A Smiling sunset - Rahi last part updated !

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Sarah9

@Sarah9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Aww a sad ending..bt i loved it<3 the letter was so beautiful..waiting for more RaHi OS from u:)

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wanderingsoul

@wanderingsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Finally I am here with my comment

Tina my baby,u don't know what u did to me

U make me so emotional

I am so thankful to u

Just love the updater like anything

The letter written by Panchi is so emotional

I cried after reading that

Thanks once again fr writing such beautiful piece of work

Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

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Rahi1818

@Rahi1818

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

TINA DEAR FIRST OF ALL I AM SORRY FOR BEING LATE...
SO I AM GONNA WRITE A LONG COMMENT...
DUDE TUMNE LITERALLY RULA DIYA...
ME LOVED THE CURIOUS RANVEER AND DETECTIVE KD.
HAYYE MY HERO BUNKED THE CLASS FOR PANCHI...
HE WAS SO CONCERNED FOR HER. LOVED HIS UNCONDITIONAL LOVE..
COMING TO THE LAST PART...
THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. THIS WAS WHAT IS CALLED TRUE LOVE. LOVING THE PERSON WHO SHE REALLY WAS...
THE LETTER WAS JUST SO PERFECT... I FELL FOR RANVEER ALL OVER AGAIN. ALTHOUGH SHE DIED BUT SHE WILL ALWAYS BE ALIVE IN RANVEER'S HEART...
HAYYE SO BEAUTIFUL AND PURE.
LOVED IT SO MUCH. YOU LITERALLY MADE ME CRY.
THANX FOR WRITING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL OS...
LOVE YOU A LOT FOR THIS..

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Tinaa... loved loved loved it girl... muahhh

Firstly a real novel n unique take on Rahi... love the way you play around with these two... n they turn out so damn endearing in every situation u put them in... that's their beauty n thats your skill... big fan of both...😃

Me wanted to read the story in its entirety before posting my take...n must tell ya dividing the story into 5 parts was a masterstroke... no one would have imagined such a cutesy n fun start to end in tears.. atleast not me... n u were brilliant in making the transition smooth easy n subtle n emotionally stimulating...

The story was everything... cute fun naughty romantic n even rose beyond the physical boundaries into a transcendental state where love is not dependent on physical attributes n manifestations n that was the best part for me.

Ranveer was perfect, no other word for him,, loving someone unconditionally is so rare n he seemed to have achieved this state of pure joy with Panchi who is equally angelic... felt for these two n felt for their destined to never succeed love story.. u n your knack of keeping them apart... kya bolun main..but the way u do it m left speechless...

Rahi are out of this world... n Ranveer s picture perfect... apart from them loved kd... what a friend he is... loved his detective avatar... provided the laughs... loved him...

All in all loved the story n loved the beautiful title too..

Loved the unselfish love of Ranveer...

Thanks for this beautiful take yaar... its awesome.. made me emotional..

Lots of love

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Tina 👏👏👏

I loved this OS the way he was totally in love with her,total Junior and Senior angle😆😆

he noticed her so damn much?

KD was amazing

but I loved their first ever conversation,it was beautiful,she was broken needed a support and he gave his advice,he never imagined his first convo with her ever like this?

but it was beautiful!

and the part where they met again?it was so damn beautiful👏👏she wasn't coming to school,they bonded in such a short time and then the truth,she was dieing but after that what RV did brought tears in my eyes,he loved her yes cuz she looked beautiful but it dint matter to him much he loved her as a person inspite of having no hair she was still the most beautiful girl for him,and that was fab!

but she died she couldn't make it but the letter😭😭😭

god I loved this OS fantastic!

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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: priya1101
Hey Tina.
I am very happy that i am the first one to comment.
Its beautiful dear.
U portrayed it beautifully.
Its emotional at the same time extraordinary.
Panchi's letter to Ranveer is the highlight of this part.
I loved it a lot dear.
Keep writing.

Lots of love.
Priya.

thankew so much di!

I m glad uh liked it!

Thanx a lot for appreciation!

It means a lot 😆😉

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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: s2singh
Hey tina🤗
4th part - Panchi ko Cancer😲😭...ranveer so supportive ⭐️
5th part - so emotional loved it yaar...👏, Rahi ka unique bond⭐️

Tina ur amazing dear, kya likhti hai ki maan karta hai read karte raho 100 times..love u dear😳

Thankew so much!

I am glad uh liked it!

Love yew 2 😉

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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti
Wow yaar Rasgulla...
Its just sooo good
Mast
Loved it yaar...
Tune bht achche se saare emotions potray kiye
Kudos dear...

thankew so much!

I am glad uh liked it 😉😛