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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya Guys.

I am here again with new Rahi OS. I am just going crazy for them.

I am also sad ki CVs is not giving spae to them. there no storyline for them. So I thought to write one new story on them. I am literally inspired by Geet OS's. She is fab writer and I love reading her stories. Keep writing like this Geet.

Not talking much . here you all go with the story.

P : Hi nonu.

R : hi moti. Aaj kyun nhi aayi Schoo.

P : wo I was not feeling well.

R : wat ? wat happen to you. and tune mujhe bataya kyun nhi.

P : nonu kuch nhi huya mujhe. Just headache tha. I am fine now.

R : hmmm

P : acha ranveer mera project tumhare saath hai na.

R : project kaun sa project.

P : maine tumhe kal diya tha.

R : ha wo toh maine Kiya ko de diya rakhne ke liye.

P : wat ? nonu agar tum koi cheez ache se nhi rakh sakte toh tell me na dusro ko dene ki kya jarurat hai. ( in a angry tone ) You know na I dun like these things.

And she cut the phone.

NEXT DAY IN SCHOOL..

Panchi was in a happy mood. She was laughing, talking with KD and kiya..

P : ummm kiya tune mera project laya jo tujhe ranveer ne diya tha.

K : kaun sa project panchi. Mere paas koi project nhi hai.

P : wat ? L acha ok.

Ranveer eneterd the class and sat behind panchi and said HI to her But panchi didn replied to him cause she was tensed coz today was the last date of project submmisson and her project was lost.

Ranveer gt angry coz panchi didn replied him.

R ( in angry tone ) : moti Sirf tumhe hi gussa hone nhi aata hai. Thik hai na yr ek projet hi toh hai. Itna attitude dhikhane ka kya jarurat. Hogyai galti. Jaa mat baat kar mujhe v nhi baat karna tere se. go to hell man.

Panchi all in tear.

P : maine tujhe kuch kaha nonu. Kuch nhi kaha. And wat you said sirf project. 30 marks hai uss project mein. Maine bahut mehnat se banaya hai use. Par tumhe kya, tumhare saare project toh main banate aa rahi hun na aaj tak. So u dun now wat how much effort it takes to make such things. And galti. Huh !! this is not the first Mr. ranveer shergil. Tum hamesha galti karte ho aur main hamesha tumhe maaf karti hun. Kabv tumse complain nhi karti hun. And aaj u talked with me so rudely. And you said go to hell. Fine mjhe v tujhse koi baat nhi karnhi hai.

And she went outside of the class crying.

Kd : HAD HAI YR ranveer how cud be you so selfish man. Usss Garima ka gussa bechari panchi par utar diya.

Are duffer she didn replied you coz she was lost in her own thought coz she was not gting her project. Atleast I didn expect this idiotic thing from you. You have hurted your Best frend.

Everyone went outsid the class.

Ranveer cursing his self.

SHIT man how an I do this to panchi. Maine uss Bitch Garima ka gussa Panchi par utarr diya. For the first time I made her cry. Wo toh bechari kuch bol v nhi rahi thi aur maine use itna bhala bura bol diya. He sat down bringing his legs near his chest and hugging it and cried.

Ooohhh hooo kal toh moti ka birthday hai aur maine uske saath aaj itna ganda behavior kiya. I need to plan something nice for her ki wo khush Ho jaaye aur mujhe phir se baat kare. I can't let her go like this.

He went To KD and kiya. They both were consoling Panchi. And panchi was going on crying.

P : yr maine use kav v koi complain nhi ki. Usne har baar galti ki aur maine har baar maaf kiya. Par iss baar toh had ho gayi. How can he say to her Best buddy Yr like this 'GO TO HELL '.

Ranveer was listening this and he too was also crying. He said 'PANCHI'' in a loe tone.

Panchi turned back.

P : now wat Nonu, kuch aur v kehna bakki reh gaya hai kya.

R : panchi I am sorry yr. plzzz mujhe maaf kar de.

P : woowww Now mr. ranveer shergil is here to say me sorry. No nonu no. not this time. Its high time now. And she went home.

Kd went to him and consoled him giving him belive that panchi will forgive her. Ranveer shook his head quietly knowing panchi will defo forgive her cause she can't be angry with him for long.

R : Kd Kiya yr I need hlp.

KD : ha bol na.

R : Kal panchi ka birthday hai. And I want to celebrate it to the best.

Kiya : sure ranveer, tell na wat can we do.

R : tum log jaida kuch nhi karna hai, panchi ko kaise v karke aaj 12am tak mere ghar laana hai. I know ki wo yaha aane ke liye nhi maanegi par u too have to do it.

Kd : done brother.

Will continue the rest in next part.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamya just loved oh! Nonu break Panchi's heart💔 but now he want to reconcile it ❤️ moreover he taking kisha help👍🏼 Please update fast dear i want to see what nonu will do to win his moti heart.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveukisha

Kamya just loved oh! Nonu break Panchi's heart💔 but now he want to reconcile it ❤️ moreover he taking kisha help👍🏼 Please update fast dear i want to see what nonu will do to win his moti heart.


Will updte soon.
thanx fo rliking it.
plzz do one favour post this link to AT so that everyone can read.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow loved it, update soon dear:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome

bichari panchi

ranveer broke her heart

loved it

update soon

luv u
Ishita 😃
Edited by MyLifeMyRulz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww..
So aweome...
Update soon dear..
I wanna see how Nonu celebrates his Moti's birthday..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really Nice Kamya 👏
Update soon 😃
Edited by luv_u_Bharti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamya babes🤗
I so love you
I just love the OS
Its written beautifully
ohh gosh,RV aisa kaise kar sakta hai
My Angel😭
Lets see how will he celebrate her birthday
Can't wait to read more
so do continue soon
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamya nice idea dear
Jerk shegill hurt panchi.. my angel
Hate him when he does that
But m sure he will make it up
Waiting for it.
Do continue soon n loved this part
Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Kamya. Loved it dear..
You are an excellent writer.. I am so exited about RVs plans.
Do continue soon
pls continue your other os also and if gonna use my baarish line then the pleasure will be entirely mine.
Seriously this is amazing..

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