FF // CAGED PRINCE //*chapter 6 pg 11*

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Stav

@Stav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

awsome update ...

loved it ..

kisha eyelocks and already lost in eachother ..

Kd isn't a warden but has some other powers ..interesting twist

and the mysterious box...

Mr. & Mrs. Desai are worried for Kd another mystery ..

and precap awsome ...

plz update nxt part soon ...cant wait ..😃

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Madhura

@..Madhura..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Ahhh I was so lost in reading this that when it ended , I realised that its a chapter not a full story .This was really well planned and portrayed .I want to know more and more so update soon.

Hey I unresed my comment on page6 you didn't reply ...are you angry with me ??? 😭 😭 or just by mistake 😊

Lots of love
Madhura

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Kishafan_4ever

@Kishafan_4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Mysterious Update Shubi 😲

OMG KD is nt a weather warden ???? Den What ❓

What abt dat treasure dat Desais talked abt ❓

Update Soon 😉

Update Vampire Tales too 😊

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viagomes

@viagomes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

REALLY AMAZING & MYSTERIOUS UPDATE SHUB

LOVED IT ACTUALLY DIDN'T WANTED THE CHP TO FINISH

CHP BY CHP SUSPENCE BARTA HI JARAHA HAI & ME LOVING IT

NOW NEW ONE MR & MRS DESAI'S SECRET TREASURE

OFFCOURSE LOVED MY KISHA'S EYELOCKS

& PRECAP IS FANTASTIC

PLS UPDATE SOON

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snowflake..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

shubh read two parts 2gether

loved both

i always love the way u describe kd⭐️

n mystry bad raha hai me xcited

kisha eyelock was nice

n precap toh amazing

update soon

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WitchGrave

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Him & Me

Inside me its their I dont even known him he has beautiful alien eyes
Would kiys be fasicnated with them I wonder or would be scared
Whenever I m around them thoses buddies I feel I feeding on something or is he feeding on something dont know what is it
Its sometimes craves to come out but it cant its bound
Then their is her kiya gujral beautiful as ever it like lust and hungryiness
I want to get lost with her in the beautiful beach water never to come up he also wants the same love her and feed on her
And never come out of the water but doesnt he knows she needs to breathe and I also right but doesnt he ????!!!
who is he ??? Why is he
If he their why doent he comes out ...

Keshav desai
My dear journal I m confused

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Shradhaa and rudra desai saw in horror at the journals last written and bookmarked page
As they were searchung for "the thing" in the house they found this journal of kd by raiding in his room
As they wondered about the lost treasure and the strage feelings kd is geeting

Shradda said atlast " he cant he will have have to be inside ... He cant get exposed it was "the rule""
As rudra nodded but still nothing comes besides nature does it

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Precap reamains same kds picnic out
Sorry late but tommorow a big update
And I m sorry for not replying your comment bussy but they were amazing comments by alll thanks for supporting