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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! ==Thanks..

Major Sharma scored a 9!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Well she looked really hot in her saree!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ==Yes..dum hai unme..

Abhimanyu ko mila 10!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Yeh meter kharab ho gaya tha kya??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•==Shaayad..

Dono ladkiyon ko naa paake dono captains ke chehre latke huye hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”==Pyaar me aisa hi hota hai..

Vidya is looking so stunning ke Gunny ko yakeen ki nahi huya and he asked Shalini to pinch him!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==Gunny ki haalat sach me serious hai..achha hua Dr. Shalini uski date bani..emergency ko handle kar sakti hai.

Shalini ne pinch kiya tab jaake usse yakeen huya ke jo woh dekh raha hai woh sach hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==Haan..sach hai..

Yeh Karan toh aate hi Purvi ke saath flirt karne laga!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Bechara Mallah!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰==Mallah Baba..tera kyaa hoga??

Karan toh number one flirt hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊Kisi ko bhi nahi chhod raha hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰==Nahi..kyon chhodega?Agar flirt kar sakta hai..toh kyon nahi karega flirt?πŸ˜†

Rummy ko apne type ka ek mil gaya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰Peter bhi haan mein haam mila raha hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==Woh log hai hi aise..

Purvi bhi naa kabhi Jasjeet kabhi Karan!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Usse khayal nahi hai ke woh Mallah ke saath aayi hai aur usse kaisa lagega!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’==Purvi KMA k gate k baahar apna dimaag chhod kar aai hai..

Yahan Gunny Vidya aur Karan ko saath mein dekh kar jealous ho raha hai aur Abhi uske zakhmo pe namak chidak raha hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› ==Abhi kabhi nahi sudhrega..

Gaur cadets ka bahana banake chala gaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ==He is understanding..

Supermodel Karan is just too full of himself!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Ab bol raha hai ke usse army mein aana chahiye tha kyunki natural beauties waha hoti hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==Karan is awesome..

Gunny toh pagal ho raha hai kyunki Vidya ka dress kaafi revealing hai and Karan has his hands around her shoulders!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==Hmm..jalne ki boo toh mujhe bhi aa rahi hai..

Akriti ko Jasjeet ke saath perform karte dekh kar everyone was shocked aur uski tareef kar rahe hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘==Akriti deserves a standing ovation..

They sure set the dance floor on fire!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘==Yaa..that's true..

The song is very nice aur aaj toh Akriti pe kaafi suit ho raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==Hmm..I know..

Mallah's comment was too funny!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Tina is impressed by her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==Everyone is impressed..

Abhi ka muh toh khulla ka khulla reh gaya!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Muh toh bandh karo uncle!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣==Nahi toh machchhar ghoos jaayenge..

Gunny ne uska muh bandh kar diya yeh keh kar ke macchar ghoos jayenge!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣==Gunny bhi kum shaitan nahi hai..

The song is very nice and rocking!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ==I know..

Gunny aur Abhi dono jealous ho rahe hai seeing their respective beaus dancing with someone else!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==It's normal..very normal..

Purvi ne akhir Jas ko kiss kar hi liya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊==Purvi..atleast woh toh satisfied hai. 😍

Jas ne kaha woh usse ush Mahapurush se milna hai ush mahaan hasti se jisne Akriti ko dance sikhane ki koshish ki thi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣==Jas bhi kum nahi hai..

Kehta hai gadhe ka example dena hoga toh uski photo dikha dega!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†This is too funny!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣==Abhi ki fir se baji..

Abhi toh patli gaali se nikal gaya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›==Haan..aur koi raasta bhi toh nahi tha..

Ab Abhi ko pata chal gaya Kakasa se ke Akriti wahi ladki hai jiske saath uski shaadi fix huyi thi aur usne bina dekhe mana kar diya tha!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==Hmm..Deewanjee ne sahi waqt par entry li..

He must be regretting it like anything!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†==That for sure..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

Thanks so much for the pm, I really appreciated it. I'm so sorry for replying so late? I'm currently on vacation and don't have an access to the net. I finally managed to locate an internet caf and thank god for it. So Abhi finally found out that Akriti was the one his dad had chosen for him. Poor guy, he must be cursing his stupidity right now?*sigh* these two will never change. But the guys' reaction to Akriti's new version was too good. I can't wait to see how they (especially Abhi) are going to treat her from now on.

Take your time..and thanks..for liking the new Akriti..πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART 18

Abhimanyu ko kuchh pal k lia samajh me nahi aaya k kyaa karega woh.Akriti Bhatt..wahi ladki hai jisko uske Babasaa ne choona tha?Akriti ne Army join ki, yeh baat toh samajh me aati hai,apne Dad se baghavat kar k woh aai hai..par Akriti ne usko kyon nahi pehchana.. Akriti ko pata hona hi chahie,kyonki Baosaa se uski mulakat hui thi,varna bina dekhe Babasaa usko pasand nahi karte..Akriti ko toh pata hoga..k uske rishtey ki baat Barmer k Rajkumar k saath hui thi,fir Abhimanyu ko usne kyon nahi pehchana?Yaa fir Akriti Abhi ko nahi jaanti.Abhimanyu k baare me nahi jaanti k wahi hai Barmer ka Rajkumar?Yehi baat hai.Lekin Akriti ne us din Abhimanyu ko kyaa soch kar kiss kia?Kya Akriti jaanti hai k Abhimanyu hi wahi hai..aur Akriti ko usne bina dekhe hi reject kar dia tha..is baat ka badla toh nahi le rahi hai?Agar badla le rahi hai..toh usko toh Abhimanyu ko impress karne ka koi mauka nahi chhodna chahie..agar shuru se jaanti hai k Abhimanyu kaun hai..toh shuru se usko koshish yehi rehni chahie.Par aisa kuchh dekha nahi Abhi ne..Akriti KMA bhi chhodna chaah rahi thi..aur Abhimanyu ne khud dekha hai..Akriti kitni chidh jaati hai..jab Abhimanyu uske paas hota hai..yeh chakkar kyaa hai?Aur agar Abhimanyu ko impress karna hi tha..toh Akriti shuru se jataati k woh London se padh kar aai hai..yeh baat toh SD saamne laai..varna Akriti kabhi kisiko nahi batati..Akriti agar Abhimanyu ko jaanti hi hoti..toh shuru se Abhimanyu k saamne khud ko zaaheer karti.Usne khud ko sab se chhupaya..theek hai..par Abhimanyu se kyon apni pehchaan chhupa rahi thi..apne Dad ka naam nahi bataati..par baaki sab bata sakti thi.Abhimanyu bahut zyada confused ho gaya..aur Deewanjee ko dekh kar Akriti kuchh toh react karti..par is tarha chali gayi jaise usko koi bhi fark nahi padta.

"Captain Chauhan..aap yeh kyon khade hain..party k andar chaliye..Captain Randhawa aapko dhoondh rahe hain.."

Abhimanyu ka dhyaan toota..Shona usko bula rahi thi..Abhimanyu SD k saath party me lauta..dekha sab log bahut masti kar rahe hain.Jas aur Karan is tarha ghool mil gaye hain.. jaise bahut saalon ki dosti ho sab se..achanak dekha Akriti Jas k kaanon me kuchh keh rahi hai..Jas hans raha hai..aur Gunny bahut ghaur se Karan ko dekh raha hai.. Abhimanyu Gunny k paas gaya..Shalini k saath SD baatein karne lagi..Gunny Abhimanyu ko ek dum corner me le kar gaya.

Gunny--Aap k haath me drink nahi..kyaa hua?

Abhi--Hum toh soch rahe the..k aap Cadet Saxena k baare me interested hain..par aap toh Karan ko dekh rahe hain..kyaa hua..interest ab unme lene lage kya?

Gunny--Yehi baat main aapko poochhna chaahta tha..Jasjeet ka peechha kia aapne?Aur party se chale gaye?Kyaa baat hai?

Abhi--Dekhiye..ab is bahes ka koi faida nahi..humen koi shaukh nahi hai k hum itni haseen raat me Shona ki baahon me baahen daal kar naache..aur Dr. Shalini k saath dance karne me aapko bhi koi khaas khushi nahi ho rahi hogi..kyaa khayaal hai?

Gunny--Well..ek kaam kia hai maine..yeh dekhiye..apne mobile me Cadet Bhatt aur Cadet Saxena ki achhi si tasveer li hai..dekhiye..

Abhi--Great..aap Cadet Bhatt ki tasveer humen MMS kijiye..aur turant delete kijiye..Vidya ka rakhiye apne paas..humen nahi chahiye..

Gunny--Mujhe aapko woh dena bhi nahi hai...

Abhi--Par..abhi kyaa kare?Woh dekhiye..Karan kaise Cadet Saxena k saath..

Gunny--Well..

Jas drink lene aaya..Gunny ne kaha , "Hii..Mr. Shergill.."

Jas--Captain Randhawa..right..and you Captain Chauhan..?

Abhi--Bilkul sahi pehchana aapne..well..humen is baat ka andaza bhi nahi tha,k aap Cadet Bhatt k dost honge..Cadet Bhatt ..humen kuchh samajh me nahi aai ab tak..unka psycho analysis test lene me kaafi pareshaani hoti hain humen...

Jas--Well..Akriti..shuru se aisi hi introvert rahi hai..I mean..apne baare me zyada kisiko batana..kabhi uski aadat nahi rahi..par mujhe jaanna hai..k KMA me usko kisne dance sikhane ki koshish ki thi..I mean..kitna bada bewakoof hoga..I mean..haan London me jo Akriti thi..aur jo ab hai..bahut fark hai..dono me..I mean..London me..she was outgoing.. par ab yeha aa kar dekh raha hoon..k Akriti kisi se dosti nahi karti..bahut mushkil se kisike saath uski banti hai..

Abhi--Nazir k baare me...

Jas--Yaa..Nazir..that was a big blunder in her life..London k court k chakkar kaat kar woh thak gayi..usne London chhodne ka faisla kia..humne..matlab doston ne bahut koshish ki.. par koi faida nahi hua..jab humne suna Akriti India waapas aana chaahti hai..humne roka.. humen pata tha..k hum doston k siva uska koi nahi..bahut samjhaya..kaha Masters k course me admission le..par woh nahi maani..par humne socha..in fact Gurpreet..matlab Akriti k cousin se maine baat ki..Akriti ne zid pakad li thi..aur humne socha..k theek hai..apne Dad se apni problems ko shaayad woh solve kar le..aur ho sakta hai..apni zindagi ko alag direction de sake..par India lauti..toh aur musibat..uske Dad uski shaadi karana chaah rahe the..par woh shaadi karne ko raazi nahi..Gurpreet se pata chala..k ladka koi Prince hai.. baad me baat tal gayi..aur dobara Akriti k Dad yeh koshish kare..usse pahle Akriti ne KMA join ki..tab bhi,hum sab dost bahut zyada hairan hue.Akriti,The High Maintanence..The Air Headed Blond..joined Army Academy?Khair..achha hai,par yeha bhi usko chain nahi mila..

Abhi--Kyon?

Jas--Nazir k case ko itni ghatia tareeke se pesh kia gaya..Akriti ne mujhe email bheja.. Gurpreet ko bhi bataya..aur main India aaya..mujhe KMA se invitation mila..maine socha yeh mauka chhodna nahi chahiye..Akriti se bhi mil loonga..

Gunny--Ek minute..Cadet Bhatt ki shaadi ki baat kisi Prince se chali thi..?

Jas--Yaa..koi Prince hi tha..Rajasthan ka tha..kyaa naam tha..haan..Barmer..yes yes..Prince of Barmer..us Prince k jo father the..wahi rishtey ki baat le kar aaye..Uncle k paas,and.. Uncle bhi naa..Akriti k marzi khilaaf..that wasn't done at all..so unfair..jis Beti ki aapko itne dino tak yaad nahi aai..fir ek jhatke me uski takdeer ka faisla karnewale koi nahi hain aap..bas..Baap-Beti me fir se jhamela shuru..

Gunny mann hi mann hansne laga.Abhimanyu,Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan ki shaadi ki baat chali thi Akriti se?This is terrific.Gunny hans nahi paa raha hai,usne khaansna shuru kar dia..

Abhi--Really..kaafi high profile Cadet hain yeh..

Gunny--Waise..Captain Chauhan bhi Royal Family se hain..

Jas--Ohh..really?Kahan se?

Abhi--Sanganer..

Jas--Well..in Royal Family se Akriti ka peechha shaayad nahi chhootega..jisse rishtey ki baat chali..woh bhi Prince..aur aap uske Commanding Officer..aap bhi..Prince hi hain.. kyon?

Abhi--Haan..par Cadet Bhatt ne..ek Prince ko reject kyon kia..?

Jas--Arre...usko yeh karna hi nahi pada..suna hai..us Prince ne hi inkaar kar dia..and..Akriti ko bahut raahat mili..abhi abhi yehi bol rahi thi..k woh bahut khush hai yeha...yeha at least woh Prince nahi aayega..aur Prince ne achha kia..k usko reject kia bina dekhe..ab toh woh Prince k father bhi..sidhaar gaye parlok..ab toh rishtey ki baat karne bhi nahi aayenge..aur Prince jab sunega k Akriti ne Army Academy join ki hai..khud ba khud peechhe hat jaayega..

Gunny--Us Prince ko kabhi dekha hai Cadet Bhatt ne..?

Jas--Nahi..naam tak nahi suna..usne..

Gunny--Aur shaayad Prince ne bhi kabhi dekha nahi ...Cadet Bhatt ko.

Jas--Jee...I bet..agar dekh leta..toh khud apne Baap se kehta ,agle din ka muhurat nikaalne k lia..

Gunny--Haan..Cadet Bhatt ko dekh kar jo reject kar de..woh koi gadha hi hoga..hai na Captain Chauhan?

Jas--Sach me..gadha..aur ho sakta hai..woh..you know what I mean..internal defect..aisa hi kuchh..

Gunny ka dum ghoot raha hai..hansi rok rok kar..aise me Akriti aai..

Gunny--Cadet Bhatt..well..you dance very well..

Akriti--Thank you Sir..

Jas--Akriti..tera peechha in Prince type k logon se kabhi nahi chhootega..

Akriti ko kuchh bhi nahi samajh me aaya..

Akriti--Matlab?

Jas--Nahi..tu jisse shaadi karne k darr se bhaag aai..woh bhi Prince..aur jiske under tu training le rahi hai..woh bhi Prince..

Akriti--Kaun?

Gunny--Yeh Captain Chauhan ki baat kar rahe hain...

Akriti ne bahut ajeeb nazron se dekha..Abhimanyu ki taraf..

Jas--Yeh bhi Prince hain..Prince of Sanganer..

Akriti--Mujhe pata nahi tha..well..Jas..chalna..Karan aur Vidya ne tujhe lene hi bheja hai mujhe..Please excuse us..

Jas ko lekar Akriti chali gayi...

Gunny--Hmmm..toh Captain Chauhan..duniya gol hai..kyon?

Abhi--Humen bhi thodi der pahle pata chala..humare Deewanjee aaye the..unhone Akriti ko dekha..aur..please Captain..aap yeh baat kisiko mat batana...

Gunny--Bilkul nahi..kisi se nahi kahoonga..ho sakta hai Cadet Bhatt yehan se bhi bhaag jaaye..woh Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan se chidhti hai..par Abhimanyu Prince of Sanganer hai k nahi..usko fark nahi padta..agar usko pata chala..k Abhimanyu Prince of Barmer hai..maamla bigad sakta hai..

Abhi--Academy me bahut se log hain..jinko yeh baat pata hai k hum kaun hain..yeh toh shukar hai..k ab tak Akriti yeh baat nahi jaanti..

Gunny--Unko pata bhi nahi chalna chahie..is baat ka khayaal rakhna hoga..

Abhi--Thanks..

Gunny--Your secrets are mine..chill..


Dance floor par fir se shorgol..sab fir se jhoom uthe..DJ ne bahut badhiya gaana lagaya hai..is baar saare Cadets naach rahe the..faculty members nahi..

Teri tamannaa aaa aaa..

Teri tamannaa aaa aaa..

Teri tamannaa aaa aaa.. aa aaaaaaaaaa..Teri tamannaa aaa aaa.. aa aaaaaaaaaa..

Teri justujoo haiiiiiiiiiiii...

Mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...

Mere zahen meeeee..khayaalon me tu haiiiiiiii..

Yeh itni si doorie bhi haii..dard kyon hai..dard kyon haiii..?

Mallah naach nahi paa raha hai...Purvi chidh gayi usse..Sameera sharma rahi hai..Rummy ulte seedhe steps kar raha hai..Peter theek thaak steps kar raha hai Tina k saath.

Major Sharma khadi ho kar Cadets ka dance dekh rahi hain..

Ooo kuchh aaj aise aise tu mujhme sama jaa..sama jaa..sama jaaa..

Soye se ehsaas saaaare jaga jaaaaaaaaaaa..

Tujhe kyaa bataoon main pyaasa hoon kab se..

Ooo tu aaj ban k ghataa ,mujhko bheega jaa..

Teri tamannaa aaa aaa..Teri tamannaa aaa aaa..

Teri justujoo haiiiiiiiiiiii...

Mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...

Jas aur Akriti saath hai..Abhimanyu dekh raha hai..SD keh rahi hain, "Such a nice pair.. aren't they Captain?"

Abhi--I don't think so..Cadet Bhatt is too tough for Jasjeet..

Yeh teri zulfon se khushboo jo aaye..

Woh meri saanson ko paaagal banaaye..

Uff mere dil me yeh kaisa junoon hai..

Jo tere honthon ko nazdeek chaahheeeeeeeeee..

Gunny mann hi mann jal gaya..Karan bahut kareeb jaa raha hai ..Vidya ko kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha hai kya?Yeh Karan k iraade nek nahi lag rahe hain.

Teri tamannaa aaa aaa..Teri tamannaa aaa aaa..

Teri justujoo haiiiiiiiiiiii...

Mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...

Mere zahen meeeee..khayaalon me tu haiiiiiiii..

Yeh itni si doorie bhi haii..dard kyon hai..dard kyon haiii..?

Mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..mujhe aaj bas yeh teri..teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...teri arzoooooooooo haiiiii...

Dance khatam hua...

Team Commander Burman abhi tak Bar me ludhak kar baithe the..ab jaa kar unko yeh laga..k unko bhi participate karna chahie is party me..woh mike le kar khade ho gaye..

"Attention..mere pyaare kabootaron..attention..tab se dekh raha hoon..aap log bahut masti kar rahe hain..ab jinke saath aap party me aaye hain..unke saath toh aap comfortable honge hi..maza toh tab hai..k aap unke saath bhi achha dance kare jinke saath aapka equation theek nahi..toh..ab main bataoonga..kaun kiska partner banega.."

Rummy--Mar gaye..

Peter--I am dead..

Mallah--Bajrangbali..raksha karna..

Sameera--What is his problem?

Purvi--Ohh no..!!

Vidya--Uff..kyaa ho gaya?

Akriti--Villain ki entry ho gayi..bhoogtenge sab..

Shona--This is screwed..

Shalini--Achhi party chal rahi hai..inko..bhi..ab..

Gunny--Insaan aadat se majboor hota hai..

Abhi--Dekhte hain..ab yeh joker kyaa karta hai..

"Cadet Mallah and Cadet Shroff,aap partner banenge..Cadet Gaur aur Tina ..partners, Cadet Sabnis aur Cadet Bisht ..aap dono..aur tab se main dekh raha hoon..do handsome hunks k saath Cadet Bhatt aur Cadet Saxena dance kar rahi hain..ghalat hai..Jasjeet banenge Shona k partner and Karan banenge Dr. Shalini k partner.."

Akriti--Par Sir..hum kinke saath dance kare?Humare partners ko toh aap ne kisi aur k partners bana chuke....

"Keep your mouth shut Cadet Bhatt..baat puri nahi hui..jinke saath aapke partners ko bheja hai..aap log unhi do Officer ..matlab Captain Randhawa aur Captain Chauhan k saath dance karengi..ghoos gaya dimag me..yaa ghoosaoon?"

Akriti--Ghoosa lia maine..

Major Sharma ko gussa aa gaya ,kahne lagi , "This is not fair Team Commander..is tarha ek hazard sa creat hoga..you can't do that.."

Burman--I can..and equation toh aapki aur meri bhi theek nahi?So..Major..may I have the pleasure to dance with you?Please..!!!


Yeh kisine expect nahi kia tha..sab ka focus usi taraf ghoom gaya..sab clap karne lage.. "Yes ,Major..go for it..come on Ma'm.."

Finally Major Sharma Burman k saath dance karne ko raazi hui..

Rummy ne Peter aur Mallah ko ishara kia..k Burman hai nashe me..dance shuru hone do.. apne apne partners k saath hi dance karenge..bas shuru me Burman k saamne naatak karna padega.Dance shuru hua..Par Burman ko sab joker kahte hain..lekin dance bahut achha karta hai Burman..Major Sharma khud hairan hui..

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Burman k combination k mutabik sab ne dance karna shuru kia..Jas aur Karan SD aur Shalini k saath dance karne lage..Abhi ne Akriti k saamne apna haath rakha..aur dance floor par laaya usko..

Gunny ne Vidya ko poochha dance k lia..Vidya ne kaha,"Main bahut thak gayi hoon.. sorry..",tab tak Gunny ka haath pakad chuka tha..Gunny, "Let's dance..Team Commander Burman ko aap naraz nahi kar sakti.."

Dance karne lage sab..ek track khatam hua..is beech sab ne apna partner badal lia tha.. matlab apne apne partner k saath jaa kar mil gaye the..Akriti ne dhyaan nahi dia..aur Vidya jaana chaahti thi.Gunny ne jaane nahi dia.Gunny ne Vidya ko kamar ko apni baahon k ghere se azad nahi kia..Vidya thodi helpless lagi..Rummy ne chilla kar kaha , "Hey DJ.. some soft music yaar.."

DJ ne bahut romantic track play kia..

Ek pal k lia hi sahi..ghadiyaan hum ko mili ,makhmali ,pyaar ki..

Is ek pal toh jee le zaraaaa..

Yeh lamhe fir mile,naa mile,kho jaane de sabhi dooriyaan faasle..

Aa dil mila le..aur paas aaa..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..

Gunny--Aapko achha nahi lag raha hai..mere saath..hai na?Karan k saath zyada achha lag raha tha..kuchh hi ghanto ki dosti bahut gehri ho gayi..kyon?

Vidya Gunny se nazre nahi mila paa rahi thi..nazre neechi kar k hi usne jawaab dia , "Nahi ..aisi baat nahi.."

Gunny--Toh kyaa baat hai?Mujhe batane me koi aitraaz hai aapko?Waise..dress bahut achhi hai..thodi si revealing hai..aur Karan ne mauka nahi chhoda koi bhi..

Vidya--Matlab?

Gunny ka daayaan haath Vidya k peeth aur kandhe par ghoom rahe the..usne kaha, "Nahi.. Karan bhi aapko isi tarha chhoo raha tha.."

Vidya k badan me beejli si daur gayi..Gunny ne yeh mehsoos kia..k Vidya kaanp uthi..aur uske rongte khade ho gaye.Gunny muskuraya,poochha,"Kya Karan k saath bhi aapko aisa laga tha..?"..Vidya ki aankhon me darr ka saaya dekha Gunny ne..Gunny ne kaha, "Waise.. aaj aap bahut achhi lag rahi hain..pahle kabhi is tarha nahi dekha..actually,aap mujhe har roop me achhi lagti hain.."

Vidya--Mujhe jaane dijiye..

Gunny--Please..ab bhaagne ka koi faida nahi...main bhi bhaagta raha...par bhaag kar kaha jaoon?Khud se bhaag kar nahi reh sakta..Vidya,main bhi jaanta hoon..aur tum bhi jaanti ho..hum dono jaante hain..k hum dono ek doosre k lia kyaa mehsoos karte hain..fir hum inkaar kyon karte hain is baat se..?

Vidya--Aap kyon mujh par meherbaani kar rahe hain?Vansh ki maut ne mujhe itna bhi kumzor nahi kia hai..

Gunny--Meherbaani main nahi kar raha hoon..par tumse thodi si meherbaani ki ummeed rakhta hoon..Vidy ..main bahut tanha tha..agar tum meri tanhai ko baant lo..toh mere lia zindagi thodi aasaan ho sakti hai,pahle kabhi aisa mehsoos kia nahi..kisi k lia..tum saamne aati ho..toh kyaa kahoon samajh me nahi aata..saamne nahi rehti..door rehti ho.. ajeeb si ghabrahat hoti hai..kya issi ehsaas ka naam mohabbat hai?

Vidya--Mmmuujhhee nnnaahiiii mmmaalum..mujhe jaana hai..

Gunny ne Vidya ko aur bhi apni baahon k ghere me lia..

Music k hisaab se lighting bhi badal gayi hai..dheemi dheemi rohni..andhera..ujala.

Gunny--Kaha jaana hai?Aur kyon jaana hai?Darr kis baat ka?Dekho..sab apne aap me masroof hain..Vidya..mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai..main kyaa karoon?Mera dil mere bas me nahi..

Vidya--Captain Randhawa..aap kyaa keh rahe hain?

Gunny--Apne dil ki baat..maine apna dil nikaal k rakh dia tumhare saamne..

Vidya--Main kyaa karoon?

Gunny--Mere dil ko apna dil samajh kar apne paas rakh lo..yaa fir berahemi se tod do..

Vidya ki saanse uski seene me atak gayi..

Kyon,tapte hain hum?Baahar khadi fizaayen sard hain..

Choobhti hai yeh dhadkan..dil ki ragon me fir se dard hai..

Kitne fasaane,tumhe hain sunaane..abhi toh milaa hai waqt zaraaaaaaaa..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..

Abhi--Aap k bahut se raaz hain..ek ek kar k baahar aa rahe hain..

Akriti--Koi raaz nahi.main show off nahi karti..that's it..

Abhi--Waise..Prince of Barmer k baare me jaan kar bura laga..aapko bina dekhe hi..

Akriti--Main bach gayi..

Abhi--Kabhi aapne socha hai..agar unhone aapko kabhi dekh lia..toh bahut pachtaayenge.. k aapko bina dekhe unhone reject kia..

Akriti--Kya hum kisi aur topic par baatein kar sakte hain?I just don't want to talk about that shit..

Abhi--Aapke dost..bahut achhe hain..

Akrit--Haan...

Abhi--Waise..Karan zara zyada hi kareeb jaa raha hai Vidya k..

Akriti--Maine hi kaha hai..taa k..Captain Randhawa Vidya se apni mohabbat ka izhaar jald se jald kare..Karan is very loyal to his lover..I know her..

Abhi--Ohh..aapko Vidya ki bahut fikar hai..

Akriti--Usko apne hisse ki har khushi milni chahie..aur agar dono ek doosre se pyaar karte hain..toh dil ki honthon par laane se itna kyon jheejhagte hain?Unki yeh khamoshi todne ki maine koshish ki hai..

Abhi--Humen jalan ho rahi hai..kaash hum bhi Vidya ki tarha khushkismat hote..jink dost aap jaise itne achhe hote..

Akriti--Aap "Hum Hum" kar k thakte nahi?Aap bore nahi hote?It hammers on my brain..

Abhi--Aadat..kyaa kare?

Akriti--Waise..aaj aapne apne beards ko trim kia hai..right?Pahle ki tarha thick toh nahi lag rahe hain..

Abhi--Aapne notice kia?Achha laga..baat yeh hai..k humare gaalon ne hum se shikayat ki.. k humari thick beard ki style se un par meherbaani nahi hoti..kisike naazook hothon ki meherbaani..issi lia..ab se tai kia hai..yeh style hi rakhenge..pata nahi..achanak kab fir se woh hum par meherbaan ho..aur is baar meherbaani dono gaalon par ho..

Akriti--London ,New York me yehi tareeka hota hai..Hello aur Good Bye isi style se kahi jaati hai..isme special treatment..so-called koi meherbaani nahi hai..

Abhi--Woh kyaa hai..hum toh India me paida hue..aur yehi bade hue..ab har baat ka Hindustani matlab hi nikaalenge..agar saamnewala..turant specify kar naa de..k kis lia.. you know..humne toh wahi matlab nikala..

Akriti--Aap ne jo phool rakhe..aapko darr nahi laga?Mere kamre tak aana..

Abhi--Hum issi tarha k Missions par jaate rahe hain aksar..jaha chhup kar dushman k adde par ghoosna padta hai..aapke kamre tak jaana..

Akriti--Ohh..dono baaton me koi fark nahi dikhta aapko?

Abhi--Risk toh dono me hain..in fact isme toh risk zyada tha..Dushman pakadta toh shaayad jaan se maar deta..par Major Sharma ,BC yaa Major General Gaur k haathon me padta.. humara career hi khatam ho jaata...maut se badtar hoti yeh baat..

Akriti--Fir bhi aap aaye..jaan sakti hoon,kyon?

Abhi--Aap nahi jaanti?

Akriti--Nahi..

Abhi--Achha..agar woh Prince of Barmer aapko pasand karta..toh aap kyaa karti?

Akriti--Bhaag jaati..

Abhi--Kyon?

Akriti--Mere Dad ko jo pasand aaye..woh meri pasand kabhi nahi ban sakta,,

Abhi--Chaahe woh kitna hi kaabil ho..kisi me kharabi aap isi tarha nikaalti hain?

Akriti--Kharabi ek hi hai..mere Dad ki pasand hai..kaafi hai..khair..kuchh aur baat kare..?

Abhi--Hmm..ek baat poochh sakte hain?

Akriti--Ek kyon?Dus poochhiye..

Abhi--Hum aapke lia kitne khaas hai?

Akriti--Aapne yeh kaise soch lia k aap khaas hain mere lia?

Abhi--Naquaab k peechhe aap chhup sakti hain..par humari aankho ko dhokha nahi de sakti aap..

Akriti--Maine kisiko dhokha nahi dia..maine kuchh nahi chhupaya..

Abhi--Par bataya bhi toh nahi..

Hai khushboo bhari..dheemi si roshni chirag ki..

Teri hi deewangi ,tujhpe fida, fida hai har khushi..

palkon se palke zara chhoo k dekho..in me kitna ashque bhara..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..

Gunny--Kyaa hua ..chup kyon ho?

Vidya--Kyaa kahoon?

Gunny--Mere sawaal ka jawaab..?

Vidya--Kabhi kabhi chup rehna hi behtar hota hai..

Gunny--Main intezar karoonga..us din ka jab tum apne ehsaas ..apni mohabbat ka izhaar karogi..

Vidya--Hmm..

Gunny--Now relax..enjoy the party..

Vidya--Hmm..well..Captain Chauhan k saath..Akriti..bahut peacefully deal kar rahi hai..

Gunny--I can see that..you know something..Captain Chauhan is falling in love ..in fact he is already fallen..

Vidya--Akriti ka koi bharosa nahi..

Ek pal k lia hi sahi..ghadiyaan hum ko mili ,makhmali ,pyaar ki..

Is ek pal toh jee le zaraaaa..

Yeh lamhe fir mile,naa mile,kho jaane de sabhi dooriyaan faasle..

Aa dil mila le..aur paas aaa..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..

Fir kyaa ho kyaa khabar..dekha hai kisne kal..aa raat rok le..fir ho naa jaaye saher..


Akriti--Kyaa nahi bataya maine?

Abhi--Bahut kuchh..waise..aaj aap..bahut achhi lag rahi hain..aaj aapko dekh kar kisi ki bhi niyat kharaab ho sakti hai..aap humesha khud ko chhupaane me busy rehti hain..kabhi khul kar saamne nahi aai..

Akriti--Aisa nahi hai..

Abhi--Aisa hi hai..come on Akriti..apne dil ka darwaza itne zor se bandh mat kijiye..ek rishta..apne Dad se jo rishta hai..usne aapko chot pahoochai hai..hum maante hain..par aap ne saare rishton ko kathgade par khada kar dia..un par sawalia nishaan laga dia..yeh naainsaafi kyon?

Akriti--Aisa nahi hai..agar aisa hota...toh main aap k itne kareeb nahi aati..

Abhi--Kyaa?Kyaa kaha aapne?

Akriti--Kuchh nahi..


Gaana khatam ho chuka tha..sab ne clap kia..Team Commander Burman ludhak chuke the puri tarha..Major Sharma ne party khatam hone ka eilaan kar dia..raat bahut ho chuki thi... aur khud waha se bhaag gayi..varna Burman k changool se nikalna namumkin hota..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow!!!!!!!! that was so romantic *sigh* especially gunny's confession. but vidya is right, akriti ka koi bharosa nahin, so abhi better be careful
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Posted: 16 years ago
the update was wonderful..., gunny at last proposed , very sweet of him,luvd abhi aakriti convo ,akriti doesnot know that abhi is prince of barmer and i dont think so abhi will let her know.......As if she doesnot hate him enoughπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰,i just wanted to ask is sd positive or negative??? and why does vidya tell gunny that aakriti is not to be trusted in matters of luv????πŸ˜•
Edited by arsh30 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanku for the update,was waiting for it and thoroughly enjoyed itπŸ‘
both the songs u used are my fav specially the romantic one.....
"ek pal ke lie hi sahi",☺️☺️☺️
abhi aapna dimag chalane ki koshish kar rahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
, bechara , usko toh kuch samaj hi nahi aa raha jab usse diwan ji ne bataya
uske aur aakriti ke rishte ke bare me, woh bhi chakryu se nikalne ki
koshish kar raha , aakhir kar jas ne uski mushkil hal kar di saari baat batake.....πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
abhi bahut pachta raha hai aapne decision ki wajah se , it seems so....πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
chalo jo hota hai acche ke lia hota haiπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
gunny ne toh phatte chak die aajπŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌakhir kar propose kar hi dia vidhya koπŸ₯³πŸ₯³
mujhe dono " would be couples "ki conversation bahut aachi lagi😳😳😳
it was 10 on 10 ud.
plz ud soon
thank you😊
Edited by me myself - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
dat was really romantic 1..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
the update was really gud⭐️⭐️

abhi ki chain of thoughts mujhe kaafi aachi lagi,shukr hai usse koi galat fehmi nahi hui aakriti ke baare mein



aakhir kar gunny me akal aayi aur usne vidhya se apne dil ki baat akhir keh hi daali.

gunny aur vidhya ke convo ki baat kare toh:

Gunny--Meherbaani main nahi kar raha hoon..par tumse thodi si meherbaani ki ummeed rakhta hoon..Vidy ..main bahut tanha tha..agar tum meri tanhai ko baant lo..toh mere lia zindagi thodi aasaan ho sakti hai,pahle kabhi aisa mehsoos kia nahi..kisi k lia..tum saamne aati ho..toh kyaa kahoon samajh me nahi aata..saamne nahi rehti..door rehti ho.. ajeeb si ghabrahat hoti hai..kya issi ehsaas ka naam mohabbat hai?

this dialogue was really romantic and i don;t think there would have been
a better way to express gunny's emotionsπŸ‘
πŸ‘
☺️☺️☺️

i
really want vidhya to except gunny 's proposal and marry him after the training is
over .

as u promised iss ud AA ki kafi convo thi........😊
talking about AA convo toh ,mujhe itna accha laga ki i hav already reread it many times.specially this dialogue


Akriti--Aap "Hum Hum" kar k thakte nahi?Aap bore nahi hote?It hammers on my brain..πŸ˜†

dono hi item hainπŸ˜†

chalo ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hain

ud soonπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ




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Edited by kishwar1990 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
too good update Anu. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
Pehli baar is baar Gunny ne apne dil ki baat Vidya se jis tareeke se kahi i really liked that so much πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ n Akriti's planning has became sucessful now.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Abhi ka kuch nahi ho sakta , un dono k dimaag me itne saari cheejen hai ek saath ki kya kya sort out karenge sab.πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜• Ek karte hain to doosra khada ho jaata hai.😲😲😲 Dono ka dimaag kabhi kabhi itna jyada chalta hai jitna shayad nahi chalna chahiye.πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±
Song selection is nice.⭐️⭐️⭐️ Abhi k dimaag me bahut saare sawal the Akriti k liye jin me se kuch ka jawaab Karan ne diya us ko aur baaki ki cheejin vo khud pata kar lega.😊😊😊 Abhi na sach me buddhu hai bilkul.😑😑😑 Vidya pata nahi kyoun ab itna sharma rahi hai Gunny se jab ki vo jaanti hai aur khud bhi pyaar karti hai Gunny se vo bahut. Kitna keen observe kar rahe the Abhi aur Gunny Akriti aur Vidya ko.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Vaise kuch bhi ho Burman ne kaam bahut accha kiya tha πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ kam se kam is baat se do logon ka pyaar to saamne aa hi gaya . πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Rahi baat baaki bache do logon ki to vo bhi bahut jald maan lenge.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Akriti k muh se baat par baat to nikal hi gayi ki agar aisa hota to vo Abhi k kareeb nahi aati kabhi.😳😳😳
update soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
the update was marvellousπŸ‘
chalo abhi ko akriti life history toh pata chal gayi puri tarah se πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†, warna
hamesha confuse hota rehta tha bechara πŸ˜•,thanks to jas.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
magar mujhe samaj nhi aa rahi ki aakriti ne diwan jee ko kyun nhi pehchana???πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
gunny ne aaj badi himmat dikhai πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ woh bi thanks to karan and aakritiπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
its party timeπŸ₯³
magar abhi ki koi madad nhi karega , bechare ko jo karna hai khud hi karna hai
major sharma , bechari ko kabootaron kr sartaj ke saath dance karna pada......πŸ˜†
thanks for ud.
ud soon

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