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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Shubh...
D part i love d most abt ur wrk...wen u describe kd...love it
Loved it ...yaar
Kd's life is all dark...Feeling bad for him...
Loved d updates...
Update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay Kisha meet! Pls is baar equal rakhna towards KD and Kiya please😳 please try 😳😆
New twist😲😲 Kd's mom 😲
U like such supernatural stuff hun😉⭐️😆
Kd's halat😭 yaar uski halat hamesha sad kyun hai 😭 😭
Update soon! 😳 And update heatstroke also😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
SHUB ITS JUST LOVELY UPDATE DEAR🤗 BUT REALLY FELT BAD FOR MY KD HOW HORRIBLE HIS LIFE HOW HIS PARENTS TREAT HIM LIKE THIS 😭 BUT HAYEE KD'S DESCRIBTION WAS AMAZING ❤️AGAIN KIYA LATOO FOR KD & I LOVED IT ☺️ FF IS REALLY GETTING SO INTERESTING & MYSTERIOUS NEXT UPDATE JALDI KARNA PLS 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Prince6495


amazing update ..

Kd feeling bad for him ..
his life full of ignorance ... Hope he realises his powers soon ..
Finally kd met kiya and buddies ..
Kd is only Kiya's warden partner ri8 as Kiya thaught ..
secret of kd's mom ...
loving this twists ..
thanks a lot for update ..
update soon ..


Thanks yeah but I love feeling sorry for kd 😆
Kd is kiyas partner okkay warden hmmm
Thankyou soo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Amazing Update Shubhi 😳👏

Loved it 😳

God... 😲KD' life sucks man 😭

Can't imagine sm1 in so much agony 😭

Felt really bad 4D Greek God😭 😉


D way u described KD & his features ... Awesm 😳

OMG... 😳Kisha ki 1st cuto walli glance... & D smile...

Plzzz Plzzz Plzzz... U gt to update fast... 😭

W8ing 4 d Update 😃



PS. End mein toh tune dara hi diya yaar...😲 I 4 once thought its Kiya's POV... 😲

Aise heart attacks mat diya kr re 😆


Lol sorry for giving you heartattack :p
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: KDreamer

Shubh...

D part i love d most abt ur wrk...wen u describe kd...love it
Loved it ...yaar
Kd's life is all dark...Feeling bad for him...
Loved d updates...
Update soon


Kd is toh kd <3
Thanks for the comment shatz 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: SweetAndSpice

Yay Kisha meet! Pls is baar equal rakhna towards KD and Kiya please😳please try😳😆

New twist😲😲Kd's mom😲
U like such supernatural stuff hun😉⭐️😆
Kd's halat😭yaar uski halat hamesha sad kyun hai😭😭
Update soon!😳And update heatstroke also😛


I love twists and sadness in kds life
Dont worry somehow kidha would be equal ;)
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: viagomes

<font color="#ff00ff">SHUB ITS JUST LOVELY UPDATE DEAR🤗

</div>BUT REALLY FELT BAD FOR MY KD HOW HORRIBLE HIS LIFE HOW HIS PARENTS TREAT HIM LIKE THIS 😭
BUT HAYEE KD'S DESCRIBTION WAS AMAZING ❤️AGAIN KIYA LATOO FOR KD & I LOVED IT ☺️
FF IS REALLY GETTING SO INTERESTING & MYSTERIOUS
<div>
NEXT UPDATE JALDI KARNA PLS 😃</font>


Thankyou viz great comment
I will update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Lost Treasure

It was night now buddies were in the desai house for dinner .Buddies saw that kd was not their with all
Soo panchi asked where is keshav ?? He didnt came for dinner
Shubh grinning like a brat ( gosh shubh negative acha nahi lag raha :p) saidKeshav bhai is not allowed to eat with us he is banned and I m sure dad wont like u all with him u can talk to me instead .
Mr. Desai said shutup shubhpanchi he likes to eat alone also
JJ said then we will go in his room and eat with him what say buddies
Rv says yes sir we will
Shubh mouth dropped open he was not used to people giving more attention to kd.Mr. Desai was just smiling
Kds mom and dad have stiffened smile but said sure sure we will send your food.
Kiya was very gladthat jaitley sir said that she too wanted to meet him
As they entered kds room his room was very clean actually to catch kiyas attention a boyz room so clean hmm. She chected the walls were light green and cream coloured lines over wallsIn a good interior designs
The furnitures follows the same colour theme
Their was just one thing a sleek black polished piano standing in the left cemter side of room the lid was off so that kiya can see someone softly playing a sad spanish rhythm of thomas tallis - goneThe side tables light was on and kd was looking safe and secured in his little bubble .
He has a change of clothes kiya noticed a plum coloured shirt of cotton , a white coat and black jeans again and red sneakers it was looking that he is going to go out his eyes were closed as if he wasnt even their he didnt even noticed
He was lost in the tunes we were also as we catched up with the rhythm sweet sweet sadnness it radiates .As the tune emds their was alot of light and before we known it was gine and when we open our eyes kd was back again to his morning clothes - WHAT ? How ?????
We all changed looks as kd finally opened his eyes and said you all hereJuhi said yess but how did you that magic
Kd said magic what magic
Rv said kd you just changed your clothes in a flip
Kd opened his mouth and closed and again opned and said oh so you have met shubh I know I am a good joke for you but please I have had enough
We all wanted to scream we are not joking but JJ stopped us and said oh kd we are doing fun come we have come to eat with you
Kd said why with me
Kiya said Because you were alone
They had an eyelock as kd said without breaking the contactI m still alone
Kiya tilted her head and said in whisper as if it was only for him [/i]NO MORE NOW[/i]t
They were lost in eachothers eyes and were brought back cause of the rattle of dishes and food the servant had brought
They ate as jj talked kd about his studies kd was very confident and wanted to study more and work in another comoanys for experience but all in drain becoz of his dad kiya thoughtHow ridiculous ! Finally they were off from the desai mansion as they reach in desai outhouse
juhi asked jj sir how did kd did that also we cannot do this type of magic
!I know jj said I saw it on aetheric he is not a warden but he has a different tyoe of energy not a human like
Kiya sir u have powers to see any type of supernatural and know who is he ? Why dont you
JJ said yes kiya but my powers are drained because of last battle they are close to restore as soon as it happens I will search who is he !!!
Yeah all said with that they were off to sleepAs kiya was not able to sleep she was admiring the moonOn the other hand kd was admiring kiya from his window he was thinking about her , love and the expression no love lost but he backed away from a sad exoression he thought it love always gets lost just like his dad , mom and she will also onedaykiya saw him and his back face to her now is thats the destiny kd is not a weather wardenThat means no partnerStill their is a tug of bonding a steched closeness what is it ? She thought
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Next day in desai mansion buddies and jj were hell bend to take kd with them ti take the citys tour and desai's were saying noFinally mr. desai in hard voice said to his son that kd will go with themAnd desai's have to agreeFinally we were all packed for tour of a dayKd finally came his face was full of many emotions but kiya was sure one of it was freedomHe was wearing a pale pink shirt with cream hooded sleeveless jacket a blue denim jeansA twinkling sleak silver omega dial wrist watchAnd black sneakers
And he was looking sexxxy
He hugged his grandpaa and thanked hundread tyms for letting him out and finally sat in the car and didnt even noticed he is sitting next to kiya in excitement .
As they were gone mrs. desai was in her room all worriedMr. Desai said shradhha nothing will happen himRudra if anyting happens she saidHe had his hands on her shoulder nothing will happen to him till we have that thingYess yeess you are right she said
She passing from the side a hidden drawer of dressing table opened it and laid a out a box which somewhat looked like a little treasure chestAnd it was hidden in mrs. desai's drawer as if it hand treasureAs she opened the box she gasped the box was empty she alost fainted when mr. desai catched himRudra it is not here where did it goOh no ! Shit its nit here oh shit oh noHe saidRudra she said call him back call him back call kd backYeah I will I will he saidHe calls kd to call him backBut kd has stwiched off his ohone to enjoy his freddomAs mr. & mrs. desai watches the emoty box and kds photo in horror
----Next kds freedom see buddies fun , masti and kiss <3Hmmm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey i am first one to comment😊 Shubi you are awesome writer dear👏 i love both parts, waiting for next parts.Dear thoda writing size bada kar u know my eyes are weak.
Edited by loveukisha - 11 years ago

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