Besties to Lovers ? Completed Story on Kapil & Sarla - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
A very emotional chapter
Bechaara kappu. Now what he will do to save his love life. Ab lagta hai ki agar kappu ko pehele hi ehsaas ho jata apne pyaar ka toh yeh sab nahi hota. And waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
An emotionally charged chapter. Superb,wonderful writing. Kudos!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Chapter 8

Dil repair karane wali dukan ka address hai kya ? : (
Kappu ko dedo uska dil zor ka toota yaar :'(

Kapil was sitting on a bench staring at the green grass. He never wanted her to recall that proposal and thats the reason he went to say sorry then why accepting the reality that his proposal meant nothing to her was so painful ?

" Kash ke dunya mein dil repair karane ki bhi koi dukan hoti. . . Bada zor ka toota hai yaar" He informed to nobody.

" Arey Sharmaji aap yaha akela kyun baithi hai ?" Who can it be with such an awesome hindi ? Guessed right it's Miss lottery akela : the hot nurse.

". . Bas aise hi. . " He said his eyes fixed on the grass as he kept convincing his heart that everything was fine.

Lottery sat next to him keeping her hand on his shoulder she asked "Aapka partner to chale jayega na "

He looked up at her confused "partner ?"

" Haan jiske saath aap itna khush hota hai. . Sarla " Only her name mentioned was enough to make him smile slightly in the worst moments too.

" Yeah. . Par aap hona darling. . Sab theek hi hoga " He said flashing his flirty smile which was weak today.

Lottery smiled back " Joot mat bolo. . Sarla ki tarah koi nahi ho sakta "

He nodded " Woh toh hai. . Uski tarah koi nahi ho sakta aur woh meri nahi ho sakti " He mumbled the last part in his breath.

" Itne udaas mat ho aap. . Humko aap hindi sikhayega toh aaram se time pass hojayega " She suggested and he agreed.

" Ok toh humko batao. . . Aap itna hot kaise lagta hai black desi look mein" He chuckled. She was trying to flirt and distract him for a while to make him happy.

" No no Lottery ji apne guru ke saath flirting nahi kartey !" He warned pointing his finger at her and she giggled.

For a while he left all the stress behind and enjoyed teaching lottery something which was difficult for her humari rashtriya bhasha Hindi ; )

Haldi was being applied to the bride who tried her best to mask everything behind a smile. A weak one.

Kapil reached to the hall with baskets of flowers in his hand but suddenly halted when his eyes caught the smiling lady.

" Nalayak meri beti ko nazar lagata hai" Gulati twisted his ear playfully and he yelped in pain.

" Nahi nahi uncle. . . Mein toh sonch raha tha ke aap apni itni keemti cheez kaise kisi paraye ko de rahe ho ?" He asked handing the basket to one of the decorators.

" Haan beta baat toh tune sahi ki. . Lekin betiya toh hoti hi parayi hai. . " Gulati got a little emotional as he blessed his daughter sarla.

" Kisne kaha ? Haan agar shaadi mujhse karwatey toh. . Aapki beti aapki padosi hi hoti " He said looking at Sarla whose eyes directly met his and her smile slowly faded again.

Gulati laughed thinking it was a joke again.

" Chalo chalo bohot kaam hai " Patting his shoulder he left. Kapil leaned on the pole near still staring at her.

He stretched his lips with his index finger and thumb gesturing her to smile and she managed to smile.

He shook his head. He was trying to signal her something which she couldn't understand so he found a paper and pen and wrote on it.

" Smile mein cheeni thodi kam hai : )"

She smiled a little wider. He again frowned writing something on the paper and showed it to her.

" Pagli ! Smile karna bhi bhool gayi. . .. . Honestly You look stunning in yellow matlab deepu se bhi zyada acchi ; ) "

He was successful in bringing a genuine smile on her face. He smiled back giving her a flying kiss and she shyly looked away biting her inner cheek.

No matter how difficult the times are they need no reason to make each other happy. Both of them enjoyed little things in life since bachpan and as the time passed realized how big those things were.

" Bas bas zyada meethi smile mat de too much of sweet can cause diabetes" He said a loud and everyone turned to him.

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Aw! Kappu just never fails to make her smile.
Hasta Hasata rehta hai humara Kappu = )

OK, So as I informed before this is the last jaldi wala update. . Sorry ! Kal se u might not see any updates = (

But sabar karo sabar ka phal rasgulla hota hai ; )

Smile.
Lots of Love !!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Bechaara kappu. Dil zor ka tut gaya, kaash jald repair bhi hojaye and an awesome update as usual. I am tired of saying but stil i loved your update very much!!update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Thank you for a nice, sweet and cute part 🤗
Kappu is so adorable ❤️

I'll be waiting for next part. Please try to update soon 😃
Edited by rajni13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Sooo sweet!! Loved it Awww...kappu ka Dil jaldi jod do yar..I want happy ending! I will miss ur updates..par koi Nai jaldi wapas anna... love 😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Sooo sweet!! Loved it Awww...kappu ka Dil jaldi jod do yar..I want happy ending! I will miss ur updates..par koi Nai jaldi wapas anna... love😊😳



Will miss u all tooo ! As per me Endings are meant to be happy. 😃 so no worries.
Cheers 😛

Tata & take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ksfandishi

Bechaara kappu. Dil zor ka tut gaya, kaash jald repair bhi hojaye and an awesome update as usual. I am tired of saying but stil i loved your update very much!!update soon



Hahah ! Tired ? Koi nahi I hope kappu and sarla's cuteness will charge u 😉
Thank u ⭐️
Will update lekin soon possible nahi hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: rajni13

Thank you for a nice, sweet and cute part 🤗
Kappu is so adorable ❤️

I'll be waiting for next part. Please try to update soon 😃



Thank u sooo much rajni 😃
Woh toh hai. .and also If we didnt had Kappu's cuteness in TKSS show would have been not really interesting 😳
He is such a cuteness ki dukan 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 9

Swagat nahi karogey humara ; )

Back & just few more chapters to go = )

Enjoy !


Haldi Ceremony continued. .

" Arey kappu aaja sarla ko Haldi laga de tu bhi " One of his relatives suggested.

"Okay" He went and sat on his knees infront of her. First he took a little haldi on his finger tips and applied it on her nose.

Then he took the haldi in both his fists and rubbed it all over her face spoiling her dress. And everyone laughed hard.

" What the hell Kappu !!!" She shouted getting up.

" Oh jhansi ki rani. . Kuch nahi hua. . . Haldi is just. . Umm. . Its good for ur kidneys" Yet again a silly joke.

" What ?!?" and she chased him but could see nothing as her eyes were covered with haldi. He ran across the hall laughing and poor sarla had to clean herself first as guests around wanted to click selfies with the bride.

And on the way he met the Dulha. Yep, Wahi canada ka bandar ; )

" Hey Kapil. . Kahan ja rahe ho bhaag kar ?" Rahul questioned. Kapil looked at him head to toe. He wore a white T-Shirt and jeans. This weren't any occasion type clothes.

" Mein apni jaan bacha kar bhaag raha tha " He replied.

" Lekin tum haldi ke liye tayyar nahi hue ?"

" Nahi yaar. . . Mujhe haldi se allergy hai so am not going to apply it. . " Rahul stated smiling.

"Accha toh tumhari jagah mein laga loon haldu ?" No he had no plans to say that but it was just a slip of tongue.

" Very funny !" Rahul chuckled shaking his head and kapil frowned.

" Meri har baat sabko mazaaq kyun lagti hai ? Meine kounsa comedy mein PHD ki hai jo saala koi serious leta hi nahi mujhe. . . Dusrey toh theek hai lekin agar Sarla serious leti toh aaj Rahul ki jagah mein hi hota. . . " He thought. Feeling heartbroken yet smiling at Rahul he patted his shoulder and said

" Tumhari honewali Biwi aur Meri Sarla. . Matlab meri best friend ko meine hamesha khush hastey kheltey dekha hai. . . Shaadi ke baad bhi woh waise hi rehni chahiye. . " Kapil said in his firm serious tone.

" Aur agar badal gayi toh ?" Rahul passed a challenging look.

Kapil smiled. " Toh mein khud kisi din aakar. . . Be jhijak use wapas leaunga after handing u the divorce papers "

" Wohoo ! Calm down angry man. . Shaadi hui bhi nahi aur tum abhi se talak ki baatein kar rahe ho ?" Rahul questioned surprised at his rare and different avatar from his usual jovial one.

" Cant help punjabi blood hai. . " He shrugged and was about to leave when Rahul asked

" Tumhe nahi lagta. . Tun sirf ek dost ho kar kuch zyada hi over protective ho. . " He had to take two steps back to face him and answer.

" Over protective hota toh aaj situation yeh nahi hoti. . " He meant that If he was over protective long before he would have never let anyone else marry her and the board which was about to hung would have had 'Sarla weds Kapil' on it.

But there is nothing but regret left now.

Rahul was in confusion. He sensed that closeness and the special bond they shared but never questioned and today when he did he received a confusing answer.

" Matlab ?"

" Matlab watlab rehne do. . Matlab jaan kar kya karna hai ? Matlabi insan ! Now go everyone is waiting for u " Kappu said hushing him inside the house.

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Hmm so aaj ke chapter se hume kya seekh milti hai ??

Yehi ke Haldi is good for your kidneys = D
Kappu bhi na : p

Hope you all enjoyed the chapter : )
Waiting for your valuable reviews and. .

Lots of Pyaar = )

Edited by Kappumyfav - 9 years ago

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