi kese jante ho?

Purab: hum college mein ek saath padhate the Jassi.

Tamanna: ab mujhe chalna hoga.

Purab: arre itne dinon, itne saalon ke baad mili ho kuch der toh thehro.

Tamanna: Purab abhi kuch kaam hai. Ab toh ek hi shehar mein hain milte rahenge.

Tamanna leaves and Purab talks with Jassi.

Purab: duniya kitni chotti hoti hai naa Jassi?

Jassi: haan par tum itne dinon se kahan the?

Purab: kuch kaam tha Jassi. Main actually tum se baat karna chahta tha. Mere head manager nein bataa keh kese who pictures ko mere designer nein kharaab kiya tha. I am sorry Jassi!

Jassi: It's okay Purab. Is mein tumhra koi dosh nahin tha.

Purab: Jassi main who apne bridal collection ke bare mein baat karne aaya tha.

Jassi: Purab abhi toh Gulmohar ka collection launch hone wala hai. Main bohut busy..

Purab looks disappointed.

Purab: it's fine Jassi. I can understand.

Jassi: Purab aaj raat ko Gulmohar ek party de raha hai. Actually naye collection ki publicity ke liye bhi ahi. Tum invited ho.

Purab: sure Jassi thanks!

Purab leaves. There, Tamanna is very upset talking to herself.

Tamanna: kyun? Kyun tum usse mere samne laye ho Bhagwan? Kyun? (she cries)

It's the party time! Everybody is happy. Press conference is also going on. Purab and Tamanna are also there in the party. Armaan and Jassi welcome them and they are together smiling. Purab looks a bit sad and goes out, Tamanna follows him.

Tamanna: tum pyar karte ho usse Purab?

Purab: oh hi Tamanna!

Tamanna: karte ho naa Purab? Unhein saath dekh kar tabhi tum itne dard mein ho.

Purab: haan Tamanna. Main usse chahta hoon. Bohut chahta hoon. Apni zindagi se bhi zyadah.

Tamanna: acha toh phir usse do do bar mushkilon mein kyun chod diya? (sarcastically) sagayi ke din baghair bataye chale gaye phir jab who revealing photographs Jassi ke sare shaher mein the tab bhi tum ghayab the? Joh pyar karte hain naa Purab who beech raste mein mushkilong mien haath nahin chodte.

Purab (smiling sadly): haath toh us nein kabhi apna mera haath mein diya hi nahin. Armaan ke haath mein diya hamesha.

Tamanna: toh us ka pyar sacha ho ga naa Purab?

Purab: haan shayyad. Us ka pyar mere pyar se zyada sacha hoga keh Bhagwan nein bhi us ka saath diya aur mujhe chod ke jane par majboor kar diya aur.. (he suddenly realizes what he's saying and suddenly stops there)

Tamanna: aur??? Aur kya Purab????

Purab: k.. kuch nahin Tamanna!

Tamanna: Purab kuch toh hai. Aur kya? Batao tumhein meri kasam. Hamari dosti ki kasam! Toh tum mujhe apna dost nahin samajhte?

Purab: nahin Tamanna aesi baat nahin hai. Tum toh college ke days se hi meri sab se pyari dost ho.

Tamanna: toh kaho. Aur kya?

Purab: Tamanna mujhe brain tumor tha!

Tamanna is totally shocked. Her mouth is open and a few tears are in her eyes.

Purab: sagayi ke do din pehle mujhe pehta attack aaya. Tum hi batao yeh jante hoye main us se shaadi kese karta? Kese us ki zindagi barbaad karta? Main nein us se door rehene ki koshish ki. California mein treament toh ho geya par main Jassi ka shayyad samna kar naa saka. Phir hamari mulaakat coincidentally Mauritius mein houi aur tab main apne aap ko rok nahin paya. Jab tak mujhe us pictures ke bare mein patah chala mujhe severe attacks aa rahe the. Final operation ke liye mujhe California jana pada. Aur… arre tum toh ro rahi ho Tamanna. Apne aansoo ponch lo. Main nein ro kar dekha hai kuch nahin milta.

Tamanna: tumhare pyar kamzor nahin hai Purab balkeh amar hai. Itni badi qurbani shayyad hi kisi pyar karne wale nein di go gi. Purab, I am proud of you!

Purab smiles and Tamanna wipes her tears.

Tamanna is in Gulmohar office working on the designs and singing "jab koi baat bigadh jaye" at the same time. Jassi enters and hears her singing.

Jassi: arre wah! Tamanna tum toh bohut khoobsurat gati ho.

Tamanna: arre Jassi aao. Kahan yaar thoda bohut gun guna leti hoon.

Phone bell rings and Tamanna picks up the phone.

Maria: Tamanna, Jassi tumhare cabin hai naa?

Tamanna: Haan Maria.

Maria: yeh us ke liye call hai. Main idhar de rahi hoon.

Tamanna: Jassi tera phone hai.

Jassi takes the phone.

Jassi: what? (hung up the phone)
Tamanna: kya hua? Jassi kya hua?

Jassi: financer nein pese dene se inkaar kar diya hai.

Tamanna: what?

Jassi: who keh raha hai keh Gulmohar se kisi nein insulting manner mein phone kar keh kaha keh hamin tumhari bheek nahin chahiye.

Tamanna: what?

Jassi: aur papers bhi kuch ghallat aye hain.

Both are shocked.

To be continued…..

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Hera

Here I go with the Fourth part!!! Enjoy!!

Tamanna and Jassi are shocked and hopeless.

Jassi: Aakhir kis nein kiya hoga yeh?

Tamanna: kaun hai joh yeh fashion show hone nahin dena chahta aur kyun?

Veeru enters the room.

Veeru: Jassi, Tamannaa mujhe tum donon se kuch kehna tha.

Jassi: kaho Veeru kya baat hai?

Veeru: Actually who Vikram Behl hai naa? Hamare manager. Who mujhe subha mile the. Ushon nein kaha keh who bahar ja rahe hain toh main nein kuch papers unhein de diye, post karne ke liye par ab tak who aaye nahin hain. Us ke baad se ghayyab hain.

Tamanna: ghayyab hain?

Veeru: haan phone calls bhi nahin le rahe.

Tamanna: thanks Veeru! Hum dekhte hain.

Veeru leaves.

Jassi: kya is ke peeche bhi us ka haath toh nahin?

Tamanna: ho sakta hai.

Jassi picks up the phone.

Jassi: haan Ram tum Gulmohar ke kuch bande apne saath le kar jao Vikram Behl ke ghar aur jese bhi ho sake mujhe who shaam tak chahiye hurry up!

Both Jassi and Tamanna are surprised and shocked.

A few people bring Vikram in. Mallika asks them to leave him and call everybogy to the boardroom. Everybody leaves.

Mallika: tum se kaha tha nna keh shehar mein nazar nahin aane chahiye ho?

Vikram: sorry Madam! Main..

Mallika: sorry my foot! Ab agar kopi pooche toh mera naam mat lena.

Vikaram: par madam main toh buri tarhan phas jaonga.

Mallika: toh kisi aur ka naam le lena. Purab ka naam le lena. Wese bhi who hamare rivals mein se hai toh sare yakeen kar lenge.

Everybody is in the boardroom.

Armaan: kyun kiya tum nein aesa? main poochta hoon kyun?

Vikram: ma….main nein toh kuch nahin kiya sir.

Jassi: sach sach bata do barna polic ko jawaad dena padega.

Vikram: nahin! Who Purab Mehra nein mujhe yeh karne ko kaha tha.

Tamanna: tum jhoot bol rahe ho!

Vikram: nahin! Yeh sach hai. Unhon nein kaha keh is se unhein professional or personal donon fayda ho ga.

Tamanna: main nahin manti! (Tamanna leaves and goes to her cabin talking to herlsef)

Tamanna: aesa nahin ho sakta. Purab aesa kabhi nahin kar sakta. ( just then her own image comes infront of her) kar nahin sakta ya tum usse bachana chahti ho?

Tamanna herself: nahin who aesa kabhi nahin kar sakta.!

Tamanna's image: yeh toh tum bhi achi tarhan se janti ho keh who Jassi se pyar karta hai aur yeh show rok kar who Armaan aur Jassi ki shaadi rok sakta hai.
Tamanna herself: who aesa kabhi nahin karege.

Tamanna's image: pyar insaan se who kuch karata hai joh wese nahin karta. Tum usse bachane ki koshish kar rahi ho kuyunki tum usse chahti ho!

Tamanna herself: jhooth!

She sits down and cries a lot. Then wipes her tears and goes to Purab's house. He there is talking to Rohan.

Purab: haan Rohan kese ho tum?

Rohan: bhaiya aap theek ho? Office mein phone kiya tha. Aap wahan nahin the. Are you okay bhaiya?

Purab: haan Rohan main theek hoon bas thoda sa sar mein dard tha. Tum sunao school kes ja rha hai?

Rohan: aap ke bina dil nahin lagta bhaiya.

Purab: mera bhi nahin lagta Rohan. (he sees Tamanna) oh hi Tamanna! Acha Rohan sun main tujhe baad mein phone karta hoon. Bye! Love you!

Rohan: love you too Bhaiya!

Purab: hey Tamanna tum yahan? Aao naa.

Tamanna: tum nein aesa kyun kiya Purab?

Purab: Kya Tamanna: kya hua?

Tamanna: Purab mera vishwaas tha keh tum kabhi kisi ka dil nahin tod sakte keh tum kisi ko chot nahin de sakte par tum nein mera bishwaas badi buri tarhan toda hai Purab.

Purab: main nein vishwaas toda hai? Tumhara Tamanna? Par main nein kiya kya hai?

Tamanna: Purab sirf ek Jassi ke liye? Kyun Purab? Kyun?

Purab: Tamanna tum nein mujhe gunahgar karaar de diya hai. Aur main apni dost ki adaalat mein khada hone ke liye tayyar hoon atleast mujhe mera gunah toh batao.

Tamanna: tum nein Gulmohar ka fashion show rukwane ke liye Vikram Behl, Gulmohar ke manager, ko pese de kar financer kyun chudwaya? Kyun Purab? Mujhe tum atleast tum se yeh umeed nahin thi. (With eyes full of tears , Tamanna leaves)

Purab is shocked. He picks up his phone.
Purab: haan Samar, Gulmohar ke manager Vikram Behl ko trace karo aur us se pooch keh who jhooth kyun bol raha hai mere bare mein. Please jaldi karna.

He then dials another number.

Purab: Hi Mr. Gyan. Purab Mehra calling.

Police brings in Vikram to Gulmohar. Armaan, Jassi, Tamanna, and a lot others are standing there.

Vikram: Main nein jhooth bola tha. Yeh sab mujh se Mr. Purab Mehra nein nahin karwaya. Main toh unhein janta tak nahin hoon. Mujhe yeh karne ke liye Mallika Madam nein pese diye the.

Armaan: what?! Par tum ab jhooth bol rahe ho ya pehle the.

Vikram: main sach bol raha hoon. Yeh check bhi unhon nein diya tha.

They see the check. It's from Mallika's account with her signatures on it. Tamanna leaves for her cabin.

Tamanna: kaash main nein apne dil ki baat suni hoti! Kaash! (she is crying. Suddenly phone bell rings. She picks up the phone) yes, Tamanna speaking.

A man's voice: I am sorry main Gyan bol raha hoon. Ji aap ka financer. I am sorry it was a misunderstanding. Hum nein payment kar di hai. Aap ko supplies jald hi mil jayenge.

Tamanna: yeh kese hua Mr. Gyan? Kese?

Gyan: ji kuch nahin!

Tamanna: main jana chahti hoon Mr. Gyan. Yeh misunderstanding kese door houyi.

Mr. Gyan: Mr. Purab Mehra nein help kiya hai.

Tamanna: Purab nein! (she hungs up the phone. Tears come streaming down her cheeks. She turns around and Jassi is standing on the door. Tamanna goes closer to her and begins to leave. Jassi grabs her arm.)

Jassi: usse meri tarraf se sorry aur thanks kehena.

Tamanna looks at Jassi and nods crying. She goes to Purab's house but servants tell that he's not at home. She then goes to a beach and Purab is there and he's drunk.

Tamanna: Purab I am sorry! Mere dil nein mujhe baar baar kaha keh tum aesa nahin kar sakte par patah nahin kyun main nein apne dil ke nahin suni. Sun kar bhi an suna kar diya. I am sorry Purab. Chaho toh apni is dost ko sazaa do chaho toh maaf kar do. Par Purab mujh se dosti mat todna who mere liye sab se badi saza ho gi.

Tamanna turns around to leave when..

Purab: tum se dosti tod kar main zinda kese reh paonga?

Purab stands up and falls. Tamanna holds him and he hugs her.

Purab: main us ke baghair jee nahin paonga Tamanna! Nahin ji paonga.

Tears fall down from Tamanna's cheeks. She talks to herself.

Tamanna: kaash Purab! Kaash main tumhein tumhara pyar de sakti! Kaash Purab! (tears come streaming down Tamanna's eyes)

To be continued…

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The Fifth part!

Tamanna takes Purab to his house. He's not conscious anymore but the only thing he keeps saying is, "Main ji nahin paon ga. Jassi ke baghair main ji nahin sakoonga." Tamanna removes his shoes and lies him down on the bed. She then wipes her tears, tells the servants to take care of him and leaves. She goes to the mandir and talks with Bhagwan.

Tamanna: kyun Bhagwan? Kyun? Kyun tum ache logon ke saath hi aesa karte ho? Jab unhein milana nahin hota toh pyar karne dete kyun ho? Kyun Bhagwan? Tumhein toh bohut mazaa aa raha hoga naa? Dekhi hogi tum nein bhi us ki haalat. Who ji nahin pa raha hai aur Tum. Tumhein mazaa aa raha hai? (she bursts into tears) mat karo aesa Bhagwan please! Tum nein mujh se bohut cheena main nein faryaad tak nahin ki par please usse sanbhalo. Bohut dard hota hai usse aese dekh kar. Please Bhagwan please!

She stands up and when turns around Jassi is standing there. Tamanna wipes her tears.

Tamanna: Jassi tum yahan? (she goes to Jassi) chalein? (they start walking)

Jassi: tum pyar karti ho naa Purab se?

Tamanna looks at Jassi but doesn't say anything.

Jassi: tumhein kuch kehene ki zaroorat nahin hai. Tumhein aankhon mein tumhare dil ka haal saaf likha hai. Tum usse kehti kuyun nahin ho?

Tamanna: yeh tum pooch rahi ho Jassi? Wajah toh tum janti ho. Main uski humdardi ya phir dosti nahin chahti. Wese bhi who khush rahe main bhi khush hoon.

Jassi: acha toh tu shuru ke dinon ke bare mien bata. Jab tum dodnon pehli baar mile.

Tamanna smiles: who din bohut khoobsurat the. College ka pehla din tha aur ragging se main ghabrayi hoyi thi. Aur kuch log meri ragging karne lag gaye. Main bohut ghabrayi hoyui thi aur Purab ka bhi pehla din that but he was confident. Who aaya aur bakiyon ko jane par majboor kar diya. Jab us nein mujhe kaha keh, "confident raho. Kamzor hogi toh duniya aur kamzor kare gi." Us din main bohut khush thi. Phir hum ache se ache dost banne lag gaye aur who mere sab se acha dost ban geya. Phir who London chala geya further studies ke liye. Main bhi apna career banane lag gayi aur ab zindagi nein hamain phir se aamane samne la kar khada kar diya. Par main nein kabhi socha bhi nahin that keh jab main us se phir millongi toh us ki yeh haalat hogi.

Jassi looks down as tears also come out of her eyes. She comforst Tamanna.

It's the fashion show day. All the preparations are going on. As per boards decision Mallika is not handling any job in Gulmohar anymore. Everyone is excited and doing their best job. Tamanna checks all the clothes first then goes to her cainb and calls Purab.

Tamanna: come one Purab pick up the phone. Come on!

Purab does not answer. Then Veeru comes in.

Veeru: Tamanna ramp pe tumhara intezaar hai. Models ready hain.

Tamanna: ok Veeru I'll be right there. thanks!

Tamanna prepares all the models nicely. Finally it's the fashion show night. All the guests are excited about show as Tamanna has designed it. Finally the fashion show starts. Everybody is happy about the designs. They check material too and it's awesome! The show is a hit! Everybody is praising Tamanna and Gulmohar but Tamanna is lost in thoughts. She is worried about Purab. Finally she goes to Jassi.

Jassi: congrats Tamanna! Very well done!

Tamanna: thanks Jassi! Par mujhe jana hoga.

Jassi: par Tamanna, sari press yahan hai tumhare interview ka intezaar hai.

Tamanna: Jassi please! Mujhe Purab ki chinta ho rahi hai. He is not picking up the phone since the morning. Please Jassi. I have to go please.

Jassi: it's okay Tamanna. Main sanbhal loongi.

Tamanna: thankyou so much Jassi!

Tamanna leaves for Purab's house. She enters the house and calls for Purab but no answer. Then a servant comes up and says that he's sleeping. Tamanna is about to leave when Rohan comes.

Rohan: aap kaun?

Tamanna: aap toh Rohan hi hain naa?

Rohan: aap ko mera naam kese maloom hai?

Tamanna: arre apne doston ka naam toh patah hi hoga naa?

Rohan: dost? Par main toh aap se pehli baar mil raha hoon.

Tamanna: haan par hum toh aap ke bare mein bohut kuch jante hain. Main Purab ki dost hoon.

Rohan: Bhaiya! Un ka toh naam mat lo. Patah nahin un ko kya ho geya hai? Unhein yeh tak yaad nahin raha keh kal main aane wala tha. Who lene nahin aaye. Aur toh aur aaj mujhe school bhi le kar nahin gaye.

Tamanna: acha bhai nahin karte aap ke bhaiya ki baat. Acha yeh bataiye ke aap ka pehla din kesa guzra?

Rohan: theek hi tha. Par Maths ke homework ke kuch problems samajh nahin aa rahe.

Tamanna: toh chalein hum aap ki madat karenge.

Rohan: aap?

Tamanna: haan.. Tamanna fashion designer ke saath saath Maths mein bhi theek hi hoon. Chalo aao.

They go to his room and Tamanna helps him solve the problems.

Rohan: bas? Itna easy hai?!

Tamanna: kaha tha main nein. Acha now you should go to bed.

Rohan: kya main aap ko Didi keh sakta hoon?

Tamanna: of course Rohan! I would love that! now you should go to bed. Subha school bhi toh jana hai naa?

Tamanna gets up to switch off the lights when..

Rohan: Didi Purab bhaiya nein itna drink kabhi nahin kiya. Who theek toh ho jayenge naa?

Tamanna looks sad and tears come to her eyes but she doesn't let them fall.

Tamanna: of ocurse Rohan! Of course yes! Tum ab so jao. Yeh tumhari Didi ka baada hai Purab phir se wesa hi hoga. Goodnight Rohan!

Rohan: Goodnight Didi!

Tamanna goes out in a hall and goes to Purab's room. He's sleeping and even in sleep he's not calm. She talks to herself.

Tamanna: Purab tumhein theek hona pade ga. Atleast apne chote bhai ke liye hi sahi. Aur aesa main karorongi. Aesa main karne mein tumhari madat karoongi.

She then leaves the house and goes to her own house.

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My own version of JJKN (Part 6)

Purab takes some pills for headache and starts drinking again when Tamanna enters the room.

Purab: oh hi Tamanna!

Tamanna: Purab itni subha subha bhi tum drink kar rahe ho?

Purab: haan… who… main..

Rohan comes downstairs in his school uniform.

Rohan: Didi aap aa gayin?

Tamanna: haan Rohan tum thodi der ke liye apne room mein jao. Hum thodi der tak chalet hain.

Rohan goes to his room.

Tamanna: kyun Purab? Tumhein kisi aur ka naa sahi atleast Rohan ka hi khayyal karo. Kal us ka pehla din tha aur aaj school se phone aaya hai. Tumhein patah bhi nahin hai naa?

Purab looks sad and embarrassed.

Tamanna: tumhein kisi ki koi fikr nahin hai? 15 mahinon ke rishte ke liye tum nein itna kuch kiya. Purab pyar zindagi ka ek hissa hota hai. Main manti hoon keh bohut bada hissa hota hai par pyar zindagi nahin hota. Zindagi mein aur bhi rishte importance rakhte hain. Aur is tarhan toh tum apne pyar ka bhi atmaan kar rahe ho. Itne kamzor ho tum? Tumhein hum mein se koi nahin chahiye naa toh theek hai lo is sharaab ka sahara par yeh sari umar wafa nahin karegi. Purab yeh sari zindagi tumhara saath nahin degi.

With eyes full of tears, Tamanna turns around. She hears a glass breaking. She turns around and Purab had broken the glass.

Purab: aaj ke baad no sharaab. I promise!

Tamanna smiles.

Tamanna: acha ab jao aur shabe karo aur phir office jao. Main Rohan ko school chod deti hoon. Tum toh is hulliye mein ho hi nahin. Rohan! Rohan come! Bye Purab aur apna vaada nahin bhoolna!

Purab: I won't!

Tamanna and Rohan are in headmistress's office.

Headmistress: aap Rohan ki mummy hain?

Tamanna: ji nahin! Main is ki Didi hoon. Aap kahiye kya hua?

Heamistress: dekhiye main janti hoon keh kal Rohan ka pehla din tha but we've noticed that he doesn't want to make friends or study. His behavior was odd. I understand the first day. Par agar koi problem hai toh hum usse jald hi diagnose kar keh solve karna chahte hain.

Tamanna: thanks! But Rohan ki problem already solved hai. Aaj ke baad aap ko shikayyat ka moka nahin mile ga.

Tamanna and Rohan are in the school ground alone.

Tamanna: Rohan tumhare bhiaya ab theek hian. Unhein koi problem nahin hai. Unhon nein drink karna tumhare liye choda hai abu tumhara bhi oth farz banta hai naa ke you do well at school! Right?

Rohan: ji didi, maikn aesa hi karoonga.

Tamanna: ok Rohan go to your classroom now. See you. Bye.

Tamanna goes to Gulmohar now.

Tamanna: Veeru, Jassi aaye toh usse kehena keh main us se milna chahti thi.

Veeru: par who toh aaj Gulmohar nahin aayegi.

Tamanna: kyun? Us ki tabiyyat toh theek hai?

Veeru: us ki tabiyyat aaj toh kharaab ho hi nahin sakti.

Tamanna: kyun nahin? Who kahan hai?

Veeru: Tamanna bhool gayi aaj us ki aur Armaan Sir ki shaadi hai.

Tamanna: oh my god! How did I forget that? of course aaj who Gulmohar kyun aayegi?

Tamanna goes to her cabin when phone bell rings.

Tamanna: hey Jassi.

Jassi: Tamanna mujhe maloom hai keh tu bhool gayi ho gi.

Tamanna: I am sorry Jassi. Actually aaj kal mera mind itna occupied rehta hai uppar se ek minute mein 20 calls ati hain yeh project who project…

Jassi: I can understand. Acha bata tu aa rahi hai naa?

Tamanna: haan of course Jaasi. Main aaongi.

Jassi: who Tamanna main janti nahind keh main Purab ko invite karron ya naa karoon. Who nahin aaye ga naa?

Tamanna: Jassi main usse baat karoongi. But I can't force him.

Jassi: yes I know Tamanna. Okey then jaldi aaana.

Tamanna: yeah bye.

Tamanna is now talking to herself.

Tamanna: main kya karoon? Purab se kahoon ya naa kahon. Who abhi abhi toh sanbhla hai main kya karoon? Par yeh sachaai us se chupne wali toh hai nahin. Usse achanak patah chale is se acha yeh hai keh main usse is liye prepare karoon. Atleast main us ke saath oth hoongi.

Tamanna pakcs up at office and goes to Purab's house. He's working on his laptop.

Purab: Hey Tamanna! Tum toh aaj kal bohut busy ho gayi ho naa? By the way congrats on a successful show!

Tamanna: thanks Purab!

Purab: so shall we celebrate tonight?

Tamanna: Purab who… aaj Jassi aur Armaan ki shaadi hai.

Purab suddenly looks sad again but dosen't let his tears leave his eyes.

Tamanna: tum chalo ge mere saath?

Purab: mera jawaab toh tum janti ho naa Tamanna. Main nein Jassi se bohut pyar kiya. Usse apni dhadkan banaya ab usse kisi aur ki dulhan bante dekhene ki himmat toh nahin hai mujhe mein. Itna bada dil toh nahin hai mera.

Tamanna: Purab tumhara dil kitna bada hai yeh toh tum bhi nahin jante. Joh tum nien Jassi ke liye yeh jante hoye keh who tumhari kabhie nahin hoye gi who toh koi aur kar toh kya soch bhi nahin sakta tha.

Purab: Tamanna pyar mein shartein nahin hotin.

Tamanna: janti hoon Purab. Isse mujh se behtar kaun jane ga. Par Purab yeh bhi sach hai keh Jassi Armaan se pyar karti hai aur yehi us ki khushi hai.

Purab: janta hoon. Shayyad yeh meri zindagi ka sab se bada sach hai par janti ho Tamanna? Ab main nein isse accept karna shuru kar diya hai.

Tamanna: I know Purab issi liye main chhati hoon keh tum shaadi mein chalo ta keh tum isse easily accept kar pao. But I won't force you Purab. Tumhare dil ka haal main samajh sakti hoon. Kal milenge. Bye.

Tamanna leaves and Purab is standing alone in the room. Tamanna's words about acceptance come to his ears again and again.

To be continued…

wow nice i just caught up! continue soon!
bye
Hera

 

My own version of JJKN (Part 7)

 

Tamanna is in her room getting ready. She is looking gorgeous. She is thinking about Purab talking to herself.

 

Tamanna: Na jane who is waqt kya socha raha hoga? Kitni takleef ho rahi hogi usse? I am sorry Purab. I am so sorry keh main nein tumhein Armaan aur Jassi ki shaddi ke bare main bataya. I am sory par yeh karna zaroori tha ta keh tum bhi apni zindagi ek naye sire se guzaar sako. I am sorry Purab. I am very sorry. Mera iradah tumhara dil dukhane ka nahin tha.

 

Just then phone bell rings and Tamanna picks up the phone.

 

Purab: hey Tamanna.

 

Tamanna: hi Purab! Are you ok?

 

Purab: haan mujhe kya hona hai? Tum tayyar ho?

 

Tamanna: haan bas nikkalne hi wali thi.

 

Purab: theek hai toh phir main neeche hoon.

 

Tamanna: par Purab mujhe toh Jassi ki shaadi pe jana tha.

 

Purab: haan toh jab manzil ek hai toh saath saat hi chalte hain.

 

Tamanna: matlab?

 

Purab: matlab main bhi wohin ja raha hoon.

 

Tamanna smiles: are you sure Purab?

 

Purab: haan baba ab neeche aa jao.

 

Tamanaa runs downstairs and sits in Purab's car. Purab starts driving.

 

Purab: bohut sundar lag rahi ho.

 

Tamanna: thanks Purab! And thanks!

 

Purab: dusra thanks kis liye?

 

Tamanna: mere saath chalne ke liye.

 

They both smile. Finally they reach at Armaan and Jassi's marriage place. Marriage takes place and everybody's happy except Angel and Ila Suri. They are talking evil again. Tamanna enters the scene.

 

Tamanna: arre congrats Mrs. Suri! Itni sundar bahu mili hai.

 

Ila: sundar? Haan haan…

 

Tamanna goes near Angel and whispers.

 

Tamanna: Angel, jese apni shaadi todti ho wese dusron ki shaadi todne ki planning mat karna. Mallika ka anjaam toh dekh hi rahi ho naa?

 

Angel looks angry. Tamanna goes to congratulate Armaan and Jassi and Armaan and Jassi thank Purab for coming.  The night's celebrations are going on when..

 

Jassi: may I have your attention please? Aaj is khushi ke mokke par main apni friend Tamanna se kuch kehena chahoongi. ( she goes towads Tamanna with mike) aap sab jante hain? Yeh bohut khoobsurat gaati hai toh aaj main chahoongi keh tum gao Tamanna mere liye.

 

Tamanna: Jassi main itna acha bhi nahin gaati. I can't sing please.

 

Armaan comes up too.

 

Armaan: come one Tamanna hamare liye.

 

Tamanna looks at Purab and he smiles. Tamanna takes the mike and starts singing on the stage.

 

Tamanna: har ghadi badal rahi hai roop zindagi

                          Chaon hai kabhi kabhi hai dhoop zindagi

                          Har pal yahan ji bhar jiyo ho hai saman

                          Kal ho naa ho…

 

                          Chahe jo tumehin pure dil se

                          Milta hai who mushkil se..(she comes down the stage and goes to Armaan)

                          Aesa joh koi kahin hai (she then goes to Jassi)

                          Bas wohi sab se haseen hai..(she then goes to towards Purab and looks in his eyes)

                          Us haath ko tum thaam lo

                          Who meherbaan kal ho naa ho.

 

She then goes in the front again. She sees Armaan and Jassi smiling happily and dancing. Then she sees Purab's fake hurt smile. She then goes to her imagination. She sees Purab looking very handsome on a flower bridge. Purab's singing.

 

                          Palkon ke le keh saye

                          Paas koi joh aaye (then Tamanaa come near him)

                          Lakh sanbhalo pagal dil ko ( Tamanna puts her hand on his heart.)

                          Dil dhadke hi jaye..(Tamanna goes away from Purab when he grabs her hand.)

                          Par soch lo is pal hai jo (Tamanna comes near Purab, closer and closer)

                          Who dastan kal ho naa ho. (Tamanna runs away from him blushing.)

 

Her imagination finally comes to an end when she hears people clapping. Armaan and Jassi are happy. Purab smiles but his smile shows his broken heart. After awhile he leaves. Tamanna goes towards Armaan and Jassi.

 

Tamanna: congratulations once again! Main ab chalti hoon.

 

Jassi: itni jaldi?

 

Tamanna: mujhe ab chalna hoga please Jassi.

 

Jassi: theek hai Tamanna. Thanks for coming!

 

Tamanna goes out and Purab is in the car. She goes to sit beside him. he is crying.

 

Tamanaa: rolo Purab aaj pehli baar main tum se kuch nahin kahoongi. 

 

Purab cries harder and harder and finally hugs Tamanna. Tamanna comforts him. then he holds himself.

 

Purab: aaj ke baad main is tarhan kabhi nahn roonga

 

Tamanna: main  bhi yehi chahti hoon Purab. Tum ek nayi shuruwat karo. Zindagi ki nayi shuruwat.

 

Purab smiles wiping his tears and so does Tamanna. Purab brings Tamanna to her house.

 

Purab: tum ab bhi utni achi hi coffee banati ho?

 

Tamanna smiles: tum khud pee kar batana.

 

They go in her house.

 

Purab: wow! Tum nei apna ghar bohut khoobsurat sajaya hua hai.

 

Tamanna: haaan haan bas achi coffee ke liye maska lagane ki zaroorat nahikn hai. Tum betho main lati hoon.

 

Tamanna leaves for kitchen and Purab looks around her house. He suddenly sooks at a diary that says "My Life, Tamanna Chopra." As he is about to open, Tamanna comes.

 

Purab: sorry who..

 

Tamanna: it's okay ( she hides it in a drawer)

 

Purab drinks his coffee and praises Tamanna. Then he begins to leave.

 

Tamanna: are you ok? Kaho toh main tumhare saath chaloon?

 

Purab: no it's okay Tamanna. I am fine! Goodnight!

 

Tamanna: goodnight!

 

Next, the wedding/reception is over now. Although Angel and Ila Suri are pretty angry, the new couple starts their new life.

 

Jassi: mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai Armaan.

 

Armaan: ab kyun Jassi? Ab hum ek ho gaye hain aur ab hamain koi juda nahin kar payege.

 

And they hug.

 

Gulmohar, everybody is enjoying, partying when Tamanna enters.

 

Tamanna: yeh kya ho rahha hai? Tum logong koi kabhi kaam ki bhi sujhti hai ya nahin? What's wrong?

 

Ruby Mom: par kal toh Jassi ki shaadi thi toh..

 

Tamanna: toh kya? Aaj Gulmohar mein celebrations hon gi?

 

Ruby Mom: haan who hum nein socha keh..

 

Tamanna smiles: aap nein bilkul sahi socha Ruby Mom. Main toh mazaak kar rahi thi. Enjoy yourselves!

 

Tamanna goes to her cabin and the phone rings. She picks up the phone.

 

Purab: hey Tamanna!

 

Tamanna: oh hi Purab kese ho?

 

Purab: kesa lag rhaha hoon?

 

Tamanna: well, who toh mil kar hi bata sakte hain.

 

Purab: toh theek hai mil lete hain.

 

Tamanna: huh?

 

Purab: haan who actually next project ki publicity ke liye hum ek ad campaign kar rahe hain. Us ke liye location select karne jana hai. Tum chalo gi?

Tamanna: of course. Kab aur kaha jana hai?

 

Purab: well aaj hi Dehradhun ke liye nikkalna hai.

 

Tamanna: aaj hi? Well okay I'll see you then.

 

Purab: theek hai toh main tumhein 2 ghente mein tumhare ghar se pick up karta hoon.

 

Tamanna: sure bye Purab!

 

To be continued…