Mei or meri Mrs. Sharma kasum ff- updated part 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

Mera naam dekh ke samajh aa hi gaya hoga ke I am Karan Wahi's fan too..haha..Im a Wahian and a Kapilian so this FF will be really interesting to me girl! But main Kapilian jyada hu..so of course I want to see some KaSu romance in this..Karan Wahi jealous kare Kappu ko aur Kappu romantic ho jaye..hayeee that would be so nice..me n my imaginations hehe. Cant wait for the next part! This was good and very beautifully described. Youre a great writer darling. Mwah.

Lots of Love

Are waahhh you are wahi's fan too for to for sure you'll gonna like it, are don't worry sumona to kapil ki h bs karan tadka h ;) areee... After n all i'm kasu fan to romance to dal lungi hi bt or bhi boht kuch hoga is story m bs wait n watch ;)
Luv you too girly :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haan I'm a fan of Wahi's acting..aajkal utna jyada pasand nahi karti jitna pehle karti thi..phir bhi im damn excited for this story. Mwahhh
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am very excited to know what happens next...Karan Wahi had played a small character in one of d skits of Comedy Nights with Kapil. & currently he is working in Comedy Nights Bachao.
I really love to watch Kapil's jealousy either onscreen or off screen when Sumona praises some other guy! Thats d imp reason why we think they both can be together...Plz update soon...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am very excited to know what happens next...Karan Wahi had played a small character in one of d skits of Comedy Nights with Kapil. & currently he is working in Comedy Nights Bachao.
I really love to watch Kapil's jealousy either onscreen or off screen when Sumona praises some other guy! Thats d imp reason why we think they both can be together...Plz update soon...:)[/quote]
Are fir to get ready to see kapil ko hadmaar tarike se jalte hue dekhne k Liye
I'm sorry I haven't updated the story for a long time as I was out of station enjoying my holidays with family but now I'm back and will update it soon 😊
Lots of luv :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mei aur meri Mrs. Sharma part 2

Hello everyone sorry for the late update'

Karan: (it's getting very difficult for him to sleep, it's 11.30 in clock and he is tossing and turning on bed, he worked so hard today... still, could not able to sleep...just lying on the bed, looking at the fan, and thinking about that absolutely adoring beauty) kya paap kr diye the bhagwaan aise mene jo vo shadi shuda nikli, god...first time in my life I am feeling like this.. I can't get over with her sparkling eyes, the sound of her laugh and the innocence of her face...her thoughts are making me indescribably happy... that's it... (he wakes up at his sudden thought) she is married and I shouldn't be thinking about her...karan thori chai pee le tujhe acha lagega chal uth ab...

(He gets up from his bed and head towards the kitchen)

Karan: shit there is no milk...now what to do, chai peeni thi, kya yaar...IDEA... let's take some help from our neighbor, vese bhi jb neighbor itne helpful or beautiful ho to help to leni hi chiye...let's go (whatever he do or thinks, but at last he is finding ways to meet her)

He stops near the door, before ringing the bell he gets caught up by a sudden thought

(wait...kya kr rha h karan raat ke 11.30 bje itni raat m jake disturb krega use, come on karan wahi tune itne serials kiye h...everything is fair in love and war)

He closes his eyes and with an utter confidence rings the bell

Shrama's residence

Kapil: abe yaar ye itni raat m kon batmeez h jo bell bja rha h...sumo uth...sumo uth

Sumona: kya h sharmaji paresaan mat kijiye...

Kapil: abe yaar uth dekh koi h gate m, jake k gate khol

Sumona: areee itni raat m kon h???m nhi khol rhi sharma ji, aap kholiye

Kapil: abe yaar m so rha hu

Sumona: han to m gidda nhi dal rhi hu, m bhi so hi rhi hu, jake kholiye and let me sleep

Kapil: chal krli comedy, comedian ki biwi, jaa ab jake gate khol (he pushes her from the bed)

Sumona: fine khol rhi hu dhakka mt maro...batmeez pati

With a frowned look she gets up and goes to open the door

Karan: (I think I should go, she must be sleeping...ek min sayad gate khul rha h) hello Mrs. Sha...(o my god...there she is standing in front of me in her full glory, wearing this blue full-length nightie, gosh...it sits on her body as if it has been made for her, only for her, its satin folds hugging her figure following her curves and the light blue is gorgeous against her ivory skin the spaghetti neckline embroided with miniature sea blue color flowers and white lace finished, and her straight, long, beautiful ,silky hairs falling on her face are adding fire to her beauty, her eyes, her lips, her skin...everything is just perfect...mesmerizing...damn just imagine how beautiful she would look while sleeping...god mujhe chakkar na ajae)

Sumona: areee hiii..karan ji aap???itni raat m??? kuch help chiye thi...ye bowl aap ke hath m???kuch chiye tha apko????

Sumona looked at him giving an cute innocent look making him more nervous

Karan: hannn... o han...han...vo actually I'm sorry mrs. Sharma itni raat m disturb krne k liye actually thora dudh milega please...

Sumona: o han sure... why not m abhi lai

she heads towards the kitchen leaving him alone with his thoughts

Karan: (kya lucky admi h yaar, ye jo bhi h, kya wife mili h ise, kitni cute, pyari or sundar...kismat hoti h by god kuch logo ki)

Sumona comes back in 2 minutes with a bowl of milk in her hands

Sumona: there you are, lijiye...itne se ho jaega ya or laun?

Karan: are nhi nhi kafi h, vese mrs. Sharma aapka naam kya...I mean mummy papa ne bhi koi pyara sa naam diya hoga apko

Sumona: su...

Kapil: ji inka naam mrs. Sharma hi h, at least apke liye ye mrs. Sharma hi h

Thinking that what his wife is doing outside for so long, actually forced him to leave the bed and he comes outside the room and now he is thankful that he came outside on right time because he can sense something fishy on this man's eyes

Karan: o my god kapil sharma...hey dude nice to meet you...ooo I often watch your show it's quite funny I must tell you...you are good han...

Kapil: thank you...tumhe itni der kyu lag rhi thi andar aane m

Kapil don't give much heat to him and ask sumona to go to sleep

Sumona : sharma ji vo inko dudh chiye tha...vese ye hmare padosi h...ye samne vale flat m hi rehte h

Kapil: han to smnne vale flat m rehte h to vhi rhe yahan kyu aaye h???

Sumona: sharma ji...manners...padosi h vo hmare h or boht bade tv actor bhi h...karan wahi (sumona excitingly tells him)

Karan: I'm sorry aap logo ko itni raat m disturb krne k liye, actually vo mujhe neend nhi aa rhi thi, chai peene ka man kiya...fridge m dekha to dudh bhi nahi tha to mene socha hmare padosi boht sundar aaa...mera mtlb ache h (he immediately corrects him) to sochaa...(karan looks at sumona and give his best smile to her)

Kapil very well knows what he is trying to do, and what that smile means after an all he is also a man and knows all these tactics.

Kapil: boht badiya krdi na madad, chaliye ab hmari bhi madad kriye or podosi ji pados m jake rhiye

Karan: aaa...ooo..han..(kya yaar view kharab kr diya is admi ne Mrs. Sharma k samne aake khada hogya h lagta h ise pta chal gya h ki m iski biwi pe mar mitta hu, come on aakhir kaar ek admi hi ek admi ko samjh skta h...acha khasa mei or meri mrs. Sharma bate kar rhe the or ye kabab m haddi aa gya)

Kapil: (kapil beta is admi ki niyat shi nhi lag rhi h, jis trha se ye teri biwi ko dekh rha h na kuch to gadbad jaroor h) baby tum andar jao, or jake so jao m aa rha hu..(he pushes her towards the bed room)

Sumona: are pr sharma ji ...vo m..acha thik h dhakka mt mariye m jaa rhi hu

Karan: (nhi...nhi...please mat jaiye mrs. Sharma...kya batmeez admi h... use hi andar bhej diya jis ke liye aya tha)

Kapil: o hallo bhaisahab gai vo...idhar dekho meri taraf... doodh mil gya na, to ab aap bhi prasthan kare, ghar pe jake chai bna k peeye

Karan: (han han vese bhi mujhe koi shock nhi h tumhe ghurne ka jise dekhne aya tha use to andar bhej diya) hahahah you are really very funny, vese nice to meet you

Kapil: hmmm thik h...chaliye byeee... good night... (kapil pushes him out of the house and shuts the door on his face)

Karan: what a man he is yaar, itni jor se darwaja mere muh pe band krdiya...itni pyaari ladki is admi ko mil kaise gai (karan absolutely frowns at kapil's attitude)

Kapil: (kapil beta ye admi khatra h)

He enters the room still worried about his wife

Sumona: kr k aagye bechare ki bezti tum

Kapil: ooo... hooo... madam tumhe bada taras aa rha h uske upar mene bezzati ki vo dikh rha h pr jo usne hmari neend khrab ki vo nhi dikh rha tumhe

Sumona: sharma ji...vo hmare padosi h...it's our responsibility to help our neighbors...or more than that he is karan wahi the famous tv actor...apko maloom h hazaro ladkiya uski fan h

Kapil: han to kya uski hazaro fan h to m bhi kapil sharma hu mere lakho...nhi, croro ladkiyan fan h...samjhi...or thullu responsibility...batmeez admi is trha koi kisi ko itni raat m disturb krta h

Saying that, he jumps on bed

Sumona: are aap itna...irritate kyu ho rhe h???? aap to aise kr rhe h jaise uski nazar aap ki kisi kimati cheez m h

Kapil: (hey bhagwaan ab kaise bataun is pagal aurat ko ki us kaminey ki nazar sach m meri boht keemti cheez m h, kya yaar in aurto ko kaise nhi pta chalta admiyon ki niyat k baaree m...uski ankho m saaf dikh rha tha ki meri vali pe latu ho gya h sala...kya bhagwaan ye sb game khelne k liye aap ko m hi milta hu...are bhejna hi tha to koi average looking ladka bhej dete... m aaram se deal krleta...ye puri duniya m karan wahi hi mila tha...come on kapil kam mt samjh apne aap ko tu bhi boht handsome h...or use se to boht handsome h)

Sumona: sharma ji...kya soch rhe h aap?? So jaiye ab aap ko koi disturb nhi krega...

Kapil: han...han... thik h...thik h, so rha hu

Sumona switches off the light and she falls asleep but kapil is still lost in his thoughts, in his show he flirts with almost every women but the one woman he loves the most is his wife, whom he has never appreciated...he knows that his wife is an absolutely alluring beauty she can be a delight to watch for any man but somehow he cannot able to appreciate her and her beauty, he feels shy, he cannot even imagine complimenting her beauty, he has always teased her and she has always gone made over him for this behavior of his but that's what he loves about his relationship but this is the first time he is worried about his behavior towards her because this can lead to a major problem in his life as he knows that women feel good when you complement them and he is worried that if karan will complement her, try to woo her, he may lose her...this sudden thought is making him perturbed.

Kapil: (yaar kapil sayad tu jyada soch rha h, aisa kuch nhi hoga so relax or soja)

After fighting with his own thoughts for long, he falls asleep

Hope you like it

Will continue it soon

vese sunday mornings achi lagti h na😉

Luv you all :*

Edited by aashup - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wahi yaar... 😆 he is whipped but so as kappu... ab bus kappu u have to man up enough to woo ur own wife 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Haan toh mein gidda nahi daal rahi hoon" Man that totally cracked me :D Loved this part but kind of dislike this rude Mr Sharma. Humor to kamaal hai babes ! Sumo is really nice & kind hearted & deserves all the love ! Kappu sun rahe ho na ? I waiting for the moment when he will learn to express his appreciation & all his emotions to his wife :) Love you my sweet si writer :* Keep going !

Lots of Pyaar :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!! Wonderful work!!
Finally u updated ha...I was waiting for long time...But, it was worth waiting...
I loved this part more than first...Kapil's jealously!! Haayee...I love to see him like this :) & u portrayed it with wonderful dialogues... Karao karao usko aur jealous...Please update the next part soon... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jealousy aa gai..Yayyy...God will bless u for this...😉😆 Loved it..sort of on ManTu right? So beautiful..one of my favourite stories on KaSum ever! U r a rockstar yar...mar dala 😆 So damn awesome! Update soon and keep making Mr Sharma jealous 😉 Xooxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superrr! Ab bas Kapil Sumona pe jyada dhyan de aur romantic ho jaye taki Wahi kuch na kar paye! Im waiting for cute scenes of KaSu! Please update sooner than soon..hehe

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