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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kashish95

Mat kro aise sitam ayee zalim insaan...sapne dikhaye 5 star biryani k nd mili 1 star biryani...vaise dialogue k sath khichdi jata tha but jitna romance hua vo bhi biryani h tha mere liye ...omg i so luved this chapter ..read 3 times repeatedly...seriously u r among my fav writers on this forum ...kapu bichara kitna romantic ho rha tha ...kabab me haddaa aa gya lkin ...huhhh...lkin achaa h kapil ko thoda tadapna bhi chahiye sumona k liye... He also needs to put some effort .

Suprb update dear ...jldi se update kr do .

oyeee...ladki kya comment kiya h hahaha luved it😃 thank you soo for all your tareef
han yaar bs kr rhi hu update 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mei aur meri mrs. Sharma part 4

Hiii guys, I am sorry for this late update actually, I'm bit busy nowadays and got some free time today so I will try to update as many parts of this story today only btw it has 4 more parts to go...

Hope you'll like it

Kapil: abe tu????

karan: (abe yaar mrs. Sharma kha h...he thinks while looking all over the room) hello mr. sharma kaise h aap???

Kapil : (jb tak teri sakal nhi dekhi thi tab tk sahi tha ab bura hu) kapil with a twitching face he thinks

Karan: x cues me (he shakes him a bit) mr. sharma mene pucha how are you??

Kapil: han...han m thik hu

Karan: (while entering the room he asks kapil) mr. sharma mrs. Sharma kha h dikhai nhi de rhi??

Kapil: kapil gets irritated with the fact that he enters in his house as if it's his house (wah beta ghar m to aise ghus rha h jaise isika ghar h)

Karan: he screams out loud in excitement mrs. Sharma ...mrs. sharma

Kapil: o...o...bhai dheere or ye kya batmeezi h...mere hi ghar m aake meri hi biwi ko itni tez awaz kyu lga rhe ho???

Karan: (karan excitingly tells him) mr sharma mujhe mrs. Sharma se kuch important baat krni h

Kapil: kya baat krni h aisi, jo mujhse nhi ho skti

Karan: vooo... mmm... (yaar ye admi bhi kitne sawal puchta h) he thinks while scorching his nose

Kapil: (ek to subha subha tapak k sala acha bhala romantic mood bigad diya or upar se ghar m aise dhons dikha rha h jaise isika hi ghar h...is aadmi ne to paresaan hi kr diya h...jb dekho tb aajata h sala kal se na mene door-bell hi nikal deni, fir bajata rhiyo jhunnjhuna) he thinks while karan's eyes are still finding for his mrs. Sharma

Sumona enters with a list in her hand (sharma ji grocery vala agya kya)

Kapil points out at karan and irritatingly replies to sumona's question (han ye rha tera grocery vala)

Sumona looks at karan and joyfully welcomes him (are karan ji aap kaise h?)

Karan: mrs. Sharma abhi tak to thik tha pr aapko dekh kr or acha ho gya hu (sumona gives a melodious laugh to him which makes him smile too)

Kapil become furious after listening that cheesy dialogue of karan but what makes him crazy is that his own wife is encouraging him by giving a laugh over his stupid flirty dialogue (kamina meri biwi ki mere samne tareef kr rha h...marja...or dusre ko kya khu jab apna hi sikka khota ho to...hey bhagwaan ye aurat samjh kyu nhi rhi ki ye admi full on line maar h, hey bhagwaan mujhse ye dekha nhi ja rha...ye dekhne se acha tune mujhe nahane bhej diya hota) with that thought kapil starts moving towards his room

Karan: mrs. Sharma mei aapse ek jaroori baat krne aya tha vese

This sudden dialogue of karan stops kapil and he takes his step back and stands near sumona to listen him carefully

Sumona: sumona stops laughing with a curiosity she asks han boliye na karan ji

Karan: mrs. Sharma kal mera b'day h

Sumona with a wide smile on her face (o really that's great)

Kapil: (kapil beta teri kismet hi kharaab h iska b'day bhi abhi ana tha) wrinkles creased on kapil's forehead while thinking this

Karan: han mrs. Sharma or m ek choti si party de rha hu niche society ke auditorium m, puri society invited h and I'll be obliged agar aap bhi ayengi to (he request sumona with a pleading eyes, he really wants her to come as he knows her presence will make his b'day more overwhelming for him)

Sumona: are apko itni request krne ki jaroorat hi nhi obviously m or sharma ji jaroor ayenge

Kapil interrupts her saying (mujhe bulaya hi kha h jo m jaunga, ye to sirf tumhe hi bula rha h)

Karan by heart wants only her to come but he knows that she is a typical indian woman and she will come only when her husband will join her so unwantedly he invites kapil too with a fake smile on his face

Karan: are nhi nhi mr. sharma jb puri society invited h to fir aap bhi to ayenge hi na...to aap bhi jaroor aiyega

Kapil doesn't speaks a word and quietly sits on sofa takes a newspaper on his hands and keeps his eyes on newspaper... this ignorance of his makes karan a bit uncomfortable however sumona knows that this behavior of kapil may hurt karan so she tries to divert him

Sumona: karan aap chinta mat kriye hm dono bilkul time pe pohanch jayege aapke b'day m

listening this from sumona brings a huge smile on karan's face he hands over his invitation to her (mrs. Sharma plzzz aap jaroor aiyega...apka ana meri party m chaar chaand lga dega)

Kapil: (kamine bhala nhi hoga tera...meri biwi pe dore...ruk tujhe to dekh lunga m) while thinking this he pursed his lips in anger

karan's dialogues are actually making her feel good she smiles a bit and thanks him for this and give him a surety that she and kapil will surely be there.

Karan: sumona ji aapki smile boht pyari hn (karan is absolutely mesmerized with her beauty...her deep almond shaped eyes and those pouty lips, her sari and the best part her wet hairs falling on her face...karan is astonished by the fact that how can she manage to look beautiful every day and then her smile is the best thing on this earth)

Now karan's this dialogue and continues look towards his wife sets him off; he stands up in anger and by holding his hand drags him towards the door (karan ji apko boht sare or logo ko invite krna hoga na to please hmare ghar se prasthan kare...aap busy honge, koi madad ki jaroorat ho to bataiyega jaroor...ok ) by this he shuts the door on his face (bye karan ji)

karan gets mad over kapil's behavior but he somehow calms himself) karan mrs. Sharma ke baare m soch...(her thoughts always at any situation makes him calm and happy...) chalo bhai party ki taiyariyon m lag jao

Sumona raised her eyebrows giving a continuous deadly look to kapil, he ignores it and sits on a sofa keeping his eyes on his phone

Sumona: kya batmeezi thi ye

He ignores her and keeps himself busy with his phone

Sumona sits near him, snatch the phone from his hands which irritate him a lot

Kapil: kya hai????

Sumona : vhi puch rhi hu m, kya tha ye????

Kapil: his brows furrowed over her question (kya???)

Sumona: anger in her eyes is quite visible(sharma ji koi apne padosi ke sath aisa karta hai...itni batmeezi seriously!!!vese hi yahan log ek dusre se koi mtlb nhi rkhte...or he is being so sweet trying to mingle up with us or aap aisa krenge)

Kapil: vhin to m keh rha hu kya jaroorat hai use itna closeness badane ki???? He furiously asks her

Sumona: pagal ho gye hai aap(ignoring his antics she walks towards kitchen) kal party m bhi aisa mat kriyega I am warning you

Kapil while scribbling down his phone says hm nhi jayenge kisi party m

Sumona while listening to him stops near the door of kitchen and with raised eyebrows (kya kha apne??? Or zara batayenge hm kyu nhi jayege ???)

Kapil: still playing with his phone (bs nhi jayenge to nhi jayenge)

Sumona on a blink of eyes reaches to him and frowningly she holds his collar and directly looks into his eyes without even a blink (dekhiye sharma ji khabar daar bakwaas ki to... vese hi society m koi ek dusre se baat krta nhi h...2 saal ho gye is ghar m rehte rehte aaj tak kisi ne kisi ko ek dusre ki party m nhi bulaya ...social get together to gya tel lene koi kisi se yahan seedhe muh baat bhi nhi krta, pehli baar kisi ne bulaya h...society m party hogi aap aaye na aaye m to jaungi...samjhe aap)

Sumona is staring at him; just staring...he can feel his own pulse beating in his ears, it's the first time when he can feel such an anger in his wife's voice he somehow takes his eyes away from her and removes her hand from his collar

Kapil: (bhai ye auraat to aaj kali maa bngai h chup rehne m hi bhalai h aaj to) han han thik h tu chali jaiyo m nhi aaunga (his voice is still shaking as he walks away from her...he is still frightened with his wife's look)

To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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ufff...kapil too jealous baba ...koi roko use ...dhuaan na niklne khi ...i luved his dialogues ..kya kapil khate ho nashte me aap ...ek dum original lgte h ...vahh vaaah... i m happy finally sumona k andar mata aa h gyi...kya gusse me bola h , kappu ko dara h dia vry well written dear ...jldi jldi update kr dena ab
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Karan... *rolling my eyes at him* what??? Deliberately trying to get a punch or too 🤣 kapil... tie up ur laces... sumo bhot bhagane wali h 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kashish95

ufff...kapil too jealous baba ...koi roko use ...dhuaan na niklne khi ...i luved his dialogues ..kya kapil khate ho nashte me aap ...ek dum original lgte h ...vahh vaaah... i m happy finally sumona k andar mata aa h gyi...kya gusse me bola h , kappu ko dara h dia vry well written dear ...jldi jldi update kr dena ab

Hahaha oye by god your comments jaan hi le late h meri🤣... Thank you sooo much babes
Luv you angeenat 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashup


Hahaha oye by god your comments jaan hi le late h meri🤣... Thank you sooo much babes
Luv you angeenat😆


offo ...sorry sorry for my comments !! plz marna mat ha ...tmhe zinda rhna pdega aashup is story k liye ...aise nhi marne denge tmhe
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Karan... *rolling my eyes at him* what??? Deliberately trying to get a punch or too 🤣 kapil... tie up ur laces... sumo bhot bhagane wali h 😉

hahaha yaar ab to taras aa rha h khud hi mujhe kapil ke upar 😆 BECHARA 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mei aur meri mrs. Sharma

Part 5

The hall is flocked with silver and crystal ornaments with white lights and cotton snow covering the floor, from the ceiling hung over 100's of crystal glittery snowflakes and one giant snowflake in the center of the dance floor... the entire room is filled with candle light, individual lights and silver and crystal ornaments...a beautiful young women standing near a center table which are decorated with tons of candles in silver, black and white shimmer...she is wearing a long dark blue color cocktail dress, then run from the bottom of her knees to the top of her chest, beautifully hugging her figure highlighting all the very right position, the dress has a deep cut on left side and her left leg is out, a small oval medallion hung from a thin necklace around her neck, a little round earrings dangling from her ears, her hair is half way pulled up in diamond studded clip...few of her loose baby curls are falling on her face making her look like a goddess under a blue color light, her luscious lips, deep brown color innocent eyes and those cute chubby red cheeks are adding fire to her beauty, a man in a black three-piece suit walks towards her bend down on his knees and ask for her hands she calmly place her soft hands into his...he stands without shifting from his position, he holds her close, her body moulding into his as if they were made for each other, placing her hands on his shoulders he dance silently, nothing but short gasps of breath are to be heard, slowly she moves her hands up to his neck and rested her head on his chest, he pulls her impossibly closer as two people slowly resemble one. She is embarrassed with the closeness she doesn't want to look at him, he smile against her skin, and a strong arm across her upper shoulder as they dance with a melody no one else could hear, still looking down with closed eyes feeling his strong arms and inhaling his strong citrus smell...he too enjoying her soft, milky white skin, he does not want to break this closeness but an urge to look at her beautiful face make him break this hug and stop this slow mesmerizing dance...placing his hand on her beautiful face he speaks in his husky masculine voice, open your eyes sumona...this voice sends a shivering sensation all over her body and unwantedly she follow her voice, she slowly looks upward into his eyes...I love you sumona...these words are magical for her without a second thought she hugs him and says "I LOVE YOU TOO KARAN"

Kapil wakes up screaming sumona's name...sweating...breathing heavily...the loud scream wakes up sumona too...seeing kapil in such a bad situation has made sumona worried...

Sumona: (she hugs him tightly) kya hua sharma ji???kya hua ????

Kapil still screaming his name, he is still not in his senses... to bring him back sumona shakes him hard

Sumona: sharma ji hosh m aaiye (this situation of her husband brings tears in her eyes)

Finally, kapil comes back to the reality seeing his wife hugging him he hugs him back tightly...

Sumona tries to break the hug as she wants to ask that what made him scream so loud...but kapil doesn't want to break this hug...it feels that if he'll break this hug she'll disappear from his presence...but after a long tight hug he finally breaks the hug as he hit by a realization that it's just a dream, a bad dream...he looks at her face and gives a peck on her lips...

Sumona: with a concerned look sumona asks him (sharmaji kya hua???burasapna dekha kya ???)

Kapil: bura nhi meri jaan boht bura (he is still finding hard to come out of that dream)

Sumona: kya dekha ????

Kapil doesn't want to share his dream with her, how he'll explain to her...so he thinks that it's better to be mum...

Kapil: kuch nhi bs aise hi bhoot pret dekh liye mene...

Sumona burst out laughing hearing his words while tears fall from her eyes (sharmaji...aap bhi kamal krte h bhooto k sapne se dar gaye) it's getting difficult for her to control her laugh...she is going awww over her cute husband

Kapil feeling hell irritated with her wife now annoyingly he replies her wife (han shi m bhoot se dar gaya m jbki chudail ke sath to rehta hu sota hu khatahu or bhoot se dar gya...kya m bhi...batao) he too starts laughing while finishing his words

Sumona stops laughing and stares at him giving him a furious look

Kapil: m kya soch rha hu baby vo jaroor tere ristedaar honge??? H na ??? terahaal chal puchne aaye honge ???? kyu??? (kapil tease her with his typical dialogues)

Sumona without saying a word angrily lay down on bed turning her back towards him

Kapil: hugs her from back and keep small kiss on her face...

Sumona tries hard to get out of his grip but she fails because of his strong hold on her waist, at last, she gives up and falls asleep...

But kapil is still awaken and moving his finger on her back and thinking (yaar kya khatarnaak sapna tha ye...kapil sharma is admi ne to sach m teri raato ki neend haram krdi h...kamina paida hone se pehle hi mar kyu nhi gya ye...meri achi khasi zindagi ki plain sadak pe ye kutta apna damar (Asphalt) bicha rha h...hey bhagwaan kya kru agar ye aurat meri zindgi se chali gai na meri to achi khasi comedy nikal jaegi...hasana to dur ki baad h m khud hasne layak bhi nhi bachunga) while thinking this he looks at her beautiful wife...his one biggest fear is this "losing love of his life, his wife, SUMONA".

Hope you liked it 😊

To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kappu kya khatarnak sapna dekha 😔 but i know u will be just fine... bus ye sumo ko kam sataya karo yaar 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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baap re !! aaj to shatabdi k speed se updates mil rhe ...kya baat h
i luved this ...gusse and darr me bhi comedy srf kapil kr skta...nd srf tm krva skti ho ...
amzing update...i luved it

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