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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Prince6495
wow tina awsome as always
panchi suffering from leukemia
Ranveer's true love for panchi - u have potrayed so beautifully
really loved this part
plz continue soon😊

thankew 😊

I am glad uh liked it! 😊

It means a lot. !

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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: priya1101
OMG Tina.
Its awesome dear.
Even after knowing that Panchi is suffering from leukaemia,Ranveer confessed his feelings was heart-touching and it proved his true love for Panchi.
U portrayed it beautifully.
Update it soon dear.

Lots of love.
Priya.

thanks!

I am glad uh liked it!

I'll update soon!

Lots of love to ew as well! 😊

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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti
Awww... dis ones really cutie rasgulla...
Bechari Panchi yaar...😭

Yayyy... finally RV confessed...🥳

Awesm...

Continue Soon 😃

Arrey a big wala thanks to ew!

I am glad uh liked it! 😛

I'll continue soon!

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Sarah9

@Sarah9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Omg Tina u just made me fall in love with Ranveer! The way he loves her so unconditionally!<3 i was really shocked & sad after reading dat she has leukemia bt the way he said he loves her even after watching her without hair..just WOW! I cried while reading dis.. Hats off. U shd bcom a writer & i promise u i'll buy each & every book of urs:) Thank u & Love u:*. PS- this reminds me of 'A Walk To Remember By' my fav movie, i cried lyk an ediot after watching dat film hehe..bt i really hope Panchi k sath aisa na ho, kuch miracle ho jye..just want nd vl always want RaHi to b with each other forever<3

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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9
Omg Tina u just made me fall in love with Ranveer! The way he loves her so unconditionally!<3 i was really shocked & sad after reading dat she has leukemia bt the way he said he loves her even after watching her without hair..just WOW! I cried while reading dis.. Hats off. U shd bcom a writer & i promise u i'll buy each & every book of urs:) Thank u & Love u:*. PS- this reminds me of 'A Walk To Remember By' my fav movie, i cried lyk an ediot after watching dat film hehe..bt i really hope Panchi k sath aisa na ho, kuch miracle ho jye..just want nd vl always want RaHi to b with each other forever<3

thankew so much!

I am glad uh liked it!

That's really sweet of ew! Chlo koi to mri book khreedega!

A walk to remember is indeed my favourite movie as well!

Love ew 2 😊

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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Last and final part 😊

My world had turned upside down since that afternoon. I could not think beyond praying for her wellness. There was next to none scope of getting to know anything about her condition. Even kd's sources had failed this time. She had isolated herself from school.

About a month later, as I reached school; I saw everyone assembled in the lobby. There was lot of whispering. I saw kd standing aside, waiting for me.

"What happened?" I asked quietly.

Without a word, he hugged me first. "I am sorry Ranveer. She disappointed you."

"Whha..Whaat?" I choked.

"Panchi has left her smile in your memories forever." kd was sad, for me, for her. His eyes were moist. I had hardly seen this side of his. "She fought hard, very hard; but quit two days back. She was a brave girl. Principal Sir has put a notice about this. We are observing a day off in her memory today. I wish her soul rests in peace!"

My strength collapsed down my knees and earthed. I could not stand. All my prayers had gone unanswered. I was angry, very angry. I had no words to say.

"Ranveer, I know this isn't the right time but before I forget, take this." kd handed over a red envelope to me. "Shankar, our peon asked me to give it to you." He explicated. "He said some lady gave him."

"Let's go home" I said. I wanted to be alone, as much as I could. We left.

Just as I was going for my cycle, I saw the wall that had made a special place in my heart. I went there, just stood there. May be I was trying to relive the moments that were never going to return.

After reaching home, I threw bag and myself on bed. I put envelop on side table. Something told me to open envelop. I picked it up and opened carefully.

There was a paper, probably a letter. It was neatly written in decent handwritings.

I unfolded. It read...

Dear Stranger,

Oh, I mean, Ranveer, Ranveer Shergil!

I hope you are keeping good and kind as you have always been. I am pushing myself hard towards staying good too.

I am writing this to Thank You! I have not been able to thank you as enough as I would have liked to. Our short but strong bond has given me strength to sustain the pain and strain positively. I never got a chance to tell you but your few words in a couple of little conversations of ours have changed my way of looking at things, looking at my life, how much ever is left with me. You have motivated me to stay and feel alive when the string of my life seems to be stretching every passing day. Your words have been my strength all this while. Thank You!

A secret I want to share with you. I knew about your feelings for me. They were evident. Your eyes spoke for you.

Yes, we girls have that secret sense of natural judgment in these matters. You were also conscious about your average looks whenever we crossed paths. Just for your information, girls are fond of intelligent men more than just handsome. Anyways, you are not bad at either. You have a fair chance. Stay You!

Until I met you, I was always loved for my appearance, not for who I was. That day, on the staircase, those 15 minutes were one of the best 15 minutes of my life. There are very few better feelings than knowing that you are loved, by a pure heart, for no reasons, for just being yourself. When you are loved above the appearances and physicality, you are blessed. Even after seeing my appearance and imagining my future, you still loved me. I could see that in your eyes and feel in your touch. I did not say I love you too' because I do not want you to be weak. For me or for anyone, I do not want you to cry.

By the time you read this letter, I may be long gone. I want you to promise me something. Promise to be yourself and be happy. Keep making yourself proud and me too. I am leaving a part of me with you as a token of our short and strong connection. Value it and pamper it. God Bless You!

Love,

Panchi...

I smelled the letter, kissed it. I wiped my tears and closed my eyes with a smile.

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Priya sharma

@priya1101

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Hey Tina.
I am very happy that i am the first one to comment.
Its beautiful dear.
U portrayed it beautifully.
Its emotional at the same time extraordinary.
Panchi's letter to Ranveer is the highlight of this part.
I loved it a lot dear.
Keep writing.

Lots of love.
Priya.

Edited by priya1101 - 11 years ago