Delena One Shot-'To have and to hold...' Updatd page 5 Oct 5

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Ohh lovely...n Thanx for d pm...

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CrazyPatel1

@CrazyPatel1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Well done, dear. It was well written and I loved it a lot. I felt as if I was actually there. The ending was really good. Thank you so much for the beautiful update.

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

awesome update

everything is very beautifully written

like the ending

thanks for the pm

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ..juhi..
Love u indu for this...!! It was really amazing!!

Thank you juhi🤗 Thanks so much for reading.🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life
BEAUITFUL
Love Delena 😳

Awesome story Indu di
Loved it

thanks Meghna🤗am glad you like it. 😃

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Surprised? 😉 Dont be 😆 And thanks so much for listening to me for once 😆 One thing I learned the hard way was that a writer should write as long as they have a story to tell. Whoever wants to read will read it n a story's true merit is never measured by the number of likes and comments, atleast not in a public forum where the target audience is limited.

Your writing is amazing as usual but since I have stopped watching TVD post season 2 it was hard for me to keep up. Maybe I will bug u later on for the story 😆 Oh yeah u told me its ur own story n I wished u had elaborated on whom they were running away from u know? Maybe a line or two. Not more. Yeah I understood that Stefan, Caroline and the council saved the day but a little elaboration would have been good 😊

But keeping that tiny glitch aside the rest was fabulous. Especially the part where they are on the run for their life and Elena wants nothing more than to confess to Damon how much she loves him. Damon had always been explicit about his feelings for Elena but as we all know Elena was always confused n I liked the way u got them together here compared to what was shown in the show. I was never happy with the way she dumped Stefan n went to Damon. But here it was depicted beautifully esp when Elena wonders if she will ever get the chance to tell that to Damon when she knew what that would mean to him. She is a human n this part sorta had me confused coz we always envision a vampire Elena with Damon. Sorry my fault here 😆 So she is fragile n she knows she cant do much but still she'd do all it would take to protect Damon who is a vampire himself n this part was beautiful 👏 And thank God help arrived for them at the right time n love the confession n the way it occurred. Elena wouldn want to waste even a moment here for u never know when they will get surrounded by danger n she may never get to talk to him again.

Loved it Indu 👏 And next time u wish to write go ahead n post it. Dont break ur head on response for we cannot please everyone at once. Write it for those who wish to read n most of all write bcoz u want to write!

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Wow awesome writing Indu. Loved the action scenes and especially the confession at the end. Really ovely

Thank you Shreya. Always your words mean a lot. 😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! it was beautiful...loved the way elena fought & at the end their confession was beautiful...loved it...Write more on delena...

I'll surely try to write more on them dear. 😊 I am glad you enjoyed it. 😳