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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Aw. . She celebrated his bday ! How cute is that. Awesome as always. Thanks for the refreshing concept. Would looovvveee to read what happens next 😃 and sorry for late comment 😛

Its okay and thanks for your wonderful comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm
I just read all the parts today and I must you are really good writer
I loved the way you started the story from first meeting to their friendship. Its something which we never will get to read or see.
Thank you for such good story👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Thanks for pm

I just read all the parts today and I must you are really good writer
I loved the way you started the story from first meeting to their friendship. Its something which we never will get to read or see.
Thank you for such good story👏

Welcome and thanks for such an encouraging comment. This makes me to write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-4
As i earlier said my life was on track . I was happy but totally unaware of something which will break me from inside. Any way the partners are exchanged in the show due to some special episodes so i reherse with shweta mam and she was with krushna. So the shooting started and i was waiting for my turn and sitting with other contestants when the host announced her and krushna's name and they went to perform and from there the problem started as i saw the act kisi cheez ke tutne ki awaaz aayi bohot zor se, but why my heart is paining so much, only then i noticed that the sound was of my heart. I felt like someone stapped on my heart. Dont know why but yes i felt that . And the most irritated thing was that the host asked me my opinion and i was like kiska sar phodu khudka ya is host ka but i composed my self and said "malaayi banaayi maine aur kha yeh gaya" and everyone laughed at this and she looked at me. At that day i decided i wont talk to her but then for the sake of my work i have to talk. And the whole rest of the day i didnt taljed or even saw her but next day as i went to the rehearsal area she was already there in her tomboy clothes, her hair tied in a pony. She is beautiful . I was about to call her when yesterday's incident came in my mind and i made a serious face and then sat on the chair a little away from her. She looked up at me
S: kya hua?? Gussa ho??
i didnt replied and started learning my dialogues and only in a few seconds i noticed that she sat on her knees near me and held her ears
S: mujhe pata hai tum kis baat pe gussa ho and i am sorry
I didnt replied and looked away
S: itni buri hu ki idhar dekhoge bhi nahi
"jab uske saath woh bakwaas act kar rahi thi tab khayaal aaya tha mera?" i said still not looking at her
S: kapil woh sirf act tha aur kuchh bhi nah
" phir bhi ek baar soch leti toh accha hota aur tum kehti ho ki mai tumhara best friend hu jisse tumne chupayi yeh baat"
S: jaan ke tum kya kar lete??
"mana karta obviously. Tumhe pata hai tumhara act kitna cheap lag raha tha??"
S: accha ok bolo ki mai kya karu ki tum mujhe maaf kardo??
she looked at me with hope but i looked away and after a few minutes she stood up and was about to leave when i held her hand and stood up too
"i want icecream treat aur paise tum dogi" i said smiling at her. She chuckeled and hugged me i too hugged her. C' mon ab mai apni best friend se zada der tak naraaz thodi na reh sakta hu..And this made our friendship more strong and the good news is we won the show. I became a lot happy and treated her as she promised and next year too we won. And i got bored of winning it so i thought to do something bigger than that. I am thinking you also think aur agar ideas hai toh give some to me!!

To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I can recall the way he was jelaous when krushna nad sumona did that act 😆
Thanks for bringing the memories back with this amazing story 👏
But when will kappu realize that he loves her ?
waiting for the next part 😊
Edited by Kappumyfav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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One of the best chapters..coz I love jealousy 😆😉😆
Great writing,,keep it up..waiting for next 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

I can recall the way he was jelaous when krushna nad sumona did that act 😆
Thanks for bringing the memories back with this amazing story 👏
But when will kappu realize that he loves her ?
waiting for the next part 😊

Thanks for your view and i saw that episode of cc and his expression after seeing the act was like a lover of her and yeah bohot jald hamare kappu ko pyaar ka ehsaas hoga
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

One of the best chapters..coz I love jealousy 😆😉😆

Great writing,,keep it up..waiting for next 😊

Me too love jealousy specially jab ladke ko hoti hai.
And next part will be coming soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow you even added jealousy track and it was perfectly fitted in the story and it didn't seemed a forced track.
Awesome update
Thanks for pm & update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Wow you even added jealousy track and it was perfectly fitted in the story and it didn't seemed a forced track.

Awesome update
Thanks for pm & update

This track was there in the show itself and i only thought of kapil's feelings and thanks for the comment

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